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I love the new stuff you're doing with Emily Addison as Knightwoman, MH. Just wondering, do you have any plans for a villainess to peel off KW's mask anytime soon?

Unlike the rigid domino masks, the current KW mask is perfect for a gradual reveal with the heroine squirming as more and more of her face is revealed. You could even do partial or near reveals with the villainess tugging at the mask during a scuffle, but not quite pulling it off.


Edit: I removed Emily's name from the thread title due to her no longer being available for freelance work. No disrespect intended to Miss Addison.
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Have KW heavily, heavily teased about it all too. Maybe a whole "now then Knightwoman, what should I take off first, your boots or your mask?" as a helplessly tied down KW screams and moans into her gag, struggling to get free.

I like it. How about more or less a whole video, however long, revolving around Knightwoman being captured to be unmasked and photographed. If it's done well, it could be one of your best-sellers :D Have the Villainess exclusively plotting to capture and expose the heroine, putting her out of action once and for all.
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Perhaps there could be a series of situations in which Knightwoman/Emily is unmasked and then has to use an amnesia spray (from her trusty utility belt) on the villainess before she has the chance to tell the world who KW really is?

This would allow for the same villainess to unmask KW several times. The final peril would have KW tightly bound and stripped of her mask and utility belt as the villainess takes compromising photographs of our exposed heroine.

The ideal unmasking for me would have the bottom part of the mask stay in place below Emily's chin while the bottom of the eyeholes are pulled back over the top of her head. The mask would essentialy be half-off with Emily's face fully exposed. A bit like this unmasking of Catgrrl/Samantha:

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However, I'm not sure the KW mask has the elasticity to do this. So it may be necessary to remove the whole thing completely with the chin strap coming off first.
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I like it. A few near-unmaskings and then an actual unmasking which is cancelled out by the memory-wipe spray from the utility belt that the villainess foolishly forgot to remove but then to finish off, one thing leads to another, KW is trapped, slowly stripped and hogtied, leaving the mask until last. The look on her face as the last hope for her mask, the utility belt spray, is taken away from her is priceless.
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Love it! Very sexxxy...plus it looks like she is about to be forced to eat some pussy too! Justban added bonus.....i agree with the mask being slowly peeled off by sexy long fingernailed hands..while she is awake and bound like in horror of being exposed
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Maybe we don't get to see the successful but memory wiped unmasking. Maybe we see the build up and when the moment is near, we hear the mask being stretched, the gasps and pleading, we hear the popping of the mask being pulled off, we see it fall to the floor, we hear the villainess exclaim, "I don't believe it , Knightwoman is actually..." before we hear the hisssssss of the magic mind-erasing gas. We see KW pick up her mask but not her face, we hear the stretch of it being pulled back on and then we see a full face shot of a masked again KW with a triumphant smile on her face, patting the spray and pulling her mask saying something like her secret identity is still safe...

This way, we save the actual peril and unmasking for the finalé :D
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I love the hubris of Knightwoman declaring that her identity is still safe. It makes it all the more satisfying when we see the removal of the utility belt (and hopefully every other garment) knowing that the get-out clause is now out of reach.

Before the finale, there could be a couple of teaser unmaskings. Your idea of the mask hitting the floor with the face completely unseen would be very effective. I expect the KW mask would be ideal for the stretching and popping sound effects and we know that Emily is the perfect actress to gasp and yelp.

For another scene, I would also like to see top half of the KW mask peeled back, as shown in the Batman cover below. (Assuming it has the elasticity to be stretched that much.) If this was shot from behind KW's back, we would see the mask pulled over the top of her head and we would see the villainess's shocked reaction (just before she gets amnesia sprayed) without revealing the heroine's face too soon.

In both scenarios, the heroine's (temporary) defeat is punctuated by the sight of her limp, hollow disguise pulled out of place. I know it's only a piece of costume, but there's something about a discarded mask with its empty eye sockets that looks tragic.
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Can anyone tell me what video that is (ideally where I could get my hands on it) of Samantha Ryan as the unmasked Catwoman?

Thank you!!!
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Here's the link for the Catgrrl video: http://www.superheroineunderworld.com/v ... p?t=videos


Following on from the suggestions for decoy unmaskings, here's my idea for a grand finalé featuring Knightwoman finally unmasked. It's as cheesy as Hell, but I never claimed I could write like Neil Gaiman.




The villainess (I'll call her Mad Hatty, but any villainess will do) has Knightwoman chained against a wall and stripped down to just her mask and tights.

Mad Hatty: And now for the grand unveiling. I get a new hat and you get a lifetime on the run from every supervillain you've ever crossed.

Knightwoman: Please, you can stop this now. We can both walk away.

MH: Oh spare me the pathetic pleading. [muses for a moment] On second thoughts, don't stop. I rather enjoy your misery.

Mad Hatty reaches around the back of Knightwoman's mask and pushes the ponytail through the slit. She then grips the back of the mask tightly in her hand and starts to gradually peel it forwards revealing more and more of KW's hair. The spandex cowl squeaks as Hatty pulls and teases it out of place.

MH: Gently does it. I want to savor every last second of your defeat.

The entire back of KW's head is now exposed and the front of the mask is loosening on her face. She gasps at her impending fate.

KW: Please! I have money! LOTS OF MONEY! If you stop now, I'll make sure you're rich for the rest of your life.

MH: Oh, stop giving me clues. I want your identity to be a surprise. Besides, if I were rich, I would have to change my name to Eccentric Hatty.

The mask gives a final 'twang' as it loses the last of its elasticity. The front piece is now only being held in position by MH's hand. KW stares deperately though the eyeholes which are now barely in place.

KW: It's not too late. You haven't seen my face yet. You could still pull the mask back on. Pleeeeeeease!

MH: [hissing] I want you to remember this moment for the rest of your miserable life.

MH finally pulls away the limp mask to reveal...

MH: Billionairess Bliss Payne! You weren't lying about being rich.

Bliss/KW: Noooooooooooooooo! [lots of weeping and wailing]

MH: You know, I've always wanted to know what a billionairess's pussy looks like

MH pulls down KW's tights, leaving her fully exposed. She then picks up the costume.

MH: Ooh, time for cosplay.

Bliss/KW looks on in horror as MH herself strips and dons the Knightwoman costume.

MH: How do I look? Like a billion dollars?

Bliss/KW: You'll never get away with this.

At that moment, a female cop bursts in and aims her gun at the disguised MH.

Cop: FREEZE! We had a tip-off you were in the area, Knightwoman. We all hoped you would snap out of the Seductress's spell but this proves you've turned evil. We can't let you get away with kidnapping Bliss Payne.

MH: I'm not Knightwoman, SHE IS! [points at Bliss/KW]

Cop: Don't be ridiculous! Why would a billionairess playgirl dress up in a costume and hang around Grime Alley?

Bliss/KW: Ew, grime. [feigning disgust]

MH: For revenge, DUH! Her parents were murdered around here. Everyone knows that!

Cop: Bliss is the victim, not the criminal!

The cop and Bliss/KW exchange a glance. They're definitely going to screw as soon as MH is out of the way. Right on cue, MH then lunges at the cop who shoots her dead. The cop leans over MH's limp corpse and pulls back the Knightwoman mask (from the eyeholes) to reveal MH's face.

Cop: Can't say that I recognize her. [looks over to Bliss/KW] I trust we can rely on your discretion, Miss Payne? The city would descend into chaos if anyone discovered Knightwoman died as a villain.

Bliss/KW: Of course, officer.

Cop: There have been other Knightwomen before this deranged woman. Let's pray that a new Knightwoman can step forward and give hope to this city.

Bliss/KW: I'm sure someone will. [hint, hint]

The cop strips and they start screwing with strap-ons or something. I don't know. Whatever.
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You've really nailed the sort of thing I'd like to see Heroine Addict. Brilliant stuff there. I'm still waiting for that perfect unmasking where the heroine is fully conscious of it happening and the mask is taken off slowly from the top and not from beneath the eye holes. That catwoman one as shown in this thread could easily have been done that way.
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Unmaskee wrote:You've really nailed the sort of thing I'd like to see Heroine Addict. Brilliant stuff there. I'm still waiting for that perfect unmasking where the heroine is fully conscious of it happening and the mask is taken off slowly from the top and not from beneath the eye holes. That catwoman one as shown in this thread could easily have been done that way.
Thanks. I agree that pulling the mask from under the eyeholes can be problematic as the unmasker's arms often obscure our view of the moment of truth.

I guess pulling the mask from the top can be risky as the unmasker could accidentally yank the actress's hair when grasping for a handful of the material. In the case of the Knightwoman mask in particular, the way that it's anchored under Emily's chin and ponytail might make it difficult to pull off painlessly in one action from the top.

This could possibly be solved with cutaway shots (bit of a cop-out) as used when a similar mask was removed from the top in Shadow Woman in Big Crisis. (http://www.superheroineforum.com/viewto ... &hilit=big) Alternatively, a "stunt mask" which comes apart under the chin and ponytail and has a grip-friendly section at the top could be made just for unmasking scenes. Or the most obvious solution is to pull up the mask to just above the chin/ponytail and then pull it off from the top while being extra-careful not to yank Emily's hair. Grabbing the bat ears might be easier.

Of course, I quite like the idea of removal in one action with the unmasker gripping the bottom of the mask from the side(s) or back, giving us full view of Knightwoman's face throughout. The spandex certainly looks like it could withstand enough pulling and stretching to be removed safely if gripped from the bottom. In the latest video, there's a lovely scene in which Emily removes a gag and accidentally snags the bottom of her mask. The mask doesn't shift enough to show us what's beneath (sadly) but it makes a nice 'twanging' sound as it falls back into place.

One little mask, so many possibilities...
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I'd say the unmasking could work fairly well if the unmasker's hand is placed on top of the victim's head from the rear, that way it can be slid off with hand friction alone. The stunt mask idea is something I independently suggested in your knightwoman video thread so we kind of think alike there. I'd like MH to consider experiments with pulling that mask off in such a way. I don't know if it has been tried privately or anything to know that it definitely isn't stretchy enough. From my experience spandex stuff seems pretty stretchy but what do I know? I have tried it with a latex catwoman mask and with a bit of effort it is possible to remove it backwards without any damage.

I think we need you scripting Superheroine videos, HA. You got the right stuff. :)

Also I've only just realised the incredibly clever pun in your username. I feel silly.
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Heroine Addict wrote:
Unmaskee wrote: In the latest video, there's a lovely scene in which Emily removes a gag and accidentally snags the bottom of her mask. The mask doesn't shift enough to show us what's beneath (sadly) but it makes a nice 'twanging' sound as it falls back into place.

One little mask, so many possibilities...
Do you mean the latest video with the Leopard etc? What is the timeframe you're referring to? Missed that one first time around and simply must check it out :D
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Unmaskee wrote: In the latest video, there's a lovely scene in which Emily removes a gag and accidentally snags the bottom of her mask. The mask doesn't shift enough to show us what's beneath (sadly) but it makes a nice 'twanging' sound as it falls back into place.

One little mask, so many possibilities...
Do you mean the latest video with the Leopard etc? What is the timeframe you're referring to? Missed that one first time around and simply must check it out :D
It's at 22:27 in the Leopard video. It only lasts a second and you don't really see anything. The bottom of the mask just snags and snaps back into place as KW removes the gag.

You may also enjoy 18:45 in the Seductress video. The mask slides sideways and there's around 30 seconds where Emily is writhing around and you get very brief glimpses of part of her eyebrow and the bridge of her nose visible through her left eyehole. Also, at 22:04, she tugs and stretches the neck piece and it looks for a second as though she's about to unmask herself.

Now these are literally only a few frames of slippage in videos where Emily remains masked, so I don't want anyone to get too excited.
Unmaskee wrote:I'd say the unmasking could work fairly well if the unmasker's hand is placed on top of the victim's head from the rear, that way it can be slid off with hand friction alone. The stunt mask idea is something I independently suggested in your knightwoman video thread so we kind of think alike there. I'd like MH to consider experiments with pulling that mask off in such a way. I don't know if it has been tried privately or anything to know that it definitely isn't stretchy enough. From my experience spandex stuff seems pretty stretchy but what do I know? I have tried it with a latex catwoman mask and with a bit of effort it is possible to remove it backwards without any damage.

I think we need you scripting Superheroine videos, HA. You got the right stuff. :)

Also I've only just realised the incredibly clever pun in your username. I feel silly.
Thanks again. I would certainly pay good money for a behind the scenes video of Emily Addison's costume fittings and mask endurance experiments. :-D

Looking at the close-ups of the mask and how it's constructed, I get the impression that maybe the neck piece stretches a little more than the main body? If it does get caught on her jaw, one possible solution would be to have the villainess stood to the right of KW with her right hand around the back of KW's head (gripping the mask) and her left hand clasped under KW's jaw, keeping her facing the camera. That way, the villainess can either pull her hand away when the neck piece starts to slide upwards or she can loosen the neck piece from KW's jaw.
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Ultimately there must be some way for us to see this scenario we desire. Also HA, I admire your immense dedication to this fetish, analysing it frame by frame. :)

Has Emily KW been unmasked at all? Does she actually in real life not want her identity known? That would be a bummer.
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Unmaskee wrote:Ultimately there must be some way for us to see this scenario we desire. Also HA, I admire your immense dedication to this fetish, analysing it frame by frame. :)

Has Emily KW been unmasked at all? Does she actually in real life not want her identity known? That would be a bummer.
Emily is doing other SH fetish videos for MH and other producers, so she's definitely comfortable showing her lovely face in the genre.

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Maybe the mask itself is particularly fragile and won't withstand much tugging and stretching? If so, the best option might be to grip the mask from the bottom section and pull it up gradually. (Presumably, that's how Emily herself gets the mask off without destroying it.)

In another shameless plug for MH's back catalog, here's the only previous example of the purple KW mask being removed. KW was played by Hollywood back then.

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I would say that the black 'domino' section looks like the weak link which won't stretch with the spandex around it.

Of course, if there are any "failed experiment" distressed masks lying around, MH could always recycle them as battle-damaged designs. Just dab them with black powder and say KW survived an explosion or something.
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I bought that video back in the day and while the model/actress is nice she's not quite the level of hotness that emily has. The unmasking didn't quite work for me because of the bottom being lifted. I like the idea of the mask staying in place around the neck. I like the Catgrrl unmasking due to it remaing on her body but again it would have been better going from the top rather than bottom. The Catgrrl model is also the kind of looks I really appreciate.

I find some of the 'porn star' looking models a bit of a turn off a lot of the time. Despite them all obviously being porn stars, in effect.

Oh and again it was disappointing for me that KW isn't aware of the unmasking. The heroine needs to understand her utter defeat.

As you say, even if we have to have the neck strap on the bottom of the chin or something, it'll do just so long as the mask slips off the best way possible. In our opinion of course which as everyone knows full well IS THE ONLY CORRECT ONE. /foruminjoke no.5003


Also thinking of the Catgrrl unmasking, it's fine and good for me to see villains getting it as well. No reason why they shouldn't have to suffer occasionally as well. It's all about removal of power, regardless of which side of the law they are on if you ask me. So I'd be completely fine with a video where KW successfully defeats a similarly masked opponent, arrests and unmasks her. In fact it'd make a nice change.

Oh and seeing them dressing up as well is also quite nice.

So here's your checklist MH of what we INSIST you do for us despite the fact that we're not paying you for a custom video and you kindly produce a lot of high quality content anyway... (you know we're never satisfied)

See knightwoman/catgrrl/et al dressing up as their character with nice clear mask puttings ons.
Nice clear unmasking done from top to backwards with the mask remaining dangling about the neck.
Nice models like the catgrrl one and EA.
Unmasking victim being fully aware and decidedly unhappy at the slow unmasking taking place, with plenty of taunting from the unmasker.
Costume theft is also quite appealing.

That's it for now from this self-entitled ungrateful sod. :D
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While we have been discussing the intricacies of unmasking, one aspect we have perhaps overlooked is that current Knightwoman Emily Addison reaches a magnificent climax in virtually all her videos. I'm sure she could combine the agony of exposure with the ecstasy of orgasm if the moment of unmasking could be somehow linked to her climax.

I'll add the following to the list of wishes/demands:
An initial fight in which the mask is pulled and stretched enough to give us us tantalizing glimpses of KW's face, but not enough for the villainess to ID her.
At least one off-screen unmasking with a shot of the mask hitting the floor (as described by thelordharry) which requires the unmasker to have her memory wiped.
Enhanced audio for the sound of the latex stretching.
An unmasking linked to KW's orgasm.
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I wouldn't know as I've never downloaded a KW vid with her in due to the lack of unmasking. It's pretty much my only SH fetish. I don't really care about the climaxing thing to be honest.
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Unmaskee wrote:I wouldn't know as I've never downloaded a KW vid with her in due to the lack of unmasking. It's pretty much my only SH fetish. I don't really care about the climaxing thing to be honest.
Fair enough, but I honestly think the sound of Emily's moans and shrieks would convince you how well she could pull off a climax during the undoing of Knightwoman. She's a very talented girl.

I realize we all have slightly different tastes and the KW mask looks like it could lend itself to being removed in various ways. However, the one thing that would be absolutely essential for me is that no matter how many times the mask is removed or semi-removed, it should stay on for at least 75% of the time. For me, the unmasking of Knightwoman needs to be the highlight preceded by teasing aplenty, rather than a throwaway scene in the first 30 seconds.
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Ah, the old favourite, the orgasm unmask :D Leave the heroine in a trap full of stmulating devices where if she orgasms, her mask is removed by mechanic means in a painfully slow removal of her mask as things hot up :)

Maybe towards the end, the fit-as-fuck villainess strips out of her own costume, leaving on her mask and then proceeds to remove everything of the heroine's except her mask and then puts on the heroines discarded costume, making obvious reference the the last piece of the puzzle still to follow. Maybe a good old webcam being broadcast over the internet unmasking for the poor old heroine.

On that note, check out the latest post from this website:

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I don't much care for this style of Catwoman costume and much MUCH prefer the purple Balent version but...love the premise :)
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Unmaskee wrote:I wouldn't know as I've never downloaded a KW vid with her in due to the lack of unmasking. It's pretty much my only SH fetish. I don't really care about the climaxing thing to be honest.
Fair enough, but I honestly think the sound of Emily's moans and shrieks would convince you how well she could pull off a climax during the undoing of Knightwoman. She's a very talented girl.

I realize we all have slightly different tastes and the KW mask looks like it could lend itself to being removed in various ways. However, the one thing that would be absolutely essential for me is that no matter how many times the mask is removed or semi-removed, it should stay on for at least 75% of the time. For me, the unmasking of Knightwoman needs to be the highlight preceded by teasing aplenty, rather than a throwaway scene in the first 30 seconds.
To some extent I don't mind an unmasking without significant teasing depending on the scenario. Imagine if you will Catwoman being arrested and unmasked as happened in the comic in purple era and reporters/crime scene photographers taking her photo as she's unmasked. The police wouldn't do much teasing but it could still work. Though there is the possibility of a small amount of tease as the officer in question gloats that catwoman will finally be unmasked.

The strong teasing thing is the best though obviously.
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Unmaskee wrote: To some extent I don't mind an unmasking without significant teasing depending on the scenario. Imagine if you will Catwoman being arrested and unmasked as happened in the comic in purple era and reporters/crime scene photographers taking her photo as she's unmasked. The police wouldn't do much teasing but it could still work. Though there is the possibility of a small amount of tease as the officer in question gloats that catwoman will finally be unmasked.

The strong teasing thing is the best though obviously.
There's certainly something exciting about the moment the potential unmasker says the words "Let's see who you really are!" or orders their lacky to "Take off her mask!" and the heroine realizes she has reached the point of no return. Unmasking is always a possibility for a heroine like Knightwoman and she might have even been cocky when the villainess had previously grasped at the mask during fights but been overpowered while failing to grip a fistful of spandex. However, now Knightwoman is tied/chained/handcuffed and powerless to resist, the announcement that her identity is really about to be exposed is crushing.

Here's my official Agenda of Tease:

Scene 1: Knightwoman and the villainess fight. The mask is pulled slightly (tantalizing glimpses) but does not come off. The villainess eventually overpowers KW and grips the mask, peeling it upwards from the bottom. At the exact second it reaches KW's ears and the black 'domino' eye section is about to shift, we cut to a shot of KW's writhing body (reaching for something from her utility belt) and hear the sound of the spandex squeaking as it stretches. We see the mask fall to the floor and hear the hiss of the amnesia spray. (Credit to thelordharry.)

Scene 2: Another fight which ends with Knightwoman overpowered, debelted and tied (badly). This time KW has her back to the camera as we see the villainess pull back the top of the mask (with the bottom section remaining around her neck as Unmaskee prefers). We see the empty face of the mask fall back beind KW's neck and we see the entire back of her head exposed. This time, she has the spray hidden in her glove. She frees her hands from the shoddy bindings and uses the amnesia spray once again. For a second time, we have been denied a proper look at Emily's face.

Scene 3: My rather camp script from earlier in the thread. (With or without an added orgasm.) KW is stripped and bound (properly). We finally see the mask fully removed.

Added bonus: Camcorder/CCTV footage of the first and second unmaskings from an angle which shows Emily's face revealed.

To paraphrase Barnum, does this have something for everyone?
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I'm loving this discussion you guys. Now I may be the only one here that likes what I'm about to mention but I have always wanted to see "accidental unmaskings". In the context that the heroine is accidentally unmasked during a fight struggle.

The only example of it I can think of is when Red Claw accidentally pulls Batman's mask off in the Batwing in one of the Batman Animated Series episodes. I would love to see that applied to the superheroine fetish/ unmasking genre. If you still aren't familiar with the scene described above here is the link:



I guess why accidental unmaskings do it for me is because when it does happen the heroine would be in shock of what just happened since she didn't expect it, now trying the use her hands to desparately cover her face in order to protect her identity.

I know, its a unique fetish but figured I would post.
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It's a great idea.

The KW mask is probably too snug to be removed altogether, completely by accident. (Although the tight fit is one of its charms.) However, there's plenty of scope for a partial unmasking with most of Emily's face exposed. KW could have something nasty such as a poisonous spider placed on her forehead by the villainess. She accidentally pulls the mask back just enough for the eyeholes to slide out of place as she frantically tries to sweep the creature away.

Another option could be the destruction of a "stunt mask" specially prepared to fall apart at the seams. As the villainess holds KW in a tight headlock, they both become aware of a ripping noise. Within seconds the mask is literally in tatters around KW's neck.
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OFF! OFF! OFF! OFF! :D

MH, do you have any comments regarding this? Do you think it might be feasible to produce?
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Im going to need some time to digest it all. Just getting back into the studio, but sure an unmasking video would be no problem!
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Heroine Addict wrote:Here's the link for the Catgrrl video: http://www.superheroineunderworld.com/v ... p?t=videos


Following on from the suggestions for decoy unmaskings, here's my idea for a grand finalé featuring Knightwoman finally unmasked. It's as cheesy as Hell, but I never claimed I could write like Neil Gaiman.




The villainess (I'll call her Mad Hatty, but any villainess will do) has Knightwoman chained against a wall and stripped down to just her mask and tights.

Mad Hatty: And now for the grand unveiling. I get a new hat and you get a lifetime on the run from every supervillain you've ever crossed.

Knightwoman: Please, you can stop this now. We can both walk away.

MH: Oh spare me the pathetic pleading. [muses for a moment] On second thoughts, don't stop. I rather enjoy your misery.

Mad Hatty reaches around the back of Knightwoman's mask and pushes the ponytail through the slit. She then grips the back of the mask tightly in her hand and starts to gradually peel it forwards revealing more and more of KW's hair. The spandex cowl squeaks as Hatty pulls and teases it out of place.

MH: Gently does it. I want to savor every last second of your defeat.

The entire back of KW's head is now exposed and the front of the mask is loosening on her face. She gasps at her impending fate.

KW: Please! I have money! LOTS OF MONEY! If you stop now, I'll make sure you're rich for the rest of your life.

MH: Oh, stop giving me clues. I want your identity to be a surprise. Besides, if I were rich, I would have to change my name to Eccentric Hatty.

The mask gives a final 'twang' as it loses the last of its elasticity. The front piece is now only being held in position by MH's hand. KW stares deperately though the eyeholes which are now barely in place.

KW: It's not too late. You haven't seen my face yet. You could still pull the mask back on. Pleeeeeeease!

MH: [hissing] I want you to remember this moment for the rest of your miserable life.

MH finally pulls away the limp mask to reveal...

MH: Billionairess Bliss Payne! You weren't lying about being rich.

Bliss/KW: Noooooooooooooooo! [lots of weeping and wailing]

MH: You know, I've always wanted to know what a billionairess's pussy looks like

MH pulls down KW's tights, leaving her fully exposed. She then picks up the costume.

MH: Ooh, time for cosplay.

Bliss/KW looks on in horror as MH herself strips and dons the Knightwoman costume.

MH: How do I look? Like a billion dollars?

Bliss/KW: You'll never get away with this.

At that moment, a female cop bursts in and aims her gun at the disguised MH.

Cop: FREEZE! We had a tip-off you were in the area, Knightwoman. We all hoped you would snap out of the Seductress's spell but this proves you've turned evil. We can't let you get away with kidnapping Bliss Payne.

MH: I'm not Knightwoman, SHE IS! [points at Bliss/KW]

Cop: Don't be ridiculous! Why would a billionairess playgirl dress up in a costume and hang around Grime Alley?

Bliss/KW: Ew, grime. [feigning disgust]

MH: For revenge, DUH! Her parents were murdered around here. Everyone knows that!

Cop: Bliss is the victim, not the criminal!

The cop and Bliss/KW exchange a glance. They're definitely going to screw as soon as MH is out of the way. Right on cue, MH then lunges at the cop who shoots her dead. The cop leans over MH's limp corpse and pulls back the Knightwoman mask (from the eyeholes) to reveal MH's face.

Cop: Can't say that I recognize her. [looks over to Bliss/KW] I trust we can rely on your discretion, Miss Payne? The city would descend into chaos if anyone discovered Knightwoman died as a villain.

Bliss/KW: Of course, officer.

Cop: There have been other Knightwomen before this deranged woman. Let's pray that a new Knightwoman can step forward and give hope to this city.

Bliss/KW: I'm sure someone will. [hint, hint]

The cop strips and they start screwing with strap-ons or something. I don't know. Whatever.

This needs to be made into its own video, awesome stuff!
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I agree about the script, it's pretty damn awesome. Just so long as the mask goes off backwards. :)

Please please MH if you can find a way to do the backwards unmasking thing with KW do as it's been so long that we've seen the bottom up and over thing, it's time for a change! A nice slow deliberate thing with the unmasking the entire focus and the heroine fully aware of it happening.

Heroine Addict, with regard to your unmasking agenda I obviously only like the last one. My feeling is that I would be cheated if I don't actually see the unmasking. I've seen a few reasonably good unmaskings but I'm still waiting for that true solid brilliant one such as has been discussed in this. I strongly approve of the long teasing unmasking and theft of costume.

I don't mind orgasm, nudity sex and stuff just so long as I get what I want from it. :P

Also on a side note, isn't Emily just super gorgeous? It's really great that she is kind enough to spend her time providing us with these delightful erotic thrills.

I like also the scenario in which the police arrest kw despite her being on their side in effect. She's still a vigilante and outside the law. So despite her efforts of trying to do good around the city etc the very people she's been trying to help in effect betray her. It would be even better if perhaps this also enabled the villain to get away.
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One thing though guys, let's not forget that we're not paying for a custom video here, merely making suggestions on what we'd like to see. MH is a businessman after all and doesn't make these videos for fun....well, I take that back :D but the primary reason is to make a profit in selling them. Although I'm sure quite a few of us would love to see a video like this, it has to have the potential to recoup all the video expenses (model fees etc) and then sell as many copies as it takes to first break even and then make a profit. If it starts getting hyper-specialist, it might narrow the broadstream interest, somewhat defeating the object of making the video.

NOT THAT ANYONE HAS but let's not demand stuff or get too disappointed if it either doesn't happen or doesn't turn out exactly like we'd individually hoped :)
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Indeed. If I could just see one good clear shot which starts with Knightwoman/Emily masked and ends with her exposed, I would be very happy indeed. Whether the mask is pulled, peeled, ripped or rolled off is down to what would work best for Mighty Hypnotic and Emily who are, after all, the industry professionals.

It's great that Mighty Hypnotic is giving the idea of unmasking Knightwoman/Emily his consideration, regardless of whether he actually goes ahead with it and uses any (or none) of our suggestions.
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You're right Heroine Addict, the KW mask probably wouldn't be good for a accidental unmasking without ruining it.

Accidental unmasking peril would be better suited for Robyn since she only wears a domino mask. A Robyn "mask slip" situation would be incredibly hot with Jade Indica wearing the classic Robyn costume from "Catgrrl vs Robyn" and that really tiny elastic domino mask.
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I very much like the idea of the mask being pulled back from the top as suggested by Unmaskee. The only drawback is that the moment the unmasker gets a grip on the top of the mask, the 'domino' eye section would ride up almost instantly. There are points in the current videos when Knightwoman is writhing around with her head tilted back and she would pretty much be exposed if only the mask would ride up an inch or two. (It never does. :cry: )

Perhaps the solution to stretch out a pulled back unmasking is to go down the Barnum (something for everyone) route and have the villainess toy with various options?

"You know, Knightwoman, I could just pull this silly little mask all the way off."

The villainess grabs a fistful of spandex from around KW's neck and stretches it wistfully, first pulling it down to take a peek at KW's throat and then hitching it up to reveal her entire neck. After a few minutes of sadistic toying during which KW's ears and hair are briefly exposed and the mask nearly comes off several times, the villainess surprisingly gives in to Knightwoman's pleading and puts the disguise back in place.

"Fair enough, Knightwoman. You make a good point. The mask stays on."

The villainess gives the mask a few gentle tweaks to make sure it's on straight. She walks away, leaving KW sighing and panting in relief. Then she comes straight back.

"I'm sorry, Knightwoman. I can't let people think that I've gone soft."

A final heartbreaking "Nooooooooo!" from KW as the villainess grabs the mask from the top and pulls it back as slowly as possible. :-D

djhooker85 wrote:You're right Heroine Addict, the KW mask probably wouldn't be good for a accidental unmasking without ruining it.

Accidental unmasking peril would be better suited for Robyn since she only wears a domino mask. A Robyn "mask slip" situation would be incredibly hot with Jade Indica wearing the classic Robyn costume from "Catgrrl vs Robyn" and that really tiny elastic domino mask.
The new rigid Knightgirl mask which is very much like the Yvonne Craig Batgirl mask, however, would be ideal for an accidental unmasking.
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The above scenario certainly sounds rather good HA. I also think if you're careful with the unmasking it should work, perhaps if the villainess removes it either by the ears or with hand flat on top of the head of KW it might prevent too much being revealed at once.

It would be lovely having both KG and KW unmasked together. Though maybe one on one is better for focus.
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Strangely enough, I have a dream scenario in which KW and KG are unmasked (separately) and left tied up together. The villainess leaves the scene and takes the masks with her, but she leaves the rest of the costumes.

When they manage to free themselves, KW and KG know they must pursue the villainess, but they can't risk going out into the city without their masks. KW must take off her tights and split them in two so the heroines can wear each leg as a makeshift mask.

"We don't know for sure that Mad Hatty has told anyone who we are yet, Knightgirl. I would rather go out looking like a bare-legged bank robber than expose my own identity needlessly."
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Then Hatty, leads them to a bank, KW & KG enter, Hatty pulls a fast one and the two stocking masked girls are assumed to be bank robbers. They get locked in the vault but not before Hatty tosses in their masks and asks whether they would prefer to be arrested with their stocking or superheroine masks on then exits but not before setting off the alarm...
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Would you end it there with a cliffhanger or perhaps have the police unmasking (of the superheroine masks) as the cliffhanger?

If it's the latter, the next chapter could begin with an anmesia spraying of the cops and a daring escape. BW and BG could have more adventures, but with the knowledge there's a villainess at large who knows their secret identities...

Maybe blackmail could be used to coerce our heroines to do all sorts of villainy?
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Everyone loves a cliffhanger :)

But if it were a continuing adventures type thing then maybe have the Police turn up, guns pointed/hands up, they then handcuff the girls, we get a nice change of pace and a no messing around style unmasking where the lead-cop tells his lackies 'now take of their masks and see who they really are'. The girls look at each other in panic as their utility belts have already been removed along with the amnesia spray and the cop also demands a subordinate to take a photo of the unmasked girls and send it via 3G internet on the phone to the central Police database. DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA very stressed looking KW/KG. The picture is taken but the photographer realises there is NO PHONE SIGNAL in the reinforced vault! The lead cop tells him not to worry as they're leaving as soon as the wagon turns up and it'll send then.

Perhaps after that, good fortune smiles on the girls, they are seated next to their belts, one of them manages to get to the knockout/amnesia spray and tsssssssss, they are able to escape the cuffs/find the key, grab the phone their unmasked picture was taken on a delete it, keeping their identities safe again.

Or so they thought...

Hatty, in her infinite villainess wisdom hid a secret recording transmitting camera in the vault with this entire episode recorded for prosperity. When KW/KG receive a few unfortunate stills from the video with a demand for their co-operation in a new venture, or else the video might find it's way into the hands of the Police/fellow villains etc.

But that's another story :D
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Excellent stuff, thelordharry. Victory snatched from the jaws of defeat at the eleventh hour. And then a horrible twist to keep the heroines on their toes.

The great thing about this genre is that literally any peril can be reversed, retconned or rebooted. (Although a true "deus ex machina" should always be a complete surprise.) It doesn't matter whether the hero or heroine is unmasked, crippled or even killed. There's always a way out of the seemingly impossible situation.

There could even be a situation where the full unmasking of KW is actually broadcast on live TV with a couple of reaction shots from shocked viewers who can hardly believe Knightwoman is Bliss Payne. In the next scene, a heroine from the far future (The Legion of Superheroines) announces that her timeline has been altered and the unmasking should never have happened. Her timeline can only exist if Knightwoman is there to save the city on many future occasions. She appears from out of nowhere at the familiar unmasking scene and stops the unmasker at the exact second the mask's 'domino' section is about to budge from KW's eyes.
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What would be people's dream scenarios for a perfect Knightwoman unmasking?
Hogtied on the floor?
Chained against a wall with arms and legs spread?
Tied down and lying on her back?
Bent over a table with her arms spread and tied?
Loose and able to fight (fruitlessly) against the unmasking?

And how much of KW's costume would the villainess leave on?
Full costume intact?
Full costume still on, but pulled open?
Costume in tatters? (Not likely, unless there's an already damaged spare which can be used as a "stunt costume".)
Parts of costume completely removed, leaving maybe just a couple of items on?
Full nude?

My preferences would probably be chained against a wall with arms and legs spread wearing nothing else but the gloves and tights. (Maybe with the tights ripped open or pulled down slightly.) That way, we could see Knightwoman's entire body tense at the imminent unmasking before the camera moves in for a close-up of the mask actually coming off.
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I'm a hogtie man myself. Would just love to see KW, probably in full costume (at least for the beginning) hogtied, lying on her stomach in a really tight hogtie, very definitely with a gag in her mouth as she's teased about the unmasking so she can scream and beg into the gag and then have the gag removed as she's actually unmasked so we can hear what she's got to say as the unveling happens :)
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I'd probably be most keen on full costume. As for restraint, just a simple tied to a chair or perhaps not tied at all and yet somehow unable to fight back. I don't really mind as long as the unmasking is full and clear in the manner that I like.
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Too bad New Phoenix Filmworks was such a poor site. That last video they did with the Nightsider character would have been great for a good unmasking scene. The mask she wore was a spandex cowl that had lenses like a spiderman like mask. It left her true identity completely mysterious (Which seems rare in the superheroine fetish genre. If you are going to where a mask, at least make sure it ACTUALLY conceals your identity.)

Given that the Nightsider cowl was made of a really stretchy spandex material, she would have been perfect for an unmasking that starts by pulling it up at the eyeholes and over her head, in essence unmasking her but leaving the cowl on and the main part flopping behind head.

But alas, I asked Andy why they didn't have a good unmasking scene and the reason was because the model who play Nightsider refused to have her face shown on camera. It's probably the reason why they used such a great identity concealing mask in the first place because lets face it, domino masks ( such as the blue angels masks for example), while sexy, are terrible for hiding ones's secret identity.
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Heroine Addict wrote:What would be people's dream scenarios for a perfect Knightwoman unmasking?
Hogtied on the floor?
Chained against a wall with arms and legs spread?
Tied down and lying on her back?
Bent over a table with her arms spread and tied?
Loose and able to fight (fruitlessly) against the unmasking?

And how much of KW's costume would the villainess leave on?
Full costume intact?
Full costume still on, but pulled open?
Costume in tatters? (Not likely, unless there's an already damaged spare which can be used as a "stunt costume".)
Parts of costume completely removed, leaving maybe just a couple of items on?
Full nude?

My preferences would probably be chained against a wall with arms and legs spread wearing nothing else but the gloves and tights. (Maybe with the tights ripped open or pulled down slightly.) That way, we could see Knightwoman's entire body tense at the imminent unmasking before the camera moves in for a close-up of the mask actually coming off.

I am definitely in the camp of the heroine being loose and able to fight fruitlessly. There is nothing sexier than seeing a superheroine unable to do what she is supposed to be best at -- defending herself and others. I love it when she is weakened to the point where the villainess doesn't even need to restrain her to take away her most precious commodity: her mask. But I totally agree on the costume part (especially the tights ripped open/pulled down slightly, and even possibly the same for the top, torn open with her breast exposed.) Don't get me wrong, I love to see a heroine in bondage in due time. But it's a lot better I think to see her completely overtaken in spite of herself, especially if we can see her body exposed in the wake of her battle with a villainess, leaving only mere hints of the costume -- shreds of the dignity of a once powerful heroine.
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djhooker85 wrote:Too bad New Phoenix Filmworks was such a poor site. That last video they did with the Nightsider character would have been great for a good unmasking scene. The mask she wore was a spandex cowl that had lenses like a spiderman like mask. It left her true identity completely mysterious (Which seems rare in the superheroine fetish genre. If you are going to where a mask, at least make sure it ACTUALLY conceals your identity.)

Given that the Nightsider cowl was made of a really stretchy spandex material, she would have been perfect for an unmasking that starts by pulling it up at the eyeholes and over her head, in essence unmasking her but leaving the cowl on and the main part flopping behind head.

But alas, I asked Andy why they didn't have a good unmasking scene and the reason was because the model who play Nightsider refused to have her face shown on camera. It's probably the reason why they used such a great identity concealing mask in the first place because lets face it, domino masks ( such as the blue angels masks for example), while sexy, are terrible for hiding ones's secret identity.
If I recall correctly, the unmasking of Nightsider was built up as the big highlight of that video. I bet Andy had a lot of disappointed customers when the screen froze for the actual 'unmasking' and they saw nothing more than the still image (of the mask starting to be pulled off) which had been used in promo pics.

Even if the actress didn't want to show her face, that scene could have been done so much better with something like thelordharry's idea for an off-screen unmasking, as discussed earlier in this thread.
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Heroine Addict,

In the story, the still pics were actually used as incriminating evidence that superheroines could easily be captured. The villain essentially tied them up and started taking pics. The promo pics were then edited into the video as part of the story. It was pretty stupid. An off screen unmasking would have been good with Nightsider if the scene faded out and the next scene showed the Nightsider mask on display on a head manequin. Letting us know that Nightsider has been destroyed and the villain kept her mask as a trophy.
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Anything would have been better than the incoherent mess NewPhx released. I honestly wondered whether the project had been abandoned halfway through, leaving the editor to cobble together a narrative from bits and pieces of footage.

At least we know that HypOnlineMedia would deliver an unmasking video with a beginning, a middle and an end, starring gorgeous actresses (who are actually proud to show their lovely faces) and filmed in High-Def at a studio with professional lighting and sound recording.
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Unmaskee wrote:I bought that video back in the day and while the model/actress is nice she's not quite the level of hotness that emily has. The unmasking didn't quite work for me because of the bottom being lifted. I like the idea of the mask staying in place around the neck. I like the Catgrrl unmasking due to it remaing on her body but again it would have been better going from the top rather than bottom. The Catgrrl model is also the kind of looks I really appreciate.

I find some of the 'porn star' looking models a bit of a turn off a lot of the time. Despite them all obviously being porn stars, in effect.

Oh and again it was disappointing for me that KW isn't aware of the unmasking. The heroine needs to understand her utter defeat.

As you say, even if we have to have the neck strap on the bottom of the chin or something, it'll do just so long as the mask slips off the best way possible. In our opinion of course which as everyone knows full well IS THE ONLY CORRECT ONE. /foruminjoke no.5003
An interesting (if annoying) feature of that Hollywood video is that the mask is not removed in a single shot. We see Robyn gripping the neck section and starting to pull it up and then it cuts to shot with the mask halfway-off, as seen in the screenshot posted above. Now, in the later shot, Hollywood's ponytail has already been released at the back.

I therefore deduce that the ponytail was the main reason the mask wasn't removed neatly in one take. A neat full removal might well need the ponytail to be released before the front comes up.

Of course, the suggested pulled-back "hood" removal with the bottom of the mask staying in place would eliminate the ponytail problem. The only question is whether the top of Knightwoman's mask has the elasticity to be stretched that far without ripping or tightening around the neck?

I imagine a great shot of the mask stretched to the limit with its gaping eyes and mouth resembling Edvard Munch's "The Scream". Its fully stretched mouth frames all of KW's exposed and beautiful face as she lets out a scream (within a scream).





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Glad you did anyway. :) It's basically a dream scenario.
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I posted a more general idea for any superheroine being terrorized in a dental surgery. http://superheroineforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=16331 Without contaminating that thread with my Knightwoman Unmasked obsession, here's my outline for “Knightwoman: The Jaws of Defeat”

PROLOGUE

Knightwoman is in the middle of a fight with a street thug.

POW! BIFF! SOCK! CRACK!


Knightwoman: Aaaargh! You broke my tooth, you creep!

While KW is reeling, the thug seizes the opportunity to grab at her mask. KW struggles to break free as her mask loosens and slides out of place slightly. We see tantalizing glimpses of her face underneath (but not enough for the thug to ID her) before she tries to pull the mask back down. She is now in a disheveled state with a few loose strands of hair from the top of her head now fallen in front of her face and clearly visible through the mask's eyeholes.

Thug: Let's see who's behind the mask!

Knightwoman: Let go! I can't let scum like you do this to me!

Thug: Scum? You won't be a high and mighty superheroine anymore when I've seen your face. [gives the mask a determined tug] Just a little bit more...

The once-taut spandex disguise is now losing integrity as the thug's grip tightens. Just as the eyeholes are beginning to slide up and KW's identity is about to be fully exposed... WHACK! She somehow manages to knock the thug unconscious at the very last second.

Knightwoman: [smugly] I will never allow my secret identity to be compromised! [she sweeps aside her stray hairs from under the loosened mask, pulls the disguise back into place and then rubs the side of her mouth] Now to get that tooth fixed...

TITLE SEQUENCE

SCENE 1

A brief montage of Knightwoman sat cross-legged in a Dentist's waiting room reading old magazines. A clock hangs on the wall behind her. We see its hands move ahead 15 minutes with each shot of the montage. The last shot shows it at 14:30 (tooth hurty).


Receptionist's voice: [off-screen] The Dentist will see you now.

Knightwoman tells the Dentist that Wonder Star recommended the "exclusive Dentist to the superheroine community". She then tells the story of her breaking the tooth in a fight. After a brief examination of KW's mouth, the Dentist explains that she will need to be sedated for the treatment. KW eyes the Dentist's suspiciously unorthodox set of tools including a power drill and a pair of pliers.

Knightwoman: Are you sure you know what you're doing?

The Dentist: Trust me, I'm a Doctor!

KW sits back in the chair. The Dentist puts a plastic mask over her nose and mouth for few seconds as she breathes in the sedative. KW starts to relax.

The Dentist: Now dear, it's scientific fact that spandex harbors more bacteria than any other fabric. Regulations state that I'm going to have to remove all spandex from around the workstation.

Knightwoman: [becoming groggy] No, that's not right. That's dumb!

The Dentist: Regulations often are, dear. I spend my whole day second-guessing myself, asking "Is it safe? Is it safe?"

Knightwoman: Something's not right. What are you doing to meeeeee?

Sex scene with TD pressing a vibrator against KW's spandex mound. She moans in ecstasy. KW is aware of what's happening, but she's too weak and tired to fight and is now succumbing to the base pleasure the vibrator is giving her. TD slips the vibrator into KW's hands and she hungrily accepts it and presses it against herself. TD's hands are now free for more urgent matters.

The Dentist: Time to take away the horrible, filthy spandex. Got to keep my surgery nice and hygienic.

As KW continues to writhe and squirm with bittersweet pleasure in the chair, TD grips her mask from the bottom and begins to slowly peel it off. KW lets out pathetic, despondent moans and sighs as we see the spandex stretched and teased from her face. TD reaches around the back of the heroine's head and releases her hair from its ponytail. KW's neck and the entire bottom half of her head are now completely exposed.

Knightwoman: [feebly protesting while still compelled to pleasure herself] Please... stop... now...

TD peels the mask a little more and now has a clear view of KW's eyes and forehead.

The Dentist: Billionairess Bliss Payne! Ha! You could damn well afford to pay for real dental treatment.

The mask gives a satisfying snapping noise as it finally comes off completely. We see a brief shot of it discarded on the floor as TD laughs maniacally.

Knightwoman / Bliss Payne: [breathlessly] This... can't... be... happening!

TD then gradually peels off each remaining part of KW's costume, leaving the tights until last. The sex scene concludes with KW's drugged and now fully-naked alter-ego Bliss Payne bringing herself to a magnificent climax.

Then we cut back-and-forth between shots of naked Bliss Payne and a fully-clothed unconscious Knightwoman twitching in the Dentist's chair. Fortunately for KW, the last few minutes never happened...

SCENE 2

Knightwoman awakens and instantly reaches for her face. She is reassured to find the mask is still there. But all is not right...


Knightwoman: My tooth. You haven't fixed my tooth.

The Dentist: You were twitching too much, dear. It wouldn't have been safe to perform the surgery. I'm going to have to tie you down to stop you fighting me in your sleep.

Knightwoman: [warily] Okaaay.

Tied tightly, KW is now incapacitated and fully conscious.

Knightwoman: Don't I get the gas this time?

The Dentist: I'm afraid I won't be performing your surgery today, Knightwoman. You see, I'm not really that fool who gives confidential dental treatment to the superheroine community. [whispers coyly] I'm not even a real Dentist!

Knightwoman: No! No! Let me go! You can't do this!

The Dentist: I'm afraid I can do this, Knightwoman. Well, "afraid" is just a figure of speech; I'm not really afraid at all. You, on the other hand, should be terrified right now.

KW pleads and bargains, offering TD millions of dollars to stop right away. Ignoring the pleading, TD starts playing with KW's spandex costume. The top of the leotard is pulled apart to release KW's amazing breasts and the spandex crotch is pulled aside to reveal the nylon gusset of her tights barely hiding her pussy. TD then grips the waistband of the tights and pulls them down as far as they will go with the center suspended by the crotch of the leotard.

Sex scene with a vibrator used on the bound Knightwoman.


The Dentist: [stroking KW's mask] Aw, you're almost completely exposed. Just one more thing to do...

Still pressing the vibrator against KW with one hand, TD uses the other hand to give the helpless heroine's mask a few playful tugs. It doesn't come off (yet) but we see tiny glimpses of what lies beneath before the spandex snaps back into place.

Knightwoman: Please, noooooooooooo! It... can't... end... like... this! [orgasm] Oh, fu... Oh, fuck! Yesssssss! [further resistance] No... Nooooooooooooo! Not... my... mask!

The Dentist: You superheroines are so indecisive. [pulls away the vibrator from KW's crotch and gives it a cheeky sniff] Seeing as you've just climaxed all over my lovely chair and your dizzy little head is confused from all that pleasure, I'd better decide for you. Now let's get you out of that silly mask...

TD grips the top of the mask and gently pulls it back like a hood. KW winces as she hears the squeak of the spandex stretching and loosening. Inch by inch, the now useless disguise rides up to reveal the beautiful face of...

The Dentist: Billionairess Bliss Payne! Ha! You could damn well afford to pay for real dental treatment.

KW sighs at the familiar dialog as her worst nightmare finally comes true. She now sits there exhausted with her mask and costume still technically half-on but with all the essential parts hanging half-off her head and body to expose her most secret areas. Still panting from the massive orgasm and the humiliating unmasking, KW is a spent force.

Or is she?

Close-up on KW's hand as she manages to free it from the ropes and reach into her utility belt. She grabs her trusty amnesia spray and gives the Dentist a faceful of memory loss.

Knightwoman frees herself and pulls her mask and costume back into place. She has won, but her victory comes with a twist:


Knightwoman: Damn it! I still haven't got my tooth fixed!

But she's blissfully unaware that her tooth is the least of her problems. We then see a close-up of a small CCTV camera in the corner of the room.

Leaving TD lying unconscious, KW steps out into the reception area. The Receptionist's desk is vacant. On it rests a photo of KW in her recent state of undress with the slogan "MASK UP, TIGHTS DOWN. WHAT A PAYNE!" scrawled in blood-red ink.


THE END?



So we would have a Knightwoman adventure with the following identity crises:
#1 Partial/near-unmasking by the street thug.
#2 Unmasking by the Dentist in KW's dream.
#3 Unmasking by the Dentist in reality.
#4 Photographic evidence that #3 was witnessed by person(s) unknown.
"A brass unicorn has been catapulted across a London street and impaled an eminent surgeon. Words fail me, gentlemen."
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