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That was amazing, my friend! Nice atmospheric little haunting, with a double kick at the end! You rock!

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Vanessa Kensington 3: "Cold Finger" [In case you missed the previous installments, Vanessa Kensington is a British secret agent -- yes, the character played by the gorgeous Elizabeth Hurley in the movie "Austin Powers: International Man of Mystery". Like the movie, the story is i...

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Chapter 6 -- "Bring the little maiden to me!" Malefica commanded haughtily. The zombies numbered in the hundreds now, with more arriving by the second. The excess began marching off through the black curtain of fog to clash with the Homeland Security forces, attested to by the distant soun...

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I thought you would like that, both of you! Hopefully you'll also like the next chapter where we raise the stakes just a smidgen, and the conclusion. I also want to point out that "Special Parascience Executive for Convergence Transection and Ectoplasmic Research" spells "S.P.E.C.T.E....

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And here is an updated picture of the Fox herself.

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This is what I imagine the Earth Circle looking like. Don't bother looking it up; I made it up for the purpose of my story. It is however based on the notion that "Pagan" magic used the balance of the four elements of nature.

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Chapter 4 -- For a long time, Spengler stared at the Fuchsia Fox's lean young body, so sweet and supple, lying spread out on the floor like a broken doll. He had failed, after all. Because of him, this poor girl was d-- The superheroine's silken legs twitched once, twice. Her gorgeous chest expanded...

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Cracking little yarn this, C! Fabulous! Beautifully tempered writing with your usual perky style balanced by great descriptions and a subtle edge of danger that belies the light tone. Loved the nod to Ramis with the Spengler character Awesome work! (Like the Celtic reference too, me being Welsh. Ho...

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The story's nice, I'm just a little confused. One minute the villainess is led away, tied up and blindfolded, then suddenly she's sneaking in the heroine's bedroom window?

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Chapter 2 -- There was complete silence for a few seconds. The other men of the tactical team glanced at Booker as if he were crazy. Everyone had seen the Fuchsia Fox save the day! What was he arresting her for? Keri Keller's tears of relief having subsided, the beautiful young heroine gently remove...

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[This story is dedicated to the memory of Harold Ramis: writer, actor, director, producer and Ghostbuster, who passed away in February of this year. We miss you, Egon!] Prologue -- Washington, D.C.; Monday, October 27 Patrolman Mike Stone drove his cruiser down Independence Avenue through West Potom...

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I get what you're saying, but I try to keep my stories fairly simple and to the point, like a comic book. Maybe Scathe will return some day. As for the Halloween story, I don't usually like to start posting a story until it's completely finished (writer's block can strike any time and any place), bu...

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Very good work!

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It's different, I'll give you that. I like it!

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I suddenly got an idea last week for a Halloween story featuring a vengeful ghost and a horde of undead minions. So hopefully I'll be able to finish it in time to start posting next week. (Plus, coming soon... the return of Vanessa Kensington!)

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Chapter 6 -- Forbes leaped forward to restrain his partner, but Gilroy was beyond restraint. He was monstrously strong now. With hardly any visible effort, he threw Forbes off of him and slammed the thug into the floor again and again. "MAKE... STOP!!!" he roared again, flailing around the...

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Chapter 5 -- "Please... don't..." the Fuchsia Fox whimpered, struggling feebly as the thug pinned her shapely legs and fondled her through the fabric of her scanty costume. Trembling with fear, the feel of his rough hands on her defenseless breasts terrified her and disgusted her, while at...

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Chapter 4 -- For an anxious moment, the Fuchsia Fox's quivering heart swelled with hope at the thought that she was rescued! The policemen had decided to follow up on her lead after all! Trembling all over from the effects of Scathe's touch, the spineless girl spared no thought for the embarrassment...

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Awesome idea for a villainess, I really enjoy that - kudos to you. Also really pleasant to read something so well-written. I'm not a massive fan of exclamation points from the narrator, but then I totally get why you would go there in this genre. Look forward to more. I appreciate the compliments. ...

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Chapter 3 -- "I'm the Fuchsia Fox!" the heroine blustered. "Get your hands off me if you know what's good for you!" "Oooh a threat!" the thug laughed, as his finger rubbed her nipple. "I'm really scared, kitten. You gonna scratch me to death with your claws?" ...

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Chapter 2 -- Jennifer couldn't help blushing, thinking what she must look like, her clothes disheveled, blouse totally undone and flashing her perky breasts encased in her lacy pink bra. "Nghh!!!" she groaned, urgently wagging her head back and forth. The redhead, still grinning, walked ar...

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tallyho wrote:Back in the game, Mr C.
Nice start (not totally convinced by the reaction at the end, but still good!)
Hopefully not too long for the next post.

Appreciate it, Mr. T! I expect you to let me know if my British characters aren't convincing.

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[I know it's been a while. I was working on some other projects.] Fuchsia Fox: "Fear and Scathing in America" Chapter 1 -- Alexandria, Virginia Somerville Antiques occupied a beautifully restored Early American house in the Old Port section of the city. Ruth Buxton, a formidable woman of 5...

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This is very good. I like the way you describe her body and the details about her capture. I'm hoping to see more from you.

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Chapter 6 -- Tech Man was fiddling with the controls of the big machine. "I've got to warn you," he said, "this is going to be kind of hit or miss. I don't know if I can find the same coordinates again. And even enriched uranium is only going to hold the portal open for ten, maybe twe...

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Chapter 5 -- The Fuchsia Fox regained her senses lying curled up on the floorboards. Her ankles were tied with rope and her wrists locked in a pair of funky-looking handcuffs. The superheroine had just realized that her bracelets had been taken from her when a female voice spoke softly. "Looks ...

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My only complaint is the size of the text is too small. I have to squint to read it (although I suppose I could use the zoom feature on my computer). The font in the signature lines is larger than the text.

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Chapter 4 -- Lieutenant Caldwell lowered his gun, as did the other officers. "Geez, Fox!" he said, shaking his head. "We were supposed to be rescuing you, but I might have known you wouldn't need our help!" "R-rescuing me?" the heroine stammered, letting her hands drop....

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Chapter 3 -- A crowd of spectators and news cameras were waiting outside the police station as the Fuchsia Fox was hustled out into the parking lot. The humiliation of being caught like this, chained and helpless, was mitigated partly by the sudden rush of January cold that knifed right through her ...

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I use third person omniscient, which allows you to switch viewpoint as needed. Generally I focus on the heroine's POV, though, because after all she is the star of the story. I don't care for a story told from the villain's POV, because to my way of thinking that makes him the star of the story, whi...

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Chapter 2 -- The last time the Fuchsia Fox had been in the Independence Avenue police station, she had walked proudly down the corridors, with patrolmen, detectives and petty crooks alike gaping at her sleek, spandex-clad body with open awe and admiration. This time she was being practically CARRIED...

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dravatar wrote:This promises to be your most unique story to date.

I hope so! With all the stories I've posted, I worry about getting into a rut and writing essentially the same story over and over!

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I never would have thought of Starfire! Great!

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Chapter 1 -- By noon, almost two feet of snow had fallen like a crisp blanket over Washington D.C., and the silver clouds overhead promised more before the end of the day as Jennifer Traylor stepped out of the Smithsonian Air and Space Museum. The economy being what it was, museum tour guide was the...

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Fuchsia Fox: Dark Lady Prologue -- Calvert Cliffs Nuclear Power Plant, Maryland Storage Facility "A" was a square concrete building inside a fenced off area. At 2 o'clock in the morning, security guard Tony Mueller buzzed two people in, then watched them on the monitor as they walked down ...

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I have used hostage situtations a few times, but to my way of thinking, the best that would usually get you is a standoff allowing the villain time to escape. The police don't surrender their weapons when a badguy takes a hostage, so why would a superheroine surrender her powers, unless as you say ...

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Sure was! Now THAT was the Huntress!

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I have used hostage situtations a few times, but to my way of thinking, the best that would usually get you is a standoff allowing the villain time to escape. The police don't surrender their weapons when a badguy takes a hostage, so why would a superheroine surrender her powers, unless as you say s...

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If you look through Greek mythology there are plenty of creatures who could give her a hard time... the Sphinx, Cerberus, Morpheus, the Cockatrice, Typhon... There could be magic artifacts that perform the same function as kryptonite, neutralizing her powers or doing weird things to her. I've got an...

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In 18 Fuchsia Fox stories, I've come up with at least 20 different ways to capture or incapacitate a meddling superheroine: sleep gas, pacification gas (saps her will to fight and causes hopelessness), chloroform, electrical charge through stepping on a metal plate, overpowered by someone stronger a...

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Chapter 7 -- Outside, the slipstream was murder. The Fuchsia Fox struggled to keep pace with the airplane, her halter top flapping in the breeze, her two lovely breasts completely exposed to the seering wind. Diving below the fuselage, the fuchsia-clad superheroine spotted the tube she had seen Dire...

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Nope. Still one chapter to go. I realize most of my stories run six chapters, but sometimes one will go to seven. This is one of those times.

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Chapter 6 -- General Mayhew punched numbers into the keypad in front of him. A little screen lit up, red letters spelling out, "POWER LEVEL FIVE> ACCESS CODE REQUIRED..." "Another safety lockout," Mayhew sighed. "We need your code again, Dr. Juarez." Without ceremony he...

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If this is Evangeline von Winter, don't get your hopes up. I also paid for a custom from her and got rooked. I find that surprising; I have ordered about a half-dozen customs from her and Levi without a bobble. Maybe you could drop her a note reminding her? I don't know what happened in my case. Sh...

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If this is Evangeline von Winter, don't get your hopes up. I also paid for a custom from her and got rooked. This was something on the order of two years ago! Mine was a softcore story, too, so it shouldn't have been too hard to do. I eventually told her to forget about it and just send me a couple ...

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Chapter 5 -- The Fuchsia Fox moved swiftly. She heard Alley Cat behind her hurrying to keep up, but she had no time to worry about the tricky female now. Rescuing Dr. Juarez and foiling Dire Wolf's scheme had to be her top priority. She emerged into the hangar area. Most of the space was filled with...

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Chapter 4 -- U. S. Navy Surface Weapons Center, White Oak, Maryland... Dire Wolf's claws sliced through the electrified chain link outer fence, cutting a gap big enough to drive a truck through. Once he had done the same to the inner fence, he loped across the compound followed by four thugs in blac...

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Chapter 3 -- Policemen were swarming over the hotel. Catherine Alessandro and some of the more important guests were allowed to leave within minutes, but the police kept everyone else for over an hour, taking statements, while interviewing the hotel and catering staff to try and find out how the mis...

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Chapter 2 -- Catherine Alessandro stood there staring, spellbound, disbelieving, as the Fuchsia Fox dropped like a sleeping baby to the floor of her prison. "You know what to do, boys," Dire Wolf laughed. "Chain her up good and tight while she's helpless!" He pressed another butt...

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Mea culpa! She's on "Days of Our Lives"! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deidre_Hall

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