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MMP Studios/Chaos House Videos Presents In association with WON-TV YouTube Networks and Jimbo-FailExchange Productions Presents----The Twilight Zone: Cosplay Series (Pilot Episode) Kaycee Anne as Supergirl/Jacklene Kent in “The Deadly Admirer of Supergirl”. Created By Jonathan Rios. Written By Jonathan Rios & Jackie Gonzalez. Costume & Props Provided By Jonathan Rios & Jackie Gonzalez.
(Insert The Twilight Zone: Cosplay Series (Pilot Episode Intro)
(Insert Lakeland Scene)
Scene 1: (We go now to the town of Lakeland and we see Jac Kent heading home from a hard day work. Then, when Jac approaches the front door of her home, she notices an envelope stuck under the door. She picks up the envelope and checks to see who it’s from. A smile comes upon Jac’s face and a little chuckle too. She then opens the door and enters her home. She then walk to the living room and sits on the sofa. She opens up the envelope and Jac reads the letter.)
Jac reads:
Dear Supergirl,
I wanted to send you a note to let you know how much I admired your courage revealing your true identity to me last Saturday night. It also showed me how much you want this relationship to work and also signals that you want to take it to the next level. I’m not looking for anything in return except you love and commitment. I do have two surprises for you. But in order to find out the surprise, you’re gonna have to come over to my house and meet up with me at the pool house. The first surprise will be laying on one of the pool chairs. The second one I’ll bring over myself. Anyway, I’m looking forward to seeing you, sweetheart. I may be a little late do to work…but wait for me. I have a surprise that you’ll never forget. Love You
Sincerely, Your Secret Admirer
P.S-Come as your true self
Jac chuckles and says: Hmmm, Darling Roger. He is so sweet & so thoughtful. I better head over there and see what surprises he has in store for me.
(So then Jac gets up from the sofa and heads out the door…she then takes off her glasses and opens up her blouse and transforms into Supergirl...She then leaps into the air) (Insert flying clip) (If the clip doesn’t work. Leave it blank. I’ll insert it later on)
(Insert Jonathan Rios/Rod Serling style Intro)
(Fade into Scene 2)
Scene 2: (Supergirl lands outside her secret admirer’s pool house at the front gate and enter the pool house. She looks to see if she finds anything unusual. Then she notices a small box. Then, Supergirl walks over to the pool chair and picks up both items. She looks at the box and she notices that there is a message written on the top of the box says. “Here’s Surprise #1”. After reading the message Supergirl begins to smile and then opens the box. Inside the box is a ring shaped as a Supergirl “S” logo. Supergirl is shocked, stunned and happy. Then, Supergirl hears a phone ringing. She looks around to see where the ringing is coming from. She then sees that a cellphone is under one of the other pool chairs and its ringing…She picks up the phone from the floor and answers the phone.)
Supergirl says: Hello? (Pauses for 5 seconds)
(Supergirl chuckles & then says)
Supergirl: Are you kidding me, Roger? I’m completely shocked by this. How were you able to get this ring made like this? It’s so beautiful.
(Pauses for 5 seconds)
Supergirl: You’re not going to tell me, huh? Ah, well…I t came from the heart, that’s what counts.
(Pauses for 5 seconds)
Supergirl: Hey, are you close by?
(Pauses for 5 seconds)
Supergirl: How long will you be?
(Pauses for 5 seconds)
Supergirl: 20 minutes, huh? Okay. I’ll be here waiting. I may have a surprise in store for you. Anyway, I’ll see you in a few minutes, darling. Ok? Alright, be safe. Bye.
(Supergirl hangs up the phone and admires the ring. She then put it on. She then says)
Supergirl: Sometimes, he just surprising. I wonder what else he has up his sleeve. I’ll find out soon enough. In the meantime, where is that POV camera I brought?
(Supergirl gets up from the chair and walks around the area of the pool looking for the POV camera. She then see it the camera on the other side of the pool. She walks towards it and picks it up. Supergirl with the camera in hand walks back to the pool chairs area and sits down and begins to setup the camera/programming. While she is setting the camera up, she then says)
Supergirl: Boy, Will Roger be surprised. He always wanted to me make an underwater fantasy film for him. So, I guess I’ll fulfill his fantasy.
(So then after Supergirl finishes setting up the camera, she puts the camera down. She then takes out the props she needs for the video. When she’s done getting at the things she needs, she set the camera up and it’s looking straight at her and then she says)
Supergirl: well, here is goes
(Supergirl walks to the sliding doors and goes inside the house. After 10 seconds, she exits the house and that when the video-shoot begins. She walks directly to us. She smiles and says)
(She looking directly at the POV camera (Which of course is us, the viewers)
Supergirl: Hey, babe. If you’re watching this video, you’re in for a surprise. You’ve done to show how much you care and love me. So in return, I thought it would be nice to fulfill your fantasy you been telling me about.
(While she’s talking to the camera, supergirl begins to walk to the edge of the pool near the diving point)
Supergirl: And that is make the fantasy video you’ve wanted for so long. So before I get started, why why don’t you get in the pool?
(The camera aka us viewer go into the pool and move to the middle of the pool so Supergirl will have room to dive and swim to us. Supergirl then says)
Supergirl: Ok, that perfect spot. Ok, without further ado, Here we go
(Supergirl dives into the pool and swims to the center of the pool where the camera is at, we wait for her to emerge and after 10 seconds we have a close up shot of Supergirl emerging from underwater)
(FYI: The camera stays above the water the whole time when Supergirl dives into the pool and emerges from underwater. Sort of like what we saw in “Daring Angel To Drown”, except the camera is held steady.)
Supergirl: Ahh, The water feels great. I love being in the water. It boasts up my adrenaline. It’s better than flying. I get to see and do so many things. Ahh, the water feels so good. I think it would be better if I warm up for a bit. Don’t you think? (Supergirl winks & smiles and submerges underwater. Bubbles rise to the surface, the camera is still above the water)
(After 10 seconds, Supergirl emerges from underwater and says)
Supergirl: Hey, babe. Aren’t you coming? This is all for you. So come and watch.
(We see Supergirl swimming around underwater and above water and smiling at the camera. She poses underwater, flirts underwater by motioning us to come closer so she can blow bubbles at the camera and sometime blow kisses at the camera. Then, after 3 minutes of flirting and teasing, she swim toward us and since Supergirl has the great ability to talk underwater, she smiles and says “this is all for you, babe? “ She then swims to the surface and the camera follows her emerging from underwater, she then looks at the camera, smiles and says)
Supergirl: Wooo! That was a good swim. I can be in here all day. Now, let’s get down to business.
(Supergirl swims to the edge of the pool, reaches and grabs a hold of the steel bar prop and then says)
Supergirl: You always said that you love women who are strong and powerful. And you also said that when I demonstrate my strength…it turns you on. Well, what do you think about this?
(Supergirl winks & smiles. Supergirl while still smiling submerges underwater)
(Supergirl submerges underwater and sits down in the bottom of the pool with the steel bar in hand. She tells us to watch her closely and she begins to bend the steel bar almost to the shape of a pretzel. Now since Supergirl has the ability to talk underwater…She smiles and then says…”Hot enough for you?” She then swims to the surface and emerges from underwater.
(Supergirl then put the steel bar back on the side of the pool and then says…)
Supergirl: How was that? Strong enough for you? I wouldn’t be doing this for anybody, unless they were special and Sweetheart, You are special.
(supergirl smiles and submerges underwater. Above the water we see her swimming away and swimming around the pool.)
Scene 3: (Meanwhile, while Supergirl is swimming, we see a man feet with sneakers on approach the edge of the pool. He lays down two kryptonite rocks…one red and one green and a load of dynamite. After a few seconds, he throws the red kryptonite into the pool. Meanwhile above the water, we zoom in on the water. We see Supergirl swimming underwater approaching. )
(We switch camera and get Roger aka secret admirer’s view of Supergirl. Her man aka now us the viewer approaches the edge of the pool.)
(Disclaimer: We never see Rogers’s face. Only his hands and feet and only hear is voice. We are seeing the peril begin through Roger’s eyes aka the camera )
(Above the water, we zoom in on the water. We see Supergirl swimming underwater approaching. She looks up at us and says thru underwater bubbles. “Hi, Babe” and then she emerges from underwater and says)
Supergirl: you’re a little early. You caught made making you a surprise present.
Roger: I can see that. You made my day. Did you like the present I gave you?
Supergirl: Yeah, are you kidding? It the most adorable gift I’ve ever gotten.
Roger: I’m glad to hear that, because I have other surprise in store for you
Supergirl: Really? What is it? OW! (supergirl submerges underwater and then comes back up after 8 seconds and says)
Supergirl: Hey, babe. Can you help me out of here?
Roger: Why?
Supergirl: Because I think I have a cramp. I…I need help...”blurb” (Supergirl Submerges underwater and then comes back up after 8 seconds and says)
Supergirl: Why are you sitting there? Help me!
Roger: I’m sitting here because I love your reaction to the surprise I just gave you.
Supergirl: Why? What are you talking about?
Roger: You’re Supergirl. You’re not supposed to develop a cramp, unless a certain foreign material is in the water.
Supergirl: What foreign? (Supergirl pauses and then is shocked and angered and then says)
Supergirl: No, NO!!! Not Kyptonite!
(supergirl stuggles to keep her head above water while she’s trying to talk)
Roger: Oh, yes…not just any kryptonite. It’s red kryptonite. It slowly takes away your powers and makes you like us. Quite human. But this is only the beginning. I have another surprise for you.
(Roger shows Supergirl the Green kryptonite rock. Supergirl screams while she submerges underwater and comes back up after 8 seconds and says while she’s trying to swim away from the rock)
Supergirl: I thought you loved me, Roger. How could you do this? WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?
Roger: You know what? I really don’t know? I guess I got bored with you.
Supergirl: You heartless monster!
Roger: Indeed I am. It was great knowing, Supergirl. I’ll cherish the times we’ve had together from beginning to end (evil laugh)
(Then, the man throws the green kryptonite rock in the water and Supergirl immediately sinks and bubbles surface)
(We then see Roger’s hands pick up the bunch of dynamite. Sets it up and walks towards the edge of the pool. Above the water we see Supergirl underwater trying to swim away from the kryptonite rock. She looks up at the man aka us the viewers and sees that her deadly admirer has a bomb in his hands…We see Supergirl screaming and the bubbles from her scream come up to the surface. Roger then laughs evilly and then says…)
Roger: Well, I better go. Enjoy the remaining 7 minutes of your life. They will be your last. Goodbye, Supergirl. Have a blast. (evil laugh) (Roger then throws the bomb in the water and departs the area)
(Supergirl struggles underwater as she tries to swim away from the Red & Green kryptonite rocks and tries to disable the bomb at the same time, she is also trying to keep her head above water and gasp for air. But, continues to submerge. She yells out underwater and a couple of time above water “Somebody help me!” I’m drowning, help! The struggle should last around 3 to 5 min)
(Underwater and above water shots/Lots of bubble action/ close up wetlook scene when she emerges from underwater. After 5 minutes off struggling to escape the radiation of the kyrptonite. Supergirl begins to lose air and the ability to breathe and drowns)
Scene 4: (Meanwhile above water...Roger aka us the viewers in the eyes of roger see that he sees Supergirl’s body underwater motionless. He then says)
Supergirl: Rest in peace, Supergirl. Out of all the times we had together. This is the most fun I ever had. (Evil laugh)
(Back underwater we go…we have a close up shot of Supergirl’s ring on her finger. Then we have a close of shot of Supergirl. Her eyes are beginning to open. She realizes that she is alive again. She also realizes that the bomb she has in her hands is still ticking and has 2 minute and 50 seconds left. Her eyes widen and she begins to dismantle the bomb. After 30 seconds…Supergirl dismantles the bomb. After she dismantles it…She looks at camera aka us, Gives thumbs up, smiles and says “That was a close call”. Supergirl then swims to the surface and emerges from underwater. She quickly gets out of the pool and runs out the pool house with the dynamite in hand)
Scene 5: (Meanwhile, we go inside of Roger’s car and we see that he is having a hard time looking for the key to start up the car. Then, we hear Supergirl’s voice near the car window. She says…
Supergirl: You’re looking for something?
(The camera quickly turns to the side and we see Supergirl with the car keys in hand)
Roger: Supergirl! How did you...
Supergirl: How did I get out? Let’s just say you surprise present gave me a new gift of life. Oh and one more thing I believe this belongs to you? See-ya, Sweetheart!
(Supergirl throws the dynamite into the car and she runs away. Roger’s hands scramble to try to dismantle the bomb...but after 5 seconds, it’s too late and Roger screams)
Roger: NOOOOOO!
(Insert car explosion)
Supergirl: We’ll when it comes to men, I learned my lesson. Never trust a secret admirer. He may end up killing you.
(Supergirl runs and leaps into the air) (Insert filying clip and fade to black)
THE END
Disclaimer: The Twilight Zone: Cosplay Series (Pilot Episode) “The Deadly Admirer of Supergirl” is in no way affiliated with DC Comics, Warner Bros & CBS. The Twilight Zone: Cosplay Series is a not-for-profit fan film and is not intended for sales of any sort.
i'm still targeting the Summer for this Supergirl/Twilight Zone Superheroine peril fan Film to be filmed..but it could most likely be pushed back.
Anyway, this is story/script i wrote for my fan film and I hope you folks enjoyed it.
Watch all of W.O.N/MMP's Superheroine World Underwater Peril Fan Film Series, only on W.O.N Cinema YouTube Channel: 
20 bucks is no problem. that's better than $0. 
I'd pay more than $20 to see a good WW in peril getting wet! And even more if it was Electra Woman! I suspect my money's safe for awhile....
Um, safety concerns? It's not like you're doing anything drastically dangerous or extreme. Anyway, I have a pool in my backyard if anyone's interested....I also have a custom rock climbing wall with boulders that could make for some interesting scenarios. Maybe I should get into the heroine movie business!