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Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:17 am
by Hunter42
After reading around on a few threads here I am discovering that many are finding some themes to repetive and some good old favorite "fetishes" collecting dust somewhere. So My question to those of you reading this and like reading Superheroine in peril stories, what is your favorite kinds of fetishes that you find missing or want more of included in the stories you like to read. Second, what kind of things in a story turns you off to want to continue reading a story. I know, I know, I know that you can't please all the people all the time, but a person can write different styles of stories, we just need to know what is the "rage" at the moment but also what those of you on this site are "missing" as well. I know My style of writing on here at the moment is not everyone's cup of tea and it is tame to the way I could write them. Still, until I hear what other kinds of stories are sought after, I am writing what those on here have said "I love it... please give us more."
Honestly, many writers like Myself like to be challenged to try and stretch out and write new styles and types of stories. So start replying and letting Me and others here know what you like, what your missing, and what you want more of... and if you are like Me you are hoping to see more story writers posting here daily or at least weekly again. Others I am sure have RL issues that come up and prevent from writing every day or even every week just as what happened with Me... but another point is, we don't get but one or two replies a week after writing part of the story so is enough people enjoying what they are reading to keep going or are the number of views only because one or two stories is all that is NEW on the boards????????
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:49 am
by Zen10101
I'm a leg lover; I'd love to hear more description about the movement of a heroine's thighs, how they are spread open wide with cum dripping all over etc. And humiliation. I've been meaning to write a story but never got down to it; it involves Batgirl being held captive and tied up by bad guys, and Supergirl, fearing for the hostage, is forced to slowly strip naked herself slowly, masturbate, call herself degrading names, and become the victim of a gang rape. Batgirl is forced to watch and felt all over by Catwoman, and gets fucked too. Something like that. The biggest turn on for me now is a heroine(Supergirl particularly) sliding her panties down her legs and exposing her pussy for all to see, while her head turns away in shame. Then she gets fingered and fucked while tied up, but still making defiant statements like "I will not let you off for making me cum like that!" or something to that effect, only to become a cock begging whore towards the end. That'll be my perfect movie.

Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:26 pm
by Superman246o1
Much like Zen, I'm a leg lover. Unlike Zen, my personal preference isn't for the subject matter to become overtly sexual, but to focus more on the peril aspect. For me, the more perilous the situation is, the better.
If the emphasis of the story is on the superheroine being sexually aroused, that's great and all, but it doesn't exactly get me firing on all cylinders. Frankly, the desire to give someone else an orgasm doesn't strike me as a particularly villainous one. I'm far more interested in stories wherein the superheroine faces some dire threat that only she stand up to...and even her might is doubtful against such a threat.
An example of what doesn't work for me: "Aha! You fell into my trap, Wonder Woman. First, I'll remove your boots and tickle your feet mercilessly. Then, we'll strip you of your pantyhose and see how long you can hold out against my ultravibrator!"
An example of what does work for me: "You've troubled me for the last time, Supergirl. Prepare to face your worst nightmare: the eldritch abomination Yg'torikar. Nothing can withstand his dimension-warping powers. You, like your precious planet, will soon suffer an eternity of torment."
Basically, the closer the subject matter can replicate the original stories that awakened my fetish (e.g. Wonder Woman fighting against the Zardor; Supergirl struggling against Selena's Shadow Demon), the more I like it, and the more likely I am willing to pay good money for it.
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:13 am
by Centurion
My style is completely different from Hunter's, but I agree with him that it would be helpful if we knew what people like or dislike about our stories. In my case, it's discouraging to have to go only by the number of hits my stories get. I have no idea what people are responding to or conversely what might be turning them off.
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:15 pm
by SGWriter
Superman246o1 wrote:
An example of what does work for me: "You've troubled me for the last time, Supergirl. Prepare to face your worst nightmare: the eldritch abomination Yg'torikar. Nothing can withstand his dimension-warping powers. You, like your precious planet, will soon suffer an eternity of torment."
Basically, the closer the subject matter can replicate the original stories that awakened my fetish (e.g. Wonder Woman fighting against the Zardor; Supergirl struggling against Selena's Shadow Demon), the more I like it, and the more likely I am willing to pay good money for it.
I tend to fall into the same category, anything particular stuff you'd want to see?
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:59 pm
by Caniac89
I tend to agree with Superman246o1 and sgz6, anything involving rape, torture, enslavement, etc. is a major turn off for me. Don't get me wrong I do enjoy peril, but like it along the lines of what sgz6 writes. And then I contribute my own style and more specific likes in the stories I've posted.
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:01 pm
by Superman246o1
sgz6 wrote:I tend to fall into the same category, anything particular stuff you'd want to see?
Personally, I prefer stories involving superheroines like Wonder Woman and Supergirl. A heroine like Batgirl is also great every now and then, but I generally enjoy the scale of power (and conversely, the threat) that comes with an extremely powerful metahuman. If Batgirl is overpowered by a tough but human enemy, she could still be saved by the police at the last moment. If Wonder Woman is overwhelmed, it's only by a villain or monster that no one else can save her from.
Similarly, I enjoy the concept that the superheroine is the only person capable of saving the city/country/world in the story; that she's personally putting herself at risk for the good of innocent people around her. The concept of her having to suppress her own fear and realize she might be fighting an opponent she can't beat is also nice.
The particulars of the threat don't really matter to me. I don't really care if it's a super-powerful robot, some hell-spawned demon, a mutant that drains powers or an imp from the fifth dimension. So long as the threat seems like more than the superheroine can handle. Well, that, and the threat is truly malevolent. An invisible spirit that is sent to destroy Supergirl is far more interesting to me than a lecherous pervert who hatches a devious plot to take Wonder Woman's virginity.
Those are my preferences, but I'm also interested to learn about yours and those of others. What does everyone like?
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:00 am
by Centurion
Superman246o1 wrote:Much like Zen, I'm a leg lover. Unlike Zen, my personal preference isn't for the subject matter to become overtly sexual, but to focus more on the peril aspect.
This is one of the things I look for, too. If I'm watching a video, I'm looking at the girl's body. She could be captured or she could win every single fight, as long as she looks hot doing it. In a story, I like the heroine's body described so that I can visualize her. In my own stories, the heroine is always crossing her legs, or folding her arms under her bust, or putting her hands on her hips.
If the emphasis of the story is on the superheroine being sexually aroused, that's great and all, but it doesn't exactly get me firing on all cylinders. Frankly, the desire to give someone else an orgasm doesn't strike me as a particularly villainous one.
I'm like that too. If there's any sex in my stories, it's consentual.
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:19 pm
by Biorider
Centurion wrote:She could be captured or she could win every single fight, as long as she looks hot doing it. In a story, I like the heroine's body described so that I can visualize her.
I'm with you on this one!

I like reading stories/posts with lots of interesting descriptions.
Re: Superheroine In Peril Story Content
Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:26 pm
by Hunter42
556 views to 8 replies....I guess that means most everyone is happy with what they are finding with the stories they are reading even if they don't take the moment to say it. Thanks for those of you who did reply and give us at least a few ideas of what you are missing and want to see more in the future. In short it seems to come down to two types of styles:
1. Stories with NO sexual content in the overcoming of your favorite superheroines. Much like a comic only without the enticing pictures of busty or half naked heroines to distract you sexually as well. (Of course as from My days of puberty and reading comics, the "helpless" heroine was enough for Me to create My own fantasies where it "could" go from there in My mind. )
2. Stories for those who think it is okay to have "sexual" stories, some the occassional consentual affair and others to see the superheroine sexually conquered and even humilated to the pleasure of a villain for the "ultimate" demise of a heroine!
READ ON FANS....You will find both kinds here on The Ultimate Superheroine Forum!!!!