A Doomsday vs. SG and Skyfire video would be great! I agree with those who think Skyfire should come out of it eventually and team up with SG against Doomsday. I'd like to see a neck lift of SG by Doomsday while he delivers crushing belly punches. And yes, the sound effects would be important on tha...

Going back over old SG stories, I came across this one and enjoyed it very much. Unless I'm mistaken, this plot is modelled after a Superman cartoon from the 40s or 50s. Down to Lois and Jimmy being put in the storage chute inside the robot. Except in the cartoon, Lois went inside the chute on purpo...

I can't object to the price you suggest. And I agree that writing a story that you would like to read yourself is usually the way to ensure others will like it too, as well as being true to yourself. I think if the villain is a well-written and intriguing character than you would have a great basis ...

Really enjoyed this story. And the cliffhanger ending makes me wonder if there's a whole 'nother story coming or simply a kind of epilogue chapter. Either way, terrific work.

Terrific story. Sweet ending. Great work. Hope to see many other stories when you get the time. Thanks.

Excellent job, as usual. Like the switch of perspectives and giving SG's reasonings during her humiliation. Looking forward to the mystery ending.

I've enjoyed both cases, when the heroine lives and when she dies. My only comment is, when she lives I've always thought it would be great to see how the effect of her defeat continues in later stories by that same writer. Whether it's a physical injury like a broken arm that has to be carried thro...

I'd like to see SG weakened a bit more with gas and then have the thugs come in. After that, seeing the thugs get away with it, the Huntsman tries to get his own satisfaction, except by this time, SG has enough strength returned to effect an escape attempt, perhaps with a squeeze during her oral min...

Nicely done. A girl without options....so far.

Tallyho,

You continue to find unique and devastating ways to employ kryptonite against Supergirl. It's a treat to read your work and your cliffhangars aren't too shabby either! Thanks for all the fun.

Very nice, very simple, very good.

Enjoying your slow, accurate descriptions!

Nice chase scene, and some fancy moves on BG's part. Look forward to more.

I've written stories for both and WW is easier to portray since her personality is much more clearly defined than SG's. She's got an imperious tone about her whereas SG in both comic books and films, that I've seen anyway, is all over the map in terms of how she is written and acted. They both have ...

Sorry about the confusion, but I'm thrilled that I don't have to wait for the conclusion of this fantastic tale. I like how you're handling SG's personality: committed to her task yet with a touch of playfullness as well. And I agree with sgz6 about the scene with her soaking up the rays: poetic. I'...

;) Actually, I've read plenty of SG stories (and written them as well) and put this as a top fave. And you've ratcheded up the tension even more with Wilson and his typical "gov't think." Sorry to hear it'll be a while til another update but I understand. Looking forward to it whenever you...

This is one of the best Supergirl stories I've ever read. Thank you so much for putting such care and dedication into a wonderful work.

Yes, I check this forum regularly. I tend to write more X-rated than this site's R-rated but I still enjoy the offerings here a lot.

Thanks, that led me to a few others as well.

I've been contributing to Superheroine's Central's Wizard's Lair for about 4 years now and was wondering where else people go for new superheroine peril fiction these days besides that site, Mr X and here. Seems like Grey's Archive hasn't updated for a while and Superstories looked like it might be ...

I am enjoying this story very much. The set up is strong and I'm looking forward to the capture scenario. Great work. Thanks for posting it.