Shinning Star & Wonder Star vs. Madame Cheri

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Part 1 “The Call”

At the end of another glorious Center City evening Christina and Jade return to their country estate on the outskirts of the city. “Jade I hope you enjoyed the concert as much as I did?” “Well, I enjoyed the atmosphere but I’m not a huge fan of classical musicals” replied Jade as Christina nodded in agreement as she headed for the answering machine. “I suppose I should check to see if we have any messages” she sighed before pushing the play button.

“Shinning Star, Commissioner Mooney here. We just had a robbery at the Center City Bank. I think you need to get down to city hall right away and I’ll fill you in on the details.” The two heroines exchanged glances before Jade exclaimed “who is it this time Christina?” “Not sure but lets get changed and get to city hall as fast as possible” Within seconds they had dawned their Shinning Star and Wonder Star costumes and descended into the underground garage. They then boarded the Star car and headed for city hall.

“Shinning Star and Wonder Star! I’m so glad you’re finally here” Commissioner Mooney greeted the shapely heroines dressed in the red and blue leotards. “What do you have Commissioner?” Shinning Star inquired immediately. “It appears to be the work of Madame Cheri and her evil sidekicks Sugar and Spice. “How can you be so sure?” replied Wonder Star. “Who else would bring cupcakes filled with knockout powder to the bank?” the commissioner replied. Shinning Star and Wonder Star exchanged knowing looks and then darted from the Commissioner’s office with Shinning Star stating they would be in touch.

Part 2 “The Trap”

Back at their country estate the heroines enter the attic and search the Star Computer for clues. “I think I’ve narrowed it down to two locations” Shinning Star cheerfully proclaimed as she searched for recently completed leases on Center City rental property. “Wow, Shinning Star!” Wonder Star shouted as she noticed one of the properties was an old abandoned warehouse that manufactured cooking utensils. “That can’t be a coincidence.” “I think you’re right Wonder Star. Maybe we should pay a visit and welcome the new residents” Shinning Star smiled as she two heroines ran for the Star car.

Minutes later outside the abandoned warehouse the heroines search for a suitable entrance. “It doesn’t look like anyone’s here” Wonder Star observed as she noted all the lights were out. “You might be right but let’s not take any chances. I’ll pick the lock but be sure to be quiet. I don’t want us to fall into a trap” Shinning Star directed her younger sidekick. Both had experienced Madame Cheri’s devious traps before and knew she was no one to be taken lightly.

As they entered the warehouse all seemed quiet. They searched the entire first floor and found nothing. Upon walking up the stairs to the second floor they could here boisterous laughter. “When I finish with those two meddling heroines nothing will stand in my way” boasted Madam Cheri as her two cohorts giggled approvingly.

“Well, Madame Cheri don’t you think Wonder Star and I may have a little something to say regarding your nefarious plans?”

“Well, girls look like the dynamic duds what to play. Get em!”

Sugar and spice attacked the heroines without delay but Shinning Star and her sidekick quickly gained the upper hand. Soon Sugar and Spice both lay dazed on the floor. “Gee Shinning Star they didn’t put up much of a fight”

“You’re smarter than you look Wonder Star. I just needed the girls to distract you long enough to prepare a nice little treat for you lovely ladies”

The heroines exchanged puzzled looks and soon turned their attention back to Madame Cheri as she flipped what appeared to be a light switch. Soon two glass canisters pushed up from the floor. Within each cylinder there was a whip cream pie.

“I hope you girls are hungry. I’ve made a special treat for you.”

“I think we’ll pass on that Madame Cheri, no offense”

“Oh but don’t you know it’s bad manors to refuse your host?”

Suddenly, Wonder Star darted toward Cheri.

Shinning Star tried to stop her partner but before she could move Madame Cheri flipped another switch which threw one of the pies at Wonder Star scoring a direct hit in the face. Wonder Star was immediately stunned and was stopped straight in her tracks.

“Wonder Star! Are you ok?”

“I can’t get it off my face....so sticky....feels like my hands are glued to it” mumbled Wonder Star as she frantically struggled to remove the sticky cream from her face.

“You evil witch” Shinning Star shouted as she now rushed Madame Cheri but it was no use. Cheri launched another pie which also struck Shinning Star in the face. Now both of the Wonder girls struggled to get the sticky cream off their faces. Madame Cheri and her two assistants laughed hysterically at the sight before them as Shinning Star and Wonder Star staggered around bumping into each other as they tried to free themselves. It seemed the more they struggled the stickier the goo became.

“Shinning Star, I can’t get this sticky stuff off my face! I....I....can barely breathe”

“Neither can I Wonder Star! I’m afraid we’ve fallen into Madame Cheri’s trap”
Madame Cheri and her cohorts delighted in the plight of the dynamic duo as Madame Cheri barked out more directions to Sugar and Spice:

“Sugar and Spice, please prepare the dynamic duo for their next adventure; I’m sure they”ll find it most captivating” the two assistants did as directed and roughly escorted Shinning Star and Wonder Star from the room. Oh what has Madame Cheri in store for our heroes. Stay tuned!
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Great chapter eager to read more
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Nice start!
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Very excellent storyline. When do you think that you'd be able to come up with the sequel to it?
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:thumbup: Great Dialogue and a very Nice Start! Bravo!
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