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Here's the first part of a script I sent The Rye a few months ago. Never got a reply, so figured I'd share it with the community. If anyone is interested in co-funding it shoot me a PM. I'm still looking for a producer, but think this one would be a lot of fun. Comments welcome!
SUPERIA AND THE CHAMPIONS THREE
By
HEROINEFALL
BLACK SCREEN
We hear men screaming and chains rattling.
FADE IN:
INT. DR. IVAN BROOD'S LABORATORY - LAST NIGHT
Shadows on the walls of the laboratory thrash as the CAPTIVE
(30) struggles against his bonds. DR. IVAN BROOD (35) walks
into the lab, fingers inner locked, eyes examining the
captive.
CAPTIVE
(panicked)
Please. please let me go.
DR. IVAN BROOD
(lifts a finger to his lips)
It'll be over soon.
(looks down to the vitals monitor)
Your pain will become strength, your
fear; ferocity. Try not to be a
complainer in the meantime.
(presses buttons on the monitor)
What I offer is the gift moral men
desire most. Power.
CAPTIVE
(trembling)
I don't want power. I want to go home.
Dr. Ivan Brood shakes his head then turns away from the
captive. He walks to his laboratory table and fills a syringe
with green serum. Holding the syringe at eye level, he flicks
off excess fluid.
DR. IVAN BROOD
As men you stalked women in the night.
Frail women. Common women. But,
tomorrow you'll hunt a superheroine.
Dr. Ivan Brood returns to the captive and holds the syringe
in front of him. The man's eyes widen, face slick with sweat.
CAPTIVE
(struggling)
Please! No! I can't take any more!
DR. IVAN BROOD
This dose is the last. It's a pity you
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
DR. IVAN BROOD (CONT'D)
won't be able to speak once my serum
pulls apart your DNA. Your account
would be useful data.
(shrugs)
But, we can't always have what we
want. can we?
Dr. Ivan Brood plunges the needle into the captive's chest.
Black screen.
The captive screams, his voice becoming something terrifying.
Deep. Primal. Dr. Ivan Brood laughs with accomplishment.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
Magnificent! You will be my greatest
creation yet. I shall call you...
Ragnaro.
CUT TO:
INT. SUPERIA'S APARTMENT - PRESENT DAY
Light pours in from drawn back curtains into SUPERIA'S (24)
tidy living room. We hear the HISS of a distant shower.
In the hallway the running water grows louder accompanied by
Superia's soft voice humming a sweet melody.
Superia's bathroom is full of steam and her shapely figure is
visible behind a frosted shower curtain.
Inside the shower Superia's naked back is slick with water as
she lathers soap over her shoulder (no nudity).
INTERCUT:
EXT. ALLEYWAY - YESTERDAY
A masked ROBBER (30) runs down an alley, money spilling from
a bank sack in his hand. With labored breathing, the robber
leans against the alley wall.
ROBBER
(panting)
The bitch is fast. Holy fuck she's
fast.
SUPERIA (O.S.)
I gave you a head start, too.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
The bag of cash falls from the robber's hand and he turns to
face Superia.
Superia stands in full uniform beside the robber.
ROBBER
How did you?
SUPERIA
I'm Superia, that's how.
(puts her hands on her hips)
You've had your fun and we've both had
our exercise.
(looks man up and down)
Some of us more than others. Now it's
jail time. Come quietly or.
The robber turns and runs.
S U P E R I A (CONT'D)
(rolls her eyes)
Or run. You can do that, too.
Superia blows a powerful blast of air from her ruby lips.
The super breath sends the robber into a wall. He falls
unconscious on the alley floor.
S U P E R I A (CONT'D)
(cringes with an apologetic
expression)
Oops. You okay, Mr. Robber?
INTERCUT:
INT. SUPERIA'S APARTMENT - PRESENT DAY
Superia turns around allowing the water to run over her
shoulders and between her cleavage (no nudity).
She continues to hum her tune as soap runs down the drain.
INTERCUT:
EXT. PUBLIC PARK - YESTERDAY
A WOMAN (30) stands looking up into a tree calling her cat's
name, Whiskers. A strong gust of wind passes by the woman.
Superia lands next to the woman holding her cat and hands it
to her.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
SUPERIA
Cute kitty.
(scratches the cat behind the ear)
Stay with your mommy, little guy.
Superia flies away.
WOMAN
(looking up towards the sky)
Thank you, Superia!
INTERCUT:
INT. SUPERIA'S APARTMENT - PRESENT DAY
Superia shuts off the water.
Superia steps out of the shower and wraps a towel around
herself (no nudity).
INTERCUT:
EXT. ARSON SCENE - YESTERDAY
Superia stands next to a NEWS REPORTER. Black streaks of ash
span across her cleavage and uniform. A single smudge is on
her cheek.
FIRE TUCK HORNS.
NEWS REPORTER
(microphone in hand)
Superia. You've save the day once
again. How could this city every
replay you for your tireless duty?
SUPERIA
(strikes a heroic pose)
Be good to one another and stay out of
trouble.
INTERCUT:
INT. SUPERIA'S APARTMENT - PRESENT DAY
Superia walks into her living room wearing a t-shirt and
panties. She is drying her hair with a towel.
Superia sits on her couch and turns on the television.
BREAKING NEWS MUSIC.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
NEWS REPORTER (O.S.)
A dishonorably discharged military
scientist, Dr. Ivan Brood, has
hijacked local streaming channels to
broadcast a chilling message. Parents,
we ask that your children leave the
room before we play this audio clip.
Superia turns up the volume on the TV.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
Superia, the city's precious red
booted cunt. Heed my warning or suffer
the consequences. I've planted
canisters of bio-toxins throughout
town.
Superia drops her towel and leans forward in horror.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
They're programmed to detonate within
the hour. If you wish to save your
city, come to my laboratory and face
my Champions Three. I've set a
frequency only you can hear. It will
lead the way.
Superia stands from the couch, hands clenched into fists. Her
eyes narrow into fury.
NEWS REPORTER (O.S.)
Dr. Ivan's threats could not be more
clear. If Superia does not face his
champions our city is doomed.
SUPERIA
Not on my watch.
FADE OUT:
CUT TO:
INT. DR. IVAN BROOD'S LABORATORY - SOON AFTER
Superia crashes through the laboratory's roof landing in a
kneel. She is alone in the lab. The sounds of bubbling
chemicals and other equipment surround her.
She walks with confidence to the room's center. A large clock
is on the wall, all zeros.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
SUPERIA
(confident)
Doctor Brood. I've come as you've
requested. Now disarm those canisters.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Superia. Right on schedule. You're a
good little heroine, aren't you?
SUPERIA
(hands on hips)
Enough games, doctor. I'm here. Spare
the innocent and I'll show mercy on
you and your so called champions.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system, laughs)
Oh, Superia. A tempting offer, but my
champions are without mercy, with out
fear, and without weakness. Unlike
you.
SUPERIA
I have no weakness.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Wrong! Your city is your weakness,
super slut. And that weakness will be
your demise.
SUPERIA
Enough! Bring your champions, Ivan.
Once they're at my feet you WILL
disarm those canisters.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
As you wish, heroine. The rules are
simple. The remote to disarm the
canisters is on the pylon to your
left.
Superia turns and sees a silver pylon with a glass box
covering the black remote.
She takes a step towards it.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3)
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
Not so fast, bimbo. Play by the rules
or I'll set the canisters off with my
backup remote.
Superia stops mid step and places her hands on her hips out
of frustration.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
Now. As I was saying, the rules are
simple. You'll face my Champions
Three. At any moment during the match
you may retrieve the remote and save
your city. Once you've press the
disarm button the match will end and
you will be victorious.
SUPERIA
Sounds simple enough. When do we
begin?
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
I wasn't finish, whore. Should you
fail to press the disarm button before
the timer runs out, you'll lose and
your city will parish.
SUPERIA
You're a monster.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
I'm a scientist. Now move to the
center of the room like a good girl.
Superia rolls her eyes and walks to the center of the room.
An ALARM sounds. The clock sets to 60 minutes.
Superia looks to the clock. She smiles with confidence.
A heavy door opens slow with a hydraulic whine. The
animalistic roar of the first champion comes from beyond the
door.
It startles Superia.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (4)
SUPERIA
I hate monster movies.
(closes her eyes and takes a deep
breath)
You can do this, Superia. Your city is
counting on you.
The door opens and the champion roars once more.
S U P E R I A (CONT'D)
Oh, come out already, creep!
The first champion, GULTAR (?), charges out and catches
Superia off guard. It picks her up mid charge and slams her
into the wall across the room. She cries out in pain.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Well, that was a poor start, Superia.
Meet Gultar. I designed him to match
your heroine speed. Sadly his brains
do as well.
Superia struggles against Gultar's weight as he pins her to
the wall. Gultar inhales Superia's scent and she turns away
in disgust.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
I bet people are fleeing the city
about now. It won't matter. The toxins
will span a ten mile radius. That's
right viewers. This pathetic heroine
is your only salvation!
Superia plants a boot in the champions's chest and shoves him
away with a powerful thrust. Gultar staggers backwards.
SUPERIA
You're brodcasting this, Ivan?!
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Oh, yes. Did I forget to mention that?
Silly me.
(laughter)
I wanted the whole city to witness
your defeat.
Gultar charges Superia again. She dodges to the side and he
slams into the wall.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (5)
Superia looks to the remote and makes a run for it.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
Damn it you fool! She's going to get
the remote!
Superia reaches the pylon and removes the glass cover. As she
reaches for the remote TERRORGON (?) emerges from a nearby
curtain and wraps its arms around her. The new champion lifts
Superia off the ground and grapples her in a bear hug. She
struggles against his tight grip.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system, laughter)
You stupid cunt. Did you think it
would be that easy? Now you're a play
thing for my second champion,
Terrorgon!
Terrorgon swings Superia around as he crushes her in his
arms. She grunts and fights.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
You better fight harder than that,
super tits. Terrorgon was designed to
match your heroine strength. Spend too
much time in his arms and your head
might pop off!
Superia beats her fists on Terrorgon's shoulders.
Gultar walks up behind her and grabs Superia by the legs. The
two monsters fight over the heroine's body in tug-o-war. She
is stretched out, Gultar with her legs and Terrorgon with her
arms.
The monsters roar and growl at one another as they fight over
Superia.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
This is disappointing. Why did I
bother making three champions if my
first two were going to rip the slut
in half? Maybe I should have waited
for Wondrous Woman. She's a real
heroine.
Superia struggles in pain. Her cries become fury and she
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (6)
jerks a leg free then kicks Gultar in the face. Gultar falls
backwards and Superia's boots touch the ground. She spins
crossing Terrorgon's arms then plants her boot in his groin.
Terrorgon howls before falling to his knees. Superia finishes
her assault with a right hook and Terrorgon goes down.
Gultar stands up behind Superia.
SUPERIA
I'm Superia and your monsters will not
beat me, Doctor! I fight for truth,
justice, and...
Gultar delivers a crushing blow to Superia's groin from
behind. She falls to her knees holding her crotch.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
That one looked like it hurt!
Superia holds her injured groin. Gultar lifts Superia by her
hair and repeatedly punches her in the stomach.
Terrorgon gets back to his feet.
Superia puts the heel of her boot into Gultar's foot and
spins away. Gultar back hands Superia in response.
Terrorgon rams Superia into the wall from behind. She is
stunned by the impact.
Terrorgon punches Superia in the back multiple times. He
Spins Superia then punches her in the face with maximum
force. A drop of blood comes from Superia's nose.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
Is that blood? So the mighty Superia
bleeds after all!
Gultar pulls Terrorgon off Superia and the champions fight
one another. Superia recovers.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
Idiots! What are you doing? Fight the
girl, not each other!
Superia looks from the champions, to the clock.
55 minutes remain.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (7)
Superia looks between the champions where she sees the pylon.
Superia tries to sneak around them, but Terrorgon notices
her.
SUPERIA
(sighs)
Seriously?
Terrorgon and Gultar square off with Superia. She drops into
a combat stance and the champions charge her.
Superia strikes Gultar and knocks him away, but Terrorgon
lands a powerful punch to the heroine's face. Terrorgon and
Superia exchange blows before she kicks his knee and sends
him to the floor.
Gultar engages Superia in combat, but she knocks him down
with a powerful punch.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Impressive, Superia! But, let's see
how you handle my final champion. I
introduce you to... Ragnaro!
A deep roar shakes the lab. Superia looks at the clock.
53 minutes remain.
From the lab's door RAGNARO (?) enters. He is twice the size
of the other champions, hideous, and black.
Gultar and Terrorgon stand and retreat away from Ragnaro into
the corner.
Superia looks at the beast with wide eyes, then to the
remote. She dashes towards the pylon.
Ragnaro takes long strides to meet her. Superia grabs the
remote as Ragnaro backhands her. The remote is knocked from
her hand and slides across the floor. Superia falls on her
back.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system)
So close, Superia! You nearly won, but
that stunt is going to cost you.
Ragnaro stomps on Superia's stomach stomach once, twice,
three times. Superia writhes in pain on the ground.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (8)
Ragnaro grabs Superia by the ankle and drags her towards
center of the room. Superia claws at the floor, but there is
nothing to hold on to. She is drug passed the remote, reaches
for it, but misses it.
Ragnaro looks to Terrorgon and Gultar.
RAGNARO
(deep growl)
Come!
Terrorgon and Gultar hesitate, but then follow the alpha
champions command.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Ragnaro! You can speak! We have so
much to discuss after you tear this
heroine apart.
Superia attempts to stand, but Ragnaro puts his massive foot
on her chest and pins her to the floor. She grabs onto the
foot and struggles.
Terrorgon and Gultar join Ragnaro.
RAGNARO
(points down to Superia)
Pick up slut.
Terrorgon and Gultar lift Superia off the ground, each
holding an arm. She tries to get away, but can't break free.
Ragnaro backhands Superia multiple times until she hangs
limp. A small amount of blood is in the corner of her mouth.
R A G N A R O (CONT'D)
(deep breathing)
Spread legs.
Terrorgon and Gultar use their feet to kick Superia's legs
apart while maintaining their grip on her arms.
Ragnaro kicks Superia between the legs, which brings her back
from her daze. Superia's legs buckle, but Terrorgon and
Gultar keep her standing. Ragnaro kicks Superia in the crotch
again.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
That's it! Break the heroine, but
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (9)
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.) (CONT'D)
don't kill her. Superia's powerful
body will be monumental for my
research!
Superia hangs limp on the verge of unconscious. Ragnaro leans
in and inhales her scent.
RAGNARO
(excited grunt)
Smells good.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Yes. I'm sure she smells lovely. Now
bring her to the holding cell.
Ragnaro ignores Dr. Ivan Broods command and gropes Superia's
body.
RAGNARO
(heavy breathing)
Soft.
DR. IVAN BROOD (O.S.)
(PA system)
Did you not hear me, Ragnaro? Bring
the heroine tramp to the cell!
Ragnaro fondles Superia's breasts through her uniform.
Terrorgon and Gultar join him rubbing her ass and thighs.
D R . I V A N B R O O D ( O . S . ) (CONT'D)
(PA system, rustling around)
That does it! This is what I get for
using Neanderthals in my experiments!
Superia becomes alert and struggles, but she is pinned
between them. The Champions Three continue to fonder her with
rough hands.
Dr. Ivan Brood storms through the lab door.
DR. IVAN BROOD
Put her down! I command you!
The Champions Three turn and face Dr. Ivan Brood. Superia
falls to her hands and knees.
D R . I V A N B R O O D (CONT'D)
That's more like it. I won't have to
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (10)
DR. IVAN BROOD (CONT'D)
destroy you three after all. Now, back
to your cages. I'll take the heroine
to her cell myself.
The Champions Three do not move.
Superia looks up at the clock.
51 minutes remain.
She crawls away from the monsters unnoticed. Her strength is
recovering, but she moves slow. The remote is near the pylon.
She keeps a steady pace towards it.
D R . I V A N B R O O D (CONT'D)
Don't make me get the hose again you
brainless apes!
(he points to the door behind him)
Now go!
Superia is half way to the remote.
RAGNARO
(roars)
No.
DR. IVAN BROOD
No? How dare you defy me!
RAGNARO
Doctor weak. Ragnaro strong. Ragnaro
say no.
Superia is five feet from the remote.
DR. IVAN BROOD
That does it!
(he turns to exit the room)
I'm getting the hose.
Ragnaro grabs a nearby object and hurls it at Dr. Ivan Brood.
The object hits him in the head and knocks him out cold.
Gultar notices Superia crawling and howls to alert the
others. The Champions Three rush towards Superia and reach
her as she grabs the remote.
Superia rolls onto her back and lifts the remote up to press
the button. Gultar kicks her hand before she can press it and
knocks the remote free. It falls and slides across the
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (11)
floor.
SUPERIA
(arm stretched out towards the
remote)
No!
The Champions Three surround Superia as she stands. Her
powers are recovering, though not fully restored. She sees
the remote between Gultar and Terrorgon and takes a step
towards it, but the the two champions cut off her path.
S U P E R I A (CONT'D)
Please. Just let me have the remote.
Then you can do whatever you want with
me.
Ragnaro tilts his head in question, then looks down at the
remote. He walks over and picks it up then returns to face
Superia. He holds the remote up and examines it.
Superia holds out her hand.
S U P E R I A (CONT'D)
That's it. Hand me the remote, big
guy.
Ragnaro holds out the remote for Superia and she reaches for
it. Before she can grab it he punches her in the face.
RAGNARO
(growls)
No! Beg. Beg for remote.
Superia holds her sore cheek, then looks at the clock.
47 minutes remain.
SUPERIA
(pleading)
Please. I need that remote. Innocent
people will die if I don't press that
button.
Ragnaro holds the remote over Superia's head.
RAGNARO
Take remote.
Superia tries to grab the remote, but it's out of reach. The
Champions Three laugh at her.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (12)
SUPERIA
(she puts her hands on her hips)
You don't have to be cruel. I know the
doctor treated you poorly, but I can
help you. I can save you.
RAGNARO
(tilts his head)
Save us?
SUPERIA
Yes. Everyone deserves to be saved.
Ragnaro holds out the remote for Superia once more. When she
reaches for it he crushes the device in his hand. Bits of
remote fall to the lab floor.
S U P E R I A (CONT'D)
No! What have you done?!
RAGNARO
No one saved. Whore failed.
Fury fills Superia's eyes and she goes on the assault. She
punches Ragnaro in the face, each blow knocking the champion
further back until he hits the wall.
Terrorgon and Gultar look at one another, then back to the
fight.
Superia cries out in anger and continues to attack Ragnaro
until he catches her fist. She strikes with the other hand
and Ragnaro catches that one too.
Ragnaro leans in and growls and Superia grits her teeth with
fury.
And then Ragnaro delivers a powerful knee into Superia's
stomach. Superia's eyes go wide with shock.
SAD MUSIC AND SLOW MOTION BEGINS.
Ragnaro lands blow after blow striking Superia across the
face and in the belly. He beats Superia senseless until she
is knocked into the arms of Terrorgon and Gultar. They hold
Superia up while Ragnaro continues to pummel her.
Ragnaro lands a final blow to Superia's face.
Black screen.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (13)
END SLOW MOTION AND SAD MUSIC.
Superia opens here yes and sees Ragnaro in and out of focus
as she fights to stay conscious. She hears a rip.
Ragnaro tears open Superia's costume exposing her breasts
(nudity).
SUPERIA
(weak voice)
What are you doing?
Ragnaro gropes Superia's exposed breasts with rough hands.
She groans with discomfort.
The clock reads 42 minutes.
Ragnaro continues to grope Superia's breasts.
RAGNARO
(growl)
Fuck defeated whore.
SUPERIA
(dazed)
What?
Ragnaro frees his huge cock (stunt cock) then pulls Superia's
costume away from her crotch.
Ragnaro lifts Superia by the hips while Terrorgon and Gultar
hold her torso then impales her with his large member
(simulated).
Superia's mouth goes slack and her eyes widen. She gasps.
The Champions Three work together, Ragnaro ramming into
Superia while the other two push her body down into the
thrusts.
Superia's ass giggles and her tits bounce and Ragnaro fucks
her furiously. She grunts and moans with discomfort
throughout.
Ragnaro pulls out of Superia and lets her legs fall to the
floor.
RAGNARO
(he makes a gesture with his hand)
Turn around.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (14)
Terrorgon and Gultar spin Superia so that her ass faces
Ragnaro. Ragnaro pulls Superia's hips so that she is standing
bent over while the other two champions hold each of her arms
to the side.
Ragnaro enters Superia from behind and fucks her rough.
Superia's ass giggles violently as Ragnaro pounds her.
Superia's breasts bounce as she moans and howls with the
fucking.
Ragnaro grabs Superia by the hair and pulls her head back as
he rides her from behind.
Ragnaro slides out of Superia.
R A G N A R O (CONT'D)
Whore kneels.
Terrorgon punches Superia in the stomach and she falls to her
knees.
Superia gasps and coughs on all fours.
R A G N A R O (CONT'D)
(points down to Superia)
Fill whore up.
Ragnaro steps aside. Terrorgon and Gultar both kneel, one
behind Superia and one in font. Terrorgon enters Superia from
behind while Gultar enters her mouth (simulated).
Terrorgon and Gultar fuck Superia without mercy. Superia
grunts and makes muffled protests.
Ragnaro kicks Superia in the side.
R A G N A R O (CONT'D)
(roar)
My turn!
Ragnaro shoves Gultar on his back and drags Superia onto of
him by the hair.
Ragnaro looks at Terrorgon, grunts, and point to Superia's
ass. Terrorgon mounts Superia in the ass, Gultar enters her
pussy, and then Ragnaro stuffs his big cock in her mouth
(stunt cock).
Drool runs from Superia's mouth as Ragnaro pumps his cock
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (15)
deep. Her eyes water and she chokes on the length.
The Champions Three fuck all of Superia's holes.
Ragnaro, having his fill, cums in Superia's mouth and her
eyes widen. Terrorgon and Gultar finish in their respective
entries.
Ragnaro slides his cock out of Superia's mouth and cum pours
from her lips. She coughs on the cum that entered her throat.
Superia looks up at Ragnaro then down in shame. She is
breathing heavy.
Terrorgon and Gultar fonder her body and she does nothing to
resist.
Superia looks up at the clock.
35 minutes remain.
Superia looks down knowing she has failed her city.
RAGNARO (O.S)
(growl)
Superia...
Superia looks up at Ragnaro.
Ragnaro draws back and punches her in the face.
Black screen.
R A G N A R O ( O . S ) (CONT'D)
Round two...
To be continued...
SUPERIA AND THE CHAMPIONS THREE
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DrDominator9
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Liked your script.
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HeroineFall84
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HeroineFall84
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Thank you for the kind words!