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STEPHANY DUNNE SUPERHERO IN TRAINING Stephany crouched on her vantage point atop the rooftop, her emerald gaze locked onto the scene below. Two men dragged a struggling girl towards the dimly lit bar, and her jaw clenched in anger. "This is it," she muttered to herself as she swiftly desce...

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The idea I'm trying to work on. any help or advice is really really welcomed.

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Stephany Dunne is a new freshmen superhero recruit it the prestigious and secretive Hero Academy. She occasionally breaks strict Academy rules by sneaking off campus in her costume trying to test her powers and prove herself. Stephany is very inexperienced, and her powers have limitations. On one of...

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Sorry about the small print but for some reason the site will not accept the larger font that I normally use.

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Stephany watched from her rooftop perch, her green eyes focusing like a predator as the two thugs pulled the girl into the bar. “This is it show time.” Stephany glided down to the sidewalk marching with determined purpose to the bar. “Oh, come on man let me get a feel.” Skeeter whined. “I got her he...

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Pffft... Proof that creating new characters in TV/Movie land is trully dead. Give us something NEW ya Twits! Gender swaps race swaps ugggg! Talentless witless wonder F*cks.

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I would agree when it comes to the Bill character. (Dont like the he said she said opinion) But she is spot on about good story vs agenda writeing.

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PUT A SPELL ON YOU (December 13) “There ya go, Birthday Girl,” Lee smiled, placing the small stuffed puppy on the wheeled dinner table at the foot of Dree’s bed. -You shouldn’t have.- Dree thought gratefully, trapped in the shell of her paralyzed and speechless body. Her eyes watched Lee return to h...

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DC's Stargirl.

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Male or female Doctor Who...?... My concern would be with the writing of the character rather than who would play the part. I'm afraid that with the way lead female charactors are writen now a days that the flaws that made the doctor interesting would be writen out. There are also times that the fem...

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you left out the bad dad trope, that started in the 90ies and is prevelent to this day it seems. lol And does the word trope kinda make ya wanta vomit a little. lol

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If you havent noticed its infected most of the sub forums. It wasnt this way when i first came here.

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That sounds more like horror porn.

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This is the SUPERHEROINE FORUM and lately it sure has seemed to be getting too political in the last couple of years.

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Really cant wait for somebody to come up with a Game of Thrones type Superhero/superheroine series on Showtime or HBO. Now that would be something for those of us who would like something a tad bit more adult and politically incorrect (not porn) in its story telling. The best thing about Game of thr...

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I too am looking forward to reading more of this story.

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I too am looking forward to reading more of this story.

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I like it. Kinda corny lol

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I hear that the ratings are not high enough to justify the cost of making it. Arrow for example has so so but stable ratings but cost less to shoot per episode. Same with the Flash series. Both run about 7 or 8 million per episode, (cost comfort zone for the ratings they get) SG runs about 12 millio...

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Just read the season review on polygon. Pretty much explains why this show shouldnt be renewed. This show is supposed to be about action not some sappy office drama. Supergirl the show that could have been good, but chose not to be.

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Who is in the pod...Hmmm Gen Zod's daughter, her mother or judging by the theme of the show another lil girl (Supergirl from another earth. The Flash crossover.)

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https://youtu.be/hDnOWC8eXXw?t=4

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I agree with that to. There is no such thing as bad press if you are getting read.

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https://youtu.be/f48XZeOnUaM?t=8

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I have the Mistborn series and yes that is a good read. Maria V Snyder's the Poison Study series is good to. Although its first person perspective. I'm more of a character driven story fan like in the Mistborn series. Looks like I'll be off to the bookstore to checkout the authors you suggested. Tha...

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Sorry DrDominator9 I wasnt talking about the stories here. I meant bookstore books and some TV plots. I have read a few of the stories posted here and have to say I should comment more on them and offer some encouragement.

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I read myself to sleep alot.(widowed with too much time on my hands) I have tried writing my own stuff even outlined a few things. I am currently working on a fan fiction (The Doctor's Daughter) and hope to post chapter 1 soon.

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Sure seems to me that creative fiction writing in all its formats is a thing of the past lately. Poor character development, poor plots and a horrid lack of anything new and exciting. I read alot of fantasy fiction (15 to 20 books roughly a month) and they all just seem the same. Most of the writing...

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The beginning of the end of creative story telling and the beginning of blatant agenda setting. I can already guess how it will be. 1. All women are peace loving mentors. 2. All men are corrupt in their vary nature and the women who are with them are forced to be with them or they are just confused ...

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My problem with the show is the predictability the lack of creative scripting. I have won bets on this show because its that predictable.

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To torment her vainity by telling her to "Gain a pound."

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lol well Supergirl is my second choice.

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I would have to say Batgirl...no powers but she has a good head on her shoulders and combat talent. BUT I dont like the new look or the Hipster selfie thing DC has going on with her charactor right now.

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I agree.. just frustating as hell.

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Hopeing to get some responses from some of the women who post or visit the forum on the following question. Is it possible for a guy to write a peril scene now a days? Even if it DOES NOT involve sex, fondleing or whatever, and not be called sexist? That question is a result of a conversation I had ...

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I agree!

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If true, I be guessing if DC ran with that idea and it was a rebooted Jason Todd in the pic there would be no out cry. (Sad to say)

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No such thing as BAD press...when one considers the falling sales of comicbooks or graphic novels. I bet the cover will still be available for special print price.

To serve man!...ITS A COOK BOOK AHHHHHHHH

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Ok the NEW looks...GRRRR SUCKS! Really wish some women and men would come togather and start a comicbook company that could rival the main stays(DC and Marvel). Yes I know there are some independents on the shelves but they really cant compete with the powerfull 'OLD GUARD". I am so tired of re...

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Thanks and I will try to do something with the spaceing. i plan on posting again hopefully this weekend.

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Smash n Grab (Sturgeon Bay area) The moon shined all too brilliantly in the cloudless night sky, casting shadows through the semi leafless trees that surround Lee’s Mustang. Lee sat silently as he watched five deer slowly stray through the Fall foliage, feeling only minor relief by their presence. G...

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STRONG ARM (Saturday, Oct.30. 3:10PM) Lee yawned, unlocking the `stang’s door, ** looking across the parking lot of St. Anna Hospital. Wish I could tell Dree what I’ve been up to the last few weeks. He leaned on the car’s roof, eyeing the hospital building, seeking out Dree’s room window. He glanced...

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Terry (Friday Oct.29 Bubba Jiggleez 8:45PM) Come on Lapp! Get on the fuckin’ job! Terry shakily sighed, finding it extremely difficult to fall into her alias. She cracked the dressing room door and looked at the packed bar. The sickening dark laughter of male and female thugs filled her ears. She tr...

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wish i could write like this....great stuff

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Hey all been away awhile, the following is from a project Im trying to working on. Hope you enjoy the lil snip-it. Was not able to send it in a hand writing style as I wanted to and the spelling mistakes and grammer errors are intensional. Diary of Robin Spencer June 7, 2009 Well I don’t really know...

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DC is going PC pfffft

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hey all don't mean to leave the story hanging but it actually is part of a back story for a much larger project. more is coming

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Panting Robin crouched low making use the shadows as she looked for security cameras or any signs of movement from behind a dumpster. That’s strange. I thought this place was shut down? She thought biting her lower lip puzzled by the hum emanating from the factory. She snapped her head looking over ...

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there is more to come just working it out.

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