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by Mlod
1 month ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Batgirl's Psychologist
Replies: 41
Views: 3699

Re: Batgirl's Psychologist

Good story, she's been well played
by Mlod
3 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: Slave Crisis Interactive: Princess Knight Wonder
Replies: 2
Views: 727

Re: Slave Crisis Interactive: Princess Knight Wonder

It sounds interesting, but I'll have to admit I'm not going to download any sort of executable from any forum
by Mlod
5 months ago
Forum: HIPComix
Topic: Supergirl's Bad Day. Free series on DeviantArt
Replies: 4
Views: 1361

Re: Supergirl's Bad Day. Free series on DeviantArt

Well made story and graphics, thanks for sharing.
by Mlod
6 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Invisible Woman: Hard to See Her Like This
Replies: 104
Views: 11427

Re: Invisible Woman: Hard to See Her Like This

Interesting development, I guess she's more deeply affected than she would've hoped
by Mlod
6 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Comics
Topic: Supergirl in The Den of Pain Part 1
Replies: 35
Views: 3200

Re: Supergirl in The Den of Pain Part 1

Interesting start, but there seems to be something wrong, at least I can only see the first handful of images, the rest just say "Image" without anything there
by Mlod
6 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Comics
Topic: Supergirl in The Bitch Trap
Replies: 12
Views: 1875

Re: Supergirl in The Bitch Trap

She'll definitively not want that film to get out
by Mlod
6 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Supergirl: Duty-Bound
Replies: 7
Views: 1346

Re: Supergirl: Duty-Bound

nicely written
by Mlod
7 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl: Snatch and grab, accidental victim
Replies: 3
Views: 1632

Re: Supergirl: Snatch and grab, accidental victim

Part 8: "You bought just the one this time boss?" a large dark skinned man with clean shaven face and head asks. A smaller well dressed man pushing Kara's wheeled rack ahead of him nods "Yeah Sporus, none of the others were really all that interesting, besides, her price went a little bit up after t...
by Mlod
7 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl: Snatch and grab, accidental victim
Replies: 3
Views: 1632

Re: Supergirl: Snatch and grab, accidental victim

Part 6: Alone in the dark, a frantic Kara is trying to stop her panicking 'No.. no.. this is not /vrrosh :dokhahsh/, this is not the Phantom Zone, calm down Kara, there, you're turning, you're still in the car... naked and paralyzed, this is bad, Rao, I didn't even tell Alex where I was going. We've...
by Mlod
7 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: (2nd Dec) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam
Replies: 183
Views: 16269

Re: (12th Apr) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

Ah, easter cliff-hanger (I guess it is sort of traditional by now "Oh god, he died.... or did he, tune back in in 3 days for the next episode of Bible2 - Forgive harder!")
by Mlod
7 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl: Snatch and grab, accidental victim
Replies: 3
Views: 1632

Supergirl: Snatch and grab, accidental victim

Part's 1-5 (Part 1 is identical to my other story, except Kara decides to go undercover instead of as Supergirl, and everything after is completely different.) Part 1: "30 girls in the last two months Alex, that we know of!" Kara can't help but look at her sister again, hoping for a different answer...
by Mlod
7 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: (2nd Dec) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam
Replies: 183
Views: 16269

Re: (8th Apr) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

Interesting chapter, I wonder what cultural misunderstandings are afoot (bonding as marriage, or more direct, I guess we'll see).
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: (2nd Dec) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam
Replies: 183
Views: 16269

Re: (5th Apr) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

Interesting story, seems like Kara has a thing for people in charge.
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: A Supergirl - All Things Are Not As They Seem
Replies: 96
Views: 5570

Re: A Supergirl - All Things Are Not As They Seem

Almost against one, almost against the other, and now... both? Looking a bit bleak
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: What kind of powers are best for a peril-prone heroine?
Replies: 13
Views: 789

Re: What kind of powers are best for a peril-prone heroine?

Generally anything that can be voluntarily turned off/weakened, for example to go undercover or otherwise pass, balancing not being found out with succumbing to whatever peril it is (or being found out and having to try and be able to reverse it as they are in a trouble of their own making)
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl in The Clean-Up Woman
Replies: 5
Views: 2024

Re: Supergirl in The Clean-Up Woman

Great start as always, that goes downhill fast for Kara and sounds like it's just the beginning
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Re: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)

I do agree (hence the comment about being less satisfied). It's the unfortunate truism that you get what you measure/give feedback on, and I wrote this at a place that definitively gave more positive feedback when there was sex (considering I'd never written a word of sex scenes before I'll consider...
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Re: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)

Chapter 10-13 (a bit less satisfied with some of these than some of the earlier ones) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 'No, this is bad enough as it is, I'm not touching that bracelet' heading over to her desk Kara picks up her phone...
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Rewrites
Replies: 9
Views: 422

Re: Rewrites

Sometimes I've not read rewrites, and sometimes I've happily read them, but either way I third what the ones above said, would seem preferable to keep (and link to and from) the original
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Invisible Woman: Hard to See Her Like This
Replies: 104
Views: 11427

Re: Invisible Woman: Hard to See Her Like This

He seems to have a healthy amount of respect, so less likely to make mistakes out of hubris
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Re: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)

Chapter 7-9 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Getting ready the next morning Kara is standing in front of the mirror and staring intently at herself 'Could Leslie have dosed me with something, that wasn't like me at all! Well, sometim...
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Re: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)

Thanks, I've long been thinking about trying my hand at writing, and found this to be low stakes entry that would still mean I'd try lots of things (with the branching format) and also be a bit challenging (as someone who's never written a sex scene in their life, it's a lot harder than it looked fr...
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Do You Care About the Stories Section?
Replies: 65
Views: 3266

Re: Do You Care About the Stories Section?

I agree on it being the most accessible, but I'd never consider it as some stepping stone to something "better", nor would I consider others inferior.
They are all just different and can all bring joy to people (now let's all hold hands and sing kumbaya!)
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: A Supergirl - All Things Are Not As They Seem
Replies: 96
Views: 5570

Re: A Supergirl - All Things Are Not As They Seem

Interesting story, many different aspects (Mr. Northram, the competition etc) sending her from the pits of despair to mastery of her surroundings.
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Supergirl's Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day (semi-voluntary loss of power)

Chapter 1-6 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "30 girls in the last two months Alex, that we know of!" Kara can't help but look at her sister again, hoping for a different answer. Turning away and shaking her head, Alex moves towards ...
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Balancing Story with Peril?
Replies: 28
Views: 1265

Re: Balancing Story with Peril?

It depends a bit, but in general I do prefer stories where things are established and built up to, not just a hard "wham bam thank you m'am" sort of deal. Having said that, as mentioned by others, fanfic does tend to let you build a bit of a connection and pull you in faster due to people already ha...
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Do You Care About the Stories Section?
Replies: 65
Views: 3266

Re: Do You Care About the Stories Section?

I found this place due to a mention from some other site (in regard to the arkham asylum comics with harley in charge), and I stayed for the stories, they are why I keep checking here and leaving comments etc is why I registered.
by Mlod
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Invisible Woman: Hard to See Her Like This
Replies: 104
Views: 11427

Re: Invisible Woman: Hard to See Her Like This

Doesn't sound like she'll be able to resist for long, good writing as always
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon
Topic: What constitutes a Dungeon story vs regular story?
Replies: 4
Views: 624

Re: What constitutes a Dungeon story vs regular story?

From the name I didn't necessary think it'd be more hardcore/explicit, but I assumed what would be here would be more in the way of power dynamics (voluntary or involuntary) and things in general more outside what the supreme court might consider "the norm" (got to love vague laws...)
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Question on story-linking
Replies: 4
Views: 570

Re: Question on story-linking

No no, making sure I'm following the rules of this place is never an imposition, anything else would just be disrespectful of me, and yeah chyoa
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Question on story-linking
Replies: 4
Views: 570

Re: Question on story-linking

Oki, it's like 60 tiny chapters with a common start and spreading out to 30+ directions, but a lot of them are pretty terrible, so I should be able to pick a path or two to post here (and by here I most definitively mean the dungeon section)
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Question on story-linking
Replies: 4
Views: 570

Question on story-linking

So I got a story somewhere else that can't be posted here (it branches into a bunch of different paths), is it permissible to post links to works on other sites, or do they all have to be posted here? (if so I'll pick a path and post instead)
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Site News & Announcements
Topic: Thinking About Doing A Forum Reboot
Replies: 24
Views: 1592

Re: Thinking About Doing A Forum Reboot

I'm very new to this place so don't feel I have much voice, but if you can port over the threads (at least the stories and other original content) I don't really see a downside to it.
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduction from a writing lurker
Replies: 3
Views: 264

Introduction from a writing lurker

Hi all As many others here I find the interplay of power and the peril of powerlessness interesting. I've been a perennial lurker here and other places but lately I've felt more of a wish to actually write down some of my thoughts and ideas. After reading for a while both here and at some other site...
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Buffy and the Gypsy Queen
Replies: 17
Views: 2725

Re: Buffy and the Gypsy Queen

Great start, is there more of this story some other place or is this all there is? Either way, well made beginning.
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Making Supergirl my Superslut
Replies: 11
Views: 3235

Re: Making Supergirl my Superslut

Good writing, as mentioned by others giving her at least some chance helps (in my personal opinion) enhance the story, either way thanks for posting it here for us to enjoy.
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Crime Alley
Topic: Submission of Kara Danvers
Replies: 46
Views: 6328

Re: The Submission of Kara Danvers

Thanks for reading everyone. I'm sorry to say that I won't be updating this anymore. I feel very guilty for writing this story. There's a strange duality inside me. I love and respect women, but I'm also turned on by stuff like this. I am having a hard time reconciling this. I'm going to be leaving...
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl: The Chain
Replies: 12
Views: 4904

Re: Supergirl: The Chain

This was a very interesting take on SG and her abilities, and it sounds like it's moving towards quite the confrontation and problem for Kara. I hope (if you're still around) that you will one day continue this story (and even if not, that you'll write other stuff, because you're quite talented)
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl Captured by the Mob-The Final Chapter
Replies: 12
Views: 5692

Re: Supergirl Captured by the Mob-The Final Chapter

Nice epilogue, even with their regenerative abilities and healing rays this is going to be with them in some form for the rest of their lives.
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl Captured by the Mob-Story
Replies: 277
Views: 175475

Re: Supergirl Captured by the Mob-Story

I normally post comments on most chapters as I read stuff, but I finished reading all of this before being able to post, so you'll have to make do with this tiny one at the end. Great story and writing, your mind is dark and full of twists, and I love it. Overall I really liked the Supergirl parts o...
by Mlod
9 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon
Topic: Supergirl V Luthor
Replies: 126
Views: 22745

Re: Supergirl V Luthor: Humiliation (7/7)

Good luck with the move, and hope you feel like (and have the time) to continue. Really impressive work, both with the story and especially with the image manips, high quality. In fact, posting about this was why I originally tried to to register here the first time (though I later did find DrDomina...