The Ultimate Superheroines Forum

Basic Plot: Angela Sommers plays a female Rebel who is out to steal the plans to the Deathstar. she is caught by a Stormtrooper and put on a rack for the fun and amusement of the Stromtrooper (non other than AP!). The Rebel manages to escape and get revenge via a strap-on to the Stromtrooper, but eventually gets caught again and put on trial and .... well don't want to spoil the end.

I like the SPEFX and imagery to set up the scenes... nice production value! All in all AP's visuals are great... she takes the time and effort to make things look real and not just a "hotel room" or some generic cloth hung up with a couch or chair in the room! Thank you Anastasia!

Angela stretched on a rack is hot and having Anastasia go down on her is sexy... nice erotic play. Yet I would have loved to see some nipple play/torture and some "torment" to add to the feel of the scene. I'd love to see some tortuous tension as Anastasia takes advantage of poor Angela stretched out before her! And the reverse when Angela gets the upper hand (well, actually something else is "up her" heh heh). I couldn't make out all the dialogue (I'll talk about that in a second). She looked hot and revengeful as she assaulted poor Anastasia, but I couldn't really hear or understand what she was doing... She could have said that she was torturing the Trooper and interrogating her to find out about the Deathstar plans, revenge for being ravaged by the Trooper, or just pounding her to weaken an enemy soldier.

And that brings me to a bigger point:

Anastasia... PLEASE work on your sound recording. When you have the Stormtrooper helmet on... please re-record your dialogue... I can barely make out anything you say... too bad as I'm sure it was written and spoken with thought and adds to the story (was the same issue in the previous SW films). I know it may take a bit longer in production (or post production) but simply record the text as Voice Over and place it in under the mask dialogue....worth it in my opinion. In general, the sound is not great... You've done a fine job of creating a great set... I know that takes a lot of hard work! Is it possible to get a second extra mic (you seem to be only using the camera mic) on a stand right outside the frame of filming to capture better sound (or as I noted to another hi-end producer... a "boom man")? It would have helped me better understand what both you and Angela were saying (lot of "room sound", due to mic distance, in your dialogue).

I apologize for all this sound "feedback" (no pun intended), but it is something that bothers me in a lot of the SHIP scenarios-not just here- and although I'm not producing them (meaning I know you have time and money constraints).... the "fix" doesn't seem that hard to do and would greatly improve the production sound quality of your work. I say this as someone who works in film production... and I apologize if I've overstepped my bounds as a fan.

One last comment about this story content. In the last scene we (well you actually) have Angela strapped and struggling in a neat looking torture chair (as noted by someone else)... it was very sexy to see her struggle. It was REALLY ashame that the Stormtrooper didn't come in and torture her in that chair... some nipple play/torture,hitachi torture... it would have been very hot, IMHO. I won't spoil the end as to what does happen there.... leave something to the imagination and reason to purchase the product!!

I love your work Anastasia and I look forward to your other clips! My comments are meant as positive suggestions. Thanks again for all your hard work.

Hello Columbia, thank you so much for watching the movie. And I really appreciate your review. Thank you so much for listing it. Noted nopple clamps in the next story!

I think I should share with you that in this particular episode I did actually add a filter onto the sound to give it an emptiness feel. I wanted to give more the impression that we were on a spaceship and not in a warehouse. I am very sorry if the sound confused you but that was my intention to make it more sci fi. Perhaps it did not come across the way I intend it?

See for me it the sound is too full (like if I was in a a small room) when I am suppose to be "torturing" my prisoner on a chamber in a spaceship it would not make sense. I have even added space sound background to simulate the noise a ship would make going through space. Like I said perhaps it did not come through like it was suppose to. I apologize if it did not work out.

But I do hope you enjoyed the music I added to give texture to the movie and a melancholic mood that the super heroine is enduring through the adventure.

But as you so nicely noticed, I did work a lot on editing this movie. Color correcting, special fx, titles and scoring at some point I had to decide ok. I have worked on this movie for almost a week. Now it's time to release it. Unfortunately there is never enough time to work and money for every projects and as much as I would love to hire a sound engineer. It is just not feasible. The movies don't make enough money to cover extra expenses. how much I wish I could hire a big crew. That would be awesome!

So glad you enjoyed the story, thanks again so very much for watching it!!!!

Now time to go watch all the others , wink wink kisses
Xoxo
Anastasia

Hi Anastasia! Thank you for giving more back-story information to your video.

No doubt about it... you DO put in a lot of behind-the-scenes work in Production Design, Graphics/ visual FX , Sound Design/SFX than many other producers... I see (and hear) the difference! And I did like the "Space Ship" SFX you used. I agree, it is certainly is a cut above instead of just having your "sound stage" ambient sound.

Yet, I would recommend mixing those SFX at a lower db sound level. As much as it adds to have those SFX present, it can distract from the main sound, which is what you and Angela are saying. I did detect the sound of you and Angela sort of "echoed" (very slightly?) so I wasn't sure if it was a sound filter or just "room presence" because of the microphone distance. BTW... you are not alone in the issue of sound background levels... even in "mainstream" production I have that same battle of sound balance! My Sound Mixer (which I usually strive to go to for post production... different budget than your's, I understand- but the principles are the same) berates me if I try and raise the background or music scores. He tells me... "the dialogue is the most important sound, Dude!".

So I humbly share this with you (please understand it is meant as assistance, not criticism) .... make sure your dialogue is clear above all else. IF you can't record yourself later "off camera" for post-editing insertion (by simple repeating them by yourself into the camera mic) for those lines you say when your helmet is on, then may I suggest you perhaps design your scene so that it is mostly nonverbal visual communication, or really not essential dialogue until we can see your very attractive face (I know it's part of the scenario... but hate to see your cute face covered up!)? That way you're still keeping costs down on crew (just you and the cameraman?), can record greater quality sound... and as you seem to be a very masterful editor (GREAT job I have to say!), yes it IS extra time but it adds a lot to your production value.

On another point, a couple of content requests... along with the nipple twisting/licking and clamps... I'd love to have you tease/taunt your next Captive (if it isn't the beautiful Angela) by telling her that you're torturing her and forcing her to cum etc.? I really like that added aural evil/sensual taunt... I already love what you do to her (very hot pussy licking!!)... and I'd love to hear you dominate her by telling her what torture it must be, or taunt her that she seems to be enjoying her torture!

And BTW, I've bought and happily viewed your previous Star Wars (and other) videos you produced! Please make my day by adding some of that "torture" dialogue... it would make it practically an instant purchase for me!

Looking forward to your next adventure!!