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To quote Dickens: "Can we have a little more sir?"

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PZ,

This little yarn is shaping up to become another of your incredible tales. I always love seeing Ice weakened by heat and I really like the net trap on Electron. It's awesome to read how heroines fall prey to those who know their weaknesses.

Please continue this great story!!

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Great update; I love a young heroine powerless to resist telling her weaknesses or those of other heroines. Very anxious to see this story progress.

I would love to see so many of these incredible stories done as videos. (Hint, hint MH...)

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Thanks for that image friend. I think Heather's husband Robert Urich is a very lucky man. I recently bought a 3-disc DVD set of all the Logan's Run TV episodes and am truly enjoying all of "Jessica's" adventures. Several times during the show she was captured and bound. I especially like t...

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Wow, great topic! That being said I have to say I'm sorely disappointed. I cannot believe that noone mentioned either Jenny Augutter or Heather Menzies, who played Jessica in the Logan's Run movie and TV series respectively. Heaven's sake folks, take a look and you'll know what I mean. Another great...

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Great beginning! And I have a feeling young Miss Wakefield is more than meets the eye... Please update soon.

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Thanks so much for the kind, but all too true, words. :^) Seriously, it's the feedback AND critique of this board that keeps me coming back. Thanks to all who contribute. As far as as our Dark KNight, I'm not sure exactly why I don't use him. It would be tough, I think, to write that strong a male c...

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“Nice timing Dr. Cook,” said the smiling GothCorp security officer. “We just got the word from the police to add you to the VIP guest list.” He handed her back her identification through her open car window. She smiled her best ‘what-do-girls-know-anyway’ look at the young man and said, “I’m just gl...

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The diabolical villainess Flora lowered Robin’s communicator and then tossed it casually aside as she stood above the motionless young heroine. Her gloved hand still had its tendrils of nylon and plant material that had come forth to connect with Robin’s nervous system, rendering her completely comp...

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Slowly, a small spark of consciousness begins to shine into Robin’s perception. Over the course of several minutes she begins to become aware of herself and her surroundings. As if emerging from a warm cocoon of softness the teenaged heroine slowly feels the effects of Flora’s plant fade away. Wakef...

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Thanks all for the kind words and encouragement. I'm really enjoying this one; I always map out the story before I begin writing so as not to write myself into a corner. But this one seems to keep wiggling a little away from my original plan. More to come. By the by, pzgr6 I will be doing a female G...

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“That should be the last one,” Robin thought to herself as she deactivated the last of the security sensors outside Gotham State University’s greenhouse. Replacing her tools in her utility belt she crept toward the rear side of the glass-walled enclosure. It was a simple matter of then using her Bat...

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Later that night Robin’s RedBird cycle winds its way through the post-midnight city streets toward Gotham State University’s main campus. She knew there was more to Dr. Cassie Cook and her work there than met the eye. Just a few blocks from campus the RedBird’s police radio transmitter crackles to l...

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After spending an all night session working with the BatComputer, a lovely young brunette girl walks across the campus of Gotham State University. Seventeen year old high school sophomore Tina Drake follows a campus map toward her destination, the university’s Biology Dept. Stifling a yawn after her...

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A layer of sludge and slime floats atop the slowly moving waters of a secluded section of the Gotham East River. Following this polluted trail upstream we find its origin, an old cement pipe extending out from a muddy hillside. Following this murky passage leads to the innards of the Plasti-Chem ind...

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This is a great story. I hope you keep it going!

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Awesome story, cannot wait to see more!

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Awesome story, cannot wait to see more!

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Feeling like an insect being burned by sunlight through a magnifying glass, the battered young brunette superheroine Ice struggles into consciousness. Barely able to move she tries to open her eyes only to shut them against the bright glare assaulting her vision. A feeble attempt to move informs her...

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Feeling like an insect being burned by sunlight through a magnifying glass, the battered young brunette superheroine Ice struggles into consciousness. Barely able to move she tries to open her eyes only to shut them against the bright glare assaulting her vision. A feeble attempt to move informs her...

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Moments later the teenage heroine Ice skated to a stop outside the “All Nite Shop” at the corner of Ward and Grayson Streets. She was met with a scene of destruction as she saw just-arrived paramedics assisting the badly beaten hold up perpetrator. The police had yet to arrive but she knew they were...

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“Where in the world could she have gone?” wondered Ice as she skated along an ice bridge 50 feet above the darkened city below. She had been searching for the amnesic Emerald, who had several hours before knocked her out and assumed a new costume and name: Gemstone. The young teenage girl was truly ...

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Great story. Wavelength is a great character and the memory loss gives you lots of story possibilities. I can't wait to see if she gets a new costume. Looking forward to seeing more of her, so to speak. :^)

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Great characters and costumes! I realy enjoyed this beginning; please continue!

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I am glad you appreciate the effort. I've got bunches of Hero Machine creations that I will be using at some point. By the way, please note that the lovely Ice is the creation of the esteemed pzgr6. It is with his blessings (I hope...) that I have attempted to render his wonderful heroine. More of ...

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Beautiful action! I'd love to see a video of Ice and Fire getting their powers siphoned off by Fade. I keep picturing Ice as a combination of DynaGirl and ice skater Sara Hughes.

Cannot wait to see where this one goes next!

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“…and there I was, magnetized to Sheer’s particle polarizer. She was literally crushing the life out of me with my own leotard and tights,” said the young purple-clad superheroine Lilac Lass. She and Ice were sitting by the bedside holding the still unconscious Emerald. They were in the apartment ho...

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“Come on Bill, let’s get out of here!” pleaded the young hoodlum. “The cops are gonna be here any minute!” He wiped sweat from his forehead. “It’s 95 degrees in here and we’re wearing black turtlenecks. I should’ve stayed home like mom said!” Turning angrily from the open teller’s drawer, Bill snarl...

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C,
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate your kind words, especially given your own work here.
Oh yes, I have some definite plans for Jennifer's new outfit.
Stay tuned...

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The following afternoon Jewel Green stood behind the scenes wearing her performance costume of sheer nylon bodystocking with its dazzling green gemstones. She loved the look and feel of her outfit and knew others did as well. She was watching the performance of her friend Julie and her trained lions...

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Realizing that she had been hiding for quite some time, she knew she needed to be seen by the other performers before she was missed. She couldn’t risk attracting any attention, knowing that she was all alone in her efforts. Silently she made her way out of the confines of the tent folds and rejoine...

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Relax, she told herself for quite possibly the hundredth time that day. You’ve been practicing all day; you can do this. Jennifer, in her disguise as newly-hired trapeze artist Jewel Green, gazed down at the crowd seventy-five feet below, just moments from her debut during tonight’s Saturday evening...

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This story just keeps getting better and better. Do I sense that it's now building to a "climax", pardon the pun? Looks like there's going to be more than one heroine to auction off soon. Keep up this amazing tale!

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It was a beautiful Spring Thursday as 19 year-old college student Jennifer Jade strolled across campus. Everything seemed so bright and cheerful; she had just finished her last exam early before her Spring Break officially began. She was simply meandering around campus trying to decide what to do wi...

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C, in a private message to me where he asked permission to use Emerald in one of his stories, pzgr6 mentioned Ice and her relationship to Blaze.

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Great update! I really like the weakness in the sauna aspect. We're really developing some comlex characters here. Keep up the awesome story!

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Thanks for the kind words. Yes I do have some rough preliminary ideas for more Emerald adventures. My biggest obstacle is my perfectionism and not wanting to duplicate or seem similar to what I or others have done before. But I am looking forward to having Emerald face off against some more villains...

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“…and on behalf of the entire Justice League, let me again say Thank You to everyone here at Gotham General Hospital for their work on the new Heroes’ Memorial Children’s Wing.” Thunderous applause greeted the superheroine's closing remarks as she shook hands and posed for pictures with the various ...

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I'm glad we finally get to see the debut of Blaze's sister Ice. I like her costume and powers. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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Gradually consciousness returned. Slowly the fog within the captured Robin’s mind began to dissipate. As it did so, the first thing she became aware of was a smell. After a few seconds she was able to identify it: sawdust. Groggily she began to open her eyes, blinking slowly to clear the remnants of...

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She was trapped! She could feel the four smooth walls of her lightless prison but was unable to see a thing. Desperately she pressed her gloved hands all around her, searching for a way to escape. Fighting against her rising panic, she forced herself to relax. But it was no use; nothing she tried se...

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Amazing story, you have us on the edge of our seats. Please continue...

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pzgr6,

Man this is a great story. You can just feel Supergirl's weakness as Alex gets near. I kept waiting for her to collapse helpless to the floor.

Please, continue this awesome piece.

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Very, very nice way to tie into another story. Can't wait to see where this leads.

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WHEN EVIL PLANTS A SEED, GOTHAM IS TRULY IN NEED

DARK GREEN

AND IN THE CENTER RING, THE AMAZING EMERALD!

Great beginning

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