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DrDominator9

I could enjoy a heroine dominating a villain or villainess after she was put through the wringer and wanted a measure of revenge afterward. Losing herself in the rage, that would work for me.

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Enjoying the story, but I think Supergirl went down a little too quickly.

Anyway, I'm putting in my vote for the Xmen heroine Rogue. Plus Susan Storm from Fantastic Four.

As for other DC females, I say keep one of the Wonder Girls at least.

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I enjoyed this. Thanks.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 9 Wonder Woman keeps an eye on the wall-sized Justice League Global Watch monitor as she swivels back and forth in her high-backed command chair, feeling restless. She stops swiveling and takes a comforting sip of Tyraxian Juju Tea, which is sup...

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There's no going back now, Babs!

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Part 8 Rene Pascal and Battle Axe are moving stacks of empty wooden pallets around the brightly lit warehouse space to the sound of heavy grunts and screeching wood on concrete. Everything had to be ready for tomorrow. Pascal felt sure that Destiny ...

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Thanks, bare_thighz. Glad you're enjoying the story. Destiny is in for some very tough times I'm afraid. She does show a lot of grit and determination throughout however. She is, after all, a superheroine.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Part 7 I hope you enjoy this next installment of this Wonder Woman story. I look forward to your comments at drdominator9@live.com or right here in the forum. Gary Kramplitz flips through the latest issue of “Titanic Tits” magazine, lazily appraisin...

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Nice story. Short, simple and fun.

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Excellent story. Very effective transition. Interesting reveal. Will there be more? Will we actually see Harley-Bat helping Joker commit at least one crime and maybe face a hero in a new costume of her own? Hope so.

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I'm not one for spankings usually but the way it flowed was superb. Nice work.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Part 6 I hope you enjoy this next installment of this Wonder Woman story. I look forward to your comments at drdominator9@live.com or right here in the forum. The teenaged blonde heroine clad in her tight, mesmerizing bright gold, orange and blue co...

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Part 5 By Dr. Dominator I hope you enjoy this next installment of this Wonder Woman story. I look forward to your comments at drdominator9@live.com or below. To date however, I have gotten almost no reaction to this posting. Are you guys not enjoying...

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Fantastic story from start to finish, Tallyho. Thoughtfully handled peril with give-and-take consequences that I've come to expect from you. And your characterization of SG throughout was both heroic, noble and endearing. Thanks for such a beautifully written epic.

Two thumbs up.

DrDominator9

I really enjoyed the various levels of WW's humiliation in this chapter. In fact the whole series shows her continually having to deal with an ever-declining self-image as she suffers slight after slight after slight to her person and her heritage. Nice work.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer-Part 4 Diana is down to the second to last phone number on the list provided by Harvey Johns. It was Pascal Research LLC. Not incorporated, could possibly be a very small lab. A tiny gleam of hope blossomed in Diana’s breast as she dialed the number. ...

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer-Part 3 When Flare regains consciousness, she feels sluggish and confused and horny. She is also shivering wildly. She feels like she’s lying in a walk-in freezer she’s so cold. A thin stream of ice cold water drizzles down on her chest from the ceilin...

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer-Part 2 Wonder Woman stood near the entrance to Washington DC’s National Zoological Park frowning heavily at the scene before her. About ten yards away, the lifeless body of Scarlet Avenger was draped over the three-foot high stone letters spelling out...

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Thanks, Tallyho. I think you're right. Considering how long the formatting took, yes, the remaining chapters will be smaller chunks. Thanks for the advice and your feedback.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer-Part 1 By Dr. Dominator Welcome to the first part of my series. I hope you enjoy it and look forward to your comments either here in the forum or at drdominator9@live.com The Wonder Woman character as well as Steve Trevor are the property of DC Comics....

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I don't know that you needed to cut the torture scene but if you'd expanded the Superman capture or even a moment with Supergirl back at home with a personal scene of some sort or maybe going up against a common thug and not having the psychological strength to even handle that, it probably would ha...

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Very interesting work of SG erotica, Bare-Thighs. You were so into the whole sexual torture though that the overall story suffered significantly due to its very sudden ending. Still the descriptive quality was excellent and I look forward to future, more evenly plotted pieces from you.

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Nice slow build. Looking forward to more.

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What a remarkable story this is. The way you work the reader's emotional take on the events is just fantastic. It's extremely detailed and quite brilliantly constructed. Sure it could use a bit more sex

but I'm enjoying the hell out of it even without it.

Keep up the good work.

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Very interesting chapter, Tallyho. You never fail to deliver insightful and thought-provoking stories. SG may be pissed at the All-Father but I have a feeling he's got a trick or two up his sleeve to make SG more than uncomfortable before this tale comes to an end. I look forward to it very much.

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Very nice work. And "static" art of heroine peril is welcome anytime on this site as far as I know. Definitely not out of bounds. The Gallery in particular is where most of it's posted.

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As always, TallyHo, an incredibly excellent work of intricate description, excellent plotting and spine-tingling peril. And the nuggets of humor are wonderful as well. Looking forward to more.

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Excellent start, sgz. Looking forward to more.

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Pardon my ignorance but is there any kind of link you can provide regarding the Grace Sisters? I've not heard of them and in order to fully enjoy your story, I'd like to know some background on them prior to you posting. I'm guessing I'm not the only reader to be in this predicament, so anything you...

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I like your concept, Zeta, that losing one's virginity is a natural act and not something that needs to be healed. It's a one time event in a heroine's life. Of course, in stories we write, we often do a reboot and so the heroine is pure once again at the start of it. But when I write a continuing s...

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Uggh! Count me out when it comes to alien bugs and deflowering. But having a heroine lose her precious virginity to a male villain is a standard favorite for me and the majority of fans, I would suspect. The way it's written, of course, is everything. My question is: does Supergirl get her virginity...

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With only two votes for Scarecrow, one of them being mine, I guess it's a pipe dream to expect to surge to the lead. Oh well, may have to write it myself when time permits, say 2015.

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That is so kind of you to say. I will look into your suggestion and PM you with comments.

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I enjoyed that. Pretty well done actually. Thought it was strange that her tiara was in her gym bag rather than stored in an alternate reality for when she spins but otherwise, a strong start. Will there be more?

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I posted this in the wrong subcategory. How do I get it put under Heroine Dungeon Stories themselves, on the top of this page?

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Hey there. I've posted stories on other sites but not here. But the comments and support of contributors here is so strong and valuable that I wanted to be a part of that. I hope you enjoy this and I look forward to any feedback you'd care to give. Thanks in advance. Dr. Dominator Batgirl: A Clear L...

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The futility of the battle in the future certainly sets up the importance of SG's response in the past. I look forward to seeing how it's handled.

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A good start. My suggestion would be to concentrate a bit more on details to help make the moment come alive. When writing, it's always worthwhile to remember the five senses and to employ them lightly when you can. What is the heroine smelling? Her own hair on fire? You put that in but didn't give ...

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I'm enjoying this, especially with the inclusion of infrequently-used heroines. Slowly unwinding, it's quite good. I'm looking forward to more.

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To bring such a revered and erstwhile heroine so low. How could you? I'm loving it! And now there's more trouble in the mix. Can't wait to see what happens next. Terrific stuff.

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Excellent set up of the possible annihilation of the human race. Can our girl save us all and live to tell the tale against millions of insects. Gives me the creepy crawlies to think of it! Think she'll be able to rack up a good tally, ho? Cute use of buried treasures to keep the reader's eyes peeled.

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I agree with Tallyho. Powergirl and Poll.

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Nice beginning, T. Reminds me a bit of the classic story "Ender's Game" by Orson Scott Card. Except he didn't have a flying blonde, brunette or redhead. Looking forward to more of this.

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I'm enjoying this very much and am looking forward to learning how she's being controlled.

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The new rule makes sense so I was looking for some sort of specified original posting date for the stories here in order to know their age but don't see them. Being fairly new to this forum it's not always possible to know how old a story is other than how far down the list it is and the last postin...

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Nice opening chapter. Enjoyed the shocking of SG. Looking forward to both ladies biting off more than they can chew.

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Enjoying your work. I'm hoping that Victory is able to escape only to be recaptured at a later time. But that capture shouldn't be a quick or easy as the first.

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I would tend to say you should read the stories and see how graphic they are. As one example, "TSA Nabs Batgirl" is one of the stronger stories in terms of sexual content but it's very well written and there's not really any sadistic torture in it. If you think your story is too strong for...

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Really high quality look. Can't wait.

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Batgirl1969,

What a incredible story! Just finished Part 6. Your descriptions of the physical and emotional devastation to BG is fantastic. An incredibly fun ride that I don't want to end! Great, great job.

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