STING OF THE BUMBLEBEE (SHE'S BACK In more ways than one.)

[KNIGHT0107]

The New revised story is up on another post Corrections and all.

[Doubleb66]

Nice to see another new story in the works from you! Sparrow is HARSH! That's really not the type of behavior and attitutude I'd expect to see in a superoheroine. I hope you're going in a direction that enables Bumblebee to "turn the tables" and rescue Sparrow and Young Tiger from peril. She has promise. Keep up the good work.

P.S. - This is purely constructive and meant in the kindest possible way....Please use your spellcheck before submitting a story. Thanks.

[KNIGHT0107]

Does this forum have a spell check system here? It would be helpful if it did. I checked but didn't notice one maybe I overlooked it. Yes BUMBLEBEE will prove her self in more ways than one. The reason for Sparrow's harshness really has been brewing for some time (reference to the NIGHTSWAN and SYNDICATE OF SIN's stories and such) she has been saving young heroines(sidekicks) all of the time and she's fed up with it. Her thing is if they want to be be superheroines then they need to pull their own weight becasue "Mother hen is not going to be around 24/7. It's a thing where once in a while there are situations and which assitance is needed, but not every freaking time enough already are her thoughts. But yes the tables are going to turn soon enough stay tuned![/list][/code]

[SGWriter]

Knight,

The fourm itself doesn't have a spell check. What I do is type something in MS Word which spell and gramar checks it. After that I just copy and paste it in the fourm. Give that a try.

Your story has a good premise. Looking forward to seeing an update.