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by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"
Replies: 17
Views: 10535

Re: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"

It occurred to me that this story would make a pretty good video. It wouldn't be difficult to rewrite it with just Andrea, Abby and the mummy. Start with an external stock image of a spooky house. Cut to an interior as the girls enter, soaking wet. They explain who they are, how their car broke down...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: TALES of SUPERGIRL: AFTERMATH
Replies: 26
Views: 31073

Re: TALES of SUPERGIRL: AFTERMATH

Amazing story!
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"
Replies: 17
Views: 10535

Re: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"

Centurion, outstanding job! And I have to say, Abby-Isis, what a great twist! One of the best triggers for me is to have a super heroine's super power stolen. Abby-Isis hits that perfectly! I actually hope it is NOT the end. To read more of Isis trying to regain her power from Abby-Isis holds much ...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"
Replies: 17
Views: 10535

Re: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"

Very nice story and you finished it in time for Halloween after all. What dedication! :thumbup: ... Seems overdone to me unless there's something specific about Abby? Otherwise, a delightful Halloween treat. Thanks, Centurian. I definitely see the justice in this remark in hindsight. I pictured And...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"
Replies: 17
Views: 10535

Re: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"

Well, I managed to get in under the wire after all! Chapter 5 -- "Urrrhh!" the mummy groaned, thrusting forward with its heavy spear. Isis only barely managed to evade it, twisting gracefully to one side, her tiny skirt flying around her thighs. Rebounding from the wall, the lean young sup...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: New Supergirl series, Melissa Benoist
Replies: 6
Views: 2870

Re: New Supergirl series, Melissa Benoist

There's already an Sg thread in the lounge guys can we add comments to that one. I knew about the other thread, since I had been following it for weeks. I just didn't want Redmanx to think we were ignoring him. :) Are you going to merge the threads or... oh well what the heck. I'll just post again ...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"
Replies: 17
Views: 10535

Re: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"

Thank you for all the nice comments. I want to apologize a little if the story seems not as polished as my work usually is. The truth is I just thought up the idea last week, and I've been writing it sort of "on the fly" during my lunch hours, hoping to get it finished in time for Hallowee...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: New Supergirl series, Melissa Benoist
Replies: 6
Views: 2870

Re: New Supergirl series, Melissa Benoist

The first half was everything I was hoping it would be. When she rescued the airliner, I nearly jumped out of my chair cheering her on, and I don't usually get emotionally involved in television characters. The second half... well I'm not crazy about the idea of a secret government agency with krypt...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"
Replies: 17
Views: 10535

The Mighty Isis: "The Curse of the Mummy"

"Oh My Queen," said the royal sorceror to Hatshepset, "with this amulet you will be endowed with the powers of the goddess Isis. You will soar as the falcon soars, run with the speed of gazelles, and command the elements of earth and sky." Centuries later, school teacher Andrea ...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

DrDominator9 wrote:Superb story! I had thought that Ishtar was somehow helping to funnel power to the Fox's bracelets when they first failed but I guess not, huh?
She certainly could have been. But she was mainly focused on explaining why she couldn't personally intervene.
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

Epilogue-- Three days later-- "And we're back on Good Morning Washington. I'm Keri Keller." The redhead was wearing a short, pale green dress. "Our special guest has been the one and only Fuchsia Fox. Fox, any last comments as we say good-bye?" The young superheroine, sitting sli...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

Chapter 6 -- In the middle of the six o'clock news, a story on a new recycling program was cut short and returned to the studio, where an inset screen over Keri Keller's left shoulder bore the title: "Fuchsia Fox Captured by ORCUS?" "Following our lead story tonight," said the be...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

Chapter 5 -- In the Communications Center of the Chamberlain , Martin Fletcher felt as if someone had just kicked him in the balls. Two of the Hedgetrimmer drones had been shot down during the diversionary attack. The other four having expelled all their minirockets, he had pulled them back, keeping...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

bobcashman wrote:Can hardly wait for what comes next. Very, very entertaining!
Thanks Bob. It gets better!
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Story Suggestion Thread
Replies: 84
Views: 27675

Re: Story Suggestion Thread

Sounds like "Heroine Transformations" to me. ;)
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Story Suggestion Thread
Replies: 110
Views: 34800

Re: Story Suggestion Thread

Sounds like "Heroine Transformations" to me. ;)
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

[I'm only going to post chapter 4 today. Look for chapter 5 Monday or Tuesday, and the 6th and final chapter probably next Thursday or Friday.] Chapter 4 -- Manticore got to his feet, glaring at the Fuchsia Fox as if he wanted to rip her head off. But he was interrupted in this ambition by the incon...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: TALES of SUPERGIRL: AFTERMATH
Replies: 26
Views: 31073

Re: TALES of SUPERGIRL: AFTERMATH

All I can say is: WOW!!!!
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

You're too kind. Flirty too of course. I realize that chapters two and three weren't exactly balls of fire, but the next installment will be, when the Fox goes up against Manticore with all of America watching! I'm having some technical difficulties today, but I plan to post it Thursday or Friday.
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

[Quick disclaimer here -- although I can't deny that the story was inspired by certain real events, it is fiction. The ORCUS terrorist group is not intended to represent any real-life terrorist group you may have heard about in the news.] Chapter 2 -- Once their statements had been taken, Jennifer t...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Silver-Blue
Replies: 13
Views: 10734

Re: Silver-Blue

I love the twists and turns in this story! Good work!
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"
Replies: 14
Views: 10803

Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom"

Fuchsia Fox: "Arena of Doom" Prologue -- Washington D.C. Keri Keller bustled through the Channel 3 television news room, glancing up at the wall clock. Less than five minutes to 3 p.m. The beautiful redhead hurried into the studio, smoothing her lavender silk blouse and checking her hair a...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: 'On thin Ice' (Batman Returns What-If scenario)
Replies: 17
Views: 8935

Re: 'On thin Ice' (Batman Returns What-If scenario)

Very well done! (I liked the Julie Newmar Catwoman better than Lee Meriwether but this is no time to quibble over details.)
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: ISIS sued by 70s superheroine!
Replies: 13
Views: 3642

Re: ISIS sued by 70s superheroine!

I apologize to Ezekiel. It never occurred to me that anyone would think I was making light of the atrocities that ISIS is committing on a daily basis. For many of us, superheroine fiction is just a harmless, semi-erotic fantasy. But in the process we often write about all manner of crime -- theft, m...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

That's not how I remember either the tv show or the comics. The bracelets only appear after she changes in the flash of light that brings her costume and tiara and lasso from storage in another dimension. That's a very good point. It's a well-established part of the Wonder Woman mythos that she can...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

I'm curious how you'll be able to get around FF's identity problem with her bracelets fused to her now, or if she'll just be a superheroine 24/7 and let Martin be the breadwinner in a one-income family now that they're married. I'm sorry I didn't make that clear. She'll still have the secret identi...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Centurion, all in all, I love it! And I like that her bracelets seem to have mysteriously become more permanent. This should make for a rather exciting future confrontation with her bracelets being seized up on for removal. Can't wait! Ah yes! I do intend to explain why it happened in an upcoming s...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Another winning submission, Centurian. :thumbup: Just one thought though: Even with the missile exploding wouldn't the payload of deadly toxin be sprayed all over the people-filled mall below. Is our government now filled with Zombies? Seems likely. :lol: Yeah, I get what you're saying. The missile...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Appreciate it, Digitalbleh. Just in time for the grand finale. *** Chapter 7 -- How fast was a cruise missile anyway? As the Fuchsia Fox soared into the sky in pursuit, the thing was already a distant star on the evening horizon. She poured on the speed -- eighty, ninety, a hundred miles an hour, an...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Chapter 5 -- "NO! NOOOO!" the dark-haired girl begged, thrashing back and forth in her chains like an animal in a trap as the white mist engulfed both her and the Fuchsia Fox. Wrinkling her pert little nose as though from a horrible stench, Blackbird began to flail her head from side to si...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Centurion, excellent first two installments! In the first part where she had gotten dressed without putting on her Fox outfit, just the bracelets, I have to admit I was very excited at the prospect of the Fox having to do battle, supercharged, but without her regular uniform! The idea of her being ...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Excellent second act. Particularly enjoyed the fight and the OTS scenes. I appreciate it. I do enjoy a good Over The Shoulder carry. The drawback to my style of storytelling -- i.e., mostly heroine POV -- is that she's usually unconscious when she's carried that way and isn't aware of it. This was ...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

krispin21 wrote:I think I was.

Thanks, great work!
Yes, I do believe you were the one. All this time I kept it in mind, and I was just looking for the right opportunity. Hopefully you'll like the next two chapters, too.
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

Chapter 3 -- Together Blackbird and the Fuchsia Fox flew over Maryland, across Chesapeake Bay, and into Delaware. After nearly an hour, Jennifer began to wish that she could ask her companion how much further it was going to be, but at the pace the dark-clad girl was setting, it was impossible to ca...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"
Replies: 21
Views: 10264

Fuchsia Fox: "Nemesis"

[Some time back, I got a PM asking for more girl-on-girl wrestling in my stories. I begged off at the time because personally I don't think I'm good at that kind of thing. I have lots of female villains, but I generally prefer the rough physical stuff done with a male attacker. In this story there's...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Story Suggestion Thread
Replies: 110
Views: 34800

Re: Story Suggestion Thread

I had this really silly idea the other day. It strikes me as good comedy material, but I doubt if I'll write it, so somebody else might be able to make something of it. It might even make a good video. I don't know; I don't really look at videos. The heroine's name is Captain Purebody or something l...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Story Suggestion Thread
Replies: 84
Views: 27675

Re: Story Suggestion Thread

I had this really silly idea the other day. It strikes me as good comedy material, but I doubt if I'll write it, so somebody else might be able to make something of it. It might even make a good video. I don't know; I don't really look at videos. The heroine's name is Captain Purebody or something l...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Wonder Woman : Love Conquers All
Replies: 15
Views: 6093

Re: Wonder Woman : Love Conquers All

I don't want to sound critical, because you write very well. It's just that I wouldn't call this a "story", more of a "vignette". A guy with magical seduction powers... very nice, but where's the plot? What happens next? Surely someone like Wonder Woman would be able to throw off...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Silver-Blue
Replies: 13
Views: 10734

Re: Silver-Blue

Another good episode! More perils of various kinds, various people who want to capture her or get ahold of her secrets or just unmask her for other reasons. Interesting stuff!
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"
Replies: 7
Views: 5964

Re: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"

The way I see it, if the antagonist succeeds, it generally means no more superheroine (one way or another), and that means I have to create a new character if I want to write another story. The reader is perfectly free to imagine what might have happened if Ishtar had been stranded there forever. I ...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"
Replies: 7
Views: 5964

Re: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"

An interesting solution to how to slow down Ishtar's metabolism in the end, and a very enjoyable work. My one objection was how you seemed to fudge the difference between Ishtar's and the engineer's metabolism. As fun as the sex scene was I was thinking throughout it that really was not possible an...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"
Replies: 7
Views: 5964

Re: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"

Thank you so much! It gets even more explicit in chapter 5... Chapter 5 -- Ishtar woke up with a guilty start, finding herself curled up with Riley's body entwined intimately about hers. The ebon-haired girl had told her that accelerated people had to sleep ten or eleven hours of subjective time out...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"
Replies: 7
Views: 5964

Re: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"

Chapter 3 -- The twenty maidens pounced. Ishtar was overpowered in a twinkling by dozens of soft, female hands, seizing her, touching her all over. "No! Let go of me! You can't--" the beauty protested, unable to resist as some of the girls took off their own skimpy garments and used the si...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"
Replies: 7
Views: 5964

Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"

Ishtar: In the Wink of an Eye [Thanks to Flirty's earlier suggestion, this is a solo story about Ishtar, the Fuchsia Fox's Zumerian mother. If you're a Star Trek fan, the title will give you a hint what it's about. Be warned it contains some steamy sexual content in chapters 3 and 5, but (you know m...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Silver-Blue
Replies: 13
Views: 10734

Re: Silver-Blue

Your English is still a little awkward, but I'm enjoying the story a great deal! Keep working on it! :)
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "'Til Death Do Us Part"
Replies: 17
Views: 11220

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "'Til Death Do Us Part"

I hope I can live up to your confidence in me. I've got an Ishtar solo story that I wrote for Flirty; I'll probably post the first installment of that Friday. After that, as I mentioned before, I'm afraid I'm probably going to be too busy over the summer to do much writing.
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Fuchsia Fox: "'Til Death Do Us Part"
Replies: 17
Views: 11220

Re: Fuchsia Fox: "'Til Death Do Us Part"

Chapter 9 -- Lady Emerald came out of her trance more slowly this time, with a smile on her face. "It worked," she sighed, feeling as if she had just had an orgasm. As she opened her green eyes, the glow in her emerald gemstone faded. The pulsating light of the crystal in her hand graduall...
by Centurion
8 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Silver-Blue
Replies: 13
Views: 10734

Re: Silver-Blue

This is an interesting plot twist. Keep up the good work!