Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

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Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby SecretShame » Thu Jan 12, 2012 9:19 pm

We are ecstatic to finally be producing our own Superheroine video clips and we are honored to have made it to NUMBER ONE in superheroine stores on clips4sale in just SIX DAYS!!!

Please come take a look and PLEASE feel free to give constructive feed back, we are working to make better clips every week

http://www.superheroinsecretshame.com/
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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby superheroinebabes » Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:50 pm

It's a clips4sale site?
Check out
http://www.SuperHeroineLinks.com - The Definitive, and most comprehensive list of links to all things Superheroine for when your Tired of searching and surfing the net for superheroines we have a complete list of it ALL.

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby helstar » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:34 pm

I have tried buying a video ... man, there is a lot of work to do eh ... apart from the missing 'presentation' (a little opening title and/or something that explains what's going on ... but ok it's not that important like the rest ^^) ... I must say that IMHO the editing is really awful :s
There are cuts of 1 sec (!), you see them and they disappear all of a sudden and you are like "wtf was that" :D ?
The camera work isn't good either, the fights are below average ... sex is sex and it's ok lol ! But well duh honestly I wouldn't suggest it at all ^^ but things can improve, it's not the end of the world =)

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby superheroinebabes » Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:24 pm

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby swampy170 » Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:44 pm

Not the worst I've ever seen, but far from great. That's how I'd sum up. Good work with adding some FX though :)

As said above you need to put a little more work into production values. I could help you with an edit job or 2 if you think that'd help, perhaps demonstrate some editing tricks. 99% of editing is having a sense of timing, to some people this comes naturally - but it's not too hard to learn.



A steady cam would be a great investment for you guys, and invest a little time watching Film Riot (http://www.youtube.com/user/filmriot).

Sure tuition with real crew is better - but if you don't have the contacts, the time, or the money then Film Riot really is the next best thing.

Very good insight into how to improve production values. Also cheap ways to make important pieces of equipment, such as mounts, dollies etc.



You're using a good range of costumes which is great. It would be good to see higher quality costumes too though - perhaps something you can work on over time.

From what I've seen you're also making an effort with the storyline, which is great.

I think the best way you could take production is attempting to make the vids more cheesy than they are, it makes it alot easier for people watching to ignore small mistakes - at least until you guys get a little more experienced ;)



So to sum up: Good effort! - just try to improve your production values ;)

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby enigma » Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:25 am

Did I nail it..
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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby swampy170 » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:44 am

Sure, it's a cool unicorn - but what does that have to do with critiquing this producers work?

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby SecretShame » Mon Jan 23, 2012 11:40 pm

superheroinebabes wrote:It's a clips4sale site?


yes it is, and soon more videos on U tube

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby drh1966 » Mon Jan 23, 2012 11:59 pm

@enigma- Brilliant =D>
"There's no feeling quite as exciting as that of having a helpless superheroine in your arms"

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby Shakeshift » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:42 am

If someone has to explain this out, I am going to hold my head in shame and weep for my fellow comic geeks.

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby SecretShame » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:50 am

swampy170 wrote:Not the worst I've ever seen, but far from great. That's how I'd sum up. Good work with adding some FX though :)

As said above you need to put a little more work into production values. I could help you with an edit job or 2 if you think that'd help, perhaps demonstrate some editing tricks. 99% of editing is having a sense of timing, to some people this comes naturally - but it's not too hard to learn.



A steady cam would be a great investment for you guys, and invest a little time watching Film Riot (http://www.youtube.com/user/filmriot).

Sure tuition with real crew is better - but if you don't have the contacts, the time, or the money then Film Riot really is the next best thing.

Very good insight into how to improve production values. Also cheap ways to make important pieces of equipment, such as mounts, dollies etc.



You're using a good range of costumes which is great. It would be good to see higher quality costumes too though - perhaps something you can work on over time.

From what I've seen you're also making an effort with the storyline, which is great.

I think the best way you could take production is attempting to make the vids more cheesy than they are, it makes it alot easier for people watching to ignore small mistakes - at least until you guys get a little more experienced ;)



So to sum up: Good effort! - just try to improve your production values ;)

thank you for the constructive criticism swampy. I feel like we're making small improvements with each video we do, hopefully it shows in the finished product. I will be looking at film riot so see what changes are feasible for us.

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby AshleyGraham » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:52 am

I may have to steal that unicorn. Im not saying what it actually is though

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby drh1966 » Tue Jan 24, 2012 9:52 am

I think anybody who wants to try their hand at filming a heroine movie should be welcomed and wished well. Whether they want to just film short clips or longer storyline movies, the more variety there is for fans, the better. And you never know who is going to produce a real gem (eg. Weird Menace Theater).

Rock on SecretShame.
"There's no feeling quite as exciting as that of having a helpless superheroine in your arms"

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby zepolmas » Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:46 pm

SERIOUSLY!
EXPLAIN THE FREAKIN' UNICORN!
OR ELSE I START POSTING PICS OF ME NAKED!
YOU DO NOT WANT THAT!
WE WILL ALL SUFFER!

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby enigma » Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:20 pm

You're focusing on the wrong thing.

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby zepolmas » Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:11 pm

enigma wrote:You're focusing on the wrong thing.

Well
what
AM
I
supposed
to
focs
on?

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Re: Introducing Superheroin Secret Shame

Postby SecretShame » Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:39 pm

enigma wrote:Did I nail it..


I don't understand what the picture is supposed to be conveying


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