Wow so a lot of stuff came up and i somehow put off writing this for bout a year lol. I realize i reviewed the main story but don't believe i wrote much for the epilogue. This story was one hell of a ride and quite possibly one of if not the best super heroine peril story i have come across. The cha...

been a pretty hectic week, but will have a review up within the next few days if not sooner should things ease up.

-And now with one humiliation done, Roxie gets to play. Really drives home how much clark has suffered over the months, perhaps maybe even m ore so than the girls in some regards. So long as they were compliant to Tony's whims he for the most part didn't damage them and provided them with some poten...

Gonna read and review as i go. -Love how in depth you go into the various states of our two heroines, especially after a solid takedown, has really helped to paint the scenes in my mind throughout this story. Great attention to detail and really makes for an enjoyable read. -Lex is cerainly a formid...

OMG Kara didnt even have her belt turned on lol. I suppose one could forgive the blond moment after being out of action for so long. Luthor with all his toys is certainly starting to ware the heroines down bit by bit. Wouldnt expect anything less though. Now using bees as weapons is certainly thikin...

Well nice too see the girls back in shape, both physically and mentality although only time will tell if they have shrugged off the all the effects of there months long treatment at the hands of the Mob. They are gonna need to be at 100 % if they wanna square off against Lex and get Kal back. Took t...

The fact that Tony 'respects and adores' Kara actually makes him even more scary and a creep seeing what he has done to her and made her life into. imagine if she had been taken by someone who didn't share his fondness of her. I guess that's pimp mentality, she is valued product, his measure of resp...

Okay, got 2 tabs open, gonna read and review and the same time. Tony a little bit keyed up there, even snapping at Carmine. Still curious on what his true endgame is, he is obviously expecting a fight no matter how the meeting goes but unless as Kara put it, he has an over ride for the collar, his a...

Ouch, didnt make any money, got there asses kicked to high heaven and then got taken advantage of by bums, only to be told that they are going to have to go back out again. The gang of whores isn't gonna like that if they come across them again in there territory lol.

Tony making plans, Gino making plans. This meeting was gonna go tits up from the start. They each want the others blood and know the other feels the same and are taking steps to make sure only one of them makes it out of that meeting in one piece if/when things pop off. Curious which one will come o...

Dang, at least Kara and Diana are allowed a little bit of downtime by Tony but Lex keeps Kal on a 24/7 hell ride. And to make his situation even more precarious superman ahs to also worry about Roxie and the sadistic kick she gets out of messing with him sexually.Coughstillkindofhotthoughcough. With...

Well jeez they are getting there asses worked over lol. And by common run of the mill hookers at that. Kara while ya gotta admire her spitfire is all but useless in this fight due to the kryptonite collar and her lack of fighting skill without her powers and Diana while on a good day even without he...

Ya know given how how recently Tony has started to drop a bit of his guard and is alone with both girls, were it not for the cameras watching there every action and that drug/sex addiction, the two could very well stand a real chance of taking him down and escaping. Of course they would also have to...

Well, Diana doing the only thing she can at the moment and just going with the flow and play the role that keeps Tony happy to avoid the treatment Kara received last chapter. Tell's him what he wants to hear until things swing in their favor and it doesn't hurt that he has some skill in the bedroom ...

Wow the mighty continue to fall further, even in an alternate side story lol. It's one thing to get worked over by some trained mob goons or Sergei, but to get their asses kicked by some common street hookers is a new low. Granted neither woman is anywhere near peek fighting condition and Kara is fu...

Ooh poor Kal, so close to a possible escape yet outwitted again by Lex and his hired help. Given that Kara has been captured and exposed to kryptonite a bit longer than Superman, i wonder what, if any, long term effects to her powers will be.

Well Carlo is certainly trying to act like the big man on campus but it would seem he has to be careful that the higher ups dont find out about how far he has gone since he isnt quite at that privilage yet and unlike Sergei he cant back up his threats with a blade. Not that the girls know that of co...

Well Sergei is officially off the board for the foreseeable future and Tony is down a top enforcer and runs the risk of getting in even worse standing with the other mob heads. Well it certainly didnt take Carlo very long to take advantage of the weakened and drugged Supergirl. Wow guy who edits the...

Your insight on my plotting is impressive, TAG. (TaliaAlGhul, too lazy to type it out all the time.) Except you're a little off about who will be using Scarlett. Thanks for your keen eye, though. Most impressive. You get my Reader of the Month Award. The check is in the mail. Wait, what? I don't ge...

Hmm gotta keep an eye out for Carlo now eh? Mister video editor gonna get too big for his britches and try to make a move on the girls? Well he is certainly no Sergei and Diana has expressed the desire to stay in fighting form so he best keep his guard up if he wants to try something lol. Tony's rat...

Jeez that radio show host is a massive dick. Nice too see though that at least a few people still want to give the girls the benefit of the doubt even if they are few and get shut down by the host. So wait no collar and at full or at the very least half power and Wonder Woman within reaching distanc...

Ooh so we can expect the possibility of a major Mob throw down and the chance to get the hell out of dodge for the girls? It would be there best bet, There captor holds all the cards and if he is out of the way that leaves them with a much better chance of getting free, assuming they find a way to g...

Well that was certainly an ordeal for the girls these past few chapters. Wonder how long there pact of non resistance will/can last with no rescue seemingly coming from police, who are in the mobs pocket or there fellow capes who don't appear to be in a hurry to track the missing supers down and lib...

Wow Kara was certainly put through the ringer these past 2 chapters. If she wasn't already fully broken before, this latest brutal ordeal will have certainly done the job or at the very least pushed her further down that murky road both mentally and physically. Interesting interactions between Diana...

Hmm that means that Clark has been in Luthor's 'tender loving care' for that long as well. Poor guy lol. I don't know why i had it in my head that aside from Supergirl, the other two had been in captivity for less than a month. Yeah i'll go back and re-read from Diana's ambush onward to see what els...

Ouch and down goes Diana. Well this rescue has certainly gone tits up lol. 2 months have already passed since Diana's capture? I might be reading that wrong or have to go back and re-read the previous entries in case i missed something.

K, was just curious.

Close one there for Diana. Used to be a time when she could have handled some run of the mill thug with ease and not have to debase herself to escape defeat. Granted even with her power belt on she is hardly at 100% given what she has been put through just recently and only a short while after recov...

Wow even when there powers are restored, the girls have been broken to the point where they still don't try to escape there predicament for fear of retaliation and an addiction to heroin. There's also not wanting to run the risk of one of them escaping and the others life being put in jeopardy. It s...