I remember reading this on the Grey Archive way back then, it is fantastic!

Thank you for sharing.

I definitely like Top Heavy and the creature remindes me of the OMAC Return of Countess Crush story.

Option Two has my vote.

I've not had any issues on Win10 (I use Edge and Chrome). But rolling back to IE9 and 10 isn't recommended as both have dropped out of support by Microsoft and have not had been patched for vulnerabilities since early this year.

Marissa

it would be superheroine central if anywhere. Per Deuce, SHC owns those rights.

That's awesome, I'm completely looking forward to it.

Just need to find a way to play it online.

Matt

I'm pretty sure what ever you come up with will be great as I have enjoyed your previous work. It's too bad that the programming side of things is inhibetting that kind of story.

have a great day
Matt

depends on how you work it. I would think she would be attempting to escape The Red Floor, but the whole thing is littered with traps to keep such heroines/prisoners from escaping. Some of those could very well involve experiments and tests, or perhaps she hits knockout traps and awakens while being...

a choose her own escape sounds fantastic...looking forward too it

Matt

I like it, the darker color helps me read things better. I also prefer the layout better on this new Dark theme than the previous one (light or dark).

I don't find the yellow too much against the darker sight.

Thank you for providing the theme.
matt

I just saw that you released a new story so I might look at that one, other than that I think I think there's just one out there that interests me at the moment. The Cape Crusher part 4, but I don't know...mind control stories are fun for a while but can get old fast so I'm not sure yet.

Matt

Yeah if you can't make the picture larger I wouldn't worry about including them. With that said the picture at the end of your Lady Centurion was perfect. So if it can work like that (size wise) then I'd keep it.

Matt

the size is fine for what the picture is, you lose a lot of detail when it's that small.

Matt

I saw both of these turn up on e-hentai...they were fantastic. I look forward to any others you produce.

speaking of which I bought a couple of your stories on amazon as well and also enjoyed them.

Matt

The first option says 'ake to the sky...' instead of Take to the sky.

Eitherway I'm looking forward to it.
Matt

awesome, looking forward to the finalized story

How much of it will be new material, compared to stuff that's already in the story you linked earlier?
Matt

Nope I agree, I like replaying through them as well, but even then I'm never sure if I'm getting all of the paths. Oh and when you mentioned about having Brickhouse come up to save Archbaroness being weird, you could make it Bovine Justice (if you aren't using her already). She's not a member of the...

ok cool, that was going to be something else I thought about asking for...a story map at the end. When you release it to amazon (or where ever). You have tons of options, which is awesome, but one can only go through it so many times getting the same resaults before you stop looking.

Matt

It's great, is there a way hear Gasser approach but not be able to get out of the way of the gas bomb? I've tried almost all the combinations I can think of and I either don't hear him or do and can get out of the way.

Matt

Bovine Justice and Archbaroness...if I can vote for two.

looking forward to the stories that come out of this.

Matt