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MightyHypnotic wrote:So are you guys finalizing this or ...do you still have more to go...?
It still needs a bit of tweaking to make it all hang together, but the basic script is all there in these posts. It also needs some dialogue for the sex scene.
Heroine Addict wrote: One thing I thought was that KW could have been the superheroine who originally caught the male villain. Perhaps he very nearly defeated her and that was why she was so keen for SG to handle him this time?

Here's a very brief prologue which can shot at the same lair location as SG's transformation:

PROLOGUE

Lair Set

Male villain fighting Knightwoman. He blasts her with a bolt of electricity and she falls to the ground. As the still-conscious superheroine lies twitching, the villain kneels down and begins stroking her nylon-clad thighs. We hear a faint crackle of electricity as he runs his hands over her body.

The villain unclasps KW's cape and then pulls it away to reveal the back of her leotard. He slides the zipper down and and runs his finger along the thin stripe of exposed pink flesh (with the crackling sound effect). He pulls the leotard down from KW's shoulders and then stops, realizing he's forgotten something...

Villain: Oh, the things I'm going to do to you. But I should really get to know you first.

He grips her mask.

Knightwoman: [grogilly] No! Get off me!

Without hesitation, he pulls the mask back and fully reveals KW's face.

Villain: I don't belieeev...

KW suddenly sprays something into the villain's face. He falls to the ground and passes out.

Knightwoman: Sweet dreams, creep. You'll wake-up in a cozy little cell with no memory of my identity thanks to good old amnesia spray.

KW pulls her mask back on.

Knightwoman: That was too close for comfort.

SIX MONTHS LATER

Office Set

A beautiful young woman is at an office desk, looking at a computer screen. She is wearing a white button up blouse, a dark skirt and tan tights. She adjusts the glasses on her face when she clicks on a link to a news story...
DrObiCaffi wrote:A beautiful young woman is at an office desk, looking at a computer screen. She is wearing a white button up blouse , a dark skirt and tan tights. She adjusts the glasses on her face when she clicks on a link to a news story.

NEWS ANCHOR
We have breaking news regarding the trial of known terrorist Dr. Obi Caffi. We have just received word that he has escaped from custody during transfer from the courthouse back to The State penitentiary. Our Cameras were on hand to capture this incident but some sort of reaction causing a blinding light and deafening noise seemed to disable any electrical devices within a 3-mile radius. It was during this phenomenon that the Evil doctor was allowed to escape. Unfortunately the heroine who captured Dr. Caffi, Super Girl, was in court to testify YESTERDAY. We can only assume our Heroine and her Partner(s) were doing some other heroic deeds that kept them from supervising the trial and transfer of this horrible criminal. Dr. Caffi of course is on trial for the threats he made on several popular tourist attractions around the globe. Thankfully Super Girl and her partner(s) were able to thwart the evil doctor's plans. We can only hope the Ladies of Liberty will be able to reprehend this maniac once again.

The beautiful woman picks up the phone on her desk and presses a few buttons, she looks around to make sure no one was around to hear her make the top secret call she was about to make. A woman answers on the other end.

SUPER GIRL
It's me, did you see?

Heroine 2
Yeah, I saw, you should get to his hideout right away, he just might be stupid enough to try to obtain supplies there before he runs.

SUPER GIRL
OK, I'll meet you there. Together we can....

Heroine 2
I am on my way to New York, word has gotten out of a bank robbery in progress there, you'll have to take this one on your own.

Super Girl
A bank robbery in New York? Why don't we let Police handle that one? Dr. Caffi is way more threatening.

Heroine 2
Yes, but you took care of him before with no problems, you got this.

Super Girl
I know but I have a bad feeling about this. Something about the way he escaped, how could he have caused that kind of reaction while in police custody? He may be getting stronger. Let the police handle the issue in New York, Let's take this scum bag down together.



Heroine 2
I am nearly there. You KNOW I can handle this quickly, why don't you head to his hideout and I will get there as soon as I can. We shouldn't waste any more time arguing, you need to get going.

Super Girl
::sighs:: You're right. But you BETTER hurry.

Super girl hangs up the phone and leaves her desk area. She gets to a hallway leading to a back exit of her office and begins to walk backwards. She takes off her glasses and tosses them aside as she scans for potential witnesses to the pending transformation. She then moves her hands down to her blouse, slowly undoing each button. She spreads her shirt open revealing a blue leotard top with a red and yellow "S" on her chest. By the time she gets outside, she is also wearing a Red cape, a short red frilly skirt and Knee high Red Boots. She turns around and takes off for the sky.

She lands outside the entrance to an old factory and enters. She is hesitant but confident at the same time. She passes through a few rooms and turns around a few corners until she comes up to man frantically working on a syringe. Super Girl scans the area fast while his back is still turned and sees no immediate threat.

Super Girl
That was very stupid doctor. You should not have come back here.

The doctor was startled. He jumps and turns around. He is nervous and scared,

Dr. Obi Caffi
Super Girl, you... you know I need my medicine. I had to come back. I wasn't even going to run, the authorities wouldn't let me get it. I escaped just to have it. I was going to turn myself back in, I swear.

Super Girl
Do you honestly think I would believe you would turn yourself back in? You ARE stupid. Let's go Doctor, you've wasted enough of my time.

Dr. Obi Caffi
OK, just let me....

He quickly raises his hands and electricity shoots from his finger tips. They merely crash into the heroines chest and disappear without so much as a blink from Super Girl.

Super Girl
Haven't we been down this road before doctor?

The doctor charges at Super Girl and throws a few punches and kicks. Our heroine dodges a few and blocks a few with ease, but allows the last punch thrown to strike her directly in the face. Dr. Caffi falls to the ground holding his hand.

Super Girl
To think I was worried about coming here on my own. I actually thought you were getting stronger. You are pathetic. Enough of all this, let's get you back downtown where you belong.

She grabs him by the shirt with one hand and launches him to his feet.

Dr. Caffi
::panting:: I finally get that you will always be more powerful than me. I surrender. I only ask that you PLEASE let me take my medicine, without it, I will die. You want me to get my fair trial, right?

Super Girl
Do it fast, ::She shoves him over to the table she originally caught him working at:: I'll make sure you get what you need while you are in prison. But like I said before, I'm tired of you wasting my time.

The doctor grabs the syringe and an evil grin comes over his lips.

Dr. Caffi
You're right Super Girl, I have wasted your time. Fortunately though, from now on, you'll appreciate the time you spend with me.

Super Girl
What on EARTH are you talking about? Get over here so we can leave this disgusting place.

The doctor plunges the syringe into his arm and his body shakes and twitches a little.. He closes his eyes and breathes in deep. He breathes out just as deep and turns around.
Dr. Obi Caffi
You see Super Girl, this all part of my plan. My MASTER plan to turn YOU into my most powerful and obedient soldier. Say good-bye to the "GOOD" life Super Girl.

Super Girl
:: She looks at him utterly confused:: Huh. Stupid AND crazy. :: She rolls her eyes:: Let's go Doc...

The doctor raises his hands and another burst of lightning jolts out from his fingertips but THIS time, the electricity slams into Super Girl's body and forces her backwards and slams her into the nearest wall.


Super Girl
Wha... What's happening? How? How did...

Another blast of lightning hits the gorgeous gal and she screams and twitches in pain still standing up against the wall.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh Super Girl, you have no idea how long I have waited for this. All the planning, all the sacrifice is FINALLY paying off.

He sprays her again with electricity and laughs. The lightning stops and he looks at his hands, very satisfied.

Dr. Obi Caffi
This is fun, but I've been DIEING to just kick the shit out of you. Let's mix things up, shall we?

He approaches Super Girl as she regains her balance, she looks ready to put up a fight. She is excited that he decided to end the berates of lightning bolts. "This is my chance", she thinks. She swings at the doctor but she moves much slower than she is used to and he easily dodges her blow.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Tsch... So close. Tell you what. Try again.

She looks at her hands baffled at their lack of speed and power.

Super Girl
My... my powers?

She swings again. This time he ducks and pushes her back.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Whoa, that was close. One more time.

She swings even weaker, and just like her enemy a few short minutes ago, she landed the blow. But just like before- barely nothing happened. The doctor straightens out his head and smiles.

Dr. Obi Caffi
My turn!!!

An upper cut swing from the doctor lands on the chin of Super Girl and she groans in pain. He comes at her again and again with punches, knees and kicks to her face, her gut and below her belt. Blow after blowslams into the Super Heroine as she grunts and yelps in pain.

Dr. Obi Caffi
For so long I've watched you in the news. I read about you in the papers. Hell, I've been part of the story myself many times. You've always found away to escape, you've always managed to thwart my plans.
::he continues to punch and kick as he talks:: But not this time. Oh no. Not THIS time.

One more punch to Super Girl below the belt and she folds in half, dropping to her knees struggling to breathe.

Dr. Obi Caffi
So... THIS is what it feels like to have TOTAL dominance over your opponent. Kind Of Fun Don't you think?

A kick to the face sends the heroine onto her back. She rolls around on the floor. Coughing and choking. Her eyes are open staring off to the ceiling wondering how this EVER could have happened. She finally rolls over onto her hands and knees and stands herself up.

Super Girl
I don't know how you are doing this. ::breathing heavily:: But I will never give up...

She squints her eyes at the doctor, hoping to blast him with her laser-eyes. All that comes out though is a weakened shot that hits that doctor and barely even budges him. Super Girl's eyes widen in terror as the doctor brushes of the spot the laser hit him. He chuckles.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh Super Girl, ::the grin turns into a look of evil:: Now YOU are wasting MY time.

He raises his hands again and THRUSTS them toward the damaged Super Girl and once again lightning shoots from his fingers. Once again the lighting strikes the heroine and slams her back into the wall. She hits it standing with her arms stretched out, bent up at the elbows, palms facing out. This time, the doctor doesn't let up when Super Girl hits the wall, he continues firing at her as her screams get louder. She twitches and squirms up against the wall, almost as if she is bound against it by the electricity shooting at her.

Super Girl
Ppppppppllllleeeeeaaaaasssseeee nnnnnnnooooooo.....

But the doctor continues. straining harder as if trying to shoot more out at her. Finally he lowers his hands and the lightning stops. Super Girl tumbles to the floor and turns over on to her stomach, a blank look in her eyes staring off to nowhere. Finally a long blink and her head rolls as if she can't control it. A couple of short looks back and forth and she starts crawling. It takes every ounce of her strength and energy just to move her arm forward, but she starts to move. The doctor slowly walks over to her and kicks her in the middle of her back forcing her back onto the ground.

Dr Obi Caffi
Where do you think you're going bitch?

She starts to get back up on her knees but he grabs her ankles and pulls her back over to the middle of the room. She kicks and screams desperately trying to get free from his grip but he is clearly stronger than her now.

Dr. Obi Caffi
It's over Super girl. You are mine now. You have no place to go. Save your strength, you are going to need it.

One more tiny little shot of lightning from his fingers and she jolts violently then slumps back on the floor. She doesn't speak, she doesn't look at him, she just twitches until she finally flips herself over again, this time she is unable to get back on her knees. The doctor moves in front of her and sits down blocking her path. He grabs her by the shoulders and flips her over. He rests her back against him. His head next to hers, he starts whispering in her ear.

Dr Obi Caffi
You see Super Girl, I never needed medicine, I didn't come back here scared for my life. ::the doctor looks forward and pets Super Girl's head with his right hand holds her waist with the other, while revealing his plan:: I came here to give myself the FINAL dose of the... KRYPTONITE serum I have been working on. I knew you had gotten close to me so I LET you capture me. I can't give myself the doses too close together, so I went to jail so you would lower your guard, hoping to keep you away from my lair. I couldn't let you do too much research and discover that part of the plan before I had given myself the final dose. Ya see it's this serum that gave me the power to finally bring you quite literally to your knees. And don't worry. ::He pulls his hand from her head and reaches around her waist and meets his other hand. He then lifts them up onto her breasts to steal a feel as he continues:: I have more, LOTS MORE and I plan on sharing with you!

He lifts another syringe in front of Super Girl's face, she is too weak to struggle.

Super Girl
No, you can't, ::she winces in pain:: it will kill me.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh, I don't think so. See, I've deluded this batch with enough other materials to merely weaken you. I don't want you dead.

Her focus turned from the syringe to the doctor and she again squints, hoping to blast her enemy, put this time, her eyes just glow red and nothing even shoots out. She shakes her head and focuses again on the syringe as the doctor takes the top off. Her eyes widen in fright as she follows the needle as long as she can with her eyes.

Super Girl
What are you going to do to me?

Dr. Obi Caffi
I already told you

The doctor pulls the heroines head to the side by her hair and pulls the rest of her hair away from her neck. He then plunges the needle into her well exposed neck. Super Girl blinks and a tear drops down her cheek. She Winces and twitches as the formula spreads. The twitching intensifies until she finally collapses in his lap.

Super Girl wakes up to find herself unable to move. Not necessarily because she is too weak, but because she is bound to a table slanted over a small pool. She shimmers and shakes, trying to get loose but no use. She can feel something inside her preventing her from using her Super strength. The serum. She looks down but all she can see is a board that has been placed around her neck separating her head from the rest of her body.
What she couldn't see is that she was strapped down with multiple straps. Her arms snug right up against her body and her legs tightly together. One strap ran high over her arms, between her shoulders and her elbows. T he next over her forearms and stomach. There was another stretched over her beautiful pantyhosed thighs, and a final over her shins. She could also feel that her wrists were shackled separately. She kicks her feet around best she can and feels restraints, but it doesn't feel as if she was shackled in down there. She turns her head and sees the evil doctor walk over to her.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Ah, you are awake. Good. Allow me to explain to what is about to happen you. As you already know, my KRYPTONITE serum is running through your veins, keeping you too weak to break your binds. It is also breaking down the armor that is your, dare I say, ::he looks her up and down:: AWESOME body, allowing my OTHER formula, waiting for you in this pool, to penetrate your skin and absorb into your system, killing off the kryptonite serum and making you even STRONGER than before I bested you.

Super Girl
Once again, doctor, you show your stupidity. ::She winces as she feels some kryptonite flow inside her::. If you make me stronger I will escape and take you down. But his time I won't take you in. I will kill you.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Such an awful threat coming from such a "pure soul" Super Girl. Don't worry you won't have to kill me. You will call me sir. See this other formula will make you strong enough to defeat me, but it will also scramble your mind, making ME your MASTER! You will be evil. The process will be painful and may kill you, but either way, I win.

Super Girl
Oh my god. It won't work. It CAN'T WORK. Oh please (partner's name) come for me.

Another tear drips down her cheek.

THE HIGHLIGHTED PARTS CAN BE OMITTED DEPENDING ON WEATHER WE DECIDE TO GO HARDCORE OR NOT.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh, and did I forget to mention the serum is also going to be used to spread my semen throughout your body, to mix with your DNA?

Super Girl
Your... Then you mean...

Dr Ob Caffi
That's right Super Girl. ::He runs his hands all over her body and stops between her legs and rubs harder:: I get to FUCK YOUR BRAINS out. HA HA. No pun intended. Please don't think I'm going to enjoy that part. Ok maybe I will, but it is an EVIL necessity when it comes to this plan. ::He looks her body up and down as he continues to rub her body all over:: What do you think? Are you as excited to get started as I am? Shall we?

Super Girl
Oh my god this can't happen. (partner's name) where are you?

She squirms and wiggles best she can while the doctor runs his hands down her legs and stops when he reaches her boots.

Dr. Obi Caffi
We don't want the formula to penetrate your body too quickly. It may kill you. So we'll leave this costume on. I don't think we'll need these though.

He unzips her first boot and pulls it off. He runs both his hands over her thighs and calves once more of her beautiful legs are exposed. Super Girl starts sobbing as the evil doctor feels her up.



Super Girl
Please stop this. You can't do this to me. If you stop now, I promise I'll make (partner's name) go easy on you when she gets here. Just STOP!

The doctor unzips and pulls off the other boot, repeating the groping as he answers the heroine.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh shit. Your partner is on her way to my hideout? Oh no! What will I do? Oh. That's right. We're not AT my hideout. ::he chuckles:: I moved you here while you were out. No one knows you are here. No one is coming for you.

With both boots off, he straps each ankle into its designated shackle.

Super Girl
:: she sobs:: Oh no. Please no, please don't do this, I ca....

He jams a ring gag into her mouth and pulls the strap around her head to strap it on.

Dr. Obi Caffi
No can do Super Girl. It's time.

She continues to scream pleads at him as he walks away to a hanging control panel. He reaches the mechanism and turns around.

Dr. Obi Caffi
So long Super Girl. I look forward to meeting the "new you"

Dr. Caffi grabs the device and pushes a green button. Her chest heaves up and down as her breathing gets heavier and heavier. Her eyes widen in horror as the table she is on slowly starts to lower her towards the pool. Her head turns down trying to see when she will meet the water, then she looks back at the grinning doctor who is now rubbing his hands together. She squirms more and more as she gets closer and closer to the formula.
We see a tight shot of the heroines pantyhosed feet getting closer to the water, then we see and hear the gorgeous girl try to scream "please" through her gag. We move back down to her feet and see them touch the water. As soon as they reach the water bubbles. We go back to a shot of the heroine from the waist up and we see her body LOCK UP and her head TILT STRAIGHT UP as she screams in pain from her toes reaching the poisoned water. We go back to the shot of her feet and we watch the rest of her body enter the pool. Her feet then ankles then calves, knees and thighs become saturated as they enter the pool. Next is her skirt with her hands held tight against her body. Her waist is now in, and her blue Leotard follows until the table stops at the board around her neck.
All that was going into the water was now in. The heroine shakes, and twitches and screams as much as she can through her gag. Her eyes, closed for the most part, open as she turns her head to look at the evil doctor. Begging for it all to stop.
The doctor watches and waits. He finally pushes another button on the device, slowly lifting the heroine from the water.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Well that's the end of stage 1. If we leave you in for too long at a time, it will probably kill you. We need to take our time. Don't worry it won't be too long.

Caffi walks back over to the wet heroine and starts touching her wet weakened body. She is breathing heavily and crying.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Wow. That went very well. And might I say you look very sexy all wet and punished like this. It may make fucking you later that much easier. Oh who am I kidding. I'm sure we'll both enjoy that part either way. Well, shall we move on to phase 2?

She shakes her head no in a very weak manner as the doctor moves back to the device. He pushes the button again and the Heroine is dipped back into the water. She twitches and screams again, but the howls and twitches become less dramatic as the water seems numb the heroine's body. Caffi pushes the button that pulls the girl out of the water once again.
The heroine's eyes are open and look almost dead as water drips from her stockinged feet. Her head sort of dangles off her neck and a little drool pours out of her mouth. Caffi comes back over to examine her, to make sure she is weakened and not dead. Of course he can't resist the opportunity to grope her beautiful body again.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Well, I would say so far, so good. I think we can move on to the final phase of absorption.

He shifts some hair on her head and adjust some of clothing and notices her gag is still in her mouth.

Dr. Obi Caffi
I guess you don't REALLY need this anymore.

He removes the gag from her mouth and she immediately starts whispering pleads of mercy.

Super Girl
Please..... stop.... I'm too... weak... please.....


Dr. Obi Caffi
What Super Girl? I can't quite hear you. What's that? You want me to stop? Oh, I'm afraid that can't happen. Just sit tight. It will all be over soon.

Another trip over to the device and a push of the button lowers the sexy heroine back into the pool. this time she is too weak to scream. she just lays on the table and twitches. Her eyes still staring off to nowhere. The water continues to bubble as Super girl twitches and grunts and groans.

Super Girl
Please..... make.... it..... stop. (Partner's name) where are you? Where are you?

She blinks as she talks, pushing tears from her eyes. Finally the pain is too much and the heroine passes out. Her head drops and Dr. Caffi pushes the button pulling her out for the final time.

Our heroine wakes again only to find herself bound again. This time, Her hands are bound together, crossed above her head. A single strap lay across her waist and her feet are spread apart, each bound at the ankle. The ring gag reinserted in her mouth. She is still fully clothed, in fact the doctor even put her boots back on her. She looks around and sees Dr. Caffi walking towards her.

Dr. Obi Caffi
All rested up? Good. I guess it's time for the final part of transformation.

Super girl mumbles and begins to struggle as the doctor unzips his fly. He runs his hands through the sexy woman's hair and then moves it down her cheek. Super Girl seems to be getting angry now as the hands of the doctor continue to move down Super Girl's body. he reaches the red skirt and lifts it revealing her sexy panties.

Dr. Obi Caffi
I always wondered if this moment would actually happen. I always asked myself, "Will I ever feel the ultimate heroine's cunt? ::He violently tears open the heroine's tights and slides her panties to the side exposing her super pussy.:: Am I the only person ever to see this magnificent vagina? ::He touches it:: Am I the only person ever to touch it?

Super Girl begins to cry. Caffi crawls on top of her and she begins kicking and screaming. He grabs her by the back of her hair and pulls her head back as he inserts his throbbing cock into her pussy. Her body jerks up and she screams in pain and horror at the same time.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Am I the first to fuck it?

He continues to thrust in and out of the heroine as she shakes her head back and forth in desperation. She tries to kick but the straps around her ankles prevent from moving too much. This is how it all ends? The doctor continues to fuck her mercilessly and manages to pull her tits out of her leotard. He fondles, licks and kisses them while he build towards orgasm. As time goes on the heroine calms her body but tears still pour from her eyes.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Ah, just as I imagined. You feel so good you dirty, dirty heroine. You are going to make me cum so hard, and when I do, your transformation will be complete. It's nearly time. It's nearly time. It's.... nearly... Uhhhhhhhhhhhh

The evil doctor shakes as he climaxes. The heroine can feel the cum cover her insides. It catches some of the formula dripping inside her and she can feel an accelerated transfer of fluids throughout her body.

Dr. Super Obi
Ah. Just what I needed. Now for the final thing you need. ::He pulls out another syringe:: Just one little shot to get the juices flowing inside you.

He inserts the needle into her thigh showing instant results. Her eyes SLAM shut as she winces and screams as hard as she can through the gag. Her back arches up as far as it can through the binds. Her body shakes and twitches. She looks around wondering what is happening to her body. Her twitches slowly lessen as she blinks out more tears. She can tell this is it, life as she knew was now over forever. She could feel the change begin inside her until her eyes finally slowly slowly slowly close. When they open, they glow a strong and bright green light. A new villain is born.

I guess from here it's up to you all. What happens to the new villainess? Will she seek revenge on her old partner for not being there for her? Will she and Dr. Obi Caffi wreak havoc on the world as Master and apprentice?
BTW, I used the names Dr. Obi Caffi and Super Girl just to have names as I typed it out. I have no problems with any name changes. I didn't know what Heroine to use for the partner so I just called her heroine 2. That's something you guys will have to figure out to get the mask you want.
I also welcome any constructive criticism and or changes. I figured people may want to get more creative/detailed with the sex scene (if we go that route) or the fight scene to get what you all want from the story. This was just an idea I have had in my head for a couple months now. I understand changes may have to be made to save money or time or whatever. It was rather fun actually getting it all out of my head. I really hope we can pull this off (or something close to it).

Dr. Obi Caffi
Heroine Addict wrote:Here's the basic script for the second half, picking up from the dunking and transformation of Supergirl. It's very much a work in progress, so please give feedback on anything that needs cutting or expanding.

I tried to keep the dialogue brief, as MH suggested. However, I don't really expect the cast to recite everything verbatim, just as long as they stay true to the basic storyline.


Knightwoman finally arrives at the villain's lair to find him in the middle of a (fake) fight with Supergirl.

Supergirl: Glad you could make it. This creep never seems to run out of juice.

The ladies stand side by side.

Male Villain: Your little alien pal has spent hours absorbing my lightning bolts, Knightwoman, but a mere mortal like you won't last five minutes.

The male villain blasts Knightwoman with a bolt of electricity (just as he did in the prologue). However, this time she stands tall with her hands on her hips.

Knightwoman: Try harder! My conductor tights can take a hit of one-million volts.

Male Villain: Oh, you're a clever bitch! But your precious tights won't protect you when I pull them down and stuff them in your smug mouth.

Knightwoman: Don't waste your time trying to strip them off me. The waistband will only stretch if it scans my fingerprints.

Supergirl: So those tights conduct electricity and they work as a chastity belt? You know this perverted creep too well.

Knightwoman: They're virtually indestructible too. It would take someone with superhuman strength to rip them open.

Supergirl takes this as her cue to reveal herself as a villainess, She savagely rips huge holes in Knightwoman's dark-colored "conductor tights" exposing the standard tan tights underneath.

Knightwoman: What are you doing? Get off me!

With an evil grin, Supergirl turns to address her "master".

Supergirl: She's vulnerable. Blast her now!

Knightwoman: WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOO!



The male villain strikes Knightwoman with another bolt of electricity. This time, her whole body shakes as she feels the full force of the villain's high-voltage assault. The heroine's legs buckle, but Supergirl grabs her from behind before she can fall and props up her limp body in a bearhug.

Supergirl: Blast her again!

Knightwoman convulses as she's hit by another bolt. Supergirl releases her from the bearhug and watches with amusement as she struggles to remain standing. Supergirl grabs the eyeholes of Knightwoman's mask and pulls them down, turning the mask into a makeshift blindfold. With a playful push from Supergirl, the weakened and temporarily blinded heroine stumbles to the ground.

Supergirl mounts the fallen Knightwoman and continues ripping at the tights. She reaches into the leotard's leghole and tugs at the (supposedly immovable) waistband, revealing the top of the tan tights underneath. She then pulls off one of Knightwoman's boots and completely tears away the foot of the darker tights, leaving the heroine's foot stockinged in just the under layer of tan nylon.

Supergirl: Blast her while she's down! Make her suffer!

Male Villain: Remember who's in charge here!

The villain is annoyed that his "slave" is literally calling the shots. He raises his hand and it crackles with green-tinged lightning as a reminder to Supergirl that he still has plenty of Kryptonite in his system. However, he goes along with the idea and hits the wounded Knightwoman with yet another blast. The heroine writhes in agony and weakly reaches out to Supergirl.

Knightwoman: [weakly] Whyyy?

Supergirl cradles Knightwoman and whispers softly in her ear.

Supergirl: Because you took the easy job and let that vile creep defile my perfect body. He thinks he's going to do the same to you, but you're all mine.

Supergirl pulls aside the crotch of Knightwoman's leotard and slides her hand under both pairs of tights. The heroine gasps as she feels Supergirl's touch.

Supergirl: And to think you pulled on those tights believing you would be impenetrable. It didn't cross your naive mind that Supergirl would want your pussy.

Supergirl retracts her hand as she becomes aware of the lecherous gaze of the male villain who is now watching the women and literally salivating. Supergirl backs away as the creep approaches. She looks at him with utter contempt, but knows she'll have to choose the right moment to strike.

The male villain looms over the helpless Knightwoman, leering with ill intent. We hear the electrical crackling sound and the heroine gives out a helpless gasp as the fiend runs his hands over her twitching body.

Male Villain: Just enough juice to keep you tame. Another full blast right now would probably kill you and I'm not into dead girls.

He looks over to the hot tub and picks up a syringe of a purple formula.

Supergirl begins to see flashbacks of her own recent ordeal when she sees the villain pulling down Knightwoman's leotard slightly to shoulder level and injecting the syringe into the helpless heroine's neck.

Male Villain: A special formula I prepared just for you, Knightwoman. Your mind will try to stay feisty, but once you're stimulated, your body will crave orgasm after orgasm.

Knightwoman: [weakly] Keep... your... filthy... hands... off... me!

Male Villain: You'll feel better when I get you out of that costume and put you in a nice hot bath. But I should really get to know you first.

The villain reaches for Knightwoman's mask. He tries to pull at it but it won't budge. (Knightwoman has upped her security since their last meeting. It would take superhuman strength to force it off.) While he's distracted, a furious Supergirl seizes the opportunity to grab him from behind and break his neck, killing him instantly. His limp body falls to the ground, next to Knightwoman.

Still unable to stand, Knightwoman desperately tries to wriggle away on her belly as she becomes the focus of the super psycho's attention. Supergirl effortlessly stops the heroine by sinking a leather boot into the small of her back.

Supergirl: Another perverted fool distracted by your shiny disguise. Shame he didn't have X-Ray vision to see the weak human under all that spandex.

We see a brief "X-Ray vision" shot from Supergirl's POV of Knightwoman on the ground, dressed in nothing but her mask.

Supergirl: I should have known your mask would be X-Ray-proof. Now I'm just going to prolong your agony as you wait for me to rip it off.

Supergirl gently strokes Knightwoman's cheek and then slides her fingers under the mask, stroking the face underneath, but not exposing it YET. Knightwoman moans weakly. Supergirl then grasps the spandex playfully and tugs at it before letting go, allowing it to snap back into place. The cruel games continue with Supergirl pulling and stretching the mask in various ways, but always letting go at the very last second.

Then Supergirl notices a video camera mounted on a tripod and realizes the degradation of Knightwoman can be recorded for posterity...

Supergirl: Hmmm, I think I'll show EVERYONE the agony and ecstasy etched on your true face as I bring you to climax after climax in our sex tape. Not only will they know Knightwoman's real name, but they'll also know you as the biggest slut on the planet.

Knightwoman's eyes widen in horror at the revelation of her impending fate.

With the camera now set to record the grand unveiling, Supergirl begins to grab and pull at Knightwoman's mask, teasing the spandex away from her skin. As the mask starts sliding up her face, the desperate Knightwoman reaches for her utility belt and presses a small button. Suddenly, Supergirl lets go of the half-off mask and backs away in agony as a green glow surrounds Knightwoman who is now covering her nearly-exposed face with her hand as she adjusts the mask.

Knightwoman: Did you really think I wouldn't have a plan? You won't be able to get within ten feet of my utility belt's Kryptonite forcefield.

Supergirl: [hissing] Another fucking gadget!

Regaining her strength and confidence, Knightwoman gets up off the ground and puts her boot back on. She stands tall and adjusts the rest of her costume. The tights are a mess, but everything else is intact. She peels back her left glove and we see the communicator watch on her wrist.

Knightwoman: And here's yet another gadget. Let's get the rest of the Justice League down here.

Suddenly, the communicator glows red hot and Knightwoman is forced to unfasten it and throw it to the ground.

Supergirl: The range of my heat vision is much more than ten feet. Guess what I'm going to burn next?

The green glow of the forcefield flickers out and Knightwoman's utility belt begins to glow red hot. She frantically unfastens it and throws it to the ground.

Supergirl: Take away your toys and you're just a helpless damsel hiding in a silly spandex costume. Now kneel before real power!

Knightwoman: Never!

Supergirl grabs Knightwoman and forces her to kneel.

Supergirl: You knew this was coming. Your career as Knightwoman will be over in a few seconds.

Knightwoman: [shrieking] NO! GET OFF ME!

Knightwoman fruitlessly tries to anchor the mask as Supergirl begins to tease the spandex away from her skin. Finally, Supergirl gets a grip on the mask from the top and slowly pulls it back. Knightwoman exhales a sigh of defeat as the disguise falls away and her beautiful face is completely exposed. As a finishing touch, Supergirl unties Knightwoman's ponytail and lets her hair cascade down. She then grips the unmasked heroine's jaw and forces her to look straight down the lens of the camera.

Supergirl: So Knightwoman is really [insert name]!

TO BE CONTINUED IN LIZLETTERSBY'S SEX SCENE...


Okay, so we have a betrayal with Knightwoman shocked (in every sense of the word) and reduced to a helpless wreck. There's a load of nylon destruction and light fondling, although the actual under-the-tights fingering by SG can be cut if we want to save the sex for Liz's finale. There's a ton of maskplay with KW's mask pulled down as a blindfold, nearly removed several times and finally ripped off her face.

Is this the sort of thing the group would be happy to see?
lizlettersby wrote:Ok! Thanks for waiting you guys. I'm finally posting my vision for the sex scene. I want it to emphasize Supergirl's psychological demise, which would work better if it comes after the unmasking. Here's how I envision it:

1) Once SG has brutalized and weakened KW enough, she goes about the unmasking, toying with KW, pulling at the mask, then letting it fall back into place, etc., etc. Finally she does a long, slow unmasking as KW begs her not to, holding on to her mask, twitching her head away from SG's hands. But she is no match for SG in her weakened state and at last the mask comes slowly off.

2) SG stands back with an evil look. At first it seems as if her job is finished, as though she is getting ready to leave KW in this state. But then she starts eye KW's body. She looks at parts of the KW costume that are ripped, revealing the supple flesh beneath. SG's face changes from a look of triumph to a look of hunger...

3) Slowly SG begins sliding her hands up and down KW's body, caressing every groove and crevice. Then she slips her fingers in some of the tears in KW's costume. She grips them and tears them open some more. (This will let us see some skin while still leaving the majority of the costume in tact.) In the meantime, KW cries in fear, begging SG to stop and saying things like, “Please.... haven't you destroyed me enough already?”

4) Eventually SG goes for bigger game. She tears open KW's costume so that her ass is exposed. She spanks KW, as well as groping/sucking/licking her ass cheeks as well as her pussy. Then she moves to KW's breasts, similarly tearing open the costume (or simply pulling it down) and then proceeding to grope/suck/lick and worship the breasts. KW continues to squirm and struggle, begging that SG stop. SG pulls down her own top and force feeds her breasts to KW.

5) When SG has bored with this, she stands up over KW. KW breathes a sigh of relief, believing her ordeal to be over. But instead, SG begins to tie the heroine up. She ties KW's arms straight behind her back. Then SG whips out a strapon. She kneels next to KW and rubs the strapon over the heroine's face. Then SG stands up once more and slowly, sensually straps on the dildo.

6) From there, we see how demented SG has actually become. She begins getting rough with KW's body. Breathing heavily in anticipation with a look of determination on her face, she throws the heroine onto her stomach and voraciously continues to suck, lick, and slap her body. Then she takes the strapon and lines it up with KW's pussy. “God no!” screams KW. SG thrusts viciously into KW's pussy and begins mercilessly fucking her doggy-style [this will probably be simulated, of course]. She grabs the arms that are tied behind KW's back so that she can pull the heroine harder and harder onto the cock.

(Preferably, we'll get a few different shots of the sex scene – some from behind both girls so that we see how fiercely SG is going at KW; some that show KW's face in fear and pain and SG's behind her, laughing and moaning in the pleasure she gets from feeling so empowered over another heroine.) SG continues until KW is forced into a screaming, thrashing orgasm, during which she continues to cry in protest and denial. Afterwards, the heroine lays there like a tenderized lump of meat, defeated and barely conscious.

7) SG states that now KW will slake her lust. She leans over KW and begins kissing her on the lips. As she does this, she reaches down and unties KW's hands and orders the heroine to finger her. KW complies, too weak to put up any resistance. SG moans loudly, her eyes rolling back into her head. Then she crawls forward and positions her pussy over KW's face, demanding that KW satisfy her orally. She sits up vertically over KW at first, massaging her breasts as she gets eaten out. Then she leans forward on the ground as she inches closer to climax. We see her face contorted in pleasure and her moans growing louder until she can no longer hold back. She grinds and pumps her hips forward against KW's face and has a mind-shattering orgasm.



****Note: here I have thrown in one last twist to the plot. I know it's late in the production, so we can nix it if we want. But as I was writing the sex part, this came to mind, and I wanted to see what you guys thought.****


8) Supergirl lays to the side of KW, panting exasperatedly, her eyes closed, with a soft smile of contentment on her face. Because she untied her foe for the sake of her own sexual pleasure, KW is actually free and even though the heroine is fatigued, she knows this is her only chance to undo the horrors she has endured. She takes the opportunity to crawl, weakly, back towards where her utility belt had earlier fallen on the floor. The belt has cooled off by now (which we can show through visual effects, i.e. it is not glowing red like it was when SG used her heat ray on it).

9) SG, still blinded by her own climax, is unaware of KW's attempt for redemption. She lays there moaning contentedly, softy rubbing her breasts and pussy with her fingers. KW succeeds in reaching the belt and with what strength she has left, she reattaches it and reactivates the kryptonite forcefield. Immediately, SG's moans of pleasure turn into moans of pain. Still laying on the floor, her eyes pop open, wide with fear. “What?! How did you...?” Then looking at KW with her utility belt back on, she cries, “NO! God no, please!”

10) As SG squirms on the floor, KW starts to feel overcome by the turn of events. Although she started out just wanting to escape SG's evil clutches, now that she is the one in control, her motives begin to change. She kicks SG around lightly as the villainess's powers drain. SG attempts to crawl away, but she can barely put up a fight as the effects of the kryptonite grow stronger.

11) Eventually, KW starts to take out her feelings of betrayal on SG sexually. She repays the spanking and the roughhousing, tearing off parts of SG's costume. KW pins SG to the ground and licks her breasts, neck, and begins voraciously kissing the evil heroine. (From here, I'd like to leave it open. Should KW put on the strapon and repay SG point for point? Or should she merely have SG eat her out? What's your guys' opinion?)

12) When KW is finished using SG's body and repaying her in kind, she stands up over SG, panting. SG continues to moan in pain. The kryptonite has made her so weak that she does not have even the strength of an ordinary mortal at this point. KW says, “I'm sorry it has to come to this, Supergirl. But you are simply too dangerous to be allowed to stay in our world.” She wraps her arms around SG's neck and twists, putting a tragic end to the heroine and villain, all in one.

13) KW then takes the camera that SG was using to expose her secret identity and destroys it. [We can make this part of the storyline work if, instead of a live stream, SG was merely using a camcorder which she planned to later send to the news media or upload to the internet.] She pulls her costume back on, weakly. The last thing we see is KW pick her mask back up and warily place it on her head before heading out the door, looking sorrowfully back once more at the fallen body of SG before she walks out.



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PS - I don't mean to prolong our custom even further. But one of my biggest fetishes is switch / power reversals. If it's ok with you guys, I'd like to include it if we could. But I'm open to hearing the group's opinions on this. And also, let me know how the sex scene feels to you.

Anyone is still welcome to add further suggestions/contributions which fit in with the story. However, ideas such as "Supergirl stays dry" or "Knightwoman keeps her mask on" may not go down well.
Unmaskee wrote:I can't put any money in until about this time next month.
Yeah, January is always a tough month. MH, when would payment be required?
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Man this looks good, can't wait!
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Whenever you guys are ready to move forward with it. We can shoot it in late Feb if that works for you guys.
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That would certainly suit me. Mid feb I should have some money.
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MH, bearing in mind that boy/girl sex would only be suggested or simulated and that costume destruction could be limited to just the tights (unless you already have a worn/ripped Knightwoman leotard you're planning to throw out), what sort of price would we be looking at for this storyline with two models + girl/girl sex (with or without on-screen penetration)?
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Just looking over the script again, I see we have a weakened Supergirl dunked in a pool/tub and we have a villain who shoots lightning bolts from his hands. Seeing as electricity and water is a nasty combination, maybe we could add a shot of the villain blasting the water and giving SG a mega-shock?
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Sure. Why not?
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With or without penetration with toys are 2 completely different rates. Did you want to know the difference in price? I think that's what you're asking?
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Yeah, I just wanted to know how much penetration with a strap-on would raise the price? Lizlettersby acknowledged that her scene would probably involve simulated penetration, so that will suffice if the real thing is going to cost a lot more.

As far sex scenes go, the consensus seems to be:
boy/girl: Over-the-costume groping. Sex is only simulated or suggested.
girl/girl: Very hands-on with leotards pulled down (not fully removed) and tights ripped open at the crotch. SG will be shown wearing a strap-on, but the penetration of KW can probably be simulated.
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I would rather see simulated than suggested for the supergirl/villain sex scene if its not too costly
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DrObiCaffi wrote:I would rather see simulated than suggested for the supergirl/villain sex scene if its not too costly
I agree. Simulated sex could work really well.

Maybe focus on SG's face as we hear the sounds of her tights being ripped open and the villain entering her. Then cut to a simulated shot of the villain bumping and grinding between her legs.
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Penetration with a strap-on is almost as much as a girl/girl rate. If you want to save some money and you don't have to see the "actual" penetration, then go with simulated.

Every actress/model is different on how they view toy penetration so it would depend on who we get. I'll talk rates with you guys offline.
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Who's available for shoots this month? Does lizz know this is when we're aiming for?
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DrObiCaffi wrote:Who's available for shoots this month? Does lizz know this is when we're aiming for?
I PMed Liz about the late February shoot and she replied a few days ago. She has been pretty busy recently, but she is still on-board.
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How many actresses will there be and who are your preferences, I can start contacting them and getting them prepped.
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It looks like it'll be two actresses. Samantha Ryan would be great as Knightwoman, but I'd have no complaints if you re-used Kendra or Veronica instead.

I think DrObiCaffi was after someone new as Supergirl, rather than Ashley or Randy. Can you suggest any blonde models who might be available?
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Yeah don't get me wrong, I love ashley and randy, just wanted to see other options.. I do prefer the blonde look for super girl but if she's hot enough I wont be picky.
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Hey all. So sorry that I've been mostly absent. Life has not been kind to me as of late. I am still all in, though.

Haven't had a lot of time to think about this project lately, but I am a big supporter of Samantha Ryan as KW. And I think Randy is a phenomenal actress, so I'd love to see her as super girl. But I'd also like to wait to make final decisions until we know what actresses are available/willing.

I'm still here everyone, just not as frequently as I'd like to be.....
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glad to hear you are still on board, and I understand life being crazy. My question is though- is what you have written up good for that sex scene or are u still writing up something more?
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Oh, I hadn't realized I was supposed to be writing something more. Sorry. Was there something you guys wanted changed, or wanted more of?
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What you've written is fine, Liz. To be honest, the sex scene won't need a lot of dialogue and MH has already said that dialogue is a killer when it comes to shooting video.

All we need to do now is just edit the existing script slightly to incorporate later suggestions and to make sure that it all hangs together. I'm not too bothered about the dialogue being recited verbatim, just as long as the basic storyline is conveyed.

Oh, we also need a copyright-friendly name for our Supergirl character and finally a title for the video.
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Could we just add "super" to the model's first name then call it "super___ transformed" or somethin like that?


HA, do u want to take a stab at the final draft or shall I?


Has everyone who is in read what we have and are u all happy with it?

MH, do u have a darker version of the supergirl costume for after the transformation? If not no biggie.
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What ever became of this group custom?
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MightyHypnotic wrote:Sorry I didnt realize there was a question directed this way.

Yes I do have a dark version.

http://www.hypnoticsworld.com/viddetail.php?id=259

You can see some good examples there...
I think DrObiCaffi was thinking of a slightly darker version of the standard red and blue costume like this:

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DrObiCaffi wrote:I definitely like the different costumes for the super girl character good and evil (typical and a darker one) but I was wondering what you guys thought about a DARKER blue like Superman 3 or SHAKESHIFT did a Super Girl transformation where as a heroine she is in a typical lighter blue and red then once transformed, she has a darker super girl outfit. I think I would prefer that to a black if MH has a cheap solution.
If you don't have an SG costume in that shade in the wardrobe, maybe it would be possible to change her look subtly with lighting or by adding a filter in post-production? Even very small changes such as dark lipstick could make SG look a bit sinister.

Also, can you recommend any blonde models who are available for customs?
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Yes, that is exactly what I meant HA, no biggie if that isn't available though. Um as far as progress, are we waiting for me to put all the ideas together? Or did someone else want to tackle it? I am definitely anxious to get this up and going again...
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Ok if you want someone new for the supergirl part I'll start a search. I dont have a supergirl costume in that shade it would have to be custom made.
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MightyHypnotic wrote:Ok if you want someone new for the supergirl part I'll start a search. I dont have a supergirl costume in that shade it would have to be custom made.
If the "slightly darker" idea would require a special custom costume, we'll probably be fine with whatever you already have in stock.

I'm easy about how SG looks post-transformation. Would people prefer her to remain in her red and blue costume (with or without a glow/tint to make it look darker) or should she change into the black costume (with or without black tights)?
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I wouldn't mind a change into something with black tights, then she can have hers ripped with a tan pair underneath too! YUMMY! My only problem with the change is Knight Woman thinking super girl is still good when she first arrives. But that's not a huge issue....


now, I am I putting all the scripts together? Or can we just work with what we have already put together on this thread?? Im all for just rolling with that.... I'm ready to see super girl get DIPPED!
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The costume change could be noticed by Knightwoman and then excused by Supergirl with a single line about her getting a "new look". Plenty of heroines wear black costumes, so KW wouldn't automatically jump to the conclusion that SG has turned evil.

Alternatively, the change to the black costume could be slotted-in after SG rips open KW's tights and she's electrocuted repeatedly by the male villain. It could either be a "magical" transformation with the costume changing in an instant or SG could stand over the electrocuted KW and strip-off. She could even rub the removed red and blue costume in KW's face.

The script seems pretty much complete. You (and anyone else) may want to tweak it here and there, though.

I think we'll probably have to be realistic that dialogue won't be performed verbatim. One thing we could do is highlight any particular lines that we feel are important, so the performers can nail the essential dialogue.
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I can try to put it all together later tonight and or tomorrow, the only part that isn't in script format is the girl/girl sex scene, any other tweaks should be simple enough. Your costume change ideas work fine HA, I'm onboard, any reason to double up on hose again is FINE BY ME! So hot!

I'm ready to find available models and pick our Super Girl and Knight Woman. So excited to pick our victims! Let's get those cameras rolling!
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Basically, judging from the sex scene you posted, this is a girl/girl scene unless you change it somehow.

Also I thought you guys wanted Samantha for this role?
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We may need to contact Liz to see how far she wants the sex scene to go. I would personally like to see partial removal of leotards and tights to expose the girls' tits and pussies at the very least. However, I would be fine with a realistic simulated sex scene with the dildo penetration implied, rather than shown.

What do others want? And what would the price difference be between a simulated girl/girl sex scene and actual penetration?

Samantha certainly seems to be the first choice for Knightwoman. If Sam is available, we now need a model for the Supergirl character.
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Yeah, whoever is fine with me for knight girl, would love to see who is available for super girl. again, blonde preferred but as long as she looks good in wet hose, I'm happy!
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I know MH had Aaliyah Love on his list of customs models a while ago. Does she float your boat?
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Yeah, she is pretty hot. I could definitely go fo her, would still like to see who's available though, im sorry im slacking on combining the scripts, lots of stuff goin down lately. How many contributers do we have? Id like to get this show on the road!
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Ok, I have the scripts combined.... The ending is kind of unfinished because Lizz suggested a twist that I like just fine. In fact I wrote into the script. I just ask that everyone involved read it and vote on keeping or changing the ending. (I marked the spot where the twist comes in). I also would also like to hear suggestions to fix or change, if nothing too major I REALLY want to get into the casting process to begin filming. Let's do this! Below is the script!

PROLOGUE

Lair Set

Dr. Obi Caffi is fighting Knightwoman. He blasts her with a bolt of electricity and she falls to the ground. As the still-conscious super heroine lies twitching, the villain kneels down and begins stroking her nylon-clad thighs. We hear a faint crackle of electricity as he runs his hands over her body.

The villain unclasps KW's cape and then pulls it away to reveal the back of her leotard. He slides the zipper down and runs his finger along the thin strips of exposed pink flesh (with the crackling sound effect). He pulls the leotard down from KW's shoulders and then stops, realizing he's forgotten something...

Villain
Oh, the things I'm going to do to you. But I should really get to know you first.

He grips her mask.

Knightwoman
[groggily] No! Get off me!

Without hesitation, he pulls the mask back and fully reveals KW's face.

Villain
I don't believe...

KW suddenly sprays something into the villain's face. He falls to the ground and passes out.

Knightwoman
Sweet dreams, creep. You'll wake-up in a cozy little cell with no memory of my identity thanks to good old amnesia spray.


KW pulls her mask back on.


Knightwoman
That was too close for comfort.



SIX MONTHS LATER...

Office Set



A beautiful young woman is at an office desk, looking at a computer screen. She is wearing a white button up blouse , a dark skirt and tan tights. She adjusts the glasses on her face when she clicks on a link to a news story.

NEWS ANCHOR
We have breaking news regarding the trial of known terrorist Dr. Obi Caffi. We have just received word that he has escaped from custody during transfer from the courthouse back to The State penitentiary. Our Cameras were on hand to capture this incident but some sort of reaction causing a blinding light and deafening noise seemed to disable any electrical devices within a 3-mile radius. It was during this phenomenon that the Evil doctor was allowed to escape. Unfortunately the heroine who captured Dr. Caffi, Super Girl, was in court to testify YESTERDAY. We can only assume our Heroine and her Partner(s) were doing some other heroic deeds that kept them from supervising the trial and transfer of this horrible criminal. Dr. Caffi of course is on trial for the threats he made on several popular tourist attractions around the globe. Thankfully Super Girl and her partner(s) were able to thwart the evil doctor's plans. We can only hope the Ladies of Liberty will be able to reprehend this maniac once again.

The beautiful woman picks up the phone on her desk and presses a few buttons, she looks around to make sure no one was around to hear her make the top secret call she was about to make. A woman answers on the other end.

Super Girl
It's me, did you see?

Knightwoman
Yeah, I saw, you should get to his hideout right away, he just might be stupid enough to try to obtain supplies there before he runs.

Super Girl
OK, I'll meet you there. Together we can....

Knightwoman
I am on my way to New York, word has gotten out of a bank robbery in progress there, you'll have to take this one on your own.

Super Girl
A bank robbery in New York? Why don't we let Police handle that one? Dr. Caffi is way more threatening.

Knightwoman
Yes, but you took care of him before with no problems, you got this.

Super Girl
I know but I have a bad feeling about this. Something about the way he escaped, how could he have caused that kind of reaction while in police custody? He may be getting stronger. Let the police handle the issue in New York, Let's take this scum bag down together.



Knightwoman
I am too close to NY now. You KNOW I can handle this quickly, why don't you head to his hideout and I will get there as soon as I can. We shouldn't waste any more time arguing, you need to get going.

Super Girl
::sighs:: You're right. But you BETTER hurry.

Super girl hangs up the phone and leaves her desk area. She gets to a hallway leading to a back exit of her office and begins to walk backwards. She takes off her glasses and tosses them aside as she scans for potential witnesses to the pending transformation. She then moves her hands down to her blouse, slowly undoing each button. She spreads her shirt open revealing a blue leotard top with a red and yellow "S" on her chest. By the time she gets outside, she is also wearing a Red cape, a short red frilly skirt and Knee high Red Boots. She turns around and takes off for the sky.

She lands outside the entrance to an old factory and enters. She is hesitant but confident at the same time. She passes through a few rooms and turns around a few corners until she comes up to man frantically working on a syringe. Super Girl scans the area fast while his back is still turned and sees no immediate threat.

Super Girl
That was very stupid doctor. You should not have come back here.

The doctor was startled. He jumps and turns around. He is nervous and scared,

Dr. Obi Caffi
Super Girl, you... you know I need my medicine. I had to come back. I wasn't even going to run, the authorities wouldn't let me get it. I escaped just to have it. I was going to turn myself back in, I swear.

Super Girl
Do you honestly think I would believe you would turn yourself back in? You ARE stupid. Let's go Doctor, you've wasted enough of my time.

Dr. Obi Caffi
OK, just let me....

He quickly raises his hands and electricity shoots from his finger tips. They merely crash into the heroines chest and disappear without so much as a blink from Super Girl.

Super Girl
Haven't we been down this road before doctor?

The doctor charges at Super Girl and throws a few punches and kicks. Our heroine dodges a few and blocks a few with ease, but allows the last punch thrown to strike her directly in the face. Dr. Caffi falls to the ground holding his hand.

Super Girl
To think I was worried about coming here on my own. I actually thought you were getting stronger. You are pathetic. Enough of all this, let's get you back downtown where you belong.

She grabs him by the shirt with one hand and launches him to his feet.

Dr. Caffi
::panting:: I finally get that you will always be more powerful than me. I surrender. I only ask that you PLEASE let me take my medicine, without it, I will die. You want me to get my fair trial, right?

Super Girl
Do it fast, ::She shoves him over to the table she originally caught him working at:: I'll make sure you get what you need while you are in prison. But like I said before, I'm tired of you wasting my time.

The doctor grabs the syringe and an evil grin comes over his lips.

Dr. Caffi
You're right Super Girl, I have wasted your time. Fortunately though, from now on, you'll appreciate the time you spend with me.

Super Girl
What on EARTH are you talking about? Get over here so we can leave this disgusting place.

The doctor plunges the syringe into his arm and his body shakes and twitches a little.. He closes his eyes and breathes in deep. He breathes out just as deep and turns around.

Dr. Obi Caffi
You see Super Girl, this all part of my plan. My MASTER plan to turn YOU into my most powerful and obedient soldier. Say good-bye to the "GOOD" life Super Girl.

Super Girl
:: She looks at him utterly confused:: Huh. Stupid AND crazy. :: She rolls her eyes:: Let's go Doc...

The doctor raises his hands and another burst of lightning jolts out from his fingertips but THIS time, the electricity slams into Super Girl's body and forces her backwards and slams her into the nearest wall.


Super Girl
Wha... What's happening? How? How did...

Another blast of lightning hits the gorgeous gal and she screams and twitches in pain still standing up against the wall.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh Super Girl, you have no idea how long I have waited for this. All the planning, all the sacrifice is FINALLY paying off.

He sprays her again with electricity and laughs. The lightning stops and he looks at his hands, very satisfied.

Dr. Obi Caffi
This is fun, but I've been DIEING to just kick the shit out of you. Let's mix things up, shall we?

He approaches Super Girl as she regains her balance, she looks ready to put up a fight. She is excited that he decided to end the berates of lightning bolts. "This is my chance", she thinks. She swings at the doctor but she moves much slower than she is used to and he easily dodges her blow.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Tsch... So close. Tell you what. Try again.

She looks at her hands baffled at their lack of speed and power.

Super Girl
My... my powers?

She swings again. This time he ducks and pushes her back.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Whoa, that was close. One more time.

She swings even weaker, and just like her enemy a few short minutes ago, she landed the blow. But just like before- barely nothing happened. The doctor straightens out his head and smiles.

Dr. Obi Caffi
My turn!!!

An upper cut swing from the doctor lands on the chin of Super Girl and she groans in pain. He comes at her again and again with punches, knees and kicks to her face, her gut and below her belt. Blow after blow slams into the Super Heroine as she grunts and yelps in pain.

Dr. Obi Caffi
For so long I've watched you in the news. I read about you in the papers. Hell, I've been part of the story myself many times. You've always found away to escape, you've always managed to thwart my plans. ::he continues to punch and kick as he talks:: But not this time. Oh no. Not THIS time.

One more punch to Super Girl below the belt and she folds in half, dropping to her knees struggling to breathe.

Dr. Obi Caffi
So... THIS is what it feels like to have TOTAL dominance over your opponent. Kind Of Fun Don't you think?

A kick to the face sends the heroine onto her back. She rolls around on the floor. Coughing and choking. Her eyes are open staring off to the ceiling wondering how this EVER could have happened. She finally rolls over onto her hands and knees and stands herself up.

Super Girl
I don't know how you are doing this. ::breathing heavily:: But I will never give up...

She squints her eyes at the doctor, hoping to blast him with her laser-eyes. All that comes out though is a weakened shot that hits that doctor and barely even budges him. Super Girl's eyes widen in terror as the doctor brushes of the spot the laser hit him. He chuckles.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh Super Girl, ::the grin turns into a look of evil:: Now YOU are wasting MY time.

He raises his hands again and THRUSTS them toward the damaged Super Girl and once again lightning shoots from his fingers. Once again the lighting strikes the heroine and slams her back into the wall. She hits it standing with her arms stretched out, bent up at the elbows, palms facing out. This time, the doctor doesn't let up when Super Girl hits the wall, he continues firing at her as her screams get louder. She twitches and squirms up against the wall, almost as if she is bound against it by the electricity shooting at her.

Super Girl
Ppppppppllllleeeeeaaaaasssseeee nnnnnnnooooooo.....

But the doctor continues. straining harder as if trying to shoot more out at her. Finally he lowers his hands and the lightning stops. Super Girl tumbles to the floor and turns over on to her stomach, a blank look in her eyes staring off to nowhere. Finally a long blink and her head rolls as if she can't control it. A couple of short looks back and forth and she starts crawling. It takes every ounce of her strength and energy just to move her arm forward, but she starts to move. The doctor slowly walks over to her and kicks her in the middle of her back forcing her back onto the ground.

Dr Obi Caffi
Where do you think you're going bitch?

She starts to get back up on her knees but he grabs her ankles and pulls her back over to the middle of the room. She kicks and screams desperately trying to get free from his grip but he is clearly stronger than her now.

Dr. Obi Caffi
It's over Super girl. You are mine now. You have no place to go. Save your strength, you are going to need it.

One more tiny little shot of lightning from his fingers and she jolts violently then slumps back on the floor. She doesn't speak, she doesn't look at him, she just twitches until she finally flips herself over again, this time she is unable to get back on her knees. The doctor moves in front of her and sits down blocking her path. He grabs her by the shoulders and flips her over. He rests her back against him. His head next to hers, he starts whispering in her ear.

Dr Obi Caffi
You see Super Girl, I never needed medicine, I didn't come back here scared for my life. ::the doctor looks forward and pets Super Girl's head with his right hand holds her waist with the other, while revealing his plan:: I came here to give myself the FINAL dose of the... KRYPTONITE serum I have been working on. I knew you had gotten close to me so I LET you capture me. I can't give myself the doses too close together, so I went to jail so you would lower your guard, hoping to keep you away from my lair. I couldn't let you do too much research and discover that part of the plan before I had given myself the final dose. Ya see it's this serum that gave me the power to finally bring you quite literally to your knees. And don't worry. ::He pulls his hand from her head and reaches around her waist and meets his other hand. He then lifts them up onto her breasts to steal a feel as he continues:: I have more, LOTS MORE and I plan on sharing with you!

He lifts another syringe in front of Super Girl's face, she is too weak to struggle.

Super Girl
No, you can't, ::she winces in pain:: it will kill me.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh, I don't think so. See, I've deluded this batch with enough other materials to merely weaken you. I don't want you dead.

Her focus turned from the syringe to the doctor and she again squints, hoping to blast her enemy, put this time, her eyes just glow red and nothing even shoots out. She shakes her head and focuses again on the syringe as the doctor takes the top off. Her eyes widen in fright as she follows the needle as long as she can with her eyes.

Super Girl
What are you going to do to me?

Dr. Obi Caffi
I already told you

The doctor pulls the heroines head to the side by her hair and pulls the rest of her hair away from her neck. He then plunges the needle into her well exposed neck. Super Girl blinks and a tear drops down her cheek. She Winces and twitches as the formula spreads. The twitching intensifies until she finally collapses in his lap.

Super Girl wakes up to find herself unable to move. Not necessarily because she is too weak, but because she is bound to a table slanted over a small pool. She shimmers and shakes, trying to get loose but no use. She can feel something inside her preventing her from using her Super strength. The serum. She looks down but all she can see is a board that has been placed around her neck separating her head from the rest of her body.
What she couldn't see is that she was strapped down with multiple straps. Her arms snug right up against her body and her legs tightly together. One strap ran high over her arms, between her shoulders and her elbows. T he next over her forearms and stomach. There was another stretched over her beautiful pantyhosed thighs, and a final over her shins. She could also feel that her wrists were shackled separately. She kicks her feet around best she can and feels restraints, but it doesn't feel as if she was shackled in down there. She turns her head and sees the evil doctor walk over to her.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Ah, you are awake. Good. Allow me to explain to what is about to happen you. As you already know, my KRYPTONITE serum is running through your veins, keeping you too weak to break your binds. It is also breaking down the armor that is your, dare I say, ::he looks her up and down:: AWESOME body, allowing my OTHER formula, waiting for you in this pool, to penetrate your skin and absorb into your system, killing off the kryptonite serum and making you even STRONGER than before I bested you.

Super Girl
Once again, doctor, you show your stupidity. ::She winces as she feels some kryptonite flow inside her::. If you make me stronger I will escape and take you down. But his time I won't take you in. I will kill you.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Such an awful threat coming from such a "pure soul" Super Girl. Don't worry you won't have to kill me. You will call me sir. See this other formula will make you strong enough to defeat me, but it will also scramble your mind, making ME your MASTER! You will be evil. The process will be painful and may kill you, but either way, I win.

Super Girl
Oh my god. It won't work. It CAN'T WORK. Oh please knightwoman come for me.

Another tear drips down her cheek.


Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh, and did I forget to mention the serum is also going to be used to spread my semen throughout your body, to mix with your DNA?


Super Girl
Your... Then you mean...

Dr Ob Caffi
That's right Super Girl. ::He runs his hands all over her body and stops between her legs and rubs harder:: I get to FUCK YOUR BRAINS out. HA HA. No pun intended. Please don't think I'm going to enjoy that part. Ok maybe I will, but it is an EVIL necessity when it comes to this plan. ::He looks her body up and down as he continues to rub her body all over:: What do you think? Are you as excited to get started as I am? Shall we?

Super Girl
Oh my god this can't happen. Knightwoman where are you?

She squirms and wiggles best she can while the doctor runs his hands down her legs and stops when he reaches her boots.

Dr. Obi Caffi
We don't want the formula to penetrate your body too quickly. It may kill you. So we'll leave this costume on. I don't think we'll need these though.

He unzips her first boot and pulls it off. He runs both his hands over her thighs and calves once more of her beautiful legs are exposed. Super Girl starts sobbing as the evil doctor feels her up.

Super Girl
Please stop this. You can't do this to me. If you stop now, I promise I'll make Knight Woman go easy on you when she gets here. Just STOP!

The doctor unzips and pulls off the other boot, repeating the groping as he answers the heroine.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Knightwoman? HA! I happen to know she is on her way to NYC to take of a little BANK ROBBERY that I may, or may not have had something to do with. That little problem should take a lot longer handle than she anticipated. I have PLENTY of time to do what I need to do with you. Then, you will help me take her down!

With both boots off, he straps each ankle into its designated shackle. Her legs closed together.

Super Girl
:: she sobs:: Oh no. Please no, please don't do this, I ca....

He jams a ring gag into her mouth and pulls the strap around her head to strap it on.

Dr. Obi Caffi
No can do Super Girl. It's time.

She continues to scream pleads at him as he walks away to a hanging control panel. He reaches the mechanism and turns around.

Dr. Obi Caffi
So long Super Girl. I look forward to meeting the "new you"

Dr. Caffi grabs the device and pushes a green button. Her chest heaves up and down as her breathing gets heavier and heavier. Her eyes widen in horror as the table she is on slowly starts to lower her towards the pool. Her head turns down trying to see when she will meet the water, then she looks back at the grinning doctor who is now rubbing his hands together. She squirms more and more as she gets closer and closer to the formula.
We see a tight shot of the heroines pantyhosed feet getting closer to the water, then we see and hear the gorgeous girl try to scream "please" through her gag. We move back down to her feet and see them touch the water. As soon as they reach the water bubbles. We go back to a shot of the heroine from the waist up and we see her body LOCK UP and her head TILT STRAIGHT UP as she screams in pain from her toes reaching the poisoned water. We go back to the shot of her feet and we watch the rest of her body enter the pool. Her feet then ankles then calves, knees and thighs become saturated as they enter the pool. Next is her skirt with her hands held tight against her body. Her waist is now in, and her blue Leotard follows until the table stops at the board around her neck.
All that was going into the water was now in. The heroine shakes, and twitches and screams as much as she can through her gag. Her eyes, closed for the most part, open as she turns her head to look at the evil doctor. Begging for it all to stop.
The doctor watches and waits. He finally pushes another button on the device, slowly lifting the heroine from the water.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Well that's the end of stage 1. If we leave you in for too long at a time, it will probably kill you. We need to take our time. Don't worry it won't be too long.

Caffi walks back over to the wet heroine and starts touching her wet weakened body. She is breathing heavily and crying.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Wow. That went very well. And might I say you look very sexy all wet and punished like this. It may make fucking you later that much easier. Oh who am I kidding. I'm sure we'll both enjoy that part either way. Well, shall we move on to phase 2?


She shakes her head no in a very weak manner as the doctor moves back to the device. He pushes the button again and the Heroine is dipped back into the water. She twitches and screams again, but the howls and twitches become less dramatic as the water seems numb the heroine's body. Caffi pushes the button that pulls the girl out of the water once again.
The heroine's eyes are open and look almost dead as water drips from her stockinged feet. Her head sort of dangles off her neck and a little drool pours out of her mouth. Caffi comes back over to examine her, to make sure she is weakened and not dead. Of course he can't resist the opportunity to grope her beautiful wet body again.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Well, I would say so far, so good. I think we can move on to the final phase of absorption.

He shifts some hair on her head and adjust some of clothing and notices her gag is still in her mouth.

Dr. Obi Caffi
I guess you don't REALLY need this anymore.

He removes the gag from her mouth and she immediately starts whispering pleads of mercy.


Super Girl
Please..... stop.... I'm too... weak... please.....


Dr. Obi Caffi
What Super Girl? I can't quite hear you. What's that? You want me to stop? Oh, I'm afraid that can't happen. Just sit tight. It will all be over soon.

Another trip over to the device and a push of the button lowers the sexy heroine back into the pool. this time she is too weak to scream. she just lays on the table and twitches. Her eyes still staring off to nowhere. The water continues to bubble as Super girl twitches and grunts and groans.

Super girl
Please..... make.... it..... stop. Knight Woman, where are you? Where are you?

She blinks as she talks, pushing tears from her eyes. Finally the pain is too much and the heroine passes out. Her head drops and Dr. Caffi pushes the button pulling her out for the final time.

Our heroine wakes again only to find herself bound again. This time, Her hands are bound together, crossed above her head. A single strap lay across her waist and her feet are spread apart, each bound at the ankle. The ring gag reinserted in her mouth. She is still fully clothed, in fact the doctor even put her boots back on her. She looks around and sees Dr. Caffi walking towards her.


Dr. Obi Caffi
All rested up? Good. I guess it's time for the final part of transformation.

Super girl mumbles and begins to struggle as the doctor unzips his fly. He runs his hands through the sexy woman's hair and then moves it down her cheek. Super Girl seems to be getting angry now as the hands of the doctor continue to move down Super Girl's body. he reaches the red skirt and lifts it revealing her sexy panties.

Dr. Obi Caffi
I always wondered if this moment would actually happen. I always asked myself, "Will I ever feel the ultimate heroine's cunt?

He violently tears open the heroine's tights and slides her panties to the side exposing her super pussy.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Am I the only person ever to see this magnificent vagina? ::He touches it:: Am I the only person ever to touch it?

Super Girl begins to cry. Caffi crawls on top of her and she begins kicking and screaming. He grabs her by the back of her hair and pulls her head back as he inserts his throbbing cock into her pussy. Her body jerks up and she screams in pain and horror at the same time.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Am I the first to fuck it?

He continues to thrust in and out of the heroine as she shakes her head back and forth in desperation. She tries to kick but the straps around her ankles prevent from moving too much. This is how it all ends? The doctor continues to fuck her mercilessly and manages to pull her tits out of her leotard. He fondles, licks and kisses them while he builds towards orgasm. As time goes on the heroine calms her body but tears still pour from her eyes.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Ah, just as I imagined. You feel so good you dirty, dirty heroine. You are going to make me cum so hard, and when I do, your transformation will be complete. It's nearly time. It's nearly time. It's.... nearly... Uhhhhhhhhhhhh

The evil doctor shakes as he climaxes. The heroine can feel the cum cover her insides. It catches some of the formula dripping inside her and she can feel an accelerated transfer of fluids throughout her body.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Ah. Just what I needed. Now for the final thing you need. ::He pulls out another syringe:: Just one little shot to get the juices flowing inside you.


He inserts the needle into her thigh showing instant results. Her eyes SLAM shut as she winces and screams as hard as she can through the gag. Her back arches up as far as it can through the binds. Her body shakes and twitches. She looks around wondering what is happening to her body. Her twitches slowly lessen as she blinks out more tears. She can tell this is it, life as she knew was now over forever. She could feel the change begin inside her until her eyes finally slowly slowly slowly close. When they open, they glow a strong and bright green light. A new villain is born.

Knightwoman finally arrives at the villain's lair to find him in the middle of a (fake) fight with Super girl.

Super Girl
Glad you could make it. This creep never seems to run out of juice.

The ladies stand side by side.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Your little alien pal has spent hours absorbing my lightning bolts, Knightwoman, but a mere mortal like you won't last five minutes.

The male villain blasts Knightwoman with a bolt of electricity (just as he did in the prologue). However, this time she stands tall with her hands on her hips.

Knightwoman
Try harder! My conductor tights can take a hit of one-million volts.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Oh, you're a clever bitch! But your precious tights won't protect you when I pull them down and stuff them in your smug mouth.

Knightwoman
Don't waste your time trying to strip them off me. The waistband will only stretch if it scans my fingerprints.


Super girl
So those tights conduct electricity and they work as a chastity belt? You know this perverted creep too well.

Knightwoman
They're virtually indestructible too. It would take someone with superhuman strength to rip them open.

Super girl takes this as her cue to reveal herself as a villainess, She savagely rips huge holes in Knightwoman's dark-colored "conductor tights" exposing the standard tan tights underneath.

Knightwoman
What are you doing? Get off me!
With an evil grin, Super girl turns to address her "master".


Super Girl
She's vulnerable. Blast her now!

Knightwoman
WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOO!

The male villain strikes Knightwoman with another bolt of electricity. This time, her whole body shakes as she feels the full force of the villain's high-voltage assault. The heroine's legs buckle, but Super girl grabs her from behind before she can fall and props up her limp body in a bear hug.

Super Girl
Blast her again!

Knightwoman convulses as she's hit by another bolt. Super girl releases her from the bear hug and watches with amusement as she struggles to remain standing. Super girl grabs the eyeholes of Knightwoman's mask and pulls them down, turning the mask into a makeshift blindfold. With a playful push from Super girl, the weakened and temporarily blinded heroine stumbles to the ground.

Super girl mounts the fallen Knightwoman and continues ripping at the tights. She reaches into the leotard's leg hole and tugs at the (supposedly immovable) waistband, revealing the top of the tan tights underneath. She then pulls off one of Knightwoman's boots and completely tears away the foot of the darker tights, leaving the heroine's foot stockinged in just the under layer of tan nylon.


Super Girl
Blast her while she's down! Make her suffer!

Dr. Obi Caffi
Remember who's in charge here!

The villain is annoyed that his "slave" is literally calling the shots. He raises his hand and it crackles with green-tinged lightning as a reminder to Super girl that he still has plenty of Kryptonite in his system. However, he goes along with the idea and hits the wounded Knightwoman with yet another blast. The heroine writhes in agony and weakly reaches out to Super Girl.

Super Girl
Tie her up!

Dr. Caffi grabs some rope and moves behind Knightwoman. He pulls her hands behind her back and begins binding them together. He wraps more rope around her neck, shocked and in pain, she doesn't even struggle, she just stares at Super Girl DAZED!

Knightwoman
[weakly] Why?

Super Girl kneels down in front of Knightwoman and whispers softly in her ear.


Super Girl
Because you took the easy job and let that vile creep defile my perfect body. He thinks he's going to do the same to you, but you're all mine.

Super girl pulls aside the crotch of Knightwoman's leotard and slides her hand under both pairs of tights. The heroine gasps as she feels Super Girl's touch.

Super Girl
And to think you pulled on those tights believing you would be impenetrable. It didn't cross your naive mind that Super Girl would want your pussy.

Super Girl retracts her hand as she becomes aware of the lecherous gaze of the male villain who is now watching the women and literally salivating. Dr. Caffi stands after binding Knightwoman and now looms over the helpless Knightwoman, leering with ill intent. We hear the electrical crackling sound and the heroine gives out a helpless gasp as the fiend runs his hands over her twitching body.

Dr. Obi Caffi
Just enough juice to keep you tame. Another full blast right now would probably kill you and I'm not into dead girls.

He looks over to the hot tub and picks up a syringe of a purple formula.

Super Girl begins to see flashbacks of her own recent ordeal when she sees the villain pulling down Knightwoman's leotard slightly to shoulder level and injecting the syringe into the helpless heroine's neck.

Dr. Obi Caffi
A special formula I prepared just for you, Knightwoman. Your mind will try to stay feisty, but once you're stimulated, your body will crave orgasm after orgasm.

Knightwoman
[weakly] Keep... your... filthy... hands... off... me!

Dr. Obi Caffi
You'll feel better when I get you out of that costume and put you in a nice hot bath. But I should really get to know you first.


The villain reaches for Knightwoman's mask. He tries to pull at it but it won't budge. (Knightwoman has upped her security since their last meeting. It would take superhuman strength to force it off.) While he's distracted, a furious Super Girl seizes the opportunity to grab him from behind and break his neck, killing him instantly. His limp body falls to the ground, next to Knightwoman.

Still unable to stand, Knightwoman desperately tries to wriggle away on her belly as she becomes the focus of the super psycho's attention. Super Girl effortlessly stops the heroine by sinking a leather boot into the small of her back.

Super Girl
Another perverted fool distracted by your shiny disguise. Shame he didn't have X-Ray vision to see the weak human under all that spandex.

We see a brief "X-Ray vision" shot from Super girl's POV of Knightwoman on the ground, dressed in nothing but her mask.

Super Girl
I should have known your mask would be X-Ray-proof. Now I'm just going to prolong your agony as you wait for me to rip it off.

Super girl gently strokes Knightwoman's cheek and then slides her fingers under the mask, stroking the face underneath, but not exposing it YET. Knightwoman moans weakly. Super Girl then grasps the spandex playfully and tugs at it before letting go, allowing it to snap back into place. The cruel games continue with Super Girl pulling and stretching the mask in various ways, but always letting go at the very last second.

Then Super Girl notices a video camera mounted on a tripod and realizes the degradation of Knightwoman can be recorded for posterity...


Super Girl
Hmmm, I think I'll show EVERYONE the agony and ecstasy etched on your true face as I bring you to climax after climax in our sex tape. Not only will they know Knightwoman's real name, but they'll also know you as the biggest slut on the planet.

Knightwoman's eyes widen in horror at the revelation of her impending fate.


With the camera now set to record the grand unveiling, Super Girl begins to grab and pull at Knightwoman's mask, teasing the spandex away from her skin. As the mask starts sliding up her face, the desperate Knightwoman reaches for her utility with her utility belt with her bound hands and presses a small button. Suddenly, Super girl lets go of the half-off mask and backs away in agony as a green glow surrounds Knightwoman now has time to struggle out of her binds and adjust the mask to cover her face.

Knightwoman
Did you really think I wouldn't have a plan? You won't be able to get within ten feet of my utility belt's Kryptonite force field.

Super Girl
[hissing] Another fucking gadget!

Regaining her strength and confidence, Knightwoman gets up off the ground and puts her boot back on. She stands tall and adjusts the rest of her costume. The tights are a mess, but everything else is intact. She peels back her left glove and we see the communicator watch on her wrist.

Knightwoman
And here's yet another gadget. Let's get the rest of the Justice League down here.

Suddenly, the communicator glows red hot and Knightwoman is forced to unfasten it and throw it to the ground.

Super Girl
The range of my heat vision is much more than ten feet. Guess what I'm going to burn next?

The green glow of the force field flickers out and Knightwoman's utility belt begins to glow red hot. She frantically unfastens it and throws it to the ground.


Super Girl
Take away your toys and you're just a helpless damsel hiding in a silly spandex costume. Now kneel before real power!

Knightwoman
Never!

Super girl grabs Knightwoman and forces her to kneel.



Super Girl
You knew this was coming. Your career as Knightwoman will be over in a few seconds.

Knightwoman:
[shrieking] NO! GET OFF ME!

Knightwoman fruitlessly tries to anchor the mask as Super girl begins to tease the spandex away from her skin. Finally, Super Girl gets a grip on the mask from the top and slowly pulls it back. Knightwoman exhales a sigh of defeat as the disguise falls away and her beautiful face is completely exposed. As a finishing touch, Super Girl unties Knightwoman's ponytail and lets her hair cascade down. She then grips the unmasked heroine's jaw and forces her to look straight down the lens of the camera.

Super Girl
So Knightwoman is really Briana Wayne

SG stands back with an evil look. At first it seems as if her job is finished, as though she is getting ready to leave KW in this state. But then she starts eye KW's body. She looks at parts of the KW costume that are ripped, revealing the supple flesh beneath. Super Girl's face changes from a look of triumph to a look of hunger...

Super Girl
I always found you attractive Briana. But until you decided against coming to my aide, I never wanted you. but now there's just something about seeing you there all tattered and helpless that is just making me want to ravish you!

Knightwoman
What did he do to you? Stop this. Help me!

Super Girl
Whatever he did to me may not have happened if you would have just ignored the other call like I suggested. Now, you will go through the same humiliation as I did. Only the whole world will see what happens to you!

She looks back over to the video camera and circles the fallen Knightwoman running her fingers through her hair. Slowly Super Girl begins sliding her hands up and down Knightwoman's body, caressing every groove and crevice. Then she slips her fingers in some of the tears in KW's costume. She grips them and tears them open some more. (This will let us see some skin while still leaving the majority of the costume intact.)

Knightwoman
Please.... haven't you destroyed me enough already?


Super Girl
Uhhhh you sound so desperate right now. That's making me even hotter!


Super Girl now goes for bigger game. She tears open Knightwoman's costume so that her ass is exposed. She spanks KW, as well as groping/sucking/licking her ass cheeks as well as her pussy. Then she moves to KW's breasts, similarly tearing open the costume (or simply pulling it down) and then proceeding to grope/suck/lick and worship the breasts. Knightwoman's continues to squirm and struggle, begging her to stop. Super Girl pulls down her own top and force feeds her breasts to Knightwoman. When Super Girl has bored with this, she stands up over Knightwoman. Knightwoman breathes a sigh of relief, believing her ordeal to be over. But instead, SG begins to tie the heroine up. She ties KW's arms straight behind her back. Super Girl now grabs strap-on and kneels next to Knightwoman and rubs the strap-on over the heroine's face. Super Girl stands up once more and slowly, sensually straps on the dildo.

Knightwoman
How can you do this to me? You have to stop.

We now see how demented SG has actually become. She begins getting rough with KW's body. Breathing heavily in anticipation with a look of determination on her face, she throws the heroine onto her stomach and voraciously continues to suck, lick, and slap her body. Then she takes the strap-on and lines it up with Knightwoman's pussy.

Knightwoman
Oh God no!

Super Girl thrusts viciously into Knightwoman 's pussy and begins mercilessly fucking her doggy-style. She grabs the arms that are tied behind Knightwoman 's back so that she can pull the heroine harder and harder onto the cock. We see a close-up of the horrified Knightwoman's face as Super Girl rams the dildo in and out of her. Her eyes slam shut in agony at almost every thrust. We see behind Super Girl and how hard she is forcing the dildo inside her. Super Girl continues until Knightwoman is forced into a screaming, thrashing orgasm, during which she continues to cry in protest and denial. Afterwards, the heroine lays there like a tenderized lump of meat, defeated and barely conscious.

Super Girl
And now KNIGHTWOMAN, you will slake my lust!

She leans over KW and begins kissing her on the lips. As she does this, she reaches down and unties Knightwoman's hands. She looks down at Knightwoman's hands then to her own crotch and tears open a hole.



Super Girl
Touch Me!

Knightwoman, too weak to fight back looks at Super Girl and then between her legs. She closes her eyes in disgust as she touches the turned heroine's wet pussy. Super Girl moans loudly, her eyes rolling back into her head. She caresses her own breasts as she enjoys Knightwoman's fingers. Soon, she crawls forward and positions her pussy over Knightwoman's face.

Super Girl
Now, lick my cunt you whore! Lick it until I CUM!

Super Girl sits up vertically over KW at first, massaging her breasts as she gets eaten out. Then she leans forward on the ground as she inches closer to climax. We see her face contorted in pleasure and her moans growing louder until she can no longer hold back. She grinds and pumps her hips forward against Knightwoman's face and has a mind-shattering orgasm.



BELOW IS THE TWIST LIZZ SUGGESTED! Do we want it in, or end With Super Girl winning?



Super Girl lays to the side of Knightwoman, panting exasperatedly, her eyes closed, with a soft smile of contentment on her face. Because she untied her foe for the sake of her own sexual pleasure, Knightwoman is actually free and even though the heroine is fatigued, she knows this is her only chance to undo the horrors she has endured. She takes the opportunity to crawl, weakly, back towards where her utility belt had earlier fallen on the floor. The belt has cooled off by now, and Knightwoman can only hope that the kryptonite function still works properly. Super Girl, still blinded by her own climax, is unaware of Knightwoman attempt for redemption. She lays there moaning contentedly, softy rubbing her breasts and pussy with her fingers. Knightwoman succeeds in reaching the belt and with what strength she has left, she reattaches it and reactivates the kryptonite force field. Immediately, Super Girls' moans of pleasure turn into moans of pain. Still laying on the floor, her eyes pop open, wide with fear.

Super Girl
What?! How did you...? Then looking at Knightwoman with her utility belt back on, she cries, NO!

As Super Girl squirms on the floor, Knightwoman starts to feel overcome by the turn of events. Although she started out just wanting to escape SG's evil clutches, she is now the one in control, and her motives begin to change. She kicks Super Girl around lightly as the villainess's powers drain. Super Girl attempts to crawl away, but she can barely put up a fight as the effects of the kryptonite grow stronger. Eventually, Knightwoman starts to take out her feelings of betrayal on Super Girl sexually. She repays the spanking and the roughhousing, tearing off parts of Super Girl's costume.

Knightwoman
What happened to you? How could you do this to me? You know I would be here, but I had to help innocent civilians first. You used to understand that. Now look at you. What has REVENGE gotten you? Was it worth it? Did it feel good to abuse me like that?

Knightwoman begins to breath heavier as the thought of revenge actually starts to excite her.

Knightwoman
Did it feel good to have such POWER and CONTROL over a helpless victim?

She begins to rub her own body up and down.

Knightwoman
I guess there's only one way to find out.

Knightwoman pins SG to the ground and licks her breasts, neck, and begins voraciously kissing the evil heroine. While straddling Super girl she reaches for the strap-on and secures it on her waist. She grabs Super Girl's hands one by one and puts them over her head. With one hand holding Super Girl's hands, Knightwoman uses her other to slide the strap-on into the fallen villainess' pussy. Super girl, too weak to struggle, once again shows an expressionless face as she is fucked by her own strap-on.

Knightwoman
Oooh, that is exciting. Let's see how your tongue feels.

She straddles Super Girl's face and jabs her to let her know she wants her to lick. Knightwoman's eye's close and her head tilts back as Super Girl begins. She thrusts up and down, running her fingers through her own hair as Super Girl works her magic. Inevitably, Knightwoman reaches a climax as she writhes on top of the newly born villainess. As her body relaxes she stands up over Super Girl, still panting. Super Girl continues to moan in pain. The kryptonite has made her so weak that she does not have even the strength of an ordinary mortal at this point.

Knightwoman
I'm sorry it has to come to this, Super Girl. But you are simply too dangerous to be allowed to stay in our world.

She wraps her arms around SG's neck and twists, putting a tragic end to the heroine and villain, all in one.

Knightwoman takes the camera that Super Girl was using to expose her secret identity and destroys it. She pulls her costume back on, weakly, then picks her mask back up and warily places it on her head before heading out the door. She pauses and looks sorrowfully back once more at the fallen body of SG before she walks out. The camera pans down to Super Girls lifeless body and fades out.
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Nice work making it all hang together, DrObiCaffi.

I would like the twist with Knightwoman retrieving her utility belt and defeating Supergirl. However, as there's already a lot of action in the script, I'm easy about whether we see the point-for-point payback. Depending on how much MH can cram into a half-hour video, it may just be a case of KW getting the belt back and then killing SG instantly.

I'm a bit reticent to ask for any part to be trimmed until MH specifies anything that could cause him problems. We will probably have to accept that large sections of dialogue will need to be cut back and the models should have some freedom to paraphrase or ad-lib lines within the core storyline.
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Yeah, im prepared for script modifications and understand them myself. REMEMBER, EVERYONE INVOLVED NEEDS TO READ AND APPROVE OR SUGGEST CHANGES OR GET YOUR REQUEST IN ASAP SO WE CAN GET A FINAL SCRIPT TO MH FOR PRICING AND TO START CASTING AND SHOOTING! We're almost there y'all!
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Do we have time for a full KW dressing up scene? Including clear putting on of her mask?
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Hey guys, I'll be away until Friday. So we can pick this up then. Right off the bat I would say you need to pare it down a little. Start with the essentials or "must have" scenes and build it up that way.
I know everyone wants a lot of dialogue to set up the scene and for the taunting and verbally breaking down of a heroine but here's a point, don't describe what the viewer already sees. Dialogue takes a LOT of time to get right, and that's time better spent on peril scenarios.
Anyway, I'll try to check in before Fri.
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Unmaskee wrote:Do we have time for a full KW dressing up scene? Including clear putting on of her mask?

Maybe we could show KW unbuttoning her civvies during the phone conversation with SG and then end on three very simple but effective shots:
Gloves pulled on
Boots zipped up
Mask pulled down

Then we cut back to SG for her blouse-ripping transformation.
MightyHypnotic wrote:Hey guys, I'll be away until Friday. So we can pick this up then. Right off the bat I would say you need to pare it down a little. Start with the essentials or "must have" scenes and build it up that way.
I know everyone wants a lot of dialogue to set up the scene and for the taunting and verbally breaking down of a heroine but here's a point, don't describe what the viewer already sees. Dialogue takes a LOT of time to get right, and that's time better spent on peril scenarios.
Anyway, I'll try to check in before Fri.
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Point taken. It's always better to show, rather than tell. Exposition can really be restricted to the stuff which may need a quick one-line explanation such as:
Amnesia Spray
Kryptonite Serum / Pool / Forcefield
The Conversion Process
Shockproof Tights

It's very easy to get bogged down in elaborate pseudoscience and technobabble when a descriptive title (such as the classic Shark Repellent Batspray) is sufficient to tell the audience everything they need to know.

Now we need to concentrate on the bringing the script back to basics with just the essential dialogue and leave the rest to you and the performers.
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Ok, i'll take a crack at shortening the script., i'll do my best to get it done by Sunday night but can't make any promises!

Unmaskee and ha, I agree we could easily through in the knightwoman getting dressed at that point in th e story. Maybe she is already getting dressed while her communicator goes off???

Still looking for who's in, suggestions and script approval and, How much this will cost.
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Also, I was thinking instead of kw snapping sg's neck, how about her turning the power up on her belt to the point where she dies from the kryptonite. I think rolling around on the ground screaming is hotter than snap ur done. Thoughts?
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Nice idea. Maybe SG could try to crawl away until KW traps her in a bearhug, subjecting her to the full force of the kryponite?
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I'd like the dressing scene to feature the mask completely off and fully being put on. I also like the idea of seeing the costume before it's fully put on. Like getting it out of the closet. I don't want a cut to the last few milliseconds of the mask being pulled on but I don't need to see a couple of minutes of pulling on the catsuit.

I want it nice and clear. Should be doable with a few seconds of cuts, right?
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Unmaskee, that all seems quite easy to write in. I am going to try and tackle "shrinking" the dialogue this weekend and I will throw that in. I'll change the death of sg too, what say u all about mine and HA's suggestion of that change lizz and co.?

How does the rest of the script look? Im getting ansy...
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The script is... long that's all I can really say.

Probably best ditch the prologue I'd say and just try to trim things as much as possible. Apart from that we seem fine.
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Shooting an actress getting dressed takes about 30-40 seconds plus whatever close ups we add in. That's simple scene since it requires no rehearsing. If she's doing it while talking on the phone it's a little trickier since any flub in lines requires a full retake and redress...

In regards to shortening the script, an example would be when the Dr is stalling for time and Supergirl has a couple of lines regarding wasting her time, you could just replace that with a shot of her looking/acting a little impatient and achieve the same result.

So anything that can be achieved by looks or quick takes are always good. Save the dialogue for the important stuff.
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