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Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Thu May 26, 2011 6:53 pm
by SHL
:P
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 9:34 am
by Centurion
Not bad. Personally I didn't know there WAS a female Robin, so a quick description of the heroine and her costume would have been nice.
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 5:16 pm
by Zen10101
Awesome, the thought of a female Robin with her naked legs have always fascinated me. Keep going!:)
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 9:17 pm
by SHL
Centurion wrote:Not bad. Personally I didn't know there WAS a female Robin, so a quick description of the heroine and her costume would have been nice.
Noted, I was thinking traditional robin costume with a green skirt.
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 9:18 pm
by SHL
Zen10101 wrote:Awesome, the thought of a female Robin with her naked legs have always fascinated me. Keep going!:)
Robin in the story has tights, did you mean to be stripped of them?
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 10:40 am
by Centurion
Not just the costume, but the girl herself too. How about her hair? What color? Long or short? The superheroine genre is primarily visual. It's hard to form a mental image of what's happening if I don't even know what the heroine looks like!
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 11:07 am
by Zen10101
damienwoods wrote:
Robin in the story has tights, did you mean to be stripped of them?
Are the tights in skin-beige color?If they are it's just the same to me. If not, I'd love it if you strip them off in wonderful detail :P
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 4:09 pm
by SHL
Centurion wrote:Not just the costume, but the girl herself too. How about her hair? What color? Long or short? The superheroine genre is primarily visual. It's hard to form a mental image of what's happening if I don't even know what the heroine looks like!
Makes complete sense! Over sight as this is my first story. I had in mine a shorter girl, 5" 5', strawberry blonde or brunette, long hair. I am a pretty decent artist, so maybe ill sketch something up and upload it here.
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 4:10 pm
by SHL
Zen10101 wrote:damienwoods wrote:
Robin in the story has tights, did you mean to be stripped of them?
Are the tights in skin-beige color?If they are it's just the same to me. If not, I'd love it if you strip them off in wonderful detail :P
The tights are in a skin color. I am curious if you have any ideas about them getting stripped off, feel free to PM me any ideas.
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Sun May 29, 2011 11:45 am
by Zen10101
That's awesome, but I don't really have a witty idea to remove them. What I'm hoping for tho, and I believe I speak for quite a few here, is for the costume to stay on while she endures the groping, maybe expose her privates. The whole thing can come off at the climax. Just my two cents...Would really love to see your sketch...
Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Sun May 29, 2011 6:02 pm
by Blx
Looking good. Hope to see more.

Re: Girl Robin: Kidnapping Part One
Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 2:39 pm
by batgirl1969
I love it so far. Are all of the basketball players caucasion? Maybe mixing it up with some other races would add in some realism. I love the arm hold and headlock reference....very erotic positions to work her into....like a human pretzel! Yum