RK I'm not offended and I see your point entirely. I actually did intend for the Countess to be the boss which is why she takes the initiative but it seemed a bit early on in proceedings for her to enjoy equal status. Like I said before it's your story and I respect your wishes. You've kick started ...

Finished finally. Sent to RK today via e-mail for his approval. I have three ideas for other stories on the same theme but nothing written down yet. If RK likes this one then I'll try to write my other ideas into stories but I can't give promises on how long it will take me. This one took a lot long...

Sorry, I probably posted a bit sooner than I should have. I did have a first sub chapter almost fully written but I hadn't finihsed the ending. I'm afraid I still haven't as I've been working. It will be done by the end of the week!

RK I also really like these stories and would like to see more. I know that you aren't going to write any more so (following your example) I've written some of my own. I currently have two stories which fit between part 1 and part 2 of your fist chapter i.e. they account for what happened between Iv...