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L.M. Tracy

This isn't an unrelated topic. Video game babes are sometimes Superpowered people or aliens or whatever. This was once a booming market but not sure what happened even in Japan it seems to be dwindling, but not due to lack of demand. To producers I implore you jump on this ship. Final Fantasy girls...

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I can't object to the price you suggest. And I agree that writing a story that you would like to read yourself is usually the way to ensure others will like it too, as well as being true to yourself. I think if the villain is a well-written and intriguing character than you would have a great basis...

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Unfortunately, online piracy is getting incredibly out-of-hand with SHiP videos. I've seen size-reduced copies of DARKWING on the file-sharing sites. The only reason I saw it at all was that I was looking for the final season of Darkwing Duck and it popped up on my radar. I wish you luck in stoppin...

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I was thinking of asking .99 cents a story, they are short after all.

L.M. Tracy

I liked the story, it was well written, but for a little constructive commenting: the villain seemed to have switched is demeanor rather abruptly after he had his way with Batgirl. He went from lust driven animal, to remorseful guy with a sad back story. I think he should have just been evil till t...

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tallyho wrote:It was more just a bit of fun to say we all get the shag 'n' shame moment!(blokes I mean)

Haha, that just reminds me of Dane Cook's joke about F***ing Skeletor to Castle Grey Skull!

L.M. Tracy

Really enjoyed this story. And the cliffhanger ending makes me wonder if there's a whole 'nother story coming or simply a kind of epilogue chapter. Either way, terrific work. Thank you guys! I am glad you enjoyed the story. :) Yes Dr. D I plan on starting the next "book" in my Supergirl s...

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In my experience, trying to write what other people say they like doesn't work, because you end up just repeating the same stuff over and over again. Write the stories that YOU would want to read. That's the only way to be original. I think that's what people really want -- some twist that they've ...

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I liked the switch in the villain personally, made a change .(I did exactly the same in s story posted elsewhere) and I think it gives them much more plausibility and depth. Tracy - sooner or later every guy has sex and regrets it- you must be still too young or too good looking to realise that !!!...

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Chapter Twelve I woke in darkness, all alone in my cell and still dripping wet. I no longer felt cold, though I was still laying in the water where the Huntsman had left me. My body didn't sting with pain any more, though I did have quite a head ache. I assumed the kryptonite dust was still working ...

L.M. Tracy

I liked the story, it was well written, but for a little constructive commenting: the villain seemed to have switched is demeanor rather abruptly after he had his way with Batgirl. He went from lust driven animal, to remorseful guy with a sad back story. I think he should have just been evil till th...

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batgirl1969 wrote:welcome aboard!! Yay!! another female heroine writer...LUV it!!

Thank you Batgirl! I am happy to be here.

We should chat sometime!

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Chapter Eleven I felt myself lose control as I ripped the bench from the wall and hurled it at the Huntsman. SLAM! My only wish was that it had gone through the glass and hit the slime, who had trapped me here. He spun around in shock and looked at me. Moretti had just left and he had not been payin...

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Excellent job, as usual. Like the switch of perspectives and giving SG's reasonings during her humiliation. Looking forward to the mystery ending. Thank you Dr. D! I am hoping this next part rolls out as smoothly as I hoped. Just finished Chapter Eleven and soon Twelve will reveal my secret ending ;)

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The whole virginity thing is interesting, however I find it much more erotic that the heroine has some knowledge of sexuality and has had sex with someone special before. The reason I enjoy this is because when a villain/monster/force is pursuing sexual conquest she is more aware of what entity want...

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Chapter Ten "Now Supergirl, Mr. Moretti is our first customer and I want you to be a good girl for him ok? Now back away into the corner and if you so much as flinch, Erik will not be making it home to his baby girl tonight," the Huntsman said. Good girl? I was always good, but that didn't...

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Chapter Nine I looked at the Huntsman and I felt an overwhelming sense of resentment and disgust. This villain had gone from crazy to creepy in all of two seconds. I looked at the hostages and used my x-ray vision to get a look at their faces. Mary, the one closest to me, had tears streaming down he...

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Chapter Eight I woke up and felt groggy and disoriented as if I had a nightmare, but upon opening my eyes I soon realized that it was not a dream. Bright light glared down into my face as if I were on the stage of a Broadway show. I clamped my eyes shut tight and tried to move. My limbs felt heavy a...

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Chapter Seven Wind rushed over my body as I flew though the crisp night air. It was a favorite past time of mine and was as close to relaxing I ever got. Between all of the school work and my night time bad guy busting, there was barely enough time for sleep. Yet, I was unwilling to give either up. ...

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Chapter Six I climbed the steps back up to Supergirl's prison room early the next day. I hoped to get a head start on the day and maybe take a little "me" time with the powerful blonde. I reached the door and unlocked it. As I entered the room I fumbled along the wall searching for the lig...

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Excellent action scene! I could really picture it as it went on. Sounds like The Fox is in a great deal of trouble now!

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Chapter Five SLAM! I spun around to face Supergirl's cell and saw the glass had been cracked all along its surface. Supergirl stood with a look of fire in her eyes, a now crumpled bench lay at her feet which had been torn from the wall and hurled in my direction. Her impressive rack heaved up and do...

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Yes DC would have my head, but nothing wrong with having similar characters as them. I do enjoy many DC characters myself and it would be fun to figure out ways to re-invent them in my own way. I can see how the villain's POV could be a turn off. I don't know what is popular either, lol this is why ...

L.M. Tracy

Hello SH fans! I have an exciting idea for a new series of short stories that I may publish. It is about a villain that hunts down superheroines for their powers and takes them for his own! The possibilities would be endless and it could make for a really exciting plot over the length of the series....

L.M. Tracy

Thank you guys for the ideas! I am sorry I haven't written more of the story today, I had some fuss over my internet with the cable company and I did so much editing last night my eyes have felt a bit stressed. I will be back on the case tomorrow with two fresh chapters though! :) Thank you all for ...

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Holy smokes Batman!

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I'm glad you liked it, you can still buy Wondra you know, it is still available. Thanks for the review, sorry there was no sex scene in it, we just don't do that, as for the strangling scene, it's for the strangling fetish people and it is fantasy we are dealing with, but I get what you are saying....

L.M. Tracy

First I will give the warning of spoilers if you choose to read this review. I will go into detail about a few things, but it will not be a blow by blow. Now that that is out of the way I will get to the review. I was not going to buy this video at first, because I find that it turns me on the most ...

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Home alone and downloading this video. Too bad the cable guy didn't show up on time to make my internet faster with a new box. 43 minutes... go,go,go! lol

I think Batgirl's (erm... Darkwing's) voice sold me on it. It looks really exciting and I want to see her kick some butt!

L.M. Tracy

Thank you guys for the comments! My intention of writing on this forum is to have fun with fellow fans. So what I am going to do, before continuing this story, is put up some options to direct the story. I want this to be a story for the community. So if you wish to help guide the story choose one o...

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Oooo I like that one!

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I tend to lean towards Supergirl in most choices, but since you said you wanted something new (and there are a lot of Supergirl videos) I am going to suggest Witchblade. She is fierce, tough, and very sexy. Not to mention I have not seen anyone attempt this character before. Costume looks tricky, bu...

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Chapter Four "Now Supergirl, Mr. Moretti is our first customer and I want you to be a good girl for him ok? Now back away into the corner and if you so much as flinch, Erik will not be making it home to his baby girl tonight." I said. Supergirl jerked around and marched into the corner. Sh...

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Chapter Three Supergirl's eyes looked at me like daggers ready for the kill. It was most exciting to see her look as fierce as my usual prey. She looked back and forth from me, to the hostages as if looking for another option. She must have known that even with her strength and speed she could not e...

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Thanks guys! I will write more today once I can get out of bed hehe. It is cold this morning!

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Chapter Two I sat in my chair as I observed the unconscious Supergirl through the glass chamber she was now lying in. The glass was very strong, bullet proof even, and yet it would be no match for her at full strength; nothing ever seemed to be with her. I was very excited for her to awake and grew ...

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I do hope you continue, this was very interesting. I liked it very much!

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Amazing job! It got pretty intense when I thought Jarvis was going to have his way with her! Great story!

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tallyho wrote:Welcome! I look forward to reading your work once you post it.

Thank you for the welcome tallyho! I just posed the start of my story idea. I do hope you all enjoy it. Supergirl is my favorite

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Supergirl and the Huntsman L.M. Tracy fan fiction Chapter One I ran across the soggy rooftop moving from cover to cover. Two massive rusty air conditioner units came closer as I dropped to my knees and slid between them. Safely behind them I was as good as the shadows I crouched in. Night had fallen...

L.M. Tracy

Hello Super Hero fans! My name is L.M. Tracy and I am a newbie. (sorry if I am in the wrong place, I didn't see a newbie section.) Any who, I am a 28 year old female living in the sunshine state of, you guessed it, California! I also happen to be a HUGE fan of all things super! ;) I grew up crawling...

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