The Ultimate Superheroines Forum

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It takes me an hour to write the script and edit scripts before I present them to Primal Fetish. Ideas randomly come in my mind. Sometimes I am walking, and idea strikes me. I've probably written over 30 scripts and only purchased four of them so far.

I took a week to turn out a shooting script from a very derivative idea, and that only with unhealthy effort on a deadline.

When I had a somewhat-original bolt of lightning, it took over a month, again with unhealthy effort and a sense of frustration that I never finish anyth

Writing is an interesting process. It really depends on what you want to see in the video and want the model to do. I start with putting a few random ideas down on paper on what scenarios I would like to see the character/model in. I also write down ideas on how I want the model to act during the video (ex. scared, brave, etc) From there, something of an outline emerges. New ideas, great and small, pop in to link the scenes together that you want to see. There's no secret recipe really - every writer is different.

I have two customs done. The first was very easy to write since it was something I always wanted to see and it could be easily done. I wrote it in one afternoon. There really wasn't much story to it. Fellow pervs pointed this fact out, so I wanted to prove myself more of a writer the second time around. I developed a few more ideas and scripts - most just one heroine and a couple a superheroine league idea.

The second custom settled upon (due to time and cost of production) was more of a comic book storyline, a little more involved, so it took a little more time. It was an enjoyable collaboration between myself and the producer. It would take too long to go over the 'I did this part, she did that part' aspect of it. In short, the producer and I formed a temporary Dragonball Z styled Super Saiyan and nailed all the details of my custom in a week. For my part, my inspiration was wanting to match Nicholas Meyer's excellent writing on Star Trek 2: Wrath of Kahn done in a mere week and wanting bondage / bdsm scenarios in the video. For the producer, she was on a time schedule because she is a busy lady and she just enjoys fightin', punching people in the nose, bar fight kind of girl. The collaboration ('It's over 9000!!!') turned out great. I'm happy and the producer is happy.


I would like to do another custom and hope to get one done this year. Even if I do not get it done, it does not mean I cannot keep writing down ideas and trying to craft a cool superheroine in peril story. I hope you continue to write as well.

Depends on the script. Lots of producers like just a short one or two paragraphs. I don't do those. When I write a script it's usually around 8 pages, including a section in the beginning which describes the basic requirements like wardrobe and content. Then I write a very short summary. Then I break it down into individual scenes, each one with wardrobe, characters, and a summary. And then I write a sort've idealized version of the details of the scene. So it usually takes me 2-3 hours for the first draft.

Sometimes, I will send that off just as it is. But I have found from experience that this is a bad idea. So what I do now, when I am being smart and disciplined about it, is I leave the first draft and just ignore it for at least a day, or usually 2-3 days. Then I come back to it and read the whole thing from start to finish and edit the crap out of it to fix any mistakes, typos, repetitions, or to just generally re-organize and re-work it. That process can take maybe 30-60 minutes.

Only then do I consider it worthy of sending out to producers. And even with all that, I almost always have an "oh, shit" moment that night or the next night where I suddenly think of something I should have changed or done differently to make it better. :-P

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

It takes me an hour to write the script and edit scripts before I present them to Primal Fetish. Ideas randomly come in my mind. Sometimes I am walking, and idea strikes me. I've probably written over 30 scripts and only purchased four of them so far.

Hi I have seen Primal Fetish clips and they look sooo amazing and realistic I would love to know if they ever take new actresses? xx

DionneStock wrote: ↑

7 years ago

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

It takes me an hour to write the script and edit scripts before I present them to Primal Fetish. Ideas randomly come in my mind. Sometimes I am walking, and idea strikes me. I've probably written over 30 scripts and only purchased four of them so far.

Hi I have seen Primal Fetish clips and they look sooo amazing and realistic I would love to know if they ever take new actresses? xx

I can't speak for any producers. Here are their links.

https://twitter.com/Primal_Fetish
http://primalproductionsllc.com/primalfetish/v2/

TIEnTEEZ wrote: ↑

7 years ago

Depends on the script. Lots of producers like just a short one or two paragraphs. I don't do those. When I write a script it's usually around 8 pages, including a section in the beginning which describes the basic requirements like wardrobe and content. Then I write a very short summary. Then I break it down into individual scenes, each one with wardrobe, characters, and a summary. And then I write a sort've idealized version of the details of the scene. So it usually takes me 2-3 hours for the first draft.

Sometimes, I will send that off just as it is. But I have found from experience that this is a bad idea. So what I do now, when I am being smart and disciplined about it, is I leave the first draft and just ignore it for at least a day, or usually 2-3 days. Then I come back to it and read the whole thing from start to finish and edit the crap out of it to fix any mistakes, typos, repetitions, or to just generally re-organize and re-work it. That process can take maybe 30-60 minutes.

Only then do I consider it worthy of sending out to producers. And even with all that, I almost always have an "oh, shit" moment that night or the next night where I suddenly think of something I should have changed or done differently to make it better. :-P

Eight Pages! Wow! I thought my two or three pages were a lot. You are very detailed in what you want. Did you order that custom video from that other studio?

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

DionneStock wrote: ↑

7 years ago

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

It takes me an hour to write the script and edit scripts before I present them to Primal Fetish. Ideas randomly come in my mind. Sometimes I am walking, and idea strikes me. I've probably written over 30 scripts and only purchased four of them so far.

Hi I have seen Primal Fetish clips and they look sooo amazing and realistic I would love to know if they ever take new actresses? xx

I can't speak for any producers. Here are their links.

https://twitter.com/Primal_Fetish
http://primalproductionsllc.com/primalfetish/v2/

Thank you! xx

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

TIEnTEEZ wrote: ↑

7 years ago

Depends on the script. Lots of producers like just a short one or two paragraphs. I don't do those. When I write a script it's usually around 8 pages, including a section in the beginning which describes the basic requirements like wardrobe and content. Then I write a very short summary. Then I break it down into individual scenes, each one with wardrobe, characters, and a summary. And then I write a sort've idealized version of the details of the scene. So it usually takes me 2-3 hours for the first draft.

Sometimes, I will send that off just as it is. But I have found from experience that this is a bad idea. So what I do now, when I am being smart and disciplined about it, is I leave the first draft and just ignore it for at least a day, or usually 2-3 days. Then I come back to it and read the whole thing from start to finish and edit the crap out of it to fix any mistakes, typos, repetitions, or to just generally re-organize and re-work it. That process can take maybe 30-60 minutes.

Only then do I consider it worthy of sending out to producers. And even with all that, I almost always have an "oh, shit" moment that night or the next night where I suddenly think of something I should have changed or done differently to make it better. :-P

Eight Pages! Wow! I thought my two or three pages were a lot. You are very detailed in what you want. Did you order that custom video from that other studio?

Which one? I'm always ordering something. :-P
Most of the customs I order aren't superheroine, they are femdom.

My latest script (which is a superheroine video and I just finished a few minutes ago) is 15 pages. But a lot of it is screen shots and multiple options, and some dialog. Not sure who to send it to, though.

Oh, you probably mean Anatomik. I mentioned them a while back. I ordered 2 videos from them, actually, both Femdom. They were good, but not great. They apparently don't have any wardrobe. I guess they just rely on the models to wear their own clothes. So that became kind've a problem for my videos. I always list wardrobe requirements for my videos and I am very picky and they REALLY blew it on the first one. They did better on the second one after I told them about it, but still... what kind of studio doesn't have stock wardrobe?

TIEnTEEZ wrote: ↑

7 years ago

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

TIEnTEEZ wrote: ↑

7 years ago

Depends on the script. Lots of producers like just a short one or two paragraphs. I don't do those. When I write a script it's usually around 8 pages, including a section in the beginning which describes the basic requirements like wardrobe and content. Then I write a very short summary. Then I break it down into individual scenes, each one with wardrobe, characters, and a summary. And then I write a sort've idealized version of the details of the scene. So it usually takes me 2-3 hours for the first draft.

Sometimes, I will send that off just as it is. But I have found from experience that this is a bad idea. So what I do now, when I am being smart and disciplined about it, is I leave the first draft and just ignore it for at least a day, or usually 2-3 days. Then I come back to it and read the whole thing from start to finish and edit the crap out of it to fix any mistakes, typos, repetitions, or to just generally re-organize and re-work it. That process can take maybe 30-60 minutes.

Only then do I consider it worthy of sending out to producers. And even with all that, I almost always have an "oh, shit" moment that night or the next night where I suddenly think of something I should have changed or done differently to make it better. :-P

Eight Pages! Wow! I thought my two or three pages were a lot. You are very detailed in what you want. Did you order that custom video from that other studio?

Which one? I'm always ordering something. :-P
Most of the customs I order aren't superheroine, they are femdom.

My latest script (which is a superheroine video and I just finished a few minutes ago) is 15 pages. But a lot of it is screen shots and multiple options, and some dialog. Not sure who to send it to, though.

Oh, you probably mean Anatomik. I mentioned them a while back. I ordered 2 videos from them, actually, both Femdom. They were good, but not great. They apparently don't have any wardrobe. I guess they just rely on the models to wear their own clothes. So that became kind've a problem for my videos. I always list wardrobe requirements for my videos and I am very picky and they REALLY blew it on the first one. They did better on the second one after I told them about it, but still... what kind of studio doesn't have stock wardrobe?

Yes! That's the studio. It is very weird for them to not have any wardrobe. I would not rely on models bringing wardrobe. I have an image in mind, and what they bring may not fit my or our image.

I contacted them a few months ago about a custom video that is also femdom, but they wanted to remove certain lines from the script.

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

I contacted them a few months ago about a custom video that is also femdom, but they wanted to remove certain lines from the script.

Really? I can't imagine how far across the line that must've been for them to want to cut it out. At the very least, I would think they would give you what you want and and then just edit out anything that violates the TOS of sales venues like Clips4Sale.

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TIEnTEEZ wrote: ↑

7 years ago

GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑

7 years ago

I contacted them a few months ago about a custom video that is also femdom, but they wanted to remove certain lines from the script.

Really? I can't imagine how far across the line that must've been for them to want to cut it out. At the very least, I would think they would give you what you want and and then just edit out anything that violates the TOS of sales venues like Clips4Sale.

It was a taboo script, and Clips4sale has a taboo section. It would not have been a problem for C4S. Anatomik films taboo videos, but they don't want certain lines said in their films. It's really odd.

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7 years ago

has anyone had a producer who don't sell your custom videos I don't know why she don't do it her name is Brittany lynn and her clips for sale is sexyfantasis I had a custom done 3 days ago called mega girl sex doll it was a great 40 minute video but I think its a shame that no one will see it I have 34 customs done with her each script is awesome but still no one will ever see them do you think its strange to not sell customs.

Sometimes it takes a producer a while to post a custom up for sale. So I don't always see mine when they go up. And there are some that I swear I had made that never got put up for sale. Not that I mind.