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Haha! Great stuff! Loved the "creeps in an alley" thing. Very amusing that that classic scene would be Kara's fantasy.

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Bluestone wrote: ↑
3 years ago
over 16 minutes of unused footage

So, which is it, sixteen minutes or six?

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Another turnaround! I was kinda expecting Delancey ending up loyal to the general and to turn on her, but there is nothing wrong with the classics! I'm surprised she had to be told to spit out the bullet though, you'd think the first chance she got it would be out of there!

EDIT: typo

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Thanks lronRP for the feedback. Higher fight to sex ratio preferred. I prefer an even 50/50 ratio but I can make it 65/35 if people like more fighting. Anybody else care to weigh in? I will say that when Mezwani finally does come to the rescue as it were, the fighting will resume. I'd say write wha...

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As SHiP goes, it doesn't get much more peril than this one. I actually find myself wondering what Falak will do...

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Speaking of the Wizard... Does anyone know what happened to Vladi's deviantArt account? It's "deactivated", it seems. Did he leave?

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Damn, those cliffhangers!

Methinks the general has another ace up his sleeve!

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Nice action! Loved the visuals of her getting blasted by red sun rays (?) in the rain and lightning. A rather humiliating experience. The general is going to get an earful!

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Intriguing! What's going on here? Is SG weakened somehow? Are the robots just that good? And will those soldiers turn it to be more than hapless victims?

I'm staying tuned. :-)

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This is a massive amount of setup, but I'm enjoying it so far! It's vaguely ominous, without ever being explicitly so. I can't really tell where the story is going, so far it seems rather mainstream superheroics, but you posted it in the Dungeon, so... (It would be amusing if the next chapter had th...

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I don't know how you come up with this stuff... Fabulous!

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I don't recall seeing anything like this before. Very cool!

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Just to join the choir; that fight scene was awesome! The flight into space was particularly clever!

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Damn, this is a fine piece of writing! I love me a good scary fight, and the way these magical(?) creates overwhelm our heroine was both fresh and exciting. I will sure follow what comes next!

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Harriet Moran (Miss Freedom) is clearly missing from the list!

But with that said.. I can't decide who to vote for!

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Wow! That's a cliffhanger!

Nicely done.

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I bought the two first Supra Girl films, but I'd honestly be hesistant to a third with the same actress. She's cute, but doesn't sell the action.

I'd be all over Missy Rhodes though.. so to speak.

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Gigi just fucking kicked ass and sold everything from start to finish. She is assertive, confident, and tough as nails in both roles which makes her peril scenes just incredible. I'm starting to think you've struck gold here, Rye! She looks outstanding in the screenshots and if she can act the part...

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Bought it. Well worth the price, I thought. I like the art, but I question your story pacing. A bit of build up wouldn't hurt.

Still.. sign me up for the next episode!

-TM

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Here is the last story fragment I've got stored. It's the first piece of a story that I think was intended to run in parallel with the planned Ashes story (the continuation of the Supergirl arc). This one features Wonder Woman. Part 1 (the only one): The Replacement Target: segment.1: New girl in to...

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Part 3b: .3: armageddon Page two of two: Metallo pounded his metal fist into Superman's face, bloodying his lip and nose. "How's it feel, loser?" Metallo shouted. Clark grunted as another fist slammed into his face. His mind raced. Where was he? What was happening? He remembered 681, the t...

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Part 3a: .3: armageddon Still powereless by a synthetic kryptonite compound created by the mysterious Eagle Divison, Supergirl adjustment to life as simple Linda Danvers is sidetracked when she discovers a terrified and beaten Superman. Evading a fight with the powerful 681, Supergirl couldn't preve...

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Part 2: .2: problem multiples Rendered powereless by a synthetic kryptonite compound created by the mysterious Eagle Divison, Supergirl is adjusting to life as simple Linda Danvers. But events beyond her control are dragging her back into the role of a hero. Just as Linda discovered a terrified and ...

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And here is the final(?) showdown with 681. Part 1: .1: from very bad to even worse It's been a bad year for Supergirl. It started with a horrific beating, mentally and phsycially, against a mysterious foe known only as 681. With barely any knowledge of the Eagle Division and their attempts to curta...

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Part 3: 3: caught in the web Grifter and former lover Spider is back and town, and so far it's been nothing but trouble for Supergirl. Spider produced kryptonite to fell the maid of steel, and the effects of the kryptonite kept Supergirl powerless in a horrifying encounter with some bank robbers. Th...

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Part 2: .2: web thickens Supergirl discovered the grifter and former lover Spider had just hijacked a rare diamond. When she confronted her about turning it in, Spider turned on her friend, a lump of deadly kryptonite in her hands... Supergirl's head throbbed as she slowly became aware of where she ...

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Next story features Supergirl and what think is another original character - Spider - and.. 681! Part 1: .1: web is laid Thief and grifter Spider is back in town, and as usual Supergirl won't know which way is up until she has completely untangled this web of deceit. Love can make you do some wacky ...

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Part 3: .3: a bird in the hand... In our first chapter, Wonder Woman confronted Supergirl and the maid of steel got the upper hand by enveloping the Amazon in her own lasso, freeing her from some kind of mind control. But then Wonder Woman accidently was released from the lasso, reverting to her pro...

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Part 2: .2: dominated Supergirl and Wonder Woman are about to discover that not everything about them is invulnerable. Wonder Woman, acting on mysterious orders from Colonel Tucker, has confronted Supergirl. While Supergirl lays broken and battered on the floor, Tucker awaits Wonder Woman's... "...

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Ok, here we go. Posting TeamMunich's legendary Supergirl stories from the dawn of the Internet, originally published on Mike's Champion's Page . They've been on a CDROM in my drawer since 1998. I've only ever seen his "681" published elsewhere. If that's the only story of his you've read y...

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Cool! I'm going out of town for a few days, but I'll try to get something up early next week.
-TM

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btw, I have been looking for an old Supergirl story 'Project Powerman'. I guess you're thinking of The Powerman Program ? That one IS from SGirl911... and I found it in my oldest backup! It's dated november 1996! It's a true classic. :) I haven't seen her around since the 90's. I hope she won't min...

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I can't tell you how surprised I was to see this story here :) With respect to Sgirl911, this isn't that writer's story -- it's actually one of my old ones! I'd be amazed if anyone had more of these, because I lost them all a really, really long time ago. It felt strange reading it again. I really ...

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Oh, hell yeah! Stunning!

A few more weeks, you say? Damn..

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Nice FX! And I love the colors of the Supernova costume. It's the little things that does it. Very much looking forward to the release!

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Looking forward to this!

(But you already posted a still, right? Candice. Or did the actress change?)

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Looks cool! I'm looking forward to this one. Any ETA?

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I've read these elsewhere (Wizard's Lair?). It's great stuff! Thanks for writing(?) them!

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@DianaKnight: Great news! I loved that video. You were both stunning. The only thing I could immediately think to improve is the lighting. And perhaps less focus on bondage.

-TM

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I prefer tights or nylons myself but if Rye goes bare legged its okay as well. PLEASE go with the tights or nylons.... way sexier imo. Please DON'T go with tights or nylons. I find skin colored tights revolting. They make me think of sausage. Dark nylons or fishnets are ok though, for the villaines...

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