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You know (for an oldie toady) Faye Dunaway is kinda hot. Next revelation, Helen Slater is wooden. Beautiful as she is there is a stiffness too her performance that I never noticed until now. Is that why there are so few SG scenes?
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Get Your Exxon wrote: 8 months ago You know (for an oldie toady) Faye Dunaway is kinda hot. Next revelation, Helen Slater is wooden. Beautiful as she is there is a stiffness too her performance that I never noticed until now. Is that why there are so few SG scenes?
I agree about Dunaway, but not with HS. She does deliver quite a range of things, from her naive innocence on Argo, and inquisitive and sometimes puzzled Linda Lee. And while a lot of her time as SG is spent as wide eyed, confident and self assured she does deliver as the distraught captured heroine in Selena's castle and then later the powerless exile in the phantom zone.

Just checking - do you mean "few scenes" with SG in the movie, or my story so far? Just curious so I know how to reply to your question.
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While Helen pulls off the innocent look pretty well, the way she delivered her lines definitely would not win her any awards. But I'm very sure we can all agree that she looked great in the costume. Helen Slater will always be Supergirl in my books.
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Exxon, them is fighting words. Helen is amazing in the movie. The problems - and there are several - have nothing to do with her. I'm afraid apologies are in order...matter of honor. Nothing personal.

More importantly, glad others are enjoying AEM's story. At last, on that, we all agree.
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I'd say most of the problems with the film are due to the complete idiot they had for a director and the writers. Still I am so grateful this film even exists as it does. If swartz hadn't had success with Jaws 2 I doubt we would have Supergirl the movie- or it would have been completely different. It is a bad movie but there are so many elements to it that until now I wasn't much of a fan of. Dunnaway and Brenda are seriously fun to watch and Jerry Goldsmith's score is incredible. And Helen, I wish she was in it even more than she is. Too bad they spent so much time with her as a student. If she was 19 (going by Helen's age) at the time why the hell is she still going to high school? I've never read the comic but I guess that's a part of the reason.

just my opinions but I love anything to do with this film in the forums. Keep going with the story- can't wait to see how it evolves.
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Whoa, I love the movie ... and this story. Wish there was more of both. Just saying Helen’s performance was a bit flat. But yeah put her in the costume and we’re all good.
All I’m saying is we all want more Supergirl and clearly Abductor is da man to write it.
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(10th May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all, welcome to the Sunday update to the story.

Selena the fugitive and fellow Daxamite Nigel continue to discuss the thorn in their sides, the newcomer Dull. What will they come up with?

Special thanks to forum moderator Tallyho for helping me source some extra material to close out this scene.

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That conversation between Nigel and Selena just got me excited. I certainly like where this is going.
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Whenever I see Peter Cook all I can think of is his sketches with Dudley Moore. Brilliant stuff if you haven't seen it.
Loving the story- thanks for the update. I am glad to say our stories won't cross paths- it's a relief really- I didn't want to step on your toes with all the work you've done. They are great companion pieces to this 80's classic.
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brdiy wrote: 8 months ago That conversation between Nigel and Selena just got me excited. I certainly like where this is going.
Thanks Brdiy and Supergirl1984.

Brdiy - I wanted the story to have a logical progression of events and I always have liked seeing how a heroine's enemies are plotting against her. The computer class and the hockey match, while a bit boring are a way to show how Nigel as a Daxamite (in my story) has figured out what Linda Lee really is. And so with the party over with Selena also knows some more of who is after her, she has an advantage for now. What she will do with that advantage we have to wait and see!!
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(13th May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all - thanks all for the recent comments - and so here we are with the mid-week update again - a short but full scene.

Before I do that - as it is a busy time in this part of the dungeon section - I'd like to point you guys at "Supergirl - Lost In the Swarm" by girlofsteel which updated just a little before I am now - you might have missed that before this update bumped it off the top of the forum page - and of course there is also "Supergirl V The Supreme Witch" by supergirl1984 in the Heroine Dungeon section - a sort narrated picture story.

Ok, now back to me .... THE STORY SO FAR

On Earth Supergirl has spent her day recuperating after her battle with Selena's pet. Knowing Kara would be out of the picture all day Selena has taken the opportunity to push on with her party where she made a pact with Nigel, a teacher at the school where Linda Lee is a pupil. In exchange for favours in the future Nigel has given Selena information to help her defeat Kara Zor-El. Now, as a new dawn approaches on Earth, far away on Krypton other forces who have influence over Kara's life are also plotting and scheming ...

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(17th May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all - welcome to the weekend update!

The story so far - Kara battled Selena's pet monster causing her to become exhausted. While the heroine recovered Selena used the opportunity to hold a party for her fellow exiled Daxamites, one of whom was Nigel, a teacher at the school where Kara is disguised as a human student. Unfortunately the super-powered Kryptonian's intelligence had given her away and so the ambitious Nigel has traded information with Selena for future favours. Now, with a new day and armed with knowledge about Linda Lee Selena seeks to spy on her... but will things be as straightforward as she hoped?

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(20th May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all, welcome again for the midweek update to the story - thanks Supergirl1984 for the , ummm, transformative "comment", LOL.

The story so far - Selena and Kara Zor-El have been in a race to seek out the other first but it is the fugitive witch who has the advantage. She now knows Supergirl's secret identity and even where she lives. Kara on the other hand merely knows that Selena is hidden somewhere in the town of Midvale. Having gotten a first glimpse of their pursuer Selena and Bianca return to their hideout and plan their next move, they now have the issue of an undercover operative from the Daxamite Secret Police to contend with after all!

By the way - is the "story so far" bit helping or ... are you following on okay despite the 3 day breaks between posting? Just wondering!

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Liking the story here a lot...as well as the "story so far" updates. Keep 'em up.
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supergirl1984 wrote: 8 months ago Haha- sorry I didn't like what I originally wrote and don't know how to delete a reply? My bad.
The tension is definitely building. I can't wait to see more of Kara as Supergirl.
Keep going this is going to be something special- if only we were around when they were writing the original script! The film might have actually been better.
Lol, I don't think the movie's target audience would have appreciated our sort of input!
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supergirl1984 wrote: 8 months ago Hahaha- but to be fair, they did put Helen through some horrible/ humiliating situations and I'll be forever thankful for them for doing that. You don't get that with any other superhero films and certainly not now thanks to metoo where they are basically all moody lesbians
I think it more likely they put the character, rather than Helen Slater through the mill, I don't recall her saying anything untoward about what went on, on set. Equally, I am sure you're not saying that you are grateful a young professional actress may have been mistreated, but rather how some of the shadier characters interacted with Supergirl in the movie. Just because I am a monster let's not drag poor Matt Frewer and Mr Mitchell down to my level, they seem like okay guys.
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(24th May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the wicked weekend update. Many thanks for all the comments so far!

The story so far - Selena the fugitive witch has laid eyes on her adversary for the first time, but before she can advance her plans on how to tackle her she needs to resolve another problem that has arisen. Bianca, Selena's friend has spotted someone from her past, an agent of the Daxamite Secret Police who is no doubt keeping tabs on those who have been exiled from their home world. Suspecting the agent is there to aid Kara Zor-El Selena seeks to take care of him first before concentrating on the Dull.

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Whoa, go easy on that brewski, bro-ski. It's potent stuff even for a Daxamite. Uh oh, this could be trouble for the Secret Police/Gardener and obligatory hunk, Ethan. Loving the switched dialogue here. Clever plotting as usual, AEM!

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(27th May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to a wickedly-wonderful-Wednesday and another update to the story. I know, I know, you're staying tight-lipped coz we've not quite gotten to the juicier parts of the story - but they are coming - I promise you!

The story so far - Selena and Kara are in the early phases of seeking each other out. Selena's interests are in studying her Kryptonian adversary so she can protect herself. Kara on the other hand needs to take Selena back to Daxam if she is going to become the Luminous she has worked so hard to be. Before Selena can deal with Kara though she has to contend with a Daxamite spy who may have been about to help Kara in some way.

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So sad that supergirl1984 had to leave just when things where getting interesting.

I hope you continue this to the end. I can't wait for the big pay-off.
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brdiy wrote: 8 months ago So sad that supergirl1984 had to leave just when things where getting interesting.

I hope you continue this to the end. I can't wait for the big pay-off.
Yes, he had some interesting ideas to come, I am sure and who knows - once he is feeling better he may come back and try again. And don't worry about me running out of steam. I didn't have the confidence to think I could just "wing it" and write something of this length on the fly and so the story was essentially finished before I even put up the title credits! I hope the pay-off will be to your liking - though - I am hoping that you will find there are several of them rather than just one - but we shall see :)

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(31st May) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome a Super-Sunday update to the story.

The story so far - Selena has drugged a Daxamite spy who she thinks may be working with her Krytponian adversary. Kara on the other hand has stayed disguised as Linda Lee after school for a little social time with her human friends. And while their paths may seem apart for now they will surely collide ...

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(3rd June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to Wednesdays Witchery!

Linda Lee and friends are out for the evening while Selena proceeds with her plans!

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(7th June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the Super-Sunday update!

The story so far - Ethan the Daxamite spy has escaped and Selena the witch needs to recover him to ensure he does not reveal her identity to Kara Zor-El! If she fails there is a danger he will remember just enough to land Selena in trouble with her Kryptonian pursuer!!

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(10th June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the midweek magic madness!

Selena is in pursuit of Ethan the stray Daxamite spy in a bid to add the finishing touches to his mind-wipe whilst Kara mingles with her human friends, perhaps with thoughts of witch hunting once the night comes!

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Welcome to the Super-Sunday update!

Chaos has fallen on the normally peaceful town of Midvale as Selena's attempt to recover Ethan gets messier by the second! And worse for the fugitive witch is her Kryptonian pursuer is on the scene!

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(17th June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the Wednesday update once more - thanks for all the comments as ever, LOL ....

The story so far - Selena has almost captured the escapee Daxamite spy but Lucy Lane's intervention has jeopardized her efforts. Meanwhile, Kara who was also on hand is about to get involved! How will this effect the power balance in this game of hide and seek that our beloved characters are playing? Let's see!!

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Three fun action scenes in a row. And the dialogue moves the plot along quite nicely. Well done, AEM!
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(21st June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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It's a beautiful weekend here in Madrid and it's time for the next update - oh and thanks for your comment DrD!

The story so far - Suspicious that Ethan, a known Daxamite spy might be in the area to help the pursuing Dull, Selena had intercepted him and attempted to erase his true past. However, before she could finish the job Ethan escaped and so Selena set out to get him back! Now Selena's plan is unraveling before her eyes! What might happen if the young Dull speaks with him in his partially re-programmed state? Is the landscape gardener all that remains of Ethan's mind, or will he remember his mission?

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(24th June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all, welcome to Wednesdays update!

The story so far - Supergirl has rescued Ethan ... except after the memory erasing session with Selena he doesn't seem to recall too much! At any rate, after learning a few minor details of her quarry Kara now finds herself in Ethan's embrace, the fully fledged landscape gardener taking the place of the Spy which has been erased. Meanwhile Lucy Lane looks on with a little envy and Selena too observes the scene through her mirror, anxious about what might transpire ...

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I like how you've rearranged the plot just enough in this series to mirror the movie but yet be different enough to be intriguing. I'm on the hook here. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: (24th June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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DrDominator9 wrote: 7 months ago I like how you've rearranged the plot just enough in this series to mirror the movie but yet be different enough to be intriguing. I'm on the hook here. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks, DrD.

In this story I've broadly re-sequenced the movie scenes but not always what happens within the scenes themselves. I can understand then that while the motivations and dialogue are completely different in the tractor scene the events still played out the same. Selena seeks to get Ethan back. He then gets scooped up and Supergirl saves him. I can understand the quiet audience reaction while this scene played out - because everyone could see how it would go. I think once people see the knock on effects of minor details that happened during the tractor chaos it will generate more interest ... people might be playing "bingo", scratching off scenes as they appear and wondering what I might do with the scenes that are left ...
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(28th June) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi fellow forumites - it's time for the Super-Sunday update once more -

The story so far - Kara has uncovered some precious clues about her quarry; the witch has something to do with a train and has red hair. Selena on the other hand, desperate to avoid falling into Kara's hands has decided she has to take drastic action if she is to survive. Now, as the evening wears on Kara returns to the dorm while Lucy and her friends remain in town. At the same time however, Selena and Bianca prepare to escalate the situation!

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(1st July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all and welcome to the 1st of July update to the story.

The story so far - Supergirl, now armed with more clues to Selena's location retires to her dorm while Lucy and friends stay out for the evening. Selena on the other hand, concerned that the Kryptonian may be closing in on her decides it is time to let her darker self out of her magic orb. Able to access a broader range of power Selena believes making herself whole again will enable her to fight back when the time comes! I hope you enjoy, and perhaps you might be able to tell where the story may be heading next ;)

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Re: (1st July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Linda in search of her inner sexual demons and Selena in search of her actual inner physical demon. Why do I have a feeling those two inner selves are going to meet along the way and the results are going to be exciting to watch! Good stuff here with the facial expressions matched to the dialogue. And more good stuff to come!

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(4th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the weekend update - perhaps it's still the 4th of July for our American viewers so, happy holidays to you guys!

The story so far - Selena and Supergirl both take a pause in their battle to find one another as they have a moment of personal enrichment. Selena is attempting to unlock her dark inner self while Kara tries to understand her sexual side which has been unlocked by Earth's sun!

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(8th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Greetings fellow peril seekers - welcome to the mid-week story update!

The story so far - Selena has resorted to unlocking her dark half in order to gain the use of more potent magic. Kara on the other hand now knows the witch she seeks is a red head who has something to do with a train, thanks to the last remnants of Ethan's knowledge as a Daxamite spy. Selena prepares to use her new found power while Kara ... well ... she's taking the evening off to explore some ideas triggered by her recently discovered feelings and things told to her by her friend, Lucy Lane... let's see what happens next!

Don't forget, these are best viewed full screen as a slide show...

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So ... who is up for seeing what happens at the chapel in the next episode?

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(11th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the Super Saturday night update! So - it is time. What has to be done will be done! Yes, I know you have seen a lot of this part of the movie of late but it is my turn to take a shot at it. To be fair to our absent forumite friend "Supergirl1984" it was only due to his perseverance that I even looked at "re-shooting" the movie, he seeing that there was something in there that could be given a more perilous makeover. And here it is ... I do hope you enjoy the re-imagined scene, especially as I had to inconvenience you all with pesky plots and exposition just to get us here LOL ...

The story so far! Our heroine has opted to take the night off to explore her new secret feelings and, upon reflection, has decided to make a fantasy for herself in order to recreate the magical orgasm she had enjoyed on a previous night. Selena on the other hand is now empowered by her dark half and ready to make use of her more ... sinister... abilities.

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(15th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Welcome to the midweek update. I usually post mid morning on the Wednesday update but as the 15th is my birthday I am writing this up as a draft a day early and will release the post on Wednesday if and when I get around to it. Thanks for all the comments by the way :D

The story so far - Kara, taking a night off of fugitive hunting is fantasizing in a bid to get another orgasm, a recently discovered change to her body caused by being beneath Earth's sun.

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Re: (15th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Ooh. I like how this is turning out!
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(18th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all, welcome to the wonderful weakened weekend!

Thanks for the comment - all I was seeing was tumbleweeds and hearing the chirping of crickets at night - so it was good to know someone is out there!

The story so far - we catch Kara Zor-El mid-fantasy in a bid to relive the joy of an orgasm once more, having discovered her body was capable of experiencing one beneath the power-giving sun of Earth. Will she get there? She certainly seems to be having a good go at it so let's see!

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WOW!!!! Hot!!
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(22nd July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Thanks for the comment, tmon - very kind of you, I am glad that at least you like how things are going! It's amazing what some on-screen anal beads can do for the viewing figures, a typical 150 views per posting exploding to around 750 when they appeared, you kinky deviants!

The story so far - Kara is deep into her dark fantasy in a bid to enjoy another orgasm! Is she going to get there?! And how might her taking the evening off from witch hunting affect her bid to find Selena?! Let's see what happens next!

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Wow! Just wow!
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(25th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all - welcome to the weekend update once more - how time flies! Thank you for the comment DrD :D

Kara's fantasy continues on to what will hopefully be a ... stimulating climax! Hope you enjoy the conclusion of this infamous scene!


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Hmmm, I am not sure if I alienated the audience with that scene or not ... it's gone a little quiet. Was it because it was her fantasy to be dominated that you didn't like? Or that I couldn't conjure up a full on lezdom scene in the trailer unit? Ah well, I am sure I will figure out this audience eventually...
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Well, I for one await your updates with bated breath. As I am sure some others here, too. I'm still very curious where this goes, so I apologize if I don't comment as much as I should.

Not really a fan of lezdom scenes, but that's just me. I'm pretty sure many others here do like it. For that scene, I would have wanted to see the truckers getting their way with SG, but I understand the limitations of the material (from the movie itself) that you have to work with, so I do appreciate that you have been creative so far with what you have done.
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Re: (25th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Abductorenmadrid wrote: 6 months ago Hmmm, I am not sure if I alienated the audience with that scene or not ... it's gone a little quiet. Was it because it was her fantasy to be dominated that you didn't like? Or that I couldn't conjure up a full on lezdom scene in the trailer unit? Ah well, I am sure I will figure out this audience eventually...
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Pure perfection! Wouldn't change a thing! I'm eagerly awaiting more!

I've been obsessed w/ this movie for decades and this puts an entirely new spin on it.

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Re: (25th July) Supergirl Vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam

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Hi all, the midweek update is coming shortly, I had opted to pause instead of posting yesterday because I wasn't sure if the story was having much impact. I went through all of June up until mid July (about a dozen updates) with only DrD commenting, and while I appreciate that you can understand that as he had some input into the story I don't see him as impartial. So, to finally finish one of the precious few main perilous scenes from the movie (one of the mini-pay offs as it were) and not get "paid-off" ... it was a little disheartening for me. I hope now that you understand what was in my head...

Now to address the comments ...
RealGundamBuilt wrote: 6 months ago Pure perfection! Wouldn't change a thing! I'm eagerly awaiting more!

I've been obsessed w/ this movie for decades and this puts an entirely new spin on it.

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brdiy wrote: 6 months ago Well, I for one await your updates with bated breath. As I am sure some others here, too. I'm still very curious where this goes, so I apologize if I don't comment as much as I should.

Not really a fan of lezdom scenes, but that's just me. I'm pretty sure many others here do like it. For that scene, I would have wanted to see the truckers getting their way with SG, but I understand the limitations of the material (from the movie itself) that you have to work with, so I do appreciate that you have been creative so far with what you have done.
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