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Have a new hero idea

Her name is techno girl 6'3 red hair green eyes. She Season richmer a u.s.a. solider who got attacked by a evil cybergirl. Dr casey johnson wanted to keep her alive so they gave bionic legs eyes arms and ears. then they gave her a secret nude pantyhose with microciruits in it to give her more power when she needs it. It enhanced her bionics and brain power to mega human level. She now can run 800 miles per hour. See 5000 yards lift 5000 tons. Also smarter then any person or computer.




If anybody want to use my techno girl and use it for a story. You can and also can make a picture of her.
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her fighting outfit is a white hooter outfit only instead of short thier a thong bikini
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Welcome to the family, B! There's a lot of promise in that description. Why not expand on it and make it a short story. Maybe you could even develop her look...see the link below and give it a shot

http://www.ugo.com/channels/comics/hero ... chine2.asp
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my techno girl

check it out season richmer
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techo girl

Cool I'll give it a shot and see what I come up with.
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hey dr casey johnson

in her training outfit
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Tonya Hosanna

the muslim bionic woman
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Evil bionic asian

Thought dead but she still alive.
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Techno girl The beginning repost from yahoo group

Season richmer was a navy seal. She was 6'3 red hair green eyes
perfect body. But that all change that night she was suppose to
attack a secret base that was going to use nerve gas on the russian
people. She was inside the building when her squad was attacked. They
were doing a fair job of dispatching the terrorists but then
something happen a figure who was moving too fast started attacking
all her squad slowly killing them one by one. Season fired all over
the place to stop whatever killing her troop but to no hope. The
person started breaking her limbs one by one the person was so strong
that the bones were in little pieces then to cover the tracks the
person blinded Season. Season was barely alive. Back in america a
woman named dr.Casey Johnson was in her office when she heard the
news her best friend was in bad shape. Casey rushed to the hospital
to see Season. Season was awake when Casey came over. At 6'2 blonde
hair blue eyes casey was a goddess like beauty but was the world best
doctor. Super smart and friendly was Casey who was season best friend
since grade school. Casey told season that she can help her but only
if she trusted her. Season slowly nodded her head yes help me. Casey
told her to look at her. With her right arm casey bended the bedpost
with ease. casey told season remember that project that me and tonya
birki was working on well we needed to see if it worked so both gave
ourself bionic enhancment and was hoping if you would be our field
agent. Season smiled yes but will the goverment find out about me. No
we have support of the goverment but they want us to work outside the
system. So you ready to be better then ever. Let's do it.


The operation was a success tonya casey said to tonya. tonya was
sitting next to casey. Tonya a iran exiled woman was once only 5'6
but with bionic surgery now is 6'3 barefoot. So casey what now let's
wake her up. Season was awake when casey and tonya came in. Tonya
tell casey now let see if your enhancment are working. grab this pipe
and bend it. Season grab the pipe and try to bend it but nothing
happen. Casey tell Season relax and bend it. Slowly season start
bending it and the pipe bend to a perfect 90 drgree angle. Awesome
now season use your eyes to see under my dress said Casey. season
slowly focus her eyes which can see 5000 yards and have x rays vision
she can see casey nude pantyhose and then focus on tonya tan
pantyhose. You now stronger see better run faster hear better try
your hearing Season. Season listen for anything and can hear a girl
talking on the phone 5 miles away. The next day season was on the
track in a flippy micro skirt and tank top. Tonya and Casey were
hooking her to some testing devices. So Season let see how fast you
can go. So season started slowly on the tread track and slowly she
was going only 10 miles per hour. Casey say faster Season Faster so
season was pushing to go faster. Slowly season going up to 50 60
90 120 150 230 330 per hours. she was barely breaking a sweat
then Casey told season to stop. Casey tell Season now put on these
pantyhose. Why? Season asked. Because When you do your bionic will be
enhanced even more. With that Tonya Started running faster and faster
her tan hose were glowing. These hose are made with nanite tech. With
these hose you can lift almost anything can go up to 800 miles per
hours and improve your sight and hearing moreso. So season put them
on and started running she was up to 600 miles when she see tonya and
casey running side by side with her. Season heartbeat was going one
beat per second and her bionic eyes could see both girls wearing
nothing but pantyhose under thier short flippy miniskirt and then
they all slowed down. Casey your attacker is a woman who got bionic
when a spy stole my bionic design and sold them to over 50 nations
and groups. your attacker was a member of the yakuza gang in japan.

The spy gave bionic spec to Russian commie nuts Asian gangs and
American Nutcases. So Season Ready to stop the madness. Let do it
said Sason.
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Techno girl Part 2 the dark empire repost from yahoo group

Well Season Richmer was on her way to japan to follow a lead that a
enhanced woman was going to take over the japanese goverment. She
landed at the airport to meet up with a former co worker who now live
in japan. Patty orlando was once a navy seal like season but left to
work in the private sector. They meet at a hotel bar Season used her
bionic eyes to find her. She saw her sitting in the far end of the
bar. Patty was nervous her brown eyes gave her fear away. 5'9 and
crimson haired she look like the tallest girl in the room with her
nude fishnet hose and short skirt. Season said hello and they
embraced. Season asked patty if she got the info she needed. Patty
said yes that a woman named mire fukada was the one planning the
attack patty started the dvd with mire in action. Running at 700 mph
ripping a gate open with her fingers. Firing a laser out of her
eyes. Patty said basically we have the perfect killing machine. She
a one of the group calling itself the dark empire. A group trying to
take over the world by murder creating chaos or other means. Where
she at right now season said? She at the embassy hotel but she too
powerful. Patty i got a feeling i can stop her. Be careful season if
you need anything let me know. patty draw me a bath and we can talk
about old times i'll be back got to go give our friend a little
payback. Once she got back to her room. Season called to casey back
home casey answered at her lab in wichita. Season what the word.
Patty said mire at her hotel room getting ready to strike at the
goverment. Season stop her at all costs. I'm right now working on a
sercret project and tonya at her workout class she teaches. What she
wearing season asked. oh her leotard and her black techno hose. Oh my
those people better be full of energy she'll last longer then all of
them she laughed. Well she did tell them that it a workout of thier
life. Ok got to go but you said to stop by your sister track meet on
saturday. Yeah you'll going to see something amazing.

So season and patty were in the tub relaxing. Season said well i got
to go finish the job. Patty asked how can you stop her. Well i got
some help in washington. Oh ok by the way your legs looked so hot you
been working out. well maybe a little season laughed.

Season put on her nude techno hose her little tshirt and super micro
flippy miniskirt. She left the house and started running. At 350mph
she got to her target place in 3 min. She looked at the computer in
the lobby and with her bionic eyes hacked in to the computer to find
her location at the hotel and then got the map of the hotel to find
the floor of the room she in. Man she thought it like a internet in
my eyes. She walked out back she bended her knees and jumped up 30
floors to the room where mire was. Season scaned the room and saw the
heat pattern of mire in the bedroom. So season switch to xray to see
what she doing when mire said come in season i've been expecting you.



Season goes inside mire room and looked at her. 5'8 with dark hair
and wearing a teddy and grey hose. So you didn't think i knew you
were here i've been watching you. Your enhancment is great but mine
better cause when i meet with the pm of japan i will control him with
my nano enhanced brain like you have but i'll will control him and
japan.

Season said you and the dark empire. Yes so prepare to die. With that
mire does a bionic kick in the abs of season and she goes through a
wall. Season was a little dazed but focused as she flip up and give
mire and bionic punch her in the face knocking her over the bed. Not
bad season but can you handle this and with that she run behind
season and kick her head with a roundhouse kick. season fall into a
dresser and got mad. Meanwhile back in kansas casey and tonya study
season vital signs she a bit dazed said tonya. yes but her nanite in
her hose will protect her. Now it seem to boost her enhancment 50%.



Back in japan season was on the floor when she felt a jolt in her legs just as mire as going to cut her legs off with her bionic laser eyes. Season
flipped up grabbed mire breast and slowly picked her up. So like to
attacked me and cut me open like a fish. She grabbed mire left arm
and rip it apart blood and wires everywhere and mire screaming. Who
running your little party. Mire say fuck you and slowly try to escape
but season pin her down and find the usb port on her neck season
unscrew her left middle finger and connect her usb to mire and
scanned her brain. She was looking through her memory when it started
deleting everything and season got out before it could do anything to
hurt her.

Saturday afternoon at the track season was there with tonya and casey
well did you find out anything yes a name ashley benson. She may have some answer that why i need to find her so what you little secret

Well my sister wearing my blue techno hose but she not bionic. I know
watch gun sounded and kelly johnson started to run. season used her
bionic eyes to see that the nanite is boosting her she going faster
and she out running everybody in the four hundred meter relay. In fact she broke a world record by winning the race a min. faster then the old
record. Kelly come over to her sister at 6'2 brown hair blue eys and
hug her. This is season hey there kelly you were great thank season.
So is she part of the group yet not yet she still getting used to it.
It also enhanced other senses like what remember yesterday after you
came back she said you have great legs she saw you 100 yards away.
She run 100 mph lift a ton and hear from 100 yards away soon you'll
have the perfect spy to help you. Thank casey but mire did say
something before i left she said we got girls that are much deadlier
then me. Don't worry you will be ok and trust me we got enhanced
allies not only here but around the world.
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Techo Girl

Let me see if I can jazz this up a little. Good concept thou.

Season Richmer was a Navy Seal. Top of her class attractive, especially at 6'3 and long gleaming red hair sparkling green eyes like emeralds, her nickname was FIRE. Cause she could strike without a warning. An expert in all forms of combat and future 2010 Olympic Gymnast hopefull she was a force to be reckoned with. She could have competed in the last Olympics if she wasn't called to duty. "Damn she thought. Luckily this was her last mission and then it was Goodbye Uncle Sam. This mission was the most crucial. To infilitrate a secret Russian base that was allegedly a front for a known infamous terrorist cell, and reports were that canisters of nerve gas were stored there ready for deployment to who knows where. It was pitch black on the outskirts of Moscow at this abandoned complex. Season and her team made like stealth tracks and secured the compound. They could hear noise and comotion inside like if this operation was getting ready to take off. "Its now or never she thought" while her hands sweated over her tech 9. She slowly heard her commanding officer mouth on the count of three 1,2, what happened to three? In a second there was a deafening explosion and the sound of machine gun fire echoed throughout the compound. Bodies started dropping like flies. Season grinned "Score another for justice she thought as she rounded the corner taking out several other goons. Just then before she reached the lab she saw this object rush past her. She could feel the wind streak past her hair. But she had no time to examine what it was. The next thing in an instant she heard deafening screams and explosions machine gun fire rapid. Soon one of her men came flying across the hall and smashed into the wall near her blood and caranage decorated the white walls. Season quickly grabbed her fallen commrade and looked at his face. Blood and brusies decorated his faces his uniform was in shambles. Parts of bone matter jolted out of leg, he looked at her in a fear he had never known before then expired. Season slowly released her comrade in shock over what could have done this. Her answer was quickly releaseed as she saw another of her commardes head being dispatched by what it looked like a swift kick. Season then saw what she couldn't believe. It was an attactive female about 6'4, a little bit bulkier. Her eyes were black although they shinned like pearls. Her skin looked like a tannish color, her hair was a long brownish orange color. Her body resembled that of an Amazonian, chisled in stone. She wore a golden leotard, black tights.
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damn that is good

I'm glad to have guys like you around can't wait to see a 3d image of my creations
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