Great stuff as always Sara, will be interesting to see who prevails.

Thank you, I was beginning to worry that this chapter had 'missed' It's just the nature of online forums many people read, lurk, steal & few people comment or contribute. It's the same on nearly every forum but doesn't mean that your work has gone unappreciated. It takes quite a while to read s...

Great start to the story, good to see the Confectioner is back to his sickly sweet ways. what a sweetie he is :twisted:

just ready chapter 7 a quality bit of work, I do like it when people are mind controlled into willing slaves. Will have to get around to reading the earlier chapters.

A great continuation of the story probably the best chapter yet, so many debauched & evil ideas! I loved the predicament Ampere & her sidekick were to be put in at the end where they had to compete against each other for their freedom or enslavement. :-)

Great stuff as usual, love the idea of the mind programming, keep writing you have a wonderfully creative mind. =D>

Finally got round to reading this one & it's another quality piece of work. Perhaps you should consider writing a stripped down version of one of your stories for MH to convert into a video, it would be a deviant's dream Anyway, I'll look forward to the conclusion.

Another top quality story, particularly like chapter 2, just need someone with a £50 million special effect budget to convert it into a vid now. =D>

wow that must have taken some effort to write, great story. Makes me think what perverted minds us supheroine fans have

Good story idea, one of the few things I think MH's stuff lack is enough speech & this has plenty. I can also understand why he doesn't include a lot of speech as gonna be difficult to include it all when you've only got one day to film.