Though it is just an outline, I would love for people to check it out and give me some feed back. Below is the link to the outline for my first Superman story. Please give suggestions and feed back! It is impossible to spell check and such on blogger mobile, so please over look typos. I call it Earth 3!
http://earth3dcuniverse.blogspot.com/20 ... n.html?m=1
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