I am glad you continued the story. I like what you wrote here. You might want to write the part on how they escaped in the future. That will take some doing. But I do like what you wrote here. Thank you for coming back and continuing it.

Was the penultimate chapter ever written. Was there any scenes after the ones written here. I can see some similarites between this story and the O-Girl/Nylonika Obsession story. Also, some of the earlier O-Girl stories have similarites to this. All are well done by Jim Weathers at the Bondage Cafe ...

Excellent Scene 4. I love it. However, you did make one mistake. It was in the use of a name. You used Darling. That is the actress. The character used by Jim Weathers and which you used earlier was Lauren. You also misspelled Holly as Holy. Otherwise everything else was superb.

It has been several months since we have heard from you. Could you please give us an update on when you will have Scene 4. I love what you have written so far.