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This is short, more of a concept than a full blown story. Feel free to comment. Thanks

“Kid, look don't get me wrong. I'm not saying I won't listen to you. Hell your father was a freaking genius and that alone got you a sit down with me. But honestly this all sounds a little far fetched. A little bit twilight zone if you know what I mean.”

“I appreciate that Mr Genelli but I can assure you that this is totally on the level.”

“OK kid, what are you? Sixteen, seventeen?”

“I'm actually twenty four”

“You went to MIT?”

“For a while but to be honest I found the work mundane and well.... not pushing any boundaries.”

“What you are proposing is not only pushing boundaries kid, it's knocking them out of the park.”

“So... will you give me a chance to explain or not.”

“I think that I would be a fool not to. Go ahead then.”

“I've modified a standard off the shelf smart phone. I've re modulated the output to conform to the Snetterfall algorithm... boosted the wave length and allowed the device to transmit and receive the full spectrum of positronic and cerebral acquisition modes which in turn....”

“Kid, hold on a minute you are talking to a guy who has trouble logging on to his email. A little simpler if you please.”

“OK... just how simple would you like it?”

“Pretend I'm an idiot OK?”

“Right! I have taken this phone and modified it. When I take a picture of myself and another person the phone can than access the mind of me and the other person and link them. I can then use the text function on the phone to direct the actions of the other party within the picture. I can make that person think and do whatever I want them to. That simple enough?”

“Yeah thanks. It's all a bit sci-fi for me. So this control is it permanent?”

“As permanent as I want it to be.”

“So basically you send it text to their brain and they act on it.”

“Yes”

“Can you control more than one person?”

“In separate pictures, but only one person in a photograph and I would have to be in the picture to in order to create the link.”

“Could I do this if I had the phone?”

“Of course. I would have to programme it specifically to work for you though and then you could control anyone you need to and as long as the picture stays on the phone your control is absolute.”

“OK lets sum up then. You take a selfie... that is what it is called right?”

“Yes”

“This selfie has one other person in it but no more than that?”

“Correct.”

“and I just send texts right into their head and they carry them out to the letter.”

“As if the thought was their own yes.”

“why would you sell me this technology when you could keep it to yourself.”

“Mr Genelli, you paid for my education, you took care of my family when dad died and you asked for nothing in return. Consider this payback”

“OK and how much would this cost me.... theoretically?”

“Nothing, consider it as a gift.”

“This is a wind up right, a practical joke?”

“No Mr Genelli, perhaps a demonstration is in order. May I?”

“Go right ahead.”

“I just need to send a short text.”

“I cant wait.”

“She should be here in a moment.”

“She?”

“Yes. Wonder Woman should be coming through that window in a moment or two.”

“WONDER WOMAN! Have you brought that arrogant bitch here. She's been after me for years....”

“AH Wonder Woman thanks for dropping by, why don’t you say hi to Mr Ginelli.”

“Hi Mr Genelli”

“What the hell....”

“This is my demonstration Mr Ginelli.”

“You have got to be kidding...”

“A little more persuasion required. No problem. Wonder Woman, MR Ginelli requires a blow job could you take care of it please?”

“Of course Sir, it would be my pleasure.”

“HEY...is she going to.. SHIIIIIT”

“So MR Ginelli I take it you are convinced?”

“I uh..... OHMYGOD!”

“I'll take that as a yes then. I'll courier the phone over in a day or two with full instructions. Until then Wonder Woman can keep you company. She's mine by the way but will be quite happy to service you sexually in any way you wish. She'll leave when your new phone arrives. Good day to you Mr Ginelli.”

“UH yeah... thanks... I'll be.... OH!”

It's a pleasure, you've looked after me now I'm looking after you. I imagine your many criminal enterprises will be enhanced by your new found power and I can tell you from personal experience that the ladies in my life are now very accommodating. I look forward to seeing how you put it to use.”

“Aaaargh!”

“She is quite the little slut isn't she.”


He left in the private elevator just as he's arrived. He looked at the phone and flicked through the contacts list. WW was going to be busy tonight but fortunately he knew that one of his other little super heroine playmates was in town. He brought up a pre written text and hit send.

He whistled as the lift began its rapid descent.

Cool idea. Its an interesting way to do mind control, with thoughts being inserted into the mind of the heroines. I like the way it all gets started off with a selfie containing the guy and the heroine; that is a nice mechanic to limit it but also create nice, tense scenes where he is trying to get the selfie so that he can begin taking control. Makes me think of Death Note. You said yourself its more a concept than a story, and it is a good concept.

Thank you. I have a couple of scenes in my head that I will add to this thread when the mood takes me. Might even end up as a story rather than a concept.

Only just got around to this, great idea! Well done! Look forward to the full story.

I am still having the same scenes in my head.

It might have been hard for Ginelli to understand. Giving him a gift that would keep on giving, with no cost and no strings attached, but he'd meant what he said. Ginelli had taken care of him and his family. Crooked or not he had come though for them and asked for nothing. Even if he wasn't the brightest bulb in box loyalty and honour were more than just words for him. No giving the technology to Ginelli was a fitting reward. Of course there would be safeguards, limits to how many people Ginelli could control but he had a feeling that by the time he'd bedded a few starlets and got his wife on his back and maybe got the mayor and the police chief onside he'd be too tired and too caught up in cementing his new role in the city hierarchy to go to far overboard.

The Limo was waiting outside for him, a slender hand pushed open the door and drew back waiting for him to get in. He sat down in the plush seats and smiled at the other occupant. She smiled back and pressed a glass of 15 year old malt into his hand before snuggling up to him.

“So how was the show this evening my little dove?”

“Borrrrrring.”

“Really I thought you loved to perform.”

“Hmmm true... but these days the only performance I'm interested in is with you.”

“Why Zatanna Zatara, I do believe you are flirting with me.”

“No flirting, performing, and this is going to be one hell of a show.”

Zatanna pulled the whisky glass from his hand and emptied it in one gulp.

“Now where was I? Ah yes.”

Zatanna pulled him towards her and gave him a long lingering kiss and as she pulled away a lascivious glint in her eye she whispered something he didn't quite catch but the feel of her naked breasts pressing against his chest told him all he needed to know.

“Do you know Zatanna I do think that you might well be my favourite.”

Then the time for conversation was gone and as the limousine sped towards its destination the spacious seats allowed Zatanna to work a different kind of magic, impaled on a wand that could always transport her to paradise.

He marvelled at the ease with which she could bring out the best in him.

He started to remember.

She hadn't been the first, or the second, in fact by the time he was sure enough of his technology he was well into double figures but he's always known that he wanted to ensnare his own super heroine, just to see if he could but trying to get a selfie with any of the costumed crusaders had proved very problematic. Even when he had managed to snap a frame or two they were always too blurred to establish the neural link, too far away, to many people in the frame and the one time he'd really thought he had it in the bag the phone had been flung from his hands by a jostling crowd. He'd almost lost the rest of his harem then. Damn if it hadn't taken him three sleepless nights to restore the pictures to a new phone. Fortunately for him it had worked perfectly and these days he always had a couple of back up phones stashed away in case of emergency.
One night he been aimlessly wandering the theatre district looking for inspiration or at least a new playmate that took his eyes when he had spotted her poster and he had known immediately that he could work the celebrity angle. He knew that with the right approach at a quiet stage door he could flatter her into the perfect picture. Mage or not by the time he'd worked his own particular kind of magic she would be completely under his spell.

It took him three weeks to get ready. The right clothes, the right arm candy to allay suspicion and the quietest performance of the week to maximise his chance of success. Then there he was outside the stage door with a not too shabby brunette on his arm and all he had to do was wait.

He didn't have to wait long.

“Oh look there she is... Zatanna... Zatanna oh I’m such a big fan can I get a picture of you with my boyfriend?”

Zatanna smiled looking for a way out.

“Look I'm kind of in a hurry tonight.”

“Oh please... just one....puleeeeese.”

“Zatanna shook her head in resignation.

“Just one then.

I smiled as my date framed him and Zatanna with her camera phone.

“Say Cheese”

Zatanna smiled and the camera flashed. His date beamed a thousand watt smile and before Zatanna could object he pulled out is own phone, called out her name and bingo he had taken the perfect selfie. Zatanna grimaced and moved away.

“OK guys I have to go now.”

His date had smiled and so had he. He watched Zatanna turn and walk away. He sent the first text
Zatanna scratched her backside. He sent the second text. Zatanna tripped and slammed into the wall. He sent the third text. Zatanna put her hand to her mouth and yawned. He clicked send for the fourth and final pre written text. Zatanna walked over and smiled right at him.

“Hi I was wondering if you could give me a lift. I seem to have forgotten where I was going and I'm sure that wherever it was you'll be able to take me there.

I just pointed to the limo and told my date to make her own way home. Zatanna just nodded and got inside.

I could see she was a little puzzled, trying to work out what the hell was going on but I had a text for that to. I hit send and watched her relax and sink back into the seat. She yawned again and I sent a text that simply said sleep. The effect was instantaneous. She slipped sideways her head coming to rest in my lap. The pre written texts were exhausted but with Zatanna in a deep sleep time was most definitely on my side. In fact within the twenty minutes it took to reach my town house my control over her was both complete and totally unbreakable. Zatanna for better or for worse was mine.

tallyho wrote:Only just got around to this, great idea! Well done! Look forward to the full story.

Thanks very much. hope you like the second part.

Rest assured, I do!

Really like how you have this going, and as I'm not a big fan of the sexual element to these yarns, I really love how it's mentioned but glossed over, so it's left to the readers imagination.
A great start, well done!

tallyho wrote:Rest assured, I do!

Really like how you have this going, and as I'm not a big fan of the sexual element to these yarns, I really love how it's mentioned but glossed over, so it's left to the readers imagination.
A great start, well done!

That's cool. for this particular story I think over described nookie would have got old really quickly.

Its very to have these kind of things.

I'm sure that had I been able to allow her to devote all of her time to pleasing me Zatanna would have proved more than enough woman to keep me satisfied. She had all the angles covered and a few new ones I hadn't thought of as well. But the truth of the matter is I just couldn't take the chance. Hanging around backstage at the show and having her fly in from wherever she was for our regular trysts was starting to raise eyebrows. Her friends were starting to get a little suspicious and I needed to avoid that at all costs. So I did what any self respecting genius would do. I let her off the leash a little and moved on to another target. I am nothing if not ambitious but even though I seriously considered Supergirl her non human physiology might have caused problems. So I left her on my to do list and moved down the food chain to everyone’s favourite Amazon Princess, Wonder Woman.

I figured that Wonder Woman's general from superiority and well known arrogance would prevent me from wrapping my arm around her and shouting CHEESE!, not if I wanted to keep my arm where it was. I suppose I could have utilised the same ruse as I had with Zatanna but I wanted to keep it fresh and come up with a new plan. It took me a while but patience is a good tactical basis for any plan. It had a few rough edges but it didn't take long to whip it into shape before I was on a flight to Washington.

When it came down to it I was as nervous as hell. But seeing her up there smiling at the crowd as she handed out some nothing award to this years woman of the year made me realise that this was the Woman I wanted above all others. Zee for all her beauty and her capacity for surprise and invention had only ever been a first step. I was suddenly calm and focused and ready to put my plan in motion. Wonder Woman would not be the last but I knew deep down in my heart that she would always be the best.

It's amazing just how far press credentials will get you and how people just seem to accept your presence if you're screaming out inane questions and thrusting a recorder in their face in the hope of a little marketable sound bite. Not much of a plan? Agreed but the credentials just put me in place and all I had to do was let events unfold and step in at the right moment.

I watched the very photogenic face of the local network reporter strut her stuff with her captive audience. The questions were delivered professionally and the replies with a resigned smile and a knowing look that said. “This is for my fans”. The interview lasted around five minutes during which time I'd manoeuvred myself around the outside of the press melee and through the door where Wonder Woman would make a quick but serene exit. I watched for the next play and nodded as I watched the reporter push a folded piece of paper into Wonder Woman’s hand and mouthed the words. “Not Here” Before shaking hands with the smiling heroine and vanishing through the door I had exited a scant few seconds earlier. Wonder Woman followed her through the door and it closed behind her. The guards on the door would let no one through. It was just the three of us. I stood in the shadows and watched Wonder Woman follow the reporter into a side room. I moved to the entrance and listened. I heard Wonder Woman speak.

“OK you said you needed my help. Why don’t you tell me what is going on?”

I heard the reporter mumble something and then silence. I smiled to myself and walked into the room. Wonder Woman was stood there unmoving, staring into space. I turned to the reporter and patted her on the ass.

“OK you can stop pretending now.”

The reporter seemed to melt away before my eyes only to be replaced by a smiling Zatanna.

“Nice Work Zee.”

“Thank you my love.”

I walked over to Wonder woman and put my arms around her unmoving body. I took out my phone and snapped the perfect shot and then a few pre written texts later I let Zee release my newest acquisition. The first thing she did was kiss me long and hard. I heard Zee hurrumph in the background. She would have to get used to sharing.

“Zee can you clear us a path.”

Zee left with her nose in the air. Cute really. I turned to my Amazon puppet and slapped her on the backside.

“I think it's time to take a ride in that invisible plane of yours.”

She nodded vigorously grabbed my had and pulled me through the door. I knew exactly what was on her mind, I was the one that had put it there.

Another nice update, well done.