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Opening chapters from "American Goddesses"
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:06 pm
by LiteraryGary
Re: One of the more intense scenes from "American Goddesses"
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:22 am
by Centurion
Er... unless I misread this, it seems more like a MALE villain has taken control of a normal woman... and is using her body to rape another man. Don't take this as a criticism, it's just not the sort of thing I like to read.
Re: One of the more intense scenes from "American Goddesses"
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:48 pm
by LiteraryGary
Hi Centurion. The chapter was out of context, of course, having been pulled from the middle of the book. Melnikov is a FEMALE villain. I wouldn't like to read what you suggest either. In any case, I've take that chapter down and replaced it with an earlier one.
Re: One of my favorite chapters from "American Goddesses"
Posted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 4:43 pm
by Centurion
I'm sorry. I don't why I got that impression. Maybe because she refered to herself as his "Master". Plus Russian names have gender. A woman would be "Melnikova". Once again, sorry about the misunderstanding.
Reading the replacement chapter... okay this is a lot better.