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This is part one of a three part story. After this story I will be open to suggestions on a new one. That is if anyone wants to read more of my stories!
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The Batgirl - Part One

The whining engine of the sports bike grew louder as the rider twisted the accelerator back to its limits. Batgirl held on tight as the bike jerked into full speed; her cap flapped in the wind. Streaking down the night highway, the bike was in hot pursuit of a beat up old mustang. Batgirl looked in disbelief as the mustang jumped off road into the grassy divider. It slowed spinning the wheel around changing direction. She knew there would be little time to keep up with the criminals, as her current speed to catch them was well beyond a reasonable speed to reverse course; she had to act fast.

"These guys just won't give up!" She said reaching back for an item on her yellow utility belt.

Her arm raised up wielding a grappling hook gun aimed at the mustang. With one squeeze of the trigger a dart shot from the gun, tethered to a think steal braded cable. It pierced the truck of the mustang dead center. Letting go of the bike, Batgirl was pulled into the air, her cape opening up into rigid wings. She spun over once as she changed direction facing the criminal's car. She shook her head, allowing her blonde locks of hair to fall away from her face. With one hand on the grappling gun, she pressed a button on her belt and the motorcycle began to drive itself slowing down and entering the grassy divide.

The wind rushed past her face as the mustang picked up speed. She felt a rush run over her body, the night had become much more exciting than she could have ever hoped. That was until the shooting began. Hanging out of the back passenger door, a masked man aimed his pistol at her firing round after round. The bullets mostly were well beyond her general area, though she heard a few rip through her cape. The combination of her dark black suit, and the weaving in and out of traffic prevented the masked man from getting an accurate shot.

Options shot through Batgirls head. Batarang? No, moving too quickly. Flash round? No that would blind other drivers and make a real mess of things. Dart gun? She looked down to her belt. She had forgot to equip it. Just then another bullet pierced her cape.

"Come on Batgirl, THINK!" she said looking down at the masked man.

Focused Sonic Emitter (F.S.E.). Of course! She reached down with her free hand and pulled out the small black pistol like device; its tip glowing blue. She had to aim it perfectly at the masked gun man, else it would have no effect at all. She aimed, closing one eye looking over the barrel. She held her breath and pulled the trigger. Just then the mustang shot left changing lanes. The pistol did not make a sound, yet she knew it had done something. The change in direction repositioned her aim into the car just behind the mustang. The passenger winced and covered his ears before passing out in his seat.

Batgirl clenched her teeth. Guilt consumed her for only a moment, before another bullet shot passed her.

"Alright pal, I have had just about enough of you." She said aiming the F.S.E. once more.

She pulled the trigger and the gunman's eyes clamped shut as he let go of the gun and held his ears. The fire arm hit the road tumbling and sliding under cars, then out of sight. A pair of hands reached out and pulled the unconscious thug back into the vehicle.

Batgirl did not want to chance another gunman. She reached forward and pressed the retract button on the side of the grappling gun. As both her and the mustang barreled down the highway, Batgirl's distance with the mustang closed in. As she reached the end of the line she placed her black boots on the mustangs bumper. Suddenly the mustang slammed the breaks to avoid hitting a car in its path. Batgirl shot forward slamming into the back glass of the mustang. Her eyes only saw darkness as her face pressed tight against the tinted window. Both of her arms shot out gripping the frame as tight as she could. It only took moments for the driver to respond to her new position. The mustang began to swerve left and right, carelessly clipping cars alongside it.

Batgirl held on with all of her might. Both the quick direction changes and forceful impacts were tossing her body back and forth like a rag doll. She felt her grip slipping. Was this it? Was she going to fall to her death, while a dozen cars battered her into an unrecognizable state? Her thoughts raced as she tried to focus on a way out of this predicament. Her legs dangled in the wind as she fought to bring them back to the vehicles trunk.

She looked up as another masked man emerged from the backseat of the mustang. The ski masked covered all but his eyes and his mouth, which had curled into a grin. The thug aimed a gun at Batgirl. She looked at him, a sudden feeling of disappointment fell over her. She was going to die at the hands of a few petty bank robbers and soon the whole world would know who she really was. A once simple college student who had became the persona of justice and peace. Soon her friends would gather, stunned to know that Sarah Row, their beloved social butter fly, was none other than the Batgirl they had read about in the papers. She would have disappointed everyone.

A familiar whining sound broke the moment. Her bike! Both her and the gunman looked to the bike, as it appeared just behind the mustang. It had followed her tracking signal back to her location just as it was programmed to do in the event of a separation. She could not praise Wayne enough for his genius. Quickly she focused all of her effort on bringing her legs to the bumper of the car. Feeling her boots make contact with the hard surface, she pushed back leaping into the air expanding her cape once more. The gunman looked in disbelief as she drifted behind them.

The bike adjusted its speed keeping under her. She collapsed her cape falling onto the cushioned seat of the bike. Her arms shot forward reclaiming control of the handle bars and rippling back on the accelerator.

"I love you bike, you know that right?" She said with a sigh of relief. The bike did not respond.

She could just barely see the mustang up ahead now; Its one broken tail light was a blessing in the sea of lights ahead of her. She moved in and out of the cars and gained on the mustang once more. The chase had to come to an end. Too many lives were at stake and she could not risk the gunman firing though civilians at her. Her thumb moved over a red switch on the left handgrip. Flicking it, a small barrel shot out of the front of the bike. She waited for a clear shot, before launching the tracking device. Ridding in between traffic she saw the mustang change lanes once more. She fired the tracker. The silver round device hit the pumper and tiny metal arms sprung out latching to the metal.

Now all she had to do wait. They had to stop sometime and she would be waiting for them.


The mustang pulled into the dark garage slowly, its headlights off. Four masked men stepped from the vehicle. One man looked dazed, holding his head with one hand. Another masked man approached him.

"You alright Charlie?"

"I think so," Charlie replied. "What the hell was that thing?"

A gruff voice spoke, "What a pussy, sees da bat... shoots at her... then passes out."

"I didn't pass out Mac!" yelled Charlie, causing his head to throb more.

Mac sniffed hard, "Yeah? Well wha'd ya call it then?" He slammed his hand down on the hood of the car. The other thugs jumped.

"She used something," Charlie said. "I felt a loud pop in my ears then everything went black."

"Load'ah shit!" Mac replied, then pushed past Charlie to the trunk of the car. Charlie didn't reply and leaned against the car door, still holding his head.

"What now boss?" Another thug said.

Mac popped the trunk, "Tonight we will wait it out in dis warehouse. We got lucky escape'n da bat." He looked down into the trunk at 4 black bags.

"And tomorrow boss?" The forth thug asked.

"Tomorrow we get da hell out of dis shit hole and split da money. Charlie here," Mac glared at Charlie. "Has been nice enough to split his share wid us. To say sorry for his fuck up or what have ya's."

Charlie sat up quickly from the car, "Com'on Boss! That ain't fair now. I helped out just as much-"

"You damn near got us caught! Dat's what ya did!" Shouted Mac and Charlie looked down at the floor. "Now you's guys close dat door, and for fuck's sake will someone get da lights?"

Mac pulled the bags from the trunk of the car tossing them on the floor. He instructed the men to grab the bags and follow him as he walked deeper into the warehouse.

Batgirl landed quietly on the rooftop. Crouched down she pulled a small LCD screen from her belt. Looking down at the display she saw a green dot blinking at its center. The car had stopped here, in the most awful of Gotham's industrial sectors. Much of the dilapidated buildings were scheduled to be torn down, that was if the governor would ever sign the final documents. How terrible it would be that criminals would have fewer hiding places, she thought to herself. She moved slowly along the warehouse rooftop towards the roof hatch. She reached out and gave the hatch a tug. It didn't budge.

"Come one Batgirl, you didn't think it was going to be that easy did you?" She said to herself.

She reached back and pulled from her belt a small c-clamp like device. Placing its small flat feet between the hatch and the frame she began to crank on a handle. The clamp expanded, prying the hatch away from the frame. A loud popping sound came from the hatch and Batgirl cringed. She would not have the element of surprise making a ton of noise. She put the device away and slowly opened the creaking hatch.

A single ladder descended down into the dark room below. She stepped into the opening, her hands met the ladder, then began to climb down its length. The room had a foul smell to it, like dust mixed with damp molding towels. She moved one gloved hand up to her nose to deaden the stench. Why would anyone, even a criminal, hide in such a filthy place?

The room had little light, except a few cracks in dusty windows that let the moon rays cast in. The ground below her feet cracked and creaked as she took careful steps. The last thing she wanted was to fall through the floor and land, God knows where. At the far side of the room she saw another door, just barley lit by a small bulb that hung over it. She made her way to the door and reached for the handle. Anything could be on the other side. She took a deep breath in preparation. With a twist of the wrist the door popped open and light streamed in from its separation. She cautiously looked inside. It was a hallway, lit with overhead florescent lights. It ran down a short ways where it met a turn containing a staircase.

Batgirl moved slowly down the hall, her hand placed on a batarang just in case a quick response was needed. She reached the hall's end and rolled her head around the corner looking down the stairs. Not a thug in sight. She moved down the steps, which lead to yet another turn with more stairs. She kept close to the wall as she edged along it.

She finally reached the end of the final stair case which lead to another door. As she approached the door she heard muffled sounds coming from the other side. It sounded like voices mixed with the clanging of metal. She reached for the door knob. Locked.

"Well that figures." She said grumpily.

She looked down at the door knob. Fortunately for her, the installer put it on backwards leaving the screws facing her side. Batgirl pulled out a small screwdriver and began undoing the screws, carefully placing them in the palm of her hand. She slowly pulled the handle away from the door and she heard a clank on the other side. The other half of the door knob had fallen in. She quickly placed her ear to the door. The muffled voices were still maintaining their steady sound. Batgirl let out a breath.

Her finger entered the door knobs slot, and pulled back on the door mechanism. A soft click came from the latch as she slowly pulled the door open. Inside she saw it lead to a grated metal walkway, which wrapped around much of the giant warehouse. Below the walkway was the warehouse floor itself, full of boxes of various sizes. She took a step out onto the grated floor, testing its stability. It protested her pressure well enough, so she stepped out onto it. Looking over the railing she saw 3 figures down below. It was the men she had been chasing earlier on the highway, except now they had all of their masks pull up away from their faces.

She eyed them carefully sizing them up. Two of them looked to be about five-foot-eight, close her own height. They wore black hooded sweatshirts with the hoods down.The third towered over the other two, looking to be at least six-foot-four. He was much larger than the other men in general, wearing a black sleeveless shirt showing off his toned arms which were covered in tattoos.

Batgirl looked around the area looking for the fourth man. She knew there had been four when she caught chase of them earlier. Maybe the one she hit with the F.S.E. was still out cold? She felt a ting of guilt run over her. She had hoped it didn't kill the man somehow. She was not out for blood, but to catch bad guys and lock them up. She remembered Wayne reassuring her that it would only render its victims unconscious, and that put her thoughts at ease.

She moved along the grate quietly getting closer to her targets. There were only three of them; she had taken on as many as six before. The two smaller men would not be a problem for her, however she felt the big guy would put up more of a fight. Though the chase had been exciting, she could not help but think how nice it would be to be back at home relaxing in bed. She had a final tomorrow and tonight's "quick" patrol of the town hand turned into anything but simple.

Batgirl reached back into her belt and pulled out a small marble like white capsule. She perched on the railing gazing down at the men, then tossed the capsule down at their feet. It shattered and a think white smoke rose up from the ground. She leaped down towards them. The men coughed and shuffled their feet trying to escape the smoke. Batgirl entered the foggy area with a sharp kick into one of the smaller men's side. He flew back landing on the ground with a thud.

The smoke began to fade and she could see the two other men's forms in its sheets. The smaller shadow came closer to her and she quickly sent out a right hook connecting with the man's jaw. He spun around staggering away from her. The last form came forward, giant and towering. It's arms were open wide as it closed in on her. She ducked as the two muscular arms slammed together.

Batgirl moved quickly around the man kicking the back of one of his legs. The thug knelt down to his knees and she hit him across his head as hard as she could. It was like hitting a three hundred pound punching bag, it moved a little, but didn't fall. The man swung his arm around to hit her and she swiftly did a back hand spring away. The smoke was clear now and all three men turned to face her. One moved to her left and picked up a loose wooden plank off a pallet. Another moved to her right putting his hands up in combat position and the giant stepped front and center, his hands clenched in tight fists, face scrunched into a look of furry.

The two men on her sides came at her first. The one holding the wood plank swung it at her head, which she easily ducked. The second charged in with a knee and she stopped it by forcing both palms down onto its path. She whipped her head forward crashing the hard rubber of her mask into his mouth. Blood shot out from his face as he stumbled back. The wood plank came back for another assault and she blocked it with the padded side of her elbow length gloves. The board make a cracking sound on contact. She reached down to his wrist with the hand she blocked with and pulled the thug into a powerful knee that dropped him gasping for air on the floor.

She shot a look over to the giant who had just about reached her. His glare was of pure rage, arms open wide. Was he really going to try and grab her again, she thought. Hadn't he learned his lesson the last time?

Batgirl lunged forward, jumped and tucked into a roll shooting past the massive thug. She tumbled onto her feet and spun to face the three. One spit blood from his mouth, the other rose to his feet, while the giant turned to face her. She reached back for the F.S.E. and pulled it forward aiming at the three men.

"Okay, funs over boys. It's time for you to all come quietly." She said.

"Look boss, she has a little gun." one thug said laughing at Batgirl.

"What are ya going to do with dat darl'n?" Mac, the giant said. "You gunna to blow bubbles out of it?" All the men burst into laughter.

Batgirls face furrowed. Why did criminals never take her gadgets seriously? She aimed it at the thug holding the wooden plank and pulled the trigger. He dropped the plank instantly and covered his ears before slumping to the ground.

"Something like that." Batgirl said with a grin.

"Holly shit!" Said Mac raising his hands up non aggressively. "Now take it easy. No need to go switching folks off like dat now..."

"Now," She began, a hint of victory in her voice. "On your knees, both of you." They complied.

"Whatever ya say darl'n. We was just messing around with ya ya know?" He lied, with a smile.

"Right," She said, in disbelief. "Now where is the fourth-"

Just then Batgirl felt something hard hit her right in the middle of her back. She fell forward to her hands and knees, the F.S.E. slid out of her grip and across the floor over to the giant.

"I got her boss!" Charlie shouted from behind her. "I got her real good!"

Batgirl shot a glance over her shoulder at the fourth thug, who was now looking over at Mac with a smile. He held a led pipe in his hand, which she knew was the object that he just assaulted her with. She drew back a knee and kicked Charlie right in the shin hard and quick. He let out a yell and fell onto his back holding his shin.

She jumped to her feet, her back ached with pain. The three men still stood in front of her, but now Mac had the F.S.E. and it was aimed right at her.

"It's time to go to sleep darl'n," Mac said just before he pulled the trigger.
Batgirl felt her ears pop. The room began to spin as she fell to her knees and everything went black.
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Thank you DrMoninator9, I added more to the story.
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I like the start - very nice!
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The Batgirl - Part Two

Mac held Batgirl's limp body over his shoulder. Her cape hung heavily over his front side, small holes in it from the earlier shootings. Two of his thugs were pushing a large crate over to him. Once they reached Mac's position, Mac carelessly dropped Batgirl onto the crate's top. She met the surface with a thud. She was motionless, laying on top of the crate. Her body mostly fit, though her long legs dangled at the knee.

"Oh man," One thug said, panic in his voice. "we are in deep shit this time. It was supposed to be simple man. Get the money, get out!"

"Would ya quit ya damn blabber'n!" Mac yelled.

The thugs looked at him. Mac didn't take his eyes off the masked heroine. His gaze ran over her body like the pages of in book.

"What should we do with her boss?" Charlie asked.

Mac didn't respond right away. He could not take his eyes off Batgirl. He finally said, "Get some rope."

The thugs walked off looking around the warehouse for anything that could be used as a rope. Mac stayed behind still looking at Batgirls curvy figure. Through the suit Mac imagined she had quite the figure. She was strong, athletic, and very quick. Her suit hid all of her flesh except for the small opening over her mouth which shown soft pink lips.

Mac placed one giant hand on Batgirls thigh and gave it a nice squeeze. The rubber padding was think, but it gave way nicely under his grip. Her thigh was firm and muscular just as he expected. He let his hand wander up her leg farther, the cold black material rubbed his palm. Up past her belt the suit became very hard. He pressed against it and it gave very little. It must have been some sort of body armor to protect against bullets or knives.

Protruding from the chest plate of the armor, two lumps were visible. Mac hoped they were not false advertising as they too were very hard to his hands touch. His hand made its way to her face, which he gripped in his large fingers. At last something warm and soft. She was a woman under the armor after all. His finger moved up to her mask touching its rim. He wanted to see the face of this heroine that had given the local gangs such a hard time. He began to life it when he heard his men return.

"Boss! We found some cables! That work?"

"Yeah," Mac said grumpily. "Bring it here and tie up her legs and writs wood'ya?"

The men did as they were told, tying Batgirls legs together tight. They moved to her hands stretching them up over her head and wrapping them tight. Mac moved over to Charlie and jerked the cable out of his hand.

"you's boys don't know nothin bout tying any one up!" Mac said.

He took the cable and tied it around the twine binding Batgirls wrists, then brought to the crate's base. The crate had slats at its bottom and Mac used them to secure the line. He stood back up.

"Do dat to her feets too!" Mac commanded.

The thugs obeyed him pulling her legs down nice and tight. Batgirl was now pinned to the crate like a string to a guitar.

"Nice boss, she won't be getting out of that any time soon," Charlie said. "Now we don't have to worry about her following us when we make a break for it!"

"No, we sure wont." Mac said coldly.

"So where we heading boss? Know any other hiding places for the night?"

"We ain't leaving tonight." Mac replied.

"But boss, the bat-"

"What about da bat?! She is all tied up! We leave now and dem cops will see us for sure." Mac reached back and slapped Charlie upside his head. "Ya fuck'n idiot. Who's runnin dis crew, me or you's?"

Charlie looked to the floor, "You boss."

"Now give me yo blade and you's guys to wait in da fuck'n car!" Mac commanded.

Charlie handed Mac his long hunting blade, "Boss you ain't gunna-"

"Don't ya worry what I ain't or is gunna do!" Mac said. "Now get!"

With that the men took one last look at Batgirl and walked off into the depths of the warehouse.

Mac ran the blade of the knife up Batgirl's chest plate. He could not decide where to begin. Should he pull off her mask and see what lied beneath? Or should he crack her body armor off and see if the full chest plate had full breasts to go along with it.

Batgirl was still completely motionless. Mac wondered how long that little "ray gun" knocked a person out for. Charlie was out the whole ride back, but Charlie was a wimp in Mac's eyes. Batgirl was tough, courageous, and most of the time dangerous to come in contact with. That only made this moment all the more exciting for Mac.

Mac started with her belt. He pressed down on a small button at its top and the yellow clip popped open. She would not be needing any more gadgets from this utility belt any longer. He dropped it to the floor beside him. His two large hands gripped her waist line, nearly covering it completely. His thumbs pressed against the hard armor across her stomach. How the heck did she get into this skin tight suit, he wondered. His fingers felt a seam at the back of her suit. He dug them into the crease and it fought the intrusion well. Mac did not have much patients when things got in his way. His hands gripped tight and he pulled at the fabric until he heard it pop. Mac's fingers probed once more and this time they felt warm soft flesh. Batgirl was not at all a demon or some sort of evil spirit as some made her out to be. She was a woman in a suit. A woman in a bat costume who looked for men like him every night.

Mac hooked both fingers on to either side of the suit's back opening and tugged at it. Batgirl's lifeless body arched off the table as the suit ripped and popped in protest. The back of the suit had opened half way up her spine when Mac stopped. It was now loose enough for him to stretch the material out to her sides. He took the knife and tapped it against the hard plate on her stomach and it resisted the sharp tip. There was no way he was cutting through it.

He ran his hand down the plate feeling for an edge. The hard material stopped just below her belt line. His hand was now very close to her crotch and it sent shivers of excitement up his spine. The edge of his knife met the loose rubber at her side and he began to cut at it, being careful not to slice through her delicate skin. The hunting knife was sharp enough to cut through the bones of animals, so the only resistance the suit gave was that of Mac's own strength and force; witch was that of an ox. He carved away at the suit, past her hip, across her belt line, past her other hip, and then the blade swung free.

The armor was lifted up as Mac slide one hand underneath it. He could feel Batgirl's defined abs as his rough hands slid over them. The suit was still tight on her body, but he could now infiltrate its design. He pawed at her flesh, it was the softest flesh he has ever felt on a woman. Silky and without blemish, Batgirl's body was that of an angel.

Mac could wait no longer, he had to get this armor off his prize. He pulled at the neck of her suit, which was tight, but not as thick as the rest of the costume. He took the knife and made a small slit at its opening and set the blade aside. He didn't want to risk slitting her throat while he stripped her suit way. The material protested, but tore with his tugs. He pulled at the suits seams fighting with the body armor. Finally the battle was over, snapping a few strands of rubber way the chest plate was now free.

The armor rose off her chest and fell to the floor with one thrust from Mac. He looked over her bare torso. Her skin was light, with a soft red tint to it. Her breasts were wrapped up with white cloth. It was not a bra, it looked like padding to protect the lovely orbs while she leaped around in combat. Mac reached for the knife. Slowly the cold steal moved up her chest, its sharp edge facing the ceiling. It cut through the wrappings like butter and they fell to the sides. Two perky round breasts popped up from beneath. They had faint tan lines in the shape of a swim suit top. Her nipples were a soft pink, placed center of the heaving spheres on her chest. They hung in such a way Mac knew right off they were natural.

Mac's two enormous hands wrapped around Batgirl's firm tits. In a normal man's hands they would have been more than a handful, but in Mac's they were just right. He squeezed them tight and they squished and molded to his grip. He felt his pants throbbing. He had to have been the luckiest thug on Gotham's east side. He would have happily traded all the money he looted tonight for this moment, but he didn't have to. He had the money, and now he had Batgirl tied down to a crate topless and unconscious. He could hardly fight his urges.
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I went through and fixed all the typos I found this morning. I was a bit tired when I wrote this lol

Part Three will be out tonight! Hope you have all enjoyed this story so far!

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The Batgirl - Part Three

Batgirl's body showed no sign of resistance when Mac pressed his chapped lips to her soft pink nipple. It was hard and poked at his tongue, which moved in circles. He could taste the salt on her skin and it only excited him more. Mac drew his lips way, still holding both breasts in his hands. Little bits of saliva streamed from his mouth, then broke and fell to her breast. He moved to the other mound and tasted its perky tip as well.

The warehouse was drafty and the cold air only made her nipples stand at attention further. Mac sucked hard on the breast and pulled his mouth away stretching the breast's skin. With a pop, Batgirl's tit fell out of his mouth with a small bounce as it reshaped to its original form. Mac hunched over and his tongue ran along bare skin, through groves of muscle, and to her belly button. His gaze moved downward and met the ripped remains of her suit's lower section. It clung to her mid hip, covering all of her legs and most of her groin.

Batgirl's body rocked up and down on the table as Mac tried to force her suit bottoms down. They were tight and must have been three times as thick as a diving suit. This however only made him more angry and more determined. He started on the left, jerking at the suits material. The rubber fought his might, but in the end it tore like it had earlier. It ripped and popped as it was split down to the top of the boot. Mac moved to the other side destroying the iconic suit thoroughly.

Eyes narrowed, Mac reached for the knife once more. Its handle tight in his grasp, he sawed on the remains of the Bat-suit. The last bit broke free and Mac hurled the fragments in the distance with a triumphant grunt. Batgirl lied there, more exposed than not. Thin white panties were the only barrier between Mac's hunger and her soft mound. He did not need the knife for this job. The pantie's thin straps would be no match for his brute force. His hands met the front of the underwear and in one snap the fabric tor from her nether region. Faint red lines were left behind where the panties straps burned the skin in their sudden departure.

Her pussy was right before Mac's eyes; smooth with no hair. He imagined it had been waxed, rather than shaved as there was no sign of aggravated hair follicles. He would soon find out just how silky soft it actually was. Mac's head dropped down and burred itself in her exposed pussy lips. The sudden smell filled his nostrils as he took in her sent. It had faint musty smell, most likely from sweating in the suit, but it hardly bothered him. His tongue met her precious slit, forcing it open. The taste that greeted him charged his lust even more. Mac was not the brightest thug, so saying he had become an animal hardly resembled change at all; but an animal he had become.

Rolling in small circles, Mac's head worked around her delicate opening; his tongue swooping and twirling inside. With both hands firmly placed on Batgirl's hips and drew her farther into his mouth.

"Mmmmh" Mac groaned into the warm, sticky cavity he ravished.

Even the unconscious body had no choice but to respond. Warm liquid slowly trickled down to his tongue and he sucked it from Batgirl's pussy welcomingly. It was salty, yet sweet. He could not break away from her wet box. Was she his prisoner or had he become hers?

A sound came that brought Mac to a sudden halt. It came from Batgirl's partly open lips.

"Uhhhhhh..." A slow faint moan escaped her mouth.

Was she awake or had it been an involuntary reaction to his lustful act? It did not matter, for all he knew her subconscious was trying to make reason with the situation through a wet dream. Either way Batgirl was showing signs of enjoying his efforts and this was enough for Mac to go even farther.

Mac tugged at the cable restraining her legs, finally reaching for the knife to speed up his efforts. Carving through the wire it finally snapped and her legs swung open slightly. Her legs were only covered by her boots, which had little bits of shredded uniform sticking out of their tops. Mac wrestled with his belt and unfastened it. He nearly tore the button off his jeans when he prided them open and shoved them to the floor. Batgirl's legs bent towards her chest as Mac mounted between them. Lucky for him the create was wide enough for him to place his burly legs across it.

Heavy breath escaped Batgirl's lips and her body began to push up against Mac. This was it. It would be the moment every criminal dreamed of having. He was going to fuck Batgirl right here on this crate and she might even enjoy herself. He looked down at his cock, which was only inches for her glistening pussy. Though he did not need much lubrication, Mac spit into his hand and lathered his cock tip anyhow. He wanted her to enjoy it.

Mac's hard cock pressed against the damp lips of Batgirl's pussy. As Mac pressed forward it slid in, inch by inch; ten to be exact. The cave of her cunt was hot, wet, and gripped his member firmly. He felt a quiver run over his body that resulted in a slight shiver.

Batgirl responded accordingly with yet another moan and a gentle rock of her hips. His pelvic met hers as he thrusted to ensure he had gone as deep as he could. She let out another moan and her arms attempted to more towards him, but the wire kept them right where they were. He wished he could set her arms free and let her grab onto him, but if she woke it could be disastrous. Had she known who he really was he doubted she would be so pleased at his actions.

His cock pulsed as blood tried to further flood its overly occupied vessel. The crate creaked as he began to rock back and forth on it, feeling Batgirl's silky insides rub along his shaft. Slowly at first he pushed in, then out, then back in letting her legs push against his chest each time. He was so turned on he felt as though his body had been set on fire. Hunkered down he began thrusting harder and faster, his face close enough to smell the heroine's sweet scent. It was like cotton candy and it made him wonder just how old the gorgeous vigilante actually was.

Batgirl's tits bounced on her chest as Mac's progression become furious, now slamming into her. Their soppy flesh slapped and sloshed together while the crate's creaks became screeches. He could hear over the furry of his fuck that she was in fact moaning now; loud and clear. Her eyes were still shut, but were now clenched closed. Mac knew he could not hold it much longer, her flawless body and sexy moans were too exciting for him to take.

Mac smothered his face into Batgirl's wondrous tits as he let out a long moan of release. His hips quivered back and forth as he unloaded round after round into her cunt. His cock became so sensitive he had to hold it still, deep inside her while he recovered. Collapsed on her tiny frame he used his elbows to prop himself up enough not to crush her. Her sweaty chest met his with every breath she took. Though she had not been able to move nearly as much as Mac had, she seemed to be out of breath as well.

Mac's legs dropped back down to the concrete floor and he pulled his pants up. His eyes still could not part from this heroine. She lied there shiny and still not coherent. He moved along side her and looked down at her black mask, which had been one of the few remaining places he had yet to explore. Who was she? Would he even recognize her if he unmasked her? he had to know.

The mask was firmly fit on her face, it was more like a helmet than anything else. It covered her face from the nose up and wrapped around the top of her head. Her long blonde hair hung down the back of it unrestricted. Mac's large mitts gripped the side of it and carefully pulled it upward. It was by far the easiest piece of her uniform he had removed.

Beneath the mask was a young beautiful face. She must have been no older than twenty-two. Rosie red cheeks, full pouty lips, and smooth skin most would relate to that of a baby. Despite her stunning appearance she did not look familiar to him in the slightest. Whoever she was, he would never had seen her on the streets and fancied her a crime fighter. She looked like she belonged on the cover of a magazine, not dressed in black armor kicking the shit out of bad guys every night.

Mac reached for the knife. He knew the night had to come to an end, as much as it pained him to admit it. If he stayed here and she woke up and got free, there would be nothing to hold her back from unleashing her full furry. With the knife gripped firmly in his sweaty hands he drew it up over his head. His eyes turned cold, his lips scrunched into a focused dot. The knife came down fast and hard and sunk in deep. Mac let out a wild cry, but not because he had killed Batgirl. It was because he couldn't. The blades razor sharp tip was two inches into the wooden crate right next to Batgirl's side.

It wasn't that Mac had never killed before. He had killed many people; mostly stupid men who borrowed money from mobsters and didn't pay them back. Batgirl, outside of her dark heroic attire, looked innocent and pure. She possessed a quality he did not have. He was not innocent. He had not been since his father put the first gun in his hand at age twelve and told him to go steal money for his family. Batgirl was not like him. She was not a symbol of fear to the everyday citizen's of Gotham, but a symbol of justice and security. She was the dark angel he wished would have saved him when he was young enough to be a better man.

Mac took one heavy footed step back. He had his money, and soon him and the lowly creeps he worked with would be long gone from Gotham. No one would know what happened here, but him and the blonde woman known as Batgirl. The money would bring him a new life, and with it maybe he could be a better person. Or maybe some men were just made to be evil. Either way, Mac turned his back to the naked heroine and walked off towards the garage. When he reached the car, his men were sprawled out cross its seats.

"Get up ya bunch of lazy asses!" Mac yelled, which made the men spring up from their leisurely states. "What the hell's a matter with you's? Start the fuck'n car!"

"But boss, I thought we were staying tonight." Charlie asked from the back seat.

"Well we ain't." Mac replied.

"Oh," he looked out the back window of the mustang. He could only see boxes in the distance. "Say boss... did you..."

"Don't ya worry about what I did!" Mac yelled and then he sat down in the passenger seat of the car. "I said we are leaving tonight and dat's what we are gunna do. Drive Kenny."

Kenny turned the mustang's key and its old beat up engine sprung to life. Charlie hopped out of the back seat and ran over to open the garage door. The moon light crept in as the heavy door's rollers moved upward. Mac adjusted in his seat and felt a lump in his pocket. He reached in and felt the cold metal form of Batgirl's F.S.E. He thought a moment about tossing it out the window and then decided against it. It will be a souvenir of his time shared with her. Something he would remember forever.

Charlie hopped back into the mustang and Kenny put the car in gear. Headlights off, the vehicle rolled out of the garage and disappeared into the night.

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cool story, I hope to be continued...
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Very nice, very simple, very good.
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Good job!
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Thank you all for your kind words! I have never written a story like this before and it was an interesting write for me. If anyone has any requests for a new character please let me know! I will be continuing the Batgirl story as well, but love having more that one story to turn to while working out another.

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I liked the story, it was well written, but for a little constructive commenting: the villain seemed to have switched is demeanor rather abruptly after he had his way with Batgirl. He went from lust driven animal, to remorseful guy with a sad back story. I think he should have just been evil till the very end. :)
Hope to see you write more! I did really enjoy it and the action in the beginning was wonderful!

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That was wonderful! It's great to see a believable, kick-ass Batgirl for a change! The sex was well-described too! I personally can't see the fun in having sex with an unconscious girl, but...

I am glad he had a change of heart at the end.
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I liked the switch in the villain personally, made a change .(I did exactly the same in s story posted elsewhere) and I think it gives them much more plausibility and depth.

Tracy - sooner or later every guy has sex and regrets it- you must be still too young or too good looking to realise that !!! ;) (look at Oedipus!)
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tallyho wrote:I liked the switch in the villain personally, made a change .(I did exactly the same in s story posted elsewhere) and I think it gives them much more plausibility and depth.

Tracy - sooner or later every guy has sex and regrets it- you must be still too young or too good looking to realise that !!! ;) (look at Oedipus!)
I am not quite sure how to take that tallyho lol I am either naive or too pretty to understand. lol :laugh:

I have regretted having sex with someone before and I understand moments of passion and lust taking over. I just felt that the villain seemed like a ruthless killer and then became a bit of a softy at the end. Don't get me wrong, the story was well done. I just felt the shift to be a bit jerky. More hints at his "soft side" would have helped, I thought.
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It was more just a bit of fun to say we all get the shag 'n' shame moment!(blokes I mean)
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(And not so much too pretty to understand as no one would be disappointed by you but now I'm just digging a horrible hole for myself)
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Back to topic, I'm interested in where this story ends up.
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tallyho wrote:It was more just a bit of fun to say we all get the shag 'n' shame moment!(blokes I mean)
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Haha, that just reminds me of Dane Cook's joke about F***ing Skeletor to Castle Grey Skull!
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L.M. Tracy wrote:I liked the story, it was well written, but for a little constructive commenting: the villain seemed to have switched is demeanor rather abruptly after he had his way with Batgirl. He went from lust driven animal, to remorseful guy with a sad back story. I think he should have just been evil till the very end. :)
Hope to see you write more! I did really enjoy it and the action in the beginning was wonderful!

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Thank you Tracy for the review/comment. When I write I find that I am the characters in the story. I feel and see the world through their eyes, so that I can describe what is going on as if I lived the events. I find that I start watching a video full of desires and lust then once I am spent I sometimes feel a bit guilty. I don't know if that makes sense, but as I wrote the story as the villain I was enjoying it. Once I got to the end I felt for Batgirl. I write stories as my feelings change and they turn out how they turn out.
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Dr.Morticus wrote:
L.M. Tracy wrote:I liked the story, it was well written, but for a little constructive commenting: the villain seemed to have switched is demeanor rather abruptly after he had his way with Batgirl. He went from lust driven animal, to remorseful guy with a sad back story. I think he should have just been evil till the very end. :)
Hope to see you write more! I did really enjoy it and the action in the beginning was wonderful!

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Thank you Tracy for the review/comment. When I write I find that I am the characters in the story. I feel and see the world through their eyes, so that I can describe what is going on as if I lived the events. I find that I start watching a video full of desires and lust then once I am spent I sometimes feel a bit guilty. I don't know if that makes sense, but as I wrote the story as the villain I was enjoying it. Once I got to the end I felt for Batgirl. I write stories as my feelings change and they turn out how they turn out.
No I understand Dr. M. I can relate to that with my Supergirl story. I had a lot more fun writing as her, because it was easier to relate to her for me. I hope to read more about Batgirl from you!
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The story was very good, looking forward to seeing more of your story
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valugi wrote:The story was very good, looking forward to seeing more of your story
Thank you, I will write the next part as soon as I finish up this video I am shooting.
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