The reason for the revision was because of the comments...I don't seem to be able to win with you no matter what I do, soooo.

Thank you for the two great comments...Both will help me in the future.

Perhaps I'll try later with a different story

When are you going to finish this. I love your rendition.

Hey BC,
Let's have some more Wonder Carmen. There are a lot of well written stories in this forum, but most of them are rather thin on KO's, and their descriptions. Yours are just great. Makes me feel like I'm almost in the room with the victim.

Great story CB. I for one would like to see more of Wonder Carmen. Please. =D>

Keep 'em coming, they're great. [-o< [-o<

The Old Man and the “C” The carpet truck backed up to the old loading dock at the abandoned laundry, and Boomer pushed the flat car into the building. Unrolling out the carpet containing Black Rose, the sexy heroine lay bound hand and foot, with a knotted rag stuffed in her mouth. Her dark eyes were...

Just one small request. I'd like to see the chloroforming completed, with her collapsing to the floor and the rag slaowly removed, and then a shot of the lovely lady sleeping. BTW I've downloaded all the others you did. Too bad you don't have a site with clips, and photos too. Would she perhaps do s...

Thank you for your comments, here is part two. The Old Man and the “C” The linen truck entered the old abandoned laundry near the wharf, where Boomer had arranged a special holding pen for his kidnap victim. Lifting the limp, unconscious Shadow Woman from the Linen cart, he carried her over to a gla...

The Old Man and the “C” (The "C" being Chloroform) It’s been two years since Molly graduated from High School and accepted the general house keeping job at the League of Awesome Women. Being conscientious as well as hard working, the pretty young blond often worked late, staying after most...

Try WD 40, it's good for everything.

Try WD 40, it's good for everything.

Hi, I was a member and got upset for the late updates, so I asked for a refund. Guess what? He gave it to me.

Thank you all for the nice remarks. Night of the Peeper Pt4 Wonder Lady lay on the hard mattress moaning, as some feeling slowly returned to her body. She tried lifting a hand to massage an aching head but it wouldn't move, and her eyelids felt like they were glued in place. “Uhhhh..How..could I let...

Night of the Peeper Pt3 Diana Duke, aka Wonder Lady, went to work on Monday morning as was her normal routine, unaware a pair of eyes followed her every move. “Good morning Marv, I need the file on the Verdugo sisters. We're starting our surveillance of their little operation tonight.” She then spen...

Thank you tmon, and here's part 2 Missing Women Pt2 “Excuse me Athena, but we seem to have a problem.” Minerva, the Chief's secretary entered the office to announce that Wonder Lady had not reported in, and her sister Dru said she did not come home last night.” “Get me the file of her current invest...

Hi, Is it possible to see the other stills from this video?

Chloromaiden

Missing Women It was a clear bright morning, and planes could be seen following the river to land at the Metro Airport more than two miles away from the Foundation Headquarter's top floor offices, where Diana Duke was being briefed on her next assignment. “The missing women all have the same general...

Night of the Peeper Pt 2 After making certain the helpless Wonder Lady was comfortable with her head resting on the soft pillow, Johnny went into the bathroom to wash up and relieve himself. When he returned....”Oh no..she's coming to.” Wonder Lady was sitting on the side of the bed slightly bent ov...

The Night of the Peeper Johnny was a familiar site, riding around the neighborhood on his bicycle nearly every day. He waved at all the people working in their yards, and pet all the dogs taking their daily stroll. However, when night fell he put away his bike to sneak around, peering into all the w...

Thanks for your kind words. I haven't posted anything else, because of the lack of comment. No sense in posting something nobody wants.

Chloromaiden

This is a continuation from Missing pt 5 The Curator Returns pt1 Marvin watched the Doctor return, dine with Jezebel at the private table, and then leave, but Mickey never followed. "What happened to her, where could she be?" As he tailed the couple to their Hotel suite, the young agent co...

Missing Barbara Roth exited the elevator, and strutted down the hall towards her office. She was the CEO of the largest investigative agency in the country; Five feet five inches tall, brunette, an ex facial model for a cosmetic firm, with a figure and legs to match. Those assets were mostly camoufl...

The Curator I A very distinguished looking gentleman with gray hair and a goatee, sat behind his mahogany desk, reading the morning paper. "This is quite an interesting tale about this young man with an obsession over Wonder Chick. He even has every issue of her Comic Book." Reaching acros...