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Joking aside, you make a good point, but you must surely admit that there is more tension when the outcome is not pre-ordained. Try watching a film like "Das Boot" twice, and tell me which viewing was more dramatic. (Hint - it's the first time). So you're telling me you NEVER watch the sa...

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You might as well ask how you can stand to watch any television show with continuing characters put in perilous situations! Or even movies for that matter. How can you watch, say, a Nicolaus Cage movie when you know he's going to survive whatever happens? HOW he escapes the peril is where the drama ...

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Chapter 5 -- As Boomer advanced on her, Jennifer cleared her mind and visualized her Bracelets of Ishtar, activating the psionic connection between her costume and her weapons. As the bracelets appeared on her wrists, she struck them together and whispered, "Ishtar!" A dazzling nimbus of e...

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I actually prefer a "fate worse than death" but that wasn't an option in the poll. If the above aren't an option then I guess the lovely lady will just have to end up dying (oh well, I'm sure she'll be back next week anyway), but only in an ott comic book style, nothing gruesome please, I...

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Chapter 4 -- Once Boomer was gone, the Fox had her first opportunity to look around at the place she was being held captive. It was a single room, about thirty feet by forty, with two garage doors on one wall and a single regular sized door on another. It was through this single door Boomer had left...

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I THOUGHT it seemed familiar, like I had read it before! You ought to warn us when you do that! But I liked it. I kept expecting the robots to suddenly sprout energy cannons powered by you-know-what, and when they didn't, I was flabbergasted, but in a good way!

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@ Centurion- the vid aren't just straight porn (a lot are granted) and really you can find a video or style of video for whatever your tastes/preference might be...campy, rapey, bondagey, good to great fight coreography, the heroine escapes and wins in the endy, the heroine dies and just about anyt...

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Chapter 3 -- Jennifer opened her eyes, wondering how in the world she had ended up lying in a bed with her legs spread apart. A musty smelling bed at that... Then she saw the two guys staring at her exposed breasts. She started to sit up purely on reflex, which brought home to her the fact that her ...

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I kind of had to do a "hit and run" yesterday, and didn't get the chance to thank L.M. Tracy and LadyJane for their comments. I know my style isn't as ornate or detailed as some. I think of a story as like a comic book. My goal is to draw you a picture with words. If you can "really p...

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That was wonderful! It's great to see a believable, kick-ass Batgirl for a change! The sex was well-described too! I personally can't see the fun in having sex with an unconscious girl, but...

I am glad he had a change of heart at the end.

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Chapter 2 -- Within fifteen minutes the wreckage of the bus and the pickup truck were swarming with state troopers, as well as men and women wearing the distinctive black vests and bright yellow lettering that identified them as U.S. Marshals. Detective Harry Caldwell of the D.C. police stood leanin...

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In my experience, trying to write what other people say they like doesn't work, because you end up just repeating the same stuff over and over again. Write the stories that YOU would want to read. That's the only way to be original. I think that's what people really want -- some twist that they've n...

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The way I see it, if you're going to take the trouble to write a superheroine character, and make her believable and likeable, then why in the world would you have her defeated, crushed in spirit and ruined, let alone killed? And I have very little patience with those who say, "oh it just reset...

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Fuchsia Fox: "High Heels and Low Lifes" [The standard assumption in most of my stories is that "lowlifes and scumbags" would generally speaking lack the intelligence or self-discipline necessary to capture a bona fide superheroine. But there are always exceptions. This story has ...

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I don't generally think in terms of fetishes like this. But now that you mention it, if you like feet there's a scene in my upcoming Fuchsia Fox story you might like.

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In the first place, where would you publish short stories? In the second place, such stories would not be superheroine stories, they would be villain stories. In other words, the villain is the central character. I'm sorry but that does not appeal to me at all. In a superheroine story, I want the he...

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Yes, good ending. I especially liked the way Victory made sure Cortez got credit for the arrest. Obviously a lady who pays her debts!

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Great beginning! Nice to see Supergirl with a sense of humor! Keep at it!

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chapter six -- The secret underground grotto "Ah Miss Kensington!" said Kananananga expansively. "Do join us! Have some champagne!" "Stuff yourself!" the beautiful agent sulked, as two henchmen manhandled her and Solitary into the villain's underground grotto lair. Alon...

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chapter five -- The bus "Lesson number fourteen," Vanessa winced, walking a little stiffly after her long night. "Proper lubrication is essential." The two women had dressed and slipped out the back exit of the house just before dawn. Vanessa was wearing knee high silver boots an...

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chapter four -- San Boutique Midnight found Vanessa Kensington hovering high over Kananananga's island compound, courtesy of the Q Branch stealth hang glider provided by Quirrel. The sexy spy was dressed in a black spandex catsuit with soft climbing slippers. A weapons harness across her lovely ches...

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chapter three -- In the alley Whatever Vanessa had expected, she was disappointed. The grinning bald man took her outside to an empty lot in between two long tenement buildings. There were garbage cans full of refuse, stacks of bricks, even the gutted shell of an old car. Hee-Hee clicked his steel p...

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chapter two -- New York City A dark-skinned Caribbean man wearing an Armani suit was sitting in his office. "Solitary?" he asked, making a steeple with his fingers as he looked across the conference table. At the other end of the table was a young girl around nineteen years old. She was as...

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[This story is a spoof based loosely on the James Bond movie "Live and Let Die", starring Yaphet Kotto as Kananga and Jane Seymour as Solitaire. It also has sexual content ranging from mild to intense. Reader discretion is advised.] Chapter one -- London In the dead of the night, a man in ...

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[Disclaimer: Once again I would like to point out that "the President" in this story is not named. Insofar as this character represents any real or fictional President of the United States is solely up to the reader's imagination.] Chapter 6 -- The thestral pounced towards Marvel, knocking...

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If you like this, do yourself a favor and scan down the archives for other Silver Osprey stories, like "Feathers and Scales", "Just for Sport", "Silver Osprey Becomes the Prey", and of course "Supergirl: Flaring Tensions", which has a teamup between the Osprey...

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[Disclaimer: You will notice that "the President" in this story is not named. Insofar as this character represents any real or fictional President of the United States is solely up to the reader's imagination.] Chapter 5 -- At the Kansas City convention center, a dozen Secret Service agent...

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valugi wrote:this villain has some very different traps

Well yes. I thought that as a wizard he should have a variety of different spells he can use for attack and defense.

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Chapter 4 -- Mary Batson's clothing vanished as a wave of mystical energy enveloped her nubile young body, making her glow like the sun, hot and blinding. Brutus squinted into the glare, trying in vain to pick out the outline of her nude body, while every cell and fiber of her being was transformed ...

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Chapter 3 -- Cagliostro's lair was a tower of obsidian, rising stright upwards like a finger over a remote mountain. The villains appeared inside the dungeon with a puff of smoke, and Brutus immediately realized that something was wrong. "what trick this is?" the werewolf growled, unslingi...

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Chapter 2 -- "Right you are, Marvel," said Cagliostro, stepping out onto the edge of the field and taking a bow. The audience applauded. This was all part of the show, or so they thought. "Cagliostro! I might have known!" the spunky superheroine said, raising one aristocratic eye...

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[Kicking off the Halloween season, Mary Marvel gets mentioned a lot when people talk about hot costumes, but I don't think I've ever seen a story about her. Be warned the sexual content of this story is a little more intense than my usual stuff.] Chapter 1 -- It was a fine day at the Central City fa...

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I could see portraying Wonder Woman as a little bit arrogant (even full of herself), but you went way overboard. She only stays in Man's World because she thinks she's needed here. If she were that jaded, she could always go back to Paradise Island. What you should do is go back and tone down some o...

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You must have a strange definition of the word "hero". A "hero" who "targets" superheroines, films them getting dressed, seduces them, and KILLS them?

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Pretty well written so far. Only I'm a little confused. This isn't the REAL Wonder Woman, right? This is some villainess impersonating her?

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Just a couple of loose ends to tie up... Epilogue -- After making sure the crown of Ereshkigal was secure inside her spaceship in orbit, Ishtar stayed for Ashley's wedding, presenting herself as "an old friend of the family". The ceremony and reception were held at the Traylor house. It wa...

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Chapter 7 -- Fletcher got a grip on himself. He had seen friends killed and maimed in combat before, and he knew you had to put aside your grief for later. Although his heart was breaking, he couldn't let himself think of it. The important thing right now was to get the job done. He aimed the phaser...

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Chapter 6 -- "NO!" the Fuchsia Fox screamed. "Please, Ishtar! You can't surrender, because of me! Please! Let her do whatever she wants with me! You can't--" "Be quiet, daughter!" Ishtar said sternly. "I have not given you permission to speak in my presence!" ...

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I was hoping to surprise you!

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Chapter 5 -- The sirens were getting closer. The Fuchsia Fox briefly had hopes that she was about to be rescued, but it turned out to be just a single patrol car. Two male officers got out, their eyes drawn first to the wreckage of the billboard and the two men in robes they could see on the ground....

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Amazing! I love it!

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Chapter 4 -- The guy with the wicker hat fired off a ragged discharge of electricity which the Fuchsia Fox only evaded by inches, although she still felt the flickering tendrils licking at her force shield like a living thing. The sexy superheroine could only speculate how much it would hurt if it t...

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valugi wrote:finally we have the clash between the heroine and the villains

Yes, you're right. Looking back, I can see this story has been slow in developing. I was so caught up in Jennifer's private life, I let it drag. But I promise you it's non stop action from here on!

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Chapter 3 -- The next day was the fitting of the bridesmaids dresses. Jennifer kept whispering, "Ishtar, give me strength!" to herself all afternoon. In between trips to the dressing room, the other girls stayed on their cellphones all the time, Twittering. Of course the big topic was the ...

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Chapter 2 -- The man driving the monster truck slowed down a little. "Would you look at this crazy chick?" A girl in a skimpy spandex costume was standing in the middle of the road ahead, her long legs planted and her arms akimbo as if she thought they were going to stop for her. "We ...

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Yeah, this is Hot!

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Chapter 1 -- Augusta, Georgia Jennifer Traylor was jogging along the Riverwalk park in a white top and a pair of tiny red shorts, her short brunette hair tied in a ponytail and bouncing along with each step. Of course it was much too late in the year for the magnolia trees to be in bloom, but the ve...

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[Lately I've been thinking more and more about Jennifer... her background, private life, what motivates her to be a heroine. This is the story I came up with. It has peril, mild sexual content, and hopefully a couple of surprises. Plus, for you fans of "Big Trouble in Little China", three ...

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Yes, I agree! Very good!

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Yep, new powers... but after seeing it go out of control like that, don't expect her to use them indescriminately. And yes, it would be rash indeed to assume that Major Zennakova did not somehow find a way to survive. I've got another story I'm still ironing out a couple of bugs on. But sometime in ...

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