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by lordgriffin
4 months ago
Forum: Forum Technical Support
Topic: Having Issues? Report Them Here
Replies: 6
Views: 232

Chat Function

What happened to the CHAT Function?
by lordgriffin
8 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl in The Robbery Defeat
Replies: 5
Views: 1398

Re: Supergirl in The Robbery Defeat

um...THIS is in the Dungeon Stories? I am curious as to why.
by lordgriffin
10 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Hunter of the Amazon #1
Replies: 37
Views: 61438

Re: Hunter of the Amazon #1

Love this story I was following it on the Wizards Liar till it sort of went down
Thanks for the encouragement, I want to finish it
by lordgriffin
10 months ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Hunter of the Amazon #1
Replies: 37
Views: 61438

Re: Hunter of the Amazon #1

I want to finish it, so it is not dead yet thank yu for the encouragement
by lordgriffin
1 year ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Vigil 1: Rise from Ashes
Replies: 13
Views: 1533

Re: Vigil 1: Rise from Ashes

Hello: Like Dr. D, I like to leave SOME comment, because seldom did *I* get a comment. So I would first like to reflect Dr D's sentiment that you do a great job of writing detail. What I would like to do is ask some questions.... I saw you unmask her, but you decided NOT to reveal her Identity....yo...
by lordgriffin
1 year ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: Judging One's Superheroine Fetish
Replies: 36
Views: 2008

Re: Judging One's Superheroine Fetish

Hello All: And Buswhackerbob, Welcome to the community Dr. D brought this discussion to my attention because he thought I would enjoy joining it...he knows me well. Here are some points I'd like yo discuss with you and others. My first point I'd like to take issue with (this is not to say I disagree...
by lordgriffin
1 year ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Supergirl: Lost in the Swarm
Replies: 96
Views: 17485

Re: Supergirl: Lost in the Swarm

You stories are well written, and I think your an awesome writer, however I am ready to leave this sight permanently...Truth in advertising, they should rename this sight the "super girl Bat girl" heroine sight...those are not my interest and it's almost all you get any more (waiting for the other r...
by lordgriffin
1 year ago
Forum: The Bar With No Name
Topic: Heroine in peril looking for writers and world creators!
Replies: 40
Views: 1999

Re: Heroine in peril looking for writers and world creators!

If your still around, I'd love to chat...kick some ideas
by lordgriffin
1 year ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Diamond Star Issue One - The Power Belt
Replies: 12
Views: 2441

Re: Diamond Star Issue One - The Power Belt

You know, Void, your reply is exactly why, in my opinion, this board is going dead. I am not trying to be angry or "flame" but you made a whole bunch of assumptions, attributed them to me and declared the idea absurd...I dunno I guess every once in say the last 30 years, it might be nice if someone ...
by lordgriffin
1 year ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Diamond Star Issue One - The Power Belt
Replies: 12
Views: 2441

Re: Diamond Star Issue One - The Power Belt

Well I see, as usual, I will be in the vast minority. Not sure if your still even following this thread. I loved your premise, and you were incredibly detailed and logical right up until he started to use her for sex, then suddenly, everything went from detail to...a list of things he did. It was al...
by lordgriffin
2 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: Where would a Patron go, to find a Kinder / Darker plot?
Replies: 2
Views: 479

Where would a Patron go, to find a Kinder / Darker plot?

I hope all you producers, do not mind me posting here. To be honest, the content I seek, and in my very PERSONAL opinion, the content being displayed so so very...unappealing (to ME) I have become a lurker who feels minimized and dismissed. I am a writer myself, much less now a days, but You all hav...
by lordgriffin
2 years ago
Forum: Producers Corner
Topic: Where does a patron go, to find the darker outcomes?
Replies: 5
Views: 594

Where does a patron go, to find the darker outcomes?

I hope all you producers, do not mind me posting here. To be honest, the content I seek, and in my very PERSONAL opinion, the content being displayed so so very...unappealing (to ME) I have become a lurker who feels minimized and dismissed. I am a writer myself, much less now a days, but You all hav...
by lordgriffin
2 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Lounge
Topic: Captured Heroines
Replies: 3
Views: 1033

Re: Captured Heroines

Much as I love Mr. X's sight, I am afraid I can not (personally) agree with his assessment of this guy's site. I know "to each their own" but when I went there, it is another "Hermaphrodite" sight with a, what appeared to me, to be a majority of female characters, with male genitalia hung on for peo...
by lordgriffin
2 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Queen of Swords Humiliated final part posted
Replies: 6
Views: 2232

Re: Queen of Swords Humiliated final part posted

it was definitely the abrupt ending....there was so much more potential here
by lordgriffin
2 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Patriot Girl's Little Shop of Horrors
Replies: 3
Views: 1268

Re: Patriot Girl's Little Shop of Horrors

I am a little more...discerning then Dr D. While I loved your premise...you rushed thru the story too fact, you did nothing to invest us in the characters...why do we care that this is happening? and is the guy only interested in plant food? then why heroines? With some details this coudl be a reall...
by lordgriffin
2 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Queen of Swords Humiliated final part posted
Replies: 6
Views: 2232

Re: Queen of Swords Humiliated final part posted

wow... that was...unpleasantly abrupt.... :/
by lordgriffin
3 years ago
Forum: Site News & Announcements
Topic: Donate To Bring Chat Back!
Replies: 37
Views: 3080

Re: Donate To Bring Chat Back!

i KICKED IN 15
by lordgriffin
3 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon
Topic: What got you started in the Super Heroine in Peril genre?
Replies: 100
Views: 22468

Re: What got you started in the Super Heroine in Peril genre?

For me, it was Sheen Queen of the Jungle, I was about 12, and here was this BEAUTIFUL woman, clad in skimpy animal skins who could commune with animals AND become one. In one Episode they trapped Sheena in her Lioness form, and HUNTED her, actually "Darting" her and putting her in a cage, and I fun...
by lordgriffin
3 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: The Akan WitchGoddess(Electro-Sorceress):Her Creation Of 2 Superheroines (ElectroPowerWoman & MistressConductor!)
Replies: 13
Views: 3277

Re: The Akan WitchGoddess(Electro-Sorceress):Her Creation Of 2 Superheroines (ElectroPowerWoman & MistressConductor!)

Hello again Emperor: I read your reply...and then I re red your reply....and then I read it once more...but I am still. I am still not sure the message your trying to convey. It is great that this is only a "primer" and that you like the site here, and that you have a life outside of... My comments ...
by lordgriffin
3 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: The Akan WitchGoddess(Electro-Sorceress):Her Creation Of 2 Superheroines (ElectroPowerWoman & MistressConductor!)
Replies: 13
Views: 3277

Re: The Akan WitchGoddess(Electro-Sorceress):Her Creation Of 2 Superheroines (ElectroPowerWoman & MistressConductor!)

Hello Emperor: Well you solicited a reply, and I admire that, and as I have said to you privately, I applaud anyone who gets out here, and puts down on (ostensibly) paper a story that speaks to them. I see a lot of potential in your writing, but I also see impatiens. To start with, I am not seeing a...
by lordgriffin
3 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: AMAZOS - a WW origin story UPDATED 01/07/2020
Replies: 196
Views: 26000

Re: AMAZOS - a WW origin story CENTURION's chapter

Hey Centruion: What a great and imaginative story, I love horses so the idea of a Nightmare is awesome (though I think that the "Daymare" should have a cutie mark) You also have a great use of vocabulary..... I particularly liked the blood part, where the mare was drinking, though It might have been...
by lordgriffin
3 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: AMAZOS - a WW origin story UPDATED 01/07/2020
Replies: 196
Views: 26000

Re: AMAZOS - a WW origin collaboration

I have been a bit behind, a bit I just finished the read. Tally you do a great job with the minor Greek deities, and the action moves along well. I have to admit I got a bit....tired of the betrayals...but they were set up well and made sense. Enjoyable read for a story that (mostly) had no sex :)
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Wonder Woman Lapped
Replies: 21
Views: 6537

Re: Wonder Woman Lapped

I thought this was a site to place a story a person came up with for others to read. This isn't that type of site it seems. Do what I can to do a story and all I get is made fun of because I am not an author. Well this is my last story here Good bye Well...you may already be gone...but what makes y...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Wonder Woman Lapped
Replies: 21
Views: 6537

Re: Wonder Woman Lapped

My opinion of a bit...opposite of Saxman314. I never understood how people who went to school..had their mind totally scrambled because a DOT is missing at the end of a sentence. Because the dot means something. Grammar isn't there to trick people into believing that a dot goes here or there, it's ...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Wonder Woman Lapped
Replies: 21
Views: 6537

Re: Wonder Woman Lapped

My opinion of a bit...opposite of Saxman314. I never understood how people who went to school..had their mind totally scrambled because a DOT is missing at the end of a sentence. My problem came with plausibility. being in "The Dungeon" section and starting out with a MAJOR "white slaver" I was init...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared
Replies: 53
Views: 24366

Re: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared

Hi LG. Wow, thank you for the quick feedback. Just an FYI, this story is not yet finished. Aurelia will have to go through more use and abuse at the hands of the brood ... and there is the small matter of what she was really after in going after this brood. In pursuit of that mysterious goal, thoug...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared
Replies: 53
Views: 24366

Re: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared

Hey Flirty: Interesting, nice and powerful ending...i am concerned that you left the door just a LITTLE too widely open for a reversal..but otherwise nice job on this story, I am joy that at a minimum it ended on a note where the Brood has a win in their collumn. i would say be a LITTLE careful with...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Defeat of the Revengers
Replies: 8
Views: 5132

Re: Defeat of the Revengers

I will admit, HawkWoman being one of my personal favorites I am looking very FORWARD to what you do with Hawkette (not a bad name by the way) Oops, forgot to address this. Not sure who Hawkwoman is, guessing she's a DC character. Hawkette is this realities version of Hawkeye, sorry to disappoint. S...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Defeat of the Revengers
Replies: 8
Views: 5132

Re: Defeat of the Revengers

Hello Philo: I read your story, like most of your stories I think it has a HUGE potential. Your antagonist looks original, and has some interesting abilities, though your introduction made me wonder if he is going to do everything "By Proxy" meaning control one of their bodies so He gets the pleasur...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Hunter of the Amazon #1
Replies: 37
Views: 61438

Re: Hunter of the Amazon #1

Hello All, Apologies for my absences, In December I had the death of a close family member and have had trouble getting my “mojo” back together with my “muses”. I am not completely happy with this chapter, I tried to edit it myself. Still I hope you will enjoy and perhaps comment at Lordgriff0n55@ou...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared
Replies: 53
Views: 24366

Re: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared

well yes you ARE correct, with one very MINOR point....she may indeed become a pawn of the Taint brood...but when they are not using her, she is free to adventure and keep..other rivals, away from the Taint brood :)
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared
Replies: 53
Views: 24366

Re: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared

I am interested, but to be blunt, only if the Goddess is destined to LOSE...i do not like teases and cliff hangers...I agree your story is outstanding, and woudl like to see more..but not if I am going to get disappointed by a story that suggests and does not cross the line :) Hmmm ma'lord, you pos...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared
Replies: 53
Views: 24366

Re: Aurelia - Gwardian Goddess: Enticed and Ensnared

So with that update, that concludes what Void had sent to me, almost one long year ago. Like I said, sadly it looks like he's not coming back to finish it up. So, my question is, are any of you interested in reading more of this story? If so, then perhaps I will try to finish up what Void had start...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Penguin's Revenge: Humiliation of Batgirl
Replies: 122
Views: 57989

Re: Penguin's Revenge: Humiliation of Batgirl

Holy devious plots!!!!! It sounds as if several of you want this saga to continue and only drag poor little batgirl deeper and deeper into depravity.... is that what the citizens of Gotham are crying out for?????? :smt077
Um Yes, especially if the Penguin suit is involved
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: [Book #1]The Ugandan Warlock Father's Daughters: The Revealed Truth.
Replies: 22
Views: 5823

Re: (Complete)The Ugandan Warlock Father[Book#5]:Mother & Daughter Sacrifice( Origin Of ElectroNucleus & ElectroNucleous

Um: I am not sure I'd classify THIS story ad dungeon material... I suppose while technically the "evil dictator" won, It was very tame and consensual...all in all It had a lot of "potential" for what *I* like...but never realized that potential...I mean even if your turned evil... it is not like an ...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: A WW story Cartel Owned
Replies: 16
Views: 11375

Re: A WW story Cartel Owned

Hello BED: Well I will start out with saying I see a lot of effort in your writing, a real attempt to blend plot with the eroticism, and your detail with bondage is exquisite. I also can't complain about WW getting away :) That said, your story is a bit brutal and a LITTLE (key word) campy for my li...
by lordgriffin
4 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Intro:Madame Nucleo-Blast & Madame America:U.S.Navy & Marine Corps Tribute.
Replies: 3
Views: 2041

Re: Intro:Madame Nucleo-Blast & Madame America:U.S.Navy & Marine Corps Tribute.

Emperor: I was surprised you wanted my feed back and review, thank you...here's what I see... All three of your ideas are...well plausible... However the first one, Ebony Williams: It's clear you like F/F my first question was, if only 1% are men, and used for reproduction, why woudl this powerful b...
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Wonder Woman : Love Conquers All
Replies: 15
Views: 3994

Re: Wonder Woman : Love Conquers All

Wow...how did Ksire, Centurian AND I all end up agreeing?????
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: [Book #1]The Ugandan Warlock Father's Daughters: The Revealed Truth.
Replies: 22
Views: 5823

Re: [Book#1(The Intro.)]Sir.(Gen.)Charles IronWall(Warlock God Of Warlocks):His Witch Daughters' Origins

[quote= Sir Lord, For now, the fictional biographies that I am writing of my superheroines, villainesses, and the Supervillians ,from which lies the paternal origin of some of my superheroines and villainess, are only primers for future conflict and battles superheroine and superheroine. Writing bio...
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: [Book #1]The Ugandan Warlock Father's Daughters: The Revealed Truth.
Replies: 22
Views: 5823

Re: [Book#1(The Intro.)]Sir.(Gen.)Charles IronWall(Warlock God Of Warlocks):His Witch Daughters' Origins

I am not real familiar with "your stories" so I have tow ait to see more. All i can say about this is the character seems to have some actual thought put into it (which is good) however I am always disappointed when I see a length that does not exceed even a page...Feels like a tease.... necessary a...
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Heroine Dungeon Stories
Topic: Super girl trapped in the Phantom Zone
Replies: 1
Views: 3569

Re: Super girl trapped in the Phantom Zone

A bit Vanilla for my tastes, defiantly contrived and "FAP" but not bad written, justy a personal note I am getting SO tire of reading nothing except BG, SG, PG and WW :(
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Batgirl Vs The Agents Of L.U.S.T
Replies: 50
Views: 16410

Re: Batgirl Vs The Agents Of L.U.S.T

I admit it is a good chapter, and I like where it is going, despite my apprehensions. Some points I found a LITTLE hard to believe... the first was that Bat Girl would smoke.... especially having told her it's effect..if she is going to groan and deny..she likely would not "Take a drag" The other wa...
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"
Replies: 7
Views: 4939

Re: Ishtar: "In the Wink of an Eye"

I read it, but with the heroine escaping, as you might expect..just not my thing. i really wish i could find a site that had some writers that actually wrote more of the antagonist suceeding
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: The Fall of Liberty
Replies: 6
Views: 5033

Re: The Fall of Liberty

I commented on one of your other stories, I do see (now) that yer all about the fight itself..which is cool... :)
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: League Of Superheroines - Hope
Replies: 8
Views: 5602

Re: League Of Superheroines - Hope

Hello: Anyone who writes I like to try and take time to comment. For my tastes, I could have done without the pictures, some were nice, but you had so many I had to kind of "dodge" them to try and read the story. I very much enjoyed your story concept and the fact that Ursula won, however of course ...
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Batgirl Vs The Agents Of L.U.S.T
Replies: 50
Views: 16410

Re: Batgirl Vs The Agents Of L.U.S.T

Hello Masterjoke: I must say, when I started reading your work, I was afraid it was just going to be another lesbian fantasy, however your developing it rather well. You have a great grasp of describing rather then telling and your descriptions are both accurate and vivid so kudos to you there. Writ...
by lordgriffin
5 years ago
Forum: Superheroine Stories
Topic: Defrost: Frozen Heart
Replies: 10
Views: 3286

Re: Bad News

You know, I really do not want to associate with writers such as you...

Thanks... Good Luck