always better!

It's a really great story, very well written

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Bianca in the warehouse....

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Sorry guys,
rereading the story I realized that I posted the draft and not the revised and corrected version.
As soon as possible I will upload the fixed story. Sorry for the mistake.

yeah a very good start

Hi guys, English is not my language, but thanks to AI I managed to write a story that I hope will interest you. I fear there will be errors and inaccuracies, but I hope the final result will be appreciated. Feedback is appreciated, especially regarding the plot and characters. I also appreciate the ...