Batgirl: Identity Crisis

[martinbill]

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[DrDominator9]

Nicely written story here so far. Simple plot yet effective. Very down to earth villains in a realistic setting. I look forward to what comes next. Nice job!

[martinbill]

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[manuelmen]

like the story so far, it is written quite well and advances quickly with the plot but detailing everything necessary to understand it, I am anxious for its continuation.

[martinbill]

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[darkguy]

Amazing setup, liked the slow build up to capturing the batgirl and also not just thi king about her body from start. But waiting for the future adventures.

Keep on writing , waiting for your updates

[martinbill]

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[darkguy]

Interesting, Arkham asylum, is she going to make a deal with the devil, but which one ?

[DrDominator9]

Two more highly enjoyable chapters. The unmasking scene and subsequent effects of that are particularly well-written and poignant moments. I'm interested to see where else you take this story.

[martinbill]

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[darkguy]

All the doors are closing around her and our sweet heroine is feeling trapped

[martinbill]

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[martinbill]

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[darkguy]

Oh my, the bat has fallen. Loved that you're keeping things moving in the universe and not only concentrated on our beautiful bat. But I'm sure trouble won't be far away for her.

Would love to know more about bat too, why he did it?

[martinbill]

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[bobcashman]

Hope you keep writing this story. Love where this is all going. Sooner or later BG should have to pay the piper though and I hope you write an ending like that.

[martinbill]

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[darkguy]

Man one never knows who's gonna trouble our bat next, her life is in a spin.

[bobcashman]

Wow. This story is the gift that keeps on giving!

[martinbill]

Story to be continued at later date, if there is a following for it.

[darkguy]

Damn there's no end to end her troubles, from one hell to another but very intriguing. But j have to say , i miss Ricky and his gang

[bobcashman]

I sure would love to see this story continue. Great start.

[martinbill]

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[DrDominator9]

I would certainly like to see this story completed. You have a very enjoyable tale going on here. And when this is done, of course we'd like to see another. Or you can post them simultaneously in different threads if the second one is already written and ready to go.

[voodoo1229]

I would like to see the continuation of this story as well. Like the potential directions it can go.

[martinbill]

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[Maskripper]

My other story is complete, still about Batgirl and revolves around the Police hunting her. I'm much more satisfied with that one than the way I ended this story.

Sounds good! Every story with Batgirl is highly welcome
And thanks for writing this one by the way