Lewd Heroine Game System Feedback

[Asmodeus]

Exactly what it says on the tin. I've created an original game system and I'm looking for feedback on how to improve it. The system itself leans more into fantasy than sci-fi, but its core is still very much about Heroines facing perverted foes and perils. As the creator, I've noticed I have a tendency to leave information out because I have the knowledge stored in my head, but it never crosses my mind to write it down because I believe it's obvious. Even though it's very much not the case. I want people be able to read my game system and understand how to play it with minimal confusion.

Also, if anyone wants to toss ideas at me for Traits in the game, please go ahead. More Traits = More character customization.

Anyway, here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KAu ... sp=sharing

[Mr. X]

Cool! Hope this succeeds.