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Post the scrambler
Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:05 pm
ok so my first time writing a storie and i allways hate using real villans as i think it makes the storie better if you make a heroine and villan your self
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chapter 1- the lure

tv reporter kate is show on tv " hello every one and i am at wallstreet newyork where the seventh murder has taken place the person who has done this is none other then the scrambler using her powers to suduce weman and lure them into her secret layer where she strips them while there bound to a wall then is tormented with vibraters and whips then finialy she drops them off at a random place"

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in laylors hideout " what is scrambler up to this time killing inercent girls like that geuss i will have to capture her and put her in prison " as she walks out the door getting her costume on while walking

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the sar light girl zooms off to all seven crime seceanbns and finds clues to get to the scramblers layer


chapter2- the capture

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will finish later have to think of ideas


 
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