I'm sad to say I'll be stepping away from the board for a while. (Nothing life-threatening. I just need to focus on some personal stuff.) Before I go, here's a concept I've had kicking around in my head for a while. The idea is for a slightly different type of villainess to the blatantly evil ladies we usually see. Rula Moorcock - C.E.O of Vixen News - is a media mogul who campaigns against the "vigilante menace". In her own twisted mind, she might even believe she's doing the right thing.
Here's my first attempt at a Rula Moorock story. I had planned to submit it as a custom request (and still may in the future). It's written in script form, but I might eventually flesh it out with some prose and a fuller sex scene if you guys think it's worth expanding. Thanks to quillofnumenor for a couple of dialogue suggestions.
It's been fun, guys and girls. I look forward to future discussions. For now, here's a story I call KnightWoman - Breaking News!
Scene 1
In the office of media mogul Rula Moorcock, a shocking video plays on a large screen.
The ID-800 android has “KnightWoman” cornered. She puts up a brave fight but is overpowered by the android who eventually knocks her to the floor.
ID-800's POV of “KnightWoman” on the floor. Caption: “IDENTIFICATION SEQUENCE INITIATED. REMOVE MASK TO PERFORM FACIAL ANALYSIS.”
The ID-800 swiftly tears back the eye section of the mask, revealing the face beneath.
Caption: “TARGET IDENTIFIED AS RULA MOORCOCK, C.E.O OF VIXEN NEWS.”
The partially-unmasked Rula sighs and then smiles at the camera.
Rula Moorcock [on camera] - I hope you enjoyed this demonstration of my ID-800 Identifier droid. Next time you see it, it will be unmasking the real KnightWoman. A live Vixen News exclusive event.
Rula has been showing the demonstration video as part of her meeting with billionaire Alexandra Jane (KnightWoman). Both women are dressed in business suits with skirts, pantyhose and heels.
Rula Moorcock - Now is the perfect time to invest, Miss Jane. Our share prices are going to skyrocket when we expose KnightWoman's secret identity, live on-air.
Alexandra Jane – Jane Enterprises would never be involved in the destruction of a superheroine! KnightWoman has saved this city countless times.
Rula Moorcock – Your loss. The vigilante will be exposed, with or without your investment. Wherever KnightWoman appears, a Vixen News crew and my Identifier droid will be close behind. Ready to rip that mask off her face.
Scene 2
In a deserted alleyway, a shocked Alexandra Jane phones her young assistant Grace Dixon (Robyn).
Alexandra Jane – It's just as Olivia King and the others described, Robyn. Rula Moorcock has an android programmed to track and unmask KnightWoman. I have to get to that droid before it gets to me.
Alexandra looks around to make sure she's alone and there's no CCTV. She then removes a purple pill and a bottle of water from her handbag. She pours a small amount of water over the pill and moments later KnightWoman's costume appears fully formed on the ground.
Suit up montage: Glove on, boot zipped, belt fastened, mask pulled down.
Scene 3
KnightWoman gingerly creeps around the Vixen building. She finds the ID-800 lying on a table in what looks like a laboratory. She examines it for a moment and is surprised to find it isn't what it seems.
KnightWoman – What?! That's not an android. It's just a remote controlled dummy!
KnightWoman spins around, turning her back on the ID-800 as she hears the tapping of stiletto heels approaching. Rula Moorcock enters the room, holding up a remote control. She presses a button and the ID-800 suddenly springs to life, grabbing KnightWoman in a bearhug.
Rula Moorcock – The word is automaton and you're the dummy, KnightWoman. Did you really think I'd waste all that money developing an android to unmask you? I just had to show this toy to a few do-gooders and wait for one of them to warn you. Now I’m going rip that stupid mask off with my own bare hands.
Rula playfully flexes her fingers in anticipation of the grand unveiling.
KnightWoman – You won’t get away with this.
Rula Moorcock – [sighs] I’m an innocent citizen. You broke into my building and tried to damage property.
She grabs at the face of KnightWoman’s mask, getting her fingers under the eyeholes. She playfully pulls at it. The fabric stretches under Rula's grip, but not enough to fully reveal Alexandra’s face.
KnightWoman - No! Stop! Don’t do this!
Rula lets go and the mask snaps back into place.
Rula Moorcock - Maybe we could come to an arrangement. Give me a really good fucking and I might just let you keep your mask.
KnightWoman - You’re disgusting!
Rula Moorcock – A little Orgazma Spray should get you in the mood.
Rula holds up a small perfume bottle and blasts Orgazma Spray in KnightWoman’s face. Our heroine is now overcome with sexual desire.
KnightWoman – I... need… more.
Rula Moorcock – That was just a taster. You won’t get a full blast of the Orgazma Spray until you have stripped off that ridiculous costume.
Rula presses a button on the remote and the ID-800 releases KnightWoman from the bearhug. It then leaves the room as KnightWoman strips down to just her mask and tights.
KnightWoman - I need MORE!
KnightWoman snatches the Orgazma Spray from Rula’s hand and gives herself another blast. She then aggressively sprays Rula in the face. (Note: It’s important that KW isn't wearing gloves when she does this.)
Rula also strips down to just her tights.
Wild sex scene. Both women stay in their tights. Rula’s get ripped open at the crotch while KnightWoman’s eventually end up pulled down around her ankles. The tights never come off completely.
Rula Moorcock - That was too good. I would feel used if I didn't get your name and number, sorry.
KnightWoman - No! You said you wouldn't!
Rula Moorcock - I only said I *might* let you keep your mask.
Rula chloroforms KnightWoman. The helpless heroine falls unconscious. Rula starts to pull at KnightWoman’s mask and then stops herself.
Rula Moorcock – No, I’d better not unwrap my present too early. My surprise has to look natural when we go live with tonight’s grand unveiling. Nighty night, KnightWoman. You need a rest before your big show.
Scene 4
Now fully dressed, Rula address the TV audience.
Rula Moorcock – People of America, as C.E.O of Vixen News, it is my great honor to bring you this exclusive broadcast. For years the great city of Arkham Heights has been terrorized by the vigilante KnightWoman. Her mere existence has inspired hordes of freakish villains to wage war on our streets. Well, tonight it ends…
The camera pans to reveal KnightWoman bound to a St Andrew’s Cross. She is now back in full costume.
Rula Moorcock – I personally captured KnightWoman in this very building. She had broken in to sabotage our ongoing quest to bring you the truth about the vigilante menace. Run VT!
Two shots from earlier are repeated, now heavily edited. One shot shows KnightWoman spraying Rula in the face. The other is a brief shot from the sex scene. One which makes it look like KnightWoman is in control. The nudity is pixelated this time and there’s a CCTV timecode in the corner of the screen.
Rula Moorcock - KnightWoman tried to delete the CCTV footage, but I salvaged enough to prove that she attacked me with her Orgazma Spray and then had her way with me.
KnightWoman - No! It didn't happen like that! She sprayed me!
Rula holds up the Orgazma Spray between her thumb and forefinger.
Rula Moorcock - And here we have more evidence. KnightWoman’s Orgazma Spray, along with the fingerprints of whoever is under that mask.
KnightWoman’s heart sinks. She realizes Rula has totally framed her.
Rula Moorcock - Now, live on Vixen News, we will all discover who KnightWoman really is.
KnightWoman's eyes widen in horror as she looks into the camera and realizes her fate is sealed.
KnightWoman - No! Get off me!
Rula reaches behind KnightWoman’s neck and slowly slides the zipper at the back of her mask. It becomes visibly loose around her throat. KnightWoman flinches helplessly as Rula slides her thumbs under the collar of the mask and gradually peels it off completely to reveal...
Rula Moorcock - Alexandra Jane! You saw it here first, folks. Arkham Heights’ most respected socialite stands exposed as the vicious vigilante KnightWoman.
Rula Moorcock - [whispering in KnightWoman's ear] Don't you wish you joined me when you had the chance?
Shot of a TV screen with the Vixen News logo and the headline "KNIGHTWOMAN UNMASKED AS ALEXANDRA JANE. FUTURE OF JANE ENTERPRISES IN DOUBT AS BILLIONAIRE C.E.O FACES CRIMINAL CHARGES."
KnightWoman/Alexandra sobs as we hear the approaching sound of police sirens.
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Sorry to hear you won't be around for a while. I hope it's nothing serious. I know I will miss your presence here as I am sure others will as well. I may have to borrow some ideas from this story for the next knightwoman release!