You’re welcome.
In my brief list of some of the virtues of your story I forgot to mention the title, a little gem in itself.

I read this last year and thought it quite exceptional. A rereading confirms its excellence; a great set up, engaging, well drawn characters, terrific dialogue which advances the plot while establishing the main relationship. Oh and a great peril-laden opening scene. In addition, the pacing is impec...

I’ve enjoyed all your stories from Enhancegirl onward and this is no exception. Hope you pick it up again at some point-though not at the expense of Valora!