I'd love to see more Dominix mask peril as well.

Just lovely.

[center] 13 Miss Incredible [/center] “Anytime now, Cass,” she said toward the closet. “Crime’s not going to wait all night for you to get dressed.” “I’m not sure about this,” called the girl. “Just come on out,” said Miss Incredible. “I’m sure you look stunning.” “Fine.” Cass strode out of the clos...

[center] 12 Cass [/center] “Not a chance, no way,” said Cass, holding up her hands. “Hello, were you there a week ago? We got our asses kicked and only escaped by the skin of our noses.” “But we weren’t working as a team then!” insisted Natalie. “Just imagine what it would have been like if we’d pla...

[center] 11 Miss Incredible [/center] She hurt, all over. How am I ever going to explain these injuries to the board, hell, even to my doctor? She looked across the roof, hoping to spot Cass running back with something that would save them, but saw no sign of the girl. Miss Incredible thanked her go...

[center] 10 Cass [/center] Miss Incredible took Cass’s hand and Cass gave her a tug to pull her up and through the window. “Thanks,” said Miss I, breathing heavily. “Give me just…just a sec.” She slumped to a seated position, her back to the window pane. Cass looked around, nervous. In the distance ...

[center] 9 Sinistra [/center] “I have to say, Carlo, I had my doubts when you called,” said Sinistra as she walked along with Tucci and his men. “But this,” she held up the belt Tucci had presented her, “this is the real thing.” The mighty Miss Incredible, unbelted and defeated by a third-rate booki...

[center] 8 Miss Incredible [/center] Oh Cass , she thought, I told you to stay behind. Now we’re both screwed. Miss Incredible looked at her young comrade. She had a bruise spreading across her face where Tucci had slapped her, and she slumped in her bonds, in obvious pain. This is all my fault , th...

[center] 7 Cass [/center] Cass watched from her hiding place behind the crates as the thugs dragged Miss Incredible, bound in a chair, into another room. You stupid, stupid bitch , she thought, though she wasn’t sure she meant Miss Incredible or herself. She had pilfered all the cash from Natalie’s ...

[center] 6 Miss Incredible [/center] She landed with a soft thud on the warehouse roof. Crouching, she peered down at the next building over. This is the one . But how to make her entrance? She leaped down onto the street and dashed through the shadows to the side of the warehouse. With a standing l...

[center] 5 Cass [/center] “So, what?” Cass said. “You want to go in and… beat on Carlo till he gives up my dad’s debt?” “More like bring proof of his extortion racket to the police, but yes, I expect there will be some fisticuffs.” Cass looked Natalie up and down. “I appreciate the offer,” she said,...

[center] 4 Natalie [/center] “John, I’m going to need to cancel all my meetings this week.” Natalie held the phone in the crook of her neck while she folded a pair of jeans and placed them in her suitcase. “All of them?” asked John over the phone. “Yes, all. You know what, cancel next week’s too.” “...

[center] 3 Cass [/center] With her last bit of cash, Cass paid for a booth at the internet café, slapping the bills down on the counter with her palm. The clerk wrinkled his nose at her as he took the money; Cass hadn’t showered from the previous night’s garbage-filled adventure. Yeah, well, if I wo...

[center] 2 Miss Incredible [/center] Miss Incredible’s eyes fluttered open. The world was bleary and hazy and for a moment her vision doubled. She lay on her back, on some uneven surface. Parts of it felt soft while others were hard. Something jabbed into her back, leaving it sore and uncomfortable....

Hello. Here is another story for you. It's not meant to have continuity from my previous story. Hope you all enjoy. [center] Miss Incredible: No Harm Done [/center] [center] 1 Cass [/center] Cass huddled in the doorway, hugging herself to keep warm, trying to look as small as possible. So it had com...

For me, the main attraction is unmasking. I love a lot of the peril build-up beforehand, but if there's not an unmasking involved, I lose interest quickly. As has been discussed on this board in the past, unmasking represents the complete destruction of the heroine's ability to function AS a heroine...

Thanks. Yeah I've read your posts on here and heartily agree with you on the subject of unmasking. I love a mask that can stretch and peel, the better to draw out the moment. I agree, the unmasking is symbolic of the death of the heroine, the ultimate end to her greatest asset as a vigilante: anonym...

Very good! :thumbup: Which therefore begs the question.....WHERE THE BLOODY HELL HAVE YOU BEEN FOR 9 YEARS?!!!!! ;) Good job, my only suggestion would be that you put their thoughts in single quotes and/or italics (I actually use both) so whereas you have Geez, Sinistra, thought the superheroine, c...

Hello. I've been a lurker of these and other boards for some time but have never posted. I would like to share a story I wrote recently, my first try at SHIP fiction. I find my unmasking fetish is rarely satisfied, if even acknowledged, in most SHIP stuff, but in fiction it tends to be slightly bett...