Go for it~! Selazier the Bettah~!!!

Bravo! Great Story1 The pacing was nice, grabbed from the start. I like the twist ending too! I hope you post more soon.
Cheers~!

I know you get a lot of looks and not a lot of comments.
Your writing gets better with each post.
I enjoy reading your ideas and concepts.
Thank you for sharing you Imagination with us!

Yeah it seems that spanking is featured a Lot in Paris Kennedy's Super Heroine World site... And the Crimson Hawk stuff... So I am just giving s Second That to what Kitten said. Great! Which videos would you recommend? Issue Six of Superheroine World. (Most of them have some spanking anyway) Issues...

Great Dialogue and a very Nice Start! Bravo!

Hey Your Idea seems interesting. It is just hard to read the way it is formatted. You might get more reaction if you used paragraphs. and made it easier to read.

Yeah it seems that spanking is featured a Lot in Paris Kennedy's Super Heroine World site... And the Crimson Hawk stuff...
So I am just giving s Second That to what Kitten said.