"Storebought costumes seem designed either for a Halloween party or the bedroom." The bedroom...Hmmm. I might have to suggest that to the wife ...lol. Jumblies... Ok what are jumblies? Have not heard this term before...

My 2 cents... i think she needs to be able to escape. If you kill her ...Just what is it that makes her Super?... just my 2 cents... Btw... Like the transformation with costume under the clothes also.

Sounds good Rye... You know what I love.... Thanks...

Hey Rye... i love the first part of the story ...going to the movies with her boyfriend ( or Girlfriend) Trying to have a normal night... When all hell breaks loose and she is needed to help. But doesnt want to give up her Secret Identity to do it... Needing to get away to change... maybe almost bei...

=D> Great Story... Two Thumbs up!!!

I like this story...Keep it going...

Great Story...Great Ending.... Very nice job... =D>

Really liking this story...Great Job...

I agree with John47 about not showing Linda changing to supergirl. Going to black was a little bit of a let down,,,, Still a very Good Movie and I would buy the next one also...Rye and his crew did a Super Job...............

Very interesting Story,,,Great Job =D>

Story is really going great.... Keep it up....

Oh Oh...Is kara Kent going to be outed? Time will tell...keep it coming

This is a real good story...I cant wait to see whats happens next....

liking this story...Keep it up...

Loved the story. Not long at all. Awesome ending. No kiss to make him forget.... Perfect.

Love the story...cant wait for the rest....

Really enjoy your Supergirl stories. Keep up the Super Job !!!! Really like the stories were she is in secret Indenity.........