Opening chapters from "American Goddesses"

[LiteraryGary]

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[Centurion]

Er... unless I misread this, it seems more like a MALE villain has taken control of a normal woman... and is using her body to rape another man. Don't take this as a criticism, it's just not the sort of thing I like to read.

[LiteraryGary]

Hi Centurion. The chapter was out of context, of course, having been pulled from the middle of the book. Melnikov is a FEMALE villain. I wouldn't like to read what you suggest either. In any case, I've take that chapter down and replaced it with an earlier one.

[Centurion]

I'm sorry. I don't why I got that impression. Maybe because she refered to herself as his "Master". Plus Russian names have gender. A woman would be "Melnikova". Once again, sorry about the misunderstanding.

Reading the replacement chapter... okay this is a lot better.