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McGheeny

DrDominator9 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Wonderful work as per usual, McGheeny.

I appreciate your support Doc

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Bronson881 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Excellent!! I especially love the pictures you have added to this story.

Thanks for your input. More is on the way.

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bushwackerbob wrote: ↑
4 years ago
I like where this is going.

Thank you kindly. More to come.

McGheeny

Bronson881 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Very good so far. Hope more is coming.

Oh, I can't just leave a sexy little weakened Supergirl helpless on the floor without the bad guy(s) taking full advantage of the situation. More to come. Hope you like it.

McGheeny

DrDominator9 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
The writing here is delicious. Really like how you've portrayed Kara as so sexually aroused as well as how much Rudy slowly begins to enjoy his effect on her. Please keep this story going.

Thank you sir. More to come soon. I promise.

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Bronson881 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Excellent!! You are very good in this. I guess Black Mask owns Supergirl now.

Thanks! Stay tuned in

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Bronson881 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Great story. Love how they were concerned with her safety in the van. Looking forward to more of this story.

New part is posted. Enjoy

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DrDominator9 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Wonderful work as per usual, McGheeny.

Thank you Doc!

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Bronson881 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Excellent story. Love how eventhough she tried to resist him, Maestro slowly breaks down her defenses. Looking forward to more of this story.

Ask and you shall receive

Part 3 has been added just after the newest image. Enjoy.

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Safety first, the man was so helpful to keep an unconscious Supergirl from bouncing around the van where she could injure herself. Why in her weaken state she might have died if they hadn't been so concerned about her welfare. Good continuation. Thank you. Yes, making sure all passengers are in goo...

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I am enjoying this story! I wonder how this experienced man is making Supergirl weak and horny for him? I like the sexual tension during their first encounter. It is very erotic and sets the tone for the story. Great job! I'm looking forward to the next part! Thank you kindly. I do appreciate your ...

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Two silhouetted vehicles traveling in tandem through a series of pyramids of golden white lights head swiftly out of town. The hissing sounds of water from the wet streets being channeled through the treads of all weather tires fill the interiors of the non-branded vans. In the cargo bay of the sec...

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darkguy wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Wow uodtae

New material has been added to this story below.

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Update to the story added.

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wondergirlsupragirl wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Awesome!

Thanks! New addition added below to the story. Enjoy!

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darkguy wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Loved the work you do with the pics man. Looking forward to the updates ....

Wish granted

Added the next section to the story. I will keep updating now that I am back and recovered. Again, thanks for your support and input.

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DrDominator9 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Enjoying this. Very straightforward style with just the right details of sexuality. More please.

Thanks! Part 2 is on its way...Promise

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darkguy wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Wow nice setup, waiting for more

Part 2 on the way

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Clyde123 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Awesome, can't wait for next part.

It is coming. Stay tuned

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DrDominator9 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Fun stuff. So where's the kryptonite this time?

Oh a magician never revels his secrets

Thanks for posting and I am back from another surgery and I am working to get part 2 of several stories posted. Stay tuned...

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manuelmen wrote: ↑
4 years ago
oh wow, it's a very good story, I look forward to the continuation, thanks for sharing it

You are very welcome. Thank you for posting a comment. It is much appreciated.

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Clyde123 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Another great story, many thanks for posting.

Thanks! Your input is much appreciated.

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krispin21 wrote: ↑
4 years ago
I can't wait. May be the superheroine is without her superpowers? Or the larger villainesse is also soper?
Of course in a fair fight the slim Supergirls isn't a match, her normal body is far weaker and frail.

In this case it is all in the "Snake Bit"

You'll see.

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wondergirlsupragirl wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Awesome story & pics, she needs to wake up fast & do something before it's too late! C'mon Supergirl, kick some ass!

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback and I will be posting the next chapter soon.

McGheeny

darkguy wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Still waiting

Humm....I took the wrong turn in Albuquerque...ya, that's the ticket

Sorry for being gone for so long. Sorry for the inconvenience and and I appreciate your patience. I have posted other stories and will be adding the next chapter to this story soon. Promise.

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Great story, great pics... gonna read everything of yours that I can find with this subject matter! Thanks! I am sorry I was out of pocket for awhile. I'm getting older and breaking down :unsure: I have been back at it and will be posting an update to this story soon. Sorry for the inconvenience an...

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tumkar wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Out of interest do you think you'll ever give it a second chapter?

There will be an addition that will conclude this encounter for the girl of steel

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tumkar wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Wow, Can't wait to see what suffering awaits Supergirl with punches 5 to 10.. assuming she lasts that long..

Thanks! Be assured that Supergirl has a lot of embarrassing punishment to come

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tumkar wrote: ↑
4 years ago
Wow!
That was excellent!!
Loved it!

Thanks for the input. It's much appreciated.

McGheeny

This is a comic from a group of stories I named, "The Battle for Survival Series" . Kara Zor-El is ambushed and captured on Earth with Mr. Purple. Kara was forced to be part of the Galactic Games and Mr. Purple convinced their captors that he was Supergirl's manager. https://images-wixmp-e...

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tmon wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Excellent SG story thanks for sharing.

Thank you kindly for your input and support. It is much appreciated.

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Nicely down , would love to more about the background of why was she in the dungeon .... This is how she got incarcerated. I will look to post this precursor story soon. https://orig00.deviantart.net/670e/f/2016/325/8/0/supergirl_in_the_mayor_s_bounty_by_mcgheeny-dap400s.png Mayor Johnson has just ...

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tmon wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Nice first chapter!!!

Thank you very much.

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Abductorenmadrid wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Gah! The wicked company SG keeps along with the heinous dilemmas she has to face! It's not easy being trapped between a rock and a hard place!

I appreciate the feedback. Plenty of rocks and hard places in the heroine's future.

McGheeny

DrDominator9 wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Nice descriptions of her peril. This is all quite cleanly laid out and intriguing. Very enjoyable. Looking forward to what comes next. Great job!

Again, I appreciate your input Doc

There is a next chapter on the way.

McGheeny

Night_Lantern wrote: ↑
5 years ago
A promising first chapter! Things don’t look good for our girl with Black Mask in the picture! Excited to read more!

Thanks. More to come.

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Supergirl, Batman, Black Mask and The False Face Society are copywritted by DC This work is pure fan fiction. I receive no payment, compensation or benefit from it. Comments and feedback are appreciated https://orig00.deviantart.net/7e25/f/2018/308/4/c/supergirl_in_blackfaces_dirty_deal_by_mcgheeny-...

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This story is one of the best stories that I have read on the site. The sexual build up and peril are perfect. I imagined Supergirl with Teddy in her bed. However, I must say the police and Supergirl failed to use common sense. Why would Supergirl let her guard down and accept any gift. It gift is ...

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brdiy wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Posting the pic here for reference (I hope it's ok).

Thanks for your assistance in posting this picture. It is much appreciated.

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Oh, it works, Mr. Owens. I assure you, it works! This was a different sort of story and I liked it. I'm not sure the police or Supergirl did a particularly thorough job of analyzing Teddy's attributes. But after I not just suspended disbelief but actually hanged it, I enjoyed how it all proceeded. ...

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wondergirlsupragirl wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Hey McGheeny! Love your work!

Thank you kindly

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GeekyPornCritic wrote: ↑
5 years ago
Hi McGheeny! I look forward to reading your peril stories.

I appreciate that and would love any feedback. I have already posted two stories for you dancing and dining pleasure

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