WW: The Man Who Could Move the World scene re-write

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Note: Another scene re-write, this time featuring the minefield scene from "The Man Who Could Move the World". This episode is a personal favorite. In this version, Ishida is not just driven by vengeance, but by lust as well. This time, there will be a second part to the story

WW: The Man Who Could Move the World scene re-write


Part 1:

When World War 2 erupted, many Japanese-Americans, including Ishida and his brother, were imprisoned in internment camps. Around the same time, Wonder Woman appeared, eager to contribute to the American war effort. Even as a young boy in the camp, Ishida couldn't help but be drawn to Wonder Woman in her revealing costume.

One fateful day, fueled by a desperate desire to escape, Ishida and his brother decided to make a run for it through a dangerous weapons testing range. In their reckless dash for freedom, they found themselves face-to-face with the captivating Wonder Woman, who pursued them to bring them back to safety. While she tried to convince them to return, a devastating shell landed close by, grievously injuring Ishida's brother. Seizing the opportunity, Ishida managed to flee, leaving Wonder Woman to tend to his wounded sibling. In the depths of his heart, he couldn't shake the belief that Wonder Woman had summoned the artillery that led to his brother's tragic demise.

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More than three decades later, Ishida had acquired telekinetic powers through a scientific experiment he participated in. Now fueled by revenge and a lustful desire for Wonder Woman, he devised a plan to lure her into his trap. Taking Steve Trevor hostage in an abandoned WW2 internment camp, Ishida cunningly set the stage for his ultimate vendetta against the iconic heroine.

From his concealed vantage point within one of the forsaken buildings, Ishida eagerly observes Wonder Woman as she strides into the camp. She appears just as captivating as he remembered, seemingly untouched by the passage of over three decades since their last encounter. The sight of her in that seductive outfit ignites a hard-on within him, as thoughts of revenge and desire intertwine in his mind. He savors this moment, confident in his ability to defeat her at last.

As Wonder Woman explores her surroundings, her graceful strides capture Ishida's attention. Her blue, star-spangled briefs, tantalizingly high-cut, reveal her upper thighs and long, alluring legs adorned in high-heeled boots. Ishida can't help but be captivated by her every move. He notices a certain melancholy in her expression, seemingly recalling memories of this very place from long ago. Perhaps, Ishida thinks, she carries guilt-ridden memories of her involvement in his brother's demise.

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His eyes are drawn to her as she bends down to pick up a discarded Japanese doll, affording him a provocative view of her generous cleavage emphasized by her red bustier adorned with gold eagle wings. As she walks past the building he's hidden in, mere feet away and unaware of his presence, Ishida gets an eyeful of her backside. The allure of her seemingly perfect ass, its cheeks peeking out from those high-cut briefs, combined with her long, flawless legs, stirs his arousal to new heights.

Snapping himself out of his reverie, Ishida finally decides to reveal himself to Wonder Woman. Stepping out of his hiding place, he takes one last lingering look at her enticing behind.

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"Welcome to my old home, Wonder Woman. It's been a long time since you last visited this place," he says, his voice catching her off guard.

"Over 30 years," she responds, her beauty captivating him as she gracefully turns to face him.

"Whatever it is you want, I'll do... as long as it doesn't break any laws," she says, requesting him to release Steve Trevor. She knows full well that Ishida deliberately lured her here.

Hearing her words sends Ishida's mind into a whirlwind of fantasies, imagining all the explicit and dirty things he can make her do. His newfound powers fill him with confidence that he can defeat her, and so he decides to prolong this encounter, toying with her desires and emotions.

He confronts her, reminding Wonder Woman of their encounter from long ago and accusing her of being responsible for his brother's death. As she recollects the past, she tries to convince him that she had actually saved his brother, attempting to spare both of their lives back then. However, he remains unyielding, determined to see this through, as he harnesses the power of his mind to manipulate an electrical pole, sending it crashing down towards Wonder Woman.

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With her lightning-quick reflexes, she manages to evade the imminent danger, skillfully sidestepping to the wall beside her. As she breathes deeply after the close call, he can't help but be enthralled by the movement of her breasts, which only further arouses him. He cleverly lets her think she can overpower him, all the while concealing the true extent of his telekinetic abilities.

Once more, Wonder Woman tries to reason with him, hoping to avoid a violent confrontation. "I won't fight you," she declares firmly, observing Ishida's hand on the sword at his waist.

"Then defend yourself!" he retorts, his determination unwavering. With a mere thought, he employs his telekinetic powers once again, this time lifting a spear and hurtling it towards her. However, Wonder Woman remains agile and swift, narrowly evading the incoming danger as the spear embeds itself in the wall behind her.
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Mesmerized by her grace and agility, Ishida's eyes are drawn to the captivating movement of her breasts as they bounce while she jumps out of harm's way. His arousal surges, and he is adamant about prolonging this confrontation, relishing every moment he spends with her.

Having deftly evaded his attacks thus far, Wonder Woman boldly proclaims, "You can't defeat me, Ishida. Please try to put it out of your mind and understand the truth." Ishida relishes in her growing overconfidence, knowing it will make her eventual downfall all the more satisfying. Undeterred, she takes a step towards him, hoping to reason with him further.
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But Ishida has other plans. "Stop!" he yells, wielding his telekinetic powers to seize control over Wonder Woman's motor functions. Her shock is evident as she finds herself unable to take another step, as though her boots have been firmly pinned to the ground. A wicked grin spreads across Ishida's face as he eyes her magnificent, alluring body with desire, reveling in the power he now holds over her.

Seeing Wonder Woman struggling to regain control of her body, Ishida finds himself captivated by the erotic spectacle before him. The temptation to ravage her right then and there is strong, but he manages to regain control of his desires, staying focused on his plans. "You will move now, only as I command," he asserts, feeling his throbbing, aroused cock straining against his pants as he becomes intoxicated by the mesmerizing rise and fall of her breasts, which move with her breath as she struggles against his powers.

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His gaze drifts down her captivating form, fixating on her fantastic legs, and he notices her boots twitching ever so slightly as she fights against his control. "Turn around. Watch," he orders once more. While he knows he can manipulate her movements with the power of his mind alone, he takes wicked pleasure in mouthing the commands to her, knowing that it adds to her torment, emphasizing the fact that he is in complete control.

Almost drooling with anticipation, he watches her reluctantly turn in the direction he desires, against her own will, confirming that he holds dominion over her every move.

With Wonder Woman under his complete control, Ishida takes the opportunity to demonstrate his deadly intentions. Picking up a piece of stone, he casually throws it a few meters away, deliberately aiming for a pre-placed landmine. The stone lands with dramatic flair, triggering a powerful explosion.
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"Yes, Wonder Woman! A mine field!" Ishida taunts, reveling in the shock evident on her face. "I will kill you the way you killed my brother."

Wonder Woman's heart races as the gravity of the situation sinks in. The explosive power of the mine leaves her in no doubt that Ishida means business. Her body tingles with adrenaline, the arousal and fear intertwining within her.

As the dust settles, Ishida can't help but admire the way Wonder Woman's firm breasts rise and fall with each breath, her body beautifully accentuated by the tight, revealing costume. Despite the dangerous circumstances, he finds himself drawn to her enticing figure, fueling his sadistic desires.

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"Walk!" Ishida's command rings in the air, tormenting Wonder Woman with the harrowing thought of stepping over a deadly minefield. With his telekinetic powers, he manipulates her, making her take one slow, deliberate step at a time, prolonging her agony as each movement seems to take an eternity. He deliberately pretends to struggle, relishing the power he holds over her.

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"Walk!" he commands again, delighting in the sight of her magnificent body under his control. Her luscious legs and booted feet, entirely at his mercy. Despite his desires, he resists the urge to run his hands over her flawless skin. Her cleavage, straining against her bustier, tantalizes him as it rises and falls with each nervous breath.

Feigning a momentary pause to give her a false sense of hope, Ishida angrily shouts, "I command you! Walk!" And obediently, she takes another couple of steps, drawing closer and closer to the lurking landmines. The erotic display of his power over her excites him, intensifying his desire.

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Closer and closer, Wonder Woman advances towards the deadly landmine. Ishida's smile widens as he observes her high-heeled boots nearly entangling, making her stumble momentarily before she regains her footing just in time. Her helplessness before him stirs a wild desire within Ishida, driving him to the brink of ecstasy.

With each step she takes, he finds himself drawn to her irresistible form. He yearns to grab her ass, to feel its firmness under his touch. As she moves, he can't help but fixate on her crotch, the desire to strip her naked and fuck her right there overwhelming his senses. "You're one step closer to annihilation, Wonder Woman!" he taunts her, fantasizing about groping her soft breasts.

Again, he allows her to pause, savoring the sight of her closing her eyes, struggling against his powers. "Take it! Take that step!" he yells, his arousal intensifying. Her right foot lifts, and he pretends to struggle, making her foot hover over the landmine. All the while, he steals glances at her smooth inner thighs, adding fuel to the fire of his desires.

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"Take it!" Ishida's voice rings out, commanding Wonder Woman to face her supposed doom. He relishes in the fear he sees reflected in her eyes as her foot hovers perilously over the landmine. He revels in her vulnerability, craving the rush of power it brings him. "Take it!" he shouts once more, only to let her foot drop onto the landmine with a soft "pop" that barely scratches her boot. Ishida erupts into maniacal laughter, having intentionally used a dud.

"Boom!" he taunts, catching Wonder Woman off guard with his sadistic prank. He delights in witnessing the fear in her eyes turn to momentary relief as she realizes she's still alive. "I'm not gonna let you off that easily," he declares, thoroughly enjoying the emotional rollercoaster he's put her through.

"Now, it's time for my real vengeance," Ishida announces, his voice dripping with lust as he once again fixates on her generous cleavage, his anticipation building. Wonder Woman can only feel dread, knowing that whatever comes next will be anything but merciful.

To be continued...
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Excellent work!!!
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Yes, great. Love the added pictures!
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Part 2

With malice in his eyes, Ishida's sinister intentions are clear, and Wonder Woman knows exactly what he desires. "Let's go, Wonder Woman," he commands, no longer pretending to struggle to maintain control over her. He takes pleasure in watching her walk ahead of him, her curvaceous form captivating him.

Earlier, Ishida had noticed that her costume was held together by a series of hooks and eyes, not a zipper as he initially thought. This discovery fills him with wicked glee, knowing he can torment her further. With the power of his mind, he begins to undo her bustier, one hook at a time, slowly and deliberately.

Wonder Woman gasps as she feels the first hook come undone, but she is entirely helpless to resist. Ishida's smile widens despite himself as he continues his devious act. Another hook is released, and she feels her top starting to loosen, the draft teasing her exposed skin. The sensation both excites and humiliates her, but she remains under Ishida's control, unable to speak or reason with him.

As yet another hook is undone, Wonder Woman's bustier starts to loosen further, causing Ishida to nearly drool with anticipation. The power he holds over her is intoxicating, fueling his desire to make her completely vulnerable.

Ishida continues his wicked taunt, slowly undoing the hooks of Wonder Woman's bustier, one by one. As each hook comes undone, time seems to slow down for her, and she feels her top getting looser and more revealing with each passing moment. By the time they reach the building, the hooks have been undone up to the top of her belt, leaving her partially exposed and vulnerable.

Entering the room, Wonder Woman sees that it has been set up recently, with a bed in the middle. Ishida sits on the bed, a predatory desire in his eyes, and commands her to turn towards him. She reluctantly complies, knowing she is powerless to resist his control.

Ishida is consumed with lust as he gazes at her, her bustier dropped down slightly, teasing him with the glimpse of her nipples. His desire is evident as he beckons her closer. Unable to resist, he pulls her top lower, revealing her beautiful breasts, and begins to grope her roughly, taking what he wants without any regard for her feelings.

Wonder Woman is filled with a mix of emotions—anger, humiliation, and fear—but she remains trapped under Ishida's control. Her mind races with thoughts of how to escape this degrading situation, but for now, she is at his mercy.

Ishida's hands explore Wonder Woman's smooth legs, tracing up and down the softness of her thighs. Her body shivers in disgust and violation as he continues to kiss and suck on her breasts, taking pleasure in her discomfort. But instead of stopping, Ishida is driven by her reaction, finding perverse satisfaction in her disgust.

He revels in her vulnerability, knowing he has complete control over her. Her resistance only fuels his desire to dominate her further. His hands roam freely over her body, and he revels in every moan and gasp that escapes her lips, knowing he is breaking her spirit.

Wonder Woman's mind races with fury and humiliation, but her body remains under Ishida's control. She struggles to find a way out of this nightmarish situation, but for now, she can do nothing but endure.

With a cruel twist of his powers, Ishida removes Wonder Woman's magic belt, stripping her of her powers and leaving her defenseless. Her last glimmer of hope vanishes, and she is completely under his control. The remaining hooks of her costume are undone, and her scanty outfit clings to her body, barely staying in place.

"Dance for me," he commands, mocking her earlier offer to do anything he wanted. Helpless, she begins to gyrate, her body moving in a sensual dance, still under his control. The costume that once symbolized her strength and power slowly drops to the ground, leaving her completely naked before him.

Ishida's eyes widen with desire as he beholds her heavenly body, fully exposed to his gaze. Her tears only fuel his sadistic pleasure. "You're a bad dancer, Wonder Woman," he taunts, relishing the sight of her vulnerability.

He then orders her to lie on the bed, and she complies, tears streaming down her face. She knows she is at his mercy, and the anticipation of what he will do next terrifies her.

With a mix of anticipation and dread, Wonder Woman watches as Ishida slowly undresses, baring himself before her. Her heart pounds, and she closes her eyes, bracing herself for what is about to happen. When she opens her eyes, she sees his fully erect cock, throbbing with desire.

Ishida positions himself on top of her, his lust and anger fueling his actions. With a forceful thrust, he enters her, and Wonder Woman gasps in both pain and humiliation. He taunts her as he continues, reveling in his dominance over her.

The act is rough and relentless, a culmination of over 30 years of pent-up emotions. He takes her with a primal intensity, leaving her feeling completely overpowered and vulnerable.

Finally, he climaxes, releasing his pent-up anger and frustration. "This is for killing my brother!" he proclaims, the words a mixture of triumph and vengeance.

As he lies satiated beside her, he coldly tells her that he will spare her life this time and let her go. He revels in the knowledge that he has defeated her, that he can take her again whenever he pleases, and that he holds the power to end her life at any moment.

As Ishida prepares to leave, a wicked grin crosses his face. He points towards a camera on the wall, revealing his final act of cruelty. Wonder Woman's heart sinks as he informs her that Steve Trevor, her beloved, is watching her violation from his cell somewhere in the compound.

Not only that, but cameras have been placed throughout the camp, capturing every humiliating moment of her ordeal. Ishida coldly explains that these recordings will be released to the public, ensuring that her shame and degradation are witnessed by countless others.

Wonder Woman's worst nightmare has come true. Her body trembles with both anger and helplessness. Ishida's revenge is complete, and she feels utterly defeated.


The End...
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Love it! Favorite part is taking the bustier off one clasp at a time. Great Stuff! Hope to see more Wonder Woman rewrites.
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jlocke wrote:
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Love it! Favorite part is taking the bustier off one clasp at a time. Great Stuff! Hope to see more Wonder Woman rewrites.
Thanks! I do enjoy doing the rewrites. I hope to be able to do more soon.
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