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Philo Hunter

I put up a newer link lower down. Here it again and I'll go back and change the one in the first post I guess too.

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Philo Hunter

I got a bunch of work done in the Training Facility, including the first ending (and it’s a bad one!). The section is a little more than half done. My plan is to finish up things in Freedom Tower before moving onto other sections of the city, but if anyone has any specific requests I might work on t...

Philo Hunter

Thanks for catching the typo. I SUPER appreciate that. I'm working on adding things in Freedom Tower right now. I'll probably be adding a couple entries a day, but expect this book to be added a lot slower than the Archbaroness one was. When I was working on that one it was pretty much all I was wor...

Philo Hunter

Okay, Mark 4 of the story is started. Just the reworked intro for now, but I wanted to get the link up before I forgot about it:

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Philo Hunter

Okay, having learned the limitations of the program while getting the Archbaroness book published and taking some early feedback to heart I have thrown out what I had so far and am starting mostly from scratch now. My plan is to NOT have a power/horny meter in this book. Partially because each read ...

Philo Hunter

The book is published and up for purchase for anyone that wants it! It's enrolled in the Kindle Select program so if you have an unlimited account you can get it for free.

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00ROHWEVU

Philo Hunter

It's in the process of publishing now! So the old link is down now. As soon as it's published I'll post the link to it on amazon. There isn't really any "new" material. What I had to do is change every instance of the story looping back around. So every time you could return to Freedom Tow...

Philo Hunter

I could totally do that down the line! As a heads up I'm about 2/3 done reformatting it in a separate file (not the one linked). Hopefully that can compile and I can get it published soon and start working on new projects. As it is written right now it still has the power/horny meter but there is no...

Philo Hunter

It's okay, that's the point of using as little description as needed in an erotica. It allows the reader to fill in the gaps with their mental image of whatever get's their crank going.

Philo Hunter

Yeah, the Champion Girl Story is barely started and needs to be totally thrown out now that I know what I need to do to make a story publishable. I had planned on there being more descriptions of her in the first few choices, but I have to totally rework the structure and start from scratch. I'll ma...

Philo Hunter

Cool fan art! It's pretty spot on, although I picture her being a lot more muscular and full figured in my head. and I'd NEVER write her in heels. I know it's a fetish a lot of people enjoy, but I just can't believe a heroine fighting in them unless there is a good in story explanation for it. What ...

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So, the story as is is totally unworkable as an ebook. I am going to have to go in and rework a good much of it. The biggest issue seems to be how the story loops back to the city streets. To work as an ebook the story can't have loops like that, it needs to have endings pretty frequently. So I am g...

Philo Hunter

Just a heads up: Inkle is having a hard time converting the Archbaroness story into a file I can use on Amazon. Till that gets figured out and I know what is causes the problems this project is on hold. Right now we arne't sure if it is the length/complexity of that first story or all the behind the...

Philo Hunter

Alright everyone, now that The Defeat of Archbaroness is working its way slowly towards being published I think it’s time to get started on my next Choose Her Peril story! The Defeat of Champion Girl was actually half written already, but there was a lot of things I learned doing the shorter Archbar...

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Oh man, can't believe I never saw it that way! Being able to "win" DOES make the peril more perilous! Okay, I will definitely be working that more into the next one. Maybe to help facilitate that I'll work the power meter and maybe the horny meter as well... And yup, I keep VERY busy, this...

Philo Hunter

Thanks Void! Editing is definitely my biggest weak point. My girlfriend, who recently started writing erotica of her own, is starting to edit my normal releases but the CYOA are just too much for her to work into her busy schedule. I super appreciate the feedback by the way. The next one (which I'll...

Philo Hunter

Alright everyone, it is finished! I just have to submit it to Inkle and get the epub to upload to Amazon. Once I have started the actual publishing process I will be taking the links down. To take advantage of the best tools on amazon they require that your stuff be exclusive to them. Once it’s up I...

Philo Hunter

Half of The Curb is finished! Everything is done when facing The Red dragon Syndicate. That means all that remains to get done in the story is the other half, facing the Sugar Skull gang. I’ll be trying to get that done as soon as possible so I can start the process of getting the story turned into ...

Philo Hunter

Okay everyone, it took longer than I expected do to getting sick but the IntelliTek section is fully written and posted! It ended up having a lot more complex back and forth between choices if you go there to answer their request for help. My first tentacle monster sex scene is also hidden somewhere...

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Thank you Matt for pointing out the typos, that is always appreciated! Inkle was being a bag of dicks today and I had to delete and renter in the entire City Hall section. I managed to catch the first one (the parentheses were part of something telling me to make an entry only show up sometimes). I ...

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Okay, City hall is all done!

Most of the dead end links right now are ones that lead to things dealing with IntelliTek (mostly the "sold to IntelliTek" option), so that's what I'll start working on next.

Philo Hunter

http://writer.inklestudios.com/stories/x5gh

Sorry, the link changed again. This is the one that will work for the time being till it wigs out again.

Philo Hunter

I wish there was a way to create some kind of story map through Inkle, but sadly I don't know of one. And when they convert it to Inkle the only stuff that ends up in the file that isn't part of the story is the front page copyright information, so even if I wanted to I really couldn't. Part of the ...

Philo Hunter

It's great, is there a way hear Gasser approach but not be able to get out of the way of the gas bomb? I've tried almost all the combinations I can think of and I either don't hear him or do and can get out of the way. Matt Okay, there WAS a way, but going back over things it seemed unlikely that y...

Philo Hunter

Files working again! Here's the new link (and I updated the link on the top)

http://writer.inklestudios.com/stories/mhpq

Philo Hunter

It's great, is there a way hear Gasser approach but not be able to get out of the way of the gas bomb? I've tried almost all the combinations I can think of and I either don't hear him or do and can get out of the way. Matt There isn't right now but I can add one in. I think it's set up so you dodg...

Philo Hunter

-The Financial District is fully flushed out and written now. The only “dead ends” in it are things that lead to areas not written yet (such as Archbaroness being sold to IntelliTek). There’s also a breast growth scene in with The Gasser for those into that. -I’ve tried to keep things internally log...

Philo Hunter

Here's the work in progress cover!

Philo Hunter

Changes for 11/13/14: - I connected a lot of choices inside Freedom Tower that lead to things already written but that I had missed. The story is probably about third done now and worth exploring if you were waiting for it to be usable. - Created entry for heading out on patrol. -Finished the visit ...

Philo Hunter

Okay, I managed to get a bunch of work done today. Everything inside of Freedom Tower is done (although if anyone notices anything weird or any typos please let me know). I want to stress that only the stuff actually taking place inside Freedom Tower is done, anything that will take you OUT of the b...

Philo Hunter

Cool! When I post new stuff I'll be sure to make clear where in the story it is. I'm doing this publicly like this to get some feedback from people into this kink. If you have anything you want to see, a way you want the story to go please feel free to throw the suggestions at me! The worst that cou...

Philo Hunter

Okay everyone, here is the link to the story (I'll also add it to the first post as well): --------------------------------------------- I've added the introductory section leading up to the first major choice (stay in Freedom Tower or head out on Patrol). You the reader can't see it but Archbarones...

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Bovine Justice and Archbaroness...if I can vote for two. looking forward to the stories that come out of this. Matt Added your votes! Looks like the story will be The Defeat of Archbaroness! Don't worry though, I'll figure out a way to get the rest of the heroines worked into at least one scene. I'...

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Hmm... this section of the forum has far fewer posters than I thought it did. I'd settle for a tie breaking vote for one of the heroines already voted for.

Philo Hunter

It's very reassuring to see pretty much everyone agreeing our kink is okay only as fantasy.

Philo Hunter

Votes added! I added both of your void, no reason to have to choose just one. Hopefully that will help things move along faster, and everyone else should feel I guess to vote for two or three of them. If no one has gotten to 4 by Monday the one with the highest votes will win.

Philo Hunter

Good hello all! I think I'd like to try writing a CYOA story with everyone's help (thanks to Omega Woman for the inspiration). I'm working on a massive one that won't be done till next year some time, but would like to get a shorter one done before then and I'd like everyone's help. My plan is to ke...

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I'll definitely put a link up once it's on Amazon. And yeah, it's pretty daunting. The different branching story arches have a tendencies of growing in number as you write as well. It probably won't be done till the middle of next year some time with as big as it is. I might to a shorter, simpler on...

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I'm writing it present tense so the readers choices feel more action oriented. The choices are worded as if you are the narrator, not the main character. It's still pretty early but I wouldn't mind sharing the temporary link via pm for it if anyone wants to Alpha test the story and give me some feed...

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One of the things that made the SHC videos unique was just how rude they were! His villains always had a particularly dark attitude towards superheroines. Not just enemies - Dan-O's villains barely regarded the superheroines as human, often referring to them in highly offensive condescending terms,...

Philo Hunter

Do you all know about Inklewriter? It's a web site that allows you to write CYOA type stories with limited logic (like tracking how much of something you have, only showing certain choices if you've past certain points). It's free to use and you can share a link to your story with anyone. You can al...

Philo Hunter

Part four of the ongoing Megatropolis Amazons vs Cape Crusher story is up! This one centers on Brickhouse, the muscle of the team. She faces off with the new villain The Gasser during the first half and spends a lot of time gassed. The rest of the team has grown ever more conditioned by Cape Crusher...

Philo Hunter

As a writer death is a very limiting tool. Once a character is dead they are done being usable except in stories set before than. I know bringing characters back to life is big in the superhero genre, but it's something I've always felt distasteful as a reader. Also from the perspective of someone w...

Philo Hunter

Hello all! I publish superheroines in peril stories to the Amazon Kindle market place. Right now the story "The Megatropolis Amazons Vs Cape Crusher" is being released in serial format, with the third volume just coming out. Each part of the story is centered around one of the heroines on ...

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