This story is so good Dr. I love how Kara finally did what I was hoping she would do the whole time she was being raped before. Perfect ending to his manhood. Though, I hope she can fight off the general in her state. It should be a great battle with lots of action, just how I like it.

Thank you all. I had a setback with my life and it sapped my time from writing. I am sorry I just disappeared. Things are getting back on track though, and I hope to have something written soon. Again, I am sorry I just vanished.

I feel the same way when I add Kryptonese in my stories. It is fun to read the language, but so hard to translate it sometimes.

In truth, Power Girl is not older than Supergirl. Remember, Supergirl was locked up in suspended animation, and her ship was off course? She landed and Superman was already an adult. But he was a baby, when Supergirl was a teenager. Power Girl was the same as Superman, in that she left Krypton as a ...

Thank you all for the advice. I was wondering something else though. I see lots of people write about the mainstream heroines, like Wonder Woman, Supergirl, and Batgirl. So, everyone basically knows the backstory and knows their powers and such. But with the more "C" list heroes, like Powe...

Yep, I am going to do it. I am working on a story for here that will have Power Girl in a bad situation. Expect her to use her full array of powers, but still be beaten somewhat. I have been so nervous to show what I can do in front of others, and after talking to a few of you here, I think I am rea...

I was cheering when she kicked Bernard in the head. I hope she does catch up with the general and rips him apart. But I know that will likely not happen, hehe. But I do like your writing, just not the most uh... extreme scenes. But I still am enjoying the whole story. Oh, one thing, and this is just...

Power Girl is better

A debate about the sex/fight ratio in stories is good, always interesting to get other opinions. But, that's all it can ever be. For every person who says reduce the sex there will be another who says increase it. To use my own preferences, I would advocate for the same sex/fight ratio but I would ...

So good, on so many levels. I was asked to check out this work and to start at this particular chapter, and I am glad I did. I love how every chapter is like a movie script. I could totally see it almost frame by frame. I do 3D art and to me, scene is the most important part. If you don’t have the a...

I won’t lie. At first, I wasn’t sure about this story. It had a really strong beginning and then it turned into the old drugged adage again, but I kept with it… and I am glad I did. It showed a side of Kara that I never saw in other writings. She was beaten, but not beaten, but still beat. But was s...

She-Ra is in DC Comics now, actually. I saw her with He-Man in them.

If anything, I would say she is more OP than people think. It all makes her a fascinating character, for sure, and she's even more interesting than superman because she hasn't always lived as a god like he has. But my goodness, I feel sorry for her villains! Just out of curiosity - would you active...

Sex aside, the aspect of a male or a woman antagonist would make a lot of difference in fight scenes. I mean, depending on the story, really. I usually have my women villains faster and more agile than the male. While the men are stronger, and can take more hits. Again, it is up to the scene and the...

Hi guys/gals, First of all, I am sorry if I offended anyone. I was only trying to state my opinion on the way some writers do stories. I understand that everyone has their own preference and in truth, sex is fine, if the plot works with it. What I hate is a story that goes right to the rape scene, a...

Thank you for responding to me on this. I want to make a point that I do love your work. You put in details in your writing that a lot of writers should learn from. I have learned things from you, myself. I do some writing too, and I have considered posting some of it here. I am just nervous about i...

First of all... hi. I have never posted here, but I have read things for a while now. I just wanted to say something this time. A lot of you will disagree with me, but that is fine. I am a Role Player, and I love to write erotic stories with Kara in them (either Kara). I like your work, but I have t...