Mary Marval is a Dirty Virgin

[rammbo]

The Justice League of America had there big meeting of the year.

[DrDominator9]

If you want people to be able to know what you're trying to communicate, you MUST take the time to write out your dialogue so it's understandable. You need little things like periods, quotation marks, new paragraphs for new speakers, that kind of thing, you know. If you don't make the effort, why should someone else make the effort to respond to your writing?

[Disciple]

If you want people to be able to know what you're trying to communicate, you MUST take the time to write out your dialogue so it's understandable. You need little things like periods, quotation marks, new paragraphs for new speakers, that kind of thing, you know. If you don't make the effort, why should someone else make the effort to respond to your writing?

C'mon, man. Don't ruin it. I, for one, find his writing a guilty pleasure to read.

[DrDominator9]

I enjoy his sense of humor enough to offer some advice. Not like I told him to stop writing.

[rammbo]

[quote="rammbo"] The Justice League of America had there big meeting of the year.

[sugarcoater]

And admittedly, if someone is going to write, it's never bad to get feedback on things such as spelling (their vs. there) and the usefulness of proofreading. After all, if the goal is to reach an audience, better writing will appeal to a larger audience.