Thanks for the kind words, but what kind of movie would it be?

Hi, Love your stories, but you must write another Grace Sisters tale. They can't be through with Wonder Woman yet.

I certainly appreciate your comments, as I have stated more than once. However, the last comment is a great example of bad communication, since I have no idea what you said. Please make it simple for this senile simple old man. I'm not trying to be a Hemingway here, so.....


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Your critisisms are very helpful. Thanks to both of you. I think my English teachers would also have a few things to say. As a matter of fact one of them did comment years ago that my writing was too juvenile for my age....60 years later, not a whole lot has changed.

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The Further Perils of Wonder Babe It was an easy task to lure the Super-Heroine into my trap, so when she finally arrived, I was fully prepared. She sneaked into the building, trying to be very cautious, looking in every direction, searching out any cameras or listening devices. However, I had cleve...

Thanks a lot for your very thoughtful, helpful critique. I know exactly what your trying to say. My written word doesn't reflect my thoughts, and I have to do a great deal of re-reading. However, that doesn't always work, since I know what the piece is supposed to say, and sometimes don't recognize ...

Thanks for commenting...I'll do better in the future.


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The Perils of Wonder Babe I The Welcome Inn Darlene was heading back to the main office, when the engine of her Jag started to sputter. "Oh no, I'm late already." Just ahead was a ramp leading off the highway, so she took it, hoping to find a garage, or perhaps a gas station. However, she ...

AMERICAN LASS IN COLUMBIA The small plane landed in a strip surrounded by jungle foliage. It taxied slowly to the end and stopped. Two women alit from the side door, jumping to the ground, and hurrying to the edge of the foliage. They both had backpacks and carried a duffle bag into the jungle, alon...

American Lass III Andrea was back at the estate, but instead of relaxing she started immediately in honing her skills. She spent hours in the gym swinging, punching, jumping, lifting, squeezing, and many other exercizes. Floyd, the estate manager, and lifelong friend watched this beautiful young wom...

AMERICAN LASS II A small private jet circled the Cairo airport and landed on one of it's remote landing strips. An ambulance hurried out to meet it, and a stretcher bearing a woman was transferred from the plane to the ambulance. It quickly left the airport and sped off into the surrounding desert. ...

The red, white and blue clad heroine slowly stirs."Unnnnnn...wha...happened?" She tries to move, but she is hanging from one of the wharehouse walls with her wrists securely strapped, leaving her feet about six inches from the floor. Cortez slaps his guest hard across the face. WHAP!!, &qu...

The red, white and blue clad heroine slowly stirs."Unnnnnn...wha...happened?" She tries to move, but she is hanging from one of the wharehouse walls with her wrists securely strapped, leaving her feet about six inches from the floor. Cortez slaps his guest hard across the face. WHAP!!, &qu...

AMERICAN LASS American Lass was an adventuress who decided she wanted to fight the crime bosses that eluded normal police departments. The obscure villains that fought society in the shadows, but were very dangerous never the less. Having worked for the CIA, and NSA, she had learned of these world w...

The Sleeper gathered his henchwomen together, and they bound the unconcious Ms Wonder securely hand and foot. A surgical mask was strapped over her nose and mouth. " Adjust the valve after she's in the crate." The Sleeper instructed the girls. The heroine was placed into the wooden crate, ...

Ms Wonder awoke to find the Sleeper's prediction had come true for she was naked and bound to a chair. This time her wrists were tied seperately to the arms and her ankles were bound to the legs. She was seated in the middle of the same cell, facing the album, which was open to a new page showing he...

Ms Wonder awoke in a jail cell laying unfettered on a cot that was up against a bare stone wall. She sat up on the edge, and looked down in amazement to see her costume in place, the one piece blue leotard, the white utility belt her dark silk pantyhose, and her black boots. She felt her head and th...

MS WONDER The now black clad woman returned to her helpless prisoner, and slapped her hard across the face. " Wake up, sweetie" She then slapped her several more times. Ms Wonder began to react to the punishment, "Oooohhhh.....my...head" "That's better, now open your eyes&qu...

MS WONDER It was a cold, dark, and misty night as Ms Wonder crept up on the old deserted mansion. She had a tip that her nemesis The Sleeper was hiding the young women his gang had been kidnapping. This was not going to be easy so she was especially cautious in approaching the darkened building. The...